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Funny Fantasy Kids

~*~𝒮𝒶𝓂𝒶𝓃𝓉𝒽𝒶~*~


My green eyes throw a panicked glance as the timer ticking away on Ms. Kara’s desk. It’s practically a bomb: when it runs out, we have to turn in our final exams for biology. 

Three minutes. Three minutes ‘till the test is over.

I hastily jot down my name down at the top of my paper. It’s fast but neatly stenciled down: 𝒮𝒶𝓂𝒶𝓃𝓉𝒽𝒶 𝒯𝑜𝓇𝓇𝑒𝓈. I wouldn’t dream of inking a messy signature: I’m a star student, after all.

Oops. Sorry if that sounded braggy. (Wouldn’t want to be a Todd Flint.) But it’s true—I've been at Hawkings since kindergarten. Eight years of being the perfect pupil at my private school. 

I check my answers on my test. Yep, yep, yep; all are the answer I meant to write down. They seem right to me, anyways.

I observe the rest of the room. My whole class, about ten kids, is still scribbling away. Besides Rosalee Adams—she’s done, her paper on her desk, her gaze fixed on something out the window. I stifle a snort. She’s probably zoned out staring at the bushes or something. 

Rosalee is weird. Really weird. Our whole school knows it. She’s very antisocial—which I normally wouldn’t judge, seeing I’m an introvert myself. But she literally never interacts with anyone if she doesn’t have to. 

She shows up at school and is gone the instant the bell rings. She disappears in the woods framing our school during recess, something I can’t understand why the principal would let her do. She’s constantly murmuring under her breath and acting like she revealed a secret anytime somebody says something to her while she’s doing it. She’s like the modern, real-world version of Luna Lovegood—just, she isn’t magic.

The weirder thing about the weird girl is that she’d be normal if not for her quirks. Rosalee has messy strawberry blond hair falling to her waist—hair I would die to have replace my plain brown locks. She has wide blue eyes and there’s always a faint smile on her lips, like she’s aware of something everyone doesn't know—another odd trait. Rosalee and I are neck-to-neck in academic skills, too—she’s the only one in the grade as smart as me.

Next in my line of classmates I’m observing is Todd Flint. He’s a tall braggart who has enough academic brains to get into this school, but he’s still pretty dumb. For instance, he thinks people care when he remarks about his muscles.

My eyes meet my friend’s heads, hunched over their desks a row in front of me. Melody and I have been best friends since kindergarten, and this year, Asher, an eleven-year-old, skipped two grades and joined our class. He, Melody and I are now a trio of close friends.

“DOOOOO! DOO-DUL-DEE-DOOOO! DOO DOO!”

I sigh and watch Ms. Kara turn off her alarm clock. It has the most obnoxious ring tone and I’ve hated the stupid timer since I first heard it “doo”.

“That’s it!” Ms. Kara exclaims. “Time’s up, everyone!” She claps her hands. “Pencils down, papers turned over, and seats pushed in. You guys go straight to the cafeteria, okay?”

Everyone chants, “Okay!”

I stand up and meet my friends at the door. 

“Do you think you did well?” Asher shrugs at Melody and me as we start walking to lunch.

“I dunno,” Melody smiles. “I think I got the tibia and the fibula mixed up on that bone question.”

I laugh. “Happens to the best of us.”

Asher smiles. “Seriously, who names these things?” He thinks for a moment as we step into the lunch line. I see Rosalee disappear down the hall. She brings her lunch instead of buying it. “I’d remember bones better if they were named, I don’t know…Jeff. And Fred. And Bob.”

“Girls too,” Melody elbows him. “There could be bones named Sasha and Jillian and Arynn and—”

“Hush!”

Melody sends me a side-eye. “Did you just command me to be quiet?”

“Yup.”

“I will never shut my yapper!” She pumps her fist in the air.

We all laugh and sit down at the nearest empty table after we’ve received and paid for our food.  

“Truth or dare?”

I stare at Asher. “Truth.”

“Lemme rephrase that: dare or dare?”

I snort. “Preeeetty sure it doesn’t work that way. But dare.”

“Very wise choice,” he winks. “Now, listen: you have to do this, okay? No chickening out. But it’ll follow the Rules of Dares, don’t worry.”

I nod. “Sure.” The Rules are awesome. Dares have to be doable, they can’t be dangerous and/or get you in trouble, and lastly, they can’t be embarrassing. No, like, going up to your crush and saying “You’re a donkey, sir.”  

“So…what?” Melody prompts.

Asher grins evilly. “Samantha, you hafta go up to Rosalee and ask her why she always sneaks to the forest at recess. Oh, and why she’s always muttering stuff.” 

“No!” I explode. “No, nope, no way, NO!”

“Why?”

“Because—because…I-I—” I sputter, “NO!”

Asher and Melody stare at me, then burst into a fit of giggles. “Seriously, Sammy, why not?” Melody says, acting like she’s genuinely curious.

“It’s against the Rules!” I protest.

Asher snickers. “Not at all. You have to do it.”

I huff and turn my back on my friends.

A second passes and then… 

“Don’t be a chicken,” Asher and Melody singsong in unison.

I sigh and turn around. “Fine.”

The bell rings, signaling that we’re allowed to go start recess if we want to. My eyes are trained on Rosalee, who’s quietly picking through her lunchbox, alone at the table closest to the door. As the bell rings, I watch her face light up. She gets up and races out the doors.

I sigh again and start following her, wondering what the heck I just got myself into.


~*~ℝ𝕠𝕤𝕒𝕝𝕖𝕖~*~


Finally! FINALLY!

The sound of that bell is music to my sick-of-chatter ears. Spending fifteen minutes inside a room with almost a hundred kids is bad enough. Spending that time right before recess, the best part of the school day? Pure torture.

I don’t care about the playground. I’m aching to practice my powers, and the forest is the only location private enough to to do it.

As the bell rings, I hop up and push the doors open. Without looking back, I sprint towards the forest.

My feet pound on the squishy fresh soil as I pass the playground. Some monkey bars, benches, and pull-up bars for people like Todd. I don’t care.

I relax as I enter the woods. Trees line the footpath only one pair of feet has ever tread on—for the past something-years I’ve been walking this way to the clearing. 

Eventually, I’m there. Pine trees tint the air with their crisp scent and I get into position in the small clearing. I focus on a pile of pine needles on the ground and thrust my hands towards them, then up. The thin leaves mirror my movement, jumping up into the air. 

I concentrate and lift them higher and higher, until the bale is positioned a good five yards above my head. I drop my hands to my sides and smile as it rains pine needles.

I laugh as I tumble to the ground. People think I’m weird, looney Rosalee Adams, but honestly, I’d rather be an outcast of true weirdos and have powers than be a normal old human who fits in.

“Rosalee?”

I jump and madly glance around. Then I see her.

Samantha Torres is standing where the clearing and my path meet. Her fingers nervously tap against her jeans and her curls of dark brown hair whip around her neck as a gust of wind pushes us both.

“Um, hi,” she says.

I shoot to my feet. What had I done? “Hello. Um, how much did you see?” Straight to the point, yeah, but I needed to know.

“See what?”

“What?”

Huh?” She squints.

I laugh nervously. Thank god she hadn’t seen my powers at work. Even her being here made me a bit jumpy. Especially interacting with her.

I got my powers at birth, and accidentally killed my mother with them. Me and my dad lived near my school, but he didn’t know that I had magic. Nobody did. And I wanted to keep it that way.

I’m careful, but just careful enough. People think I’m weird, and sure, I am. I constantly mutter spells and stuff under my breath, and while I’d rather kids not notice, it’s in my first language—Elvish—so I’m fine. Same with sneaking off towards this clearing: people notice, but they don’t care.

Having Samantha here…yikes. I’m probably going to slip up at some point.

“Nothing,” I smile, trying to pretend like nothing happened. “Why are you here? Are you allowed to be here?” I grin as she opened her mouth to respond then shuts it. She definitely isn’t allowed—the only reason I am is because I mind-controlled Principal Pelegreen. I hate mind-controlling, but I needed permission to go into the woods.

“I’m here because of truth-or-dare,” Samantha admitted.

“Yeah? Why?”

“See, uh…” her voice trails off.

“Samantha—”

“Please,” she cuts me off, “Sammy or Sam.”

“Maybe Sammy,” I smile, “but not Sam. I know a guy named Sam and I hate him. He’s a dumbo who brags too much.”

Sammy laughs. “Sounds like Todd Flint.”

“You know him?” I don’t know why I’m surprised by this, but I am.

“Well, we’re not friends or anything, but yeah. He’s in my class, after all, so I’ve ‘known’ him for years. You should, too. Although I guess you can be in a guy’s class and never talk to him….” she stares at me apologetically. “Oh, geez, sorry if that was rude.”

“No problem. I just don’t like being around people that much.” They’re annoying, they talk way too much, and I just don’t like people. 

“I like people, but I’m still introverted.”

“Me too, definitely,” I smile.

“Yeah,” Samantha nods, “I can see that. Me, I’m up in my room a ton reading books. It’s actually funny because on tons of quizzes, it’s like ‘how many books do you read a year?’ Typically, the highest answer is fifty. And I’m like, nooooo, I read at least a hundred novels a year…”

Wow, Sammy pretty much just described my life when I’m not practicing my powers. “Yes! Exactly! Me too! What books do you like reading?”

“Well,” she ponders, “Keeper of the Lost Cities and The Hunger Games are my favorite series, but only because I can’t list every single Rick Riordan book. Rick is my fav author, ‘cuz of how funny he is, but those other series are still amazing.”

My jaw literally drops. “He’s my favorite author, too!”

We grin at each other profoundly, and I think, Wow, who knew? Having a conversation and not wanting to run off screaming? Dang, Rosalee, this is crazy!

“So, uh, anyways,” Samantha clears her throat, “I’m here for truth-or-dare. Asher asked me to ask you why you always come here, and what you murmur under your breath.”

She stared at me expectantly.

“Ummm…”

“Please tell me! I swear I won’t spill!”

I sigh. I never dreamed of telling anybody about my powers, but Sammy and I are becoming fast friends. Besides, it’ll feel good to get this weight off my chest. “Okay. But promise not to be weirded out or anything.”

“A weird explanation for a weird thing? No problem.”

“So…” I hesitate, “I have powers.”

Her face perks up. “Whuh?”

“I have magic. Powers. Magic powers.”

“What’s your power? Invisibility? Telekinesis? Super-strength? Flying? Mind-read—”

“All of them,” I blurt. “See, uh…I don’t just have a power. I have magic. Magic in general. So I can do a lot of things at different times. Sometimes I can teleport things. Other times I can walk through walls. My most common power is telekinesis, and the rarest is flying and mind control.”

“You’ve flown?” She says, her eyes stretched wider than I could’ve thought. “And mind-controlled people? Who?”

I shook my head. “Sorry, not saying.”

“Okay. Can you explain a little more?” 

“I got my powers at birth. I don’t know where they came from, but I like them. The end.” There’s a moment of silence, then… “Are you freaked out? Or do you think that’s cool?”  

“ARE YOU KIDDING!”

“Huh?”

“That’s awful! Really weird! Uugh, I hate you, you little alien! You’re a threat to society with those powers! I’m calling the police!”

I gasp. My worst fears are coming true.


~*~𝒮𝒶𝓂𝒶𝓃𝓉𝒽𝒶~*~


  “Ro-Rosalee? You okay?”

The girl has been standing in the same position for a good twenty seconds, her eyes glazed over and her mouth frozen in time.

I walked over and gently shake her. “Rosalee! Snap out of it!”

“DON’T!” She yells, coming to life. She backs up then glances around. “Wait, what? What just happened?”

“You blanked,” I say. “I told you about the dare and asked for you to tell me about it, then you froze up. Are you okay?”

Rosalee seems a little dazed. “Um, yeah.”

She shook her head, presumably to clear it. “Wow. Okay. Geez. I imagined it. I imagined it. Samantha isn’t going to call the police. She didn’t find out about my—”

“What?” I cock my head. “About your what?”

She seems to have forgotten I was there. She jumps.

“Sorry,” I breathe as I help her up from where she stumbled backwards.

“It’s okay. I’m sorry. I’m just a little jumpy.”

I nod then recall what she had said. “When you blanked, why did fake-me call the police? And what do you ‘have’?”

“You called the police because of what I have. You got freaked out.”

“I’m sorry.”

“Stop apologizing. I made it all up. You’ve just been standing there.”

I wonder what Rosalee ‘has’. She’s weird, but I have to revise my impression of her. Weird isn’t bad. She’s just a normal human being who goes into the woods. She isn’t a lunatic. She’s my friend.

A whistle tweets in the distance, a sharp, ear-spilling shriek that echos over to us. “Time to go in,” I say at the shrill noise.

We start walking back towards our school when Rosalee stops.

“Rosalee?” I say. “Let’s keep going.”

“No. Wait. Do you still want to know about what I constantly say, why I’m here in the forest every recess?”

“I…guess?”

“Because I can tell you.”

“Um…” What am I supposed to say in response to that?

“Wouldn't want to lose that dare, would you?” She laughs, but it’s really shaky. She seems nervous as her hands fidget with one another.

I quickly say, “Oh, it's okay. Asher dared to me to ask you—he didn’t say you had to answer.”

“No… I want to tell you. I’ve been keeping this to myself for way too long. I need to tell somebody. Please, Sammy. Can I tell you?”

I’m taken aback. “Yeah, sure.”

We start trotting again. Nobody’s on the playground when we emerge from the woods. We keep walking in silence until we’re right outside the school door.

“Ready to tell me yet?” I say, turning to Rosalee’s face.

“More than ready. One thing first, though.”

“Yeah?”

Her blue eyes glitter and a smile crowns her lips. “Can you keep a secret?”

August 19, 2020 02:41

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Pranathi G
18:11 Aug 21, 2020

Awesome story! Wait, you're 11! I am 14 but this story looks like an adult has written it! Can't wait to read more from you!

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18:12 Aug 21, 2020

Thank you!

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Regina Perry
14:07 Aug 21, 2020

I love this one! I like the way you hinted at Rosalee having magical abilities by comparing her to Luna Lovegood. Luna's my favourite! I've been compared to her myself. The fake-scene was also well done. I was a bit surprised when Samantha freaked out, but when you revealed it was all in Rosalee's head, it made sense. Here are some small spelling/grammar edits: "She disappears in the woods framing out school" You probably meant to write "our" instead of "out". "Asher, and eleven-year-old," Change "and" to "an". "Asher shrugs ...

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14:09 Aug 21, 2020

Ahh, thanks so much for alll that feedback! I’ll go and fix those mistakes right now. Thanks for reading!

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Megan Sutherland
14:03 Aug 21, 2020

Ok, Aerin- I'm reading the comments, and YOU'RE ONLY 11? I swear, I had no idea. I thought you were an adult. I'm 12, turning 13 in October. Wow! Back to the story. This was amazing! I loved the Dare or Dare- to be truthful, my friends and I will play Dare or Extreme Dare, but we never use the rules you applied here. I'm going to have to bring that up to them. I also loved that you made Rosalee so different and unique with the powers- I thought that she was just going to be a weirdo, to be honest. This was a great story!!!!

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14:08 Aug 21, 2020

Yup, I’m 11! You’re 12? Cool! I always imagined you as my age-ish, so yep, that makes sense. Thank you! I love playing dare-or-dare with my friends. Yeah, the rules are common—I made them up and anytime we play truth-or-dare, we use them! Thank youuuu! ~Aerin P. S. Thanks for mentioning me in your bio!

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Megan Sutherland
14:11 Aug 21, 2020

Ok- obviously I had to mention you. I love your stories and they're a great inspiration to my writing because we're kind of the same genre. Maybe your friends should meet mine so they can explain that Dare or Extreme Dare should have rules so we're not walking up to teachers and hugging them (long story lol). Also, of course, your story was amazing!

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14:16 Aug 21, 2020

Haha, thanks! LOL, that would actually be allowed—unless the teacher is stricter. Here are the rules if you want to text or email them to your friends or something: THE RULES OF DARES! 1. Has to b DOABLE and can’t be dangerous 2. Can’t get you in trouble 3. Can’t be embarrassing

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Megan Sutherland
14:21 Aug 21, 2020

Okay, thanks, my friends are going to hear about these. 😈😂

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21:01 Aug 21, 2020

Hi, Megan! Just dropped by to say that I just posted a new story! If you have time and want to (duh), would you mind checking out ‘Day of the Choosings—Part 1’? Thanks! Bye! 🍩🧃🍩, Aerin

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Deborah Angevin
13:05 Aug 21, 2020

I love the naming on the characters! PS: I read the comments - you are 11?! You're making me feel old!

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13:06 Aug 21, 2020

Thanks! P. S. Yup! I kinda intended for my age to NOT be on the internet, but then I didn’t delete the comment, sooo now everyone knows. Womp-womp-womp. But yeah, I’m 11!

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<inactive> .
10:03 Aug 21, 2020

Sorry for not reading this story yet, BUT! I THINK I KNOW THE ANSWER TO TODAYS RIDDLE. The word is 'wrong'!!! Because if you pronounce it as 'correctly' it's wrong, but it you pronounce it 'wrong' it's right!!!! BRILLIANT. I AM THE CHOSEN ONE.

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12:48 Aug 21, 2020

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<inactive> .
13:23 Aug 21, 2020

YAYYYYYYYYY Wait what flavor is the juice?

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13:33 Aug 21, 2020

Hmm...apple juice!

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<inactive> .
18:28 Aug 22, 2020

Nooo I want mango juice

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18:29 Aug 22, 2020

Hmmm...HEREEEE! 🥭🧃🧃🧃🧃🧃🥭🥭🥭🥭🥭🥭🧃🧃🧃🥭🥭🥭🥭🥭🧃🥭🧃🥭🥭🥭🥭🥭🥭🧃🧃🧃🥭🧃🥭🧃🥭🧃🥭🧃🥭🥭🥭🥭🧃🧃🧃🥭🥭🥭🥭🧃🥭🧃🥭🧃🥭🥭🥭🥭🥭🧃🧃🧃🥭🥭🥭🥭🧃🧃🧃🥭🥭🧃🥭🧃🥭🧃🥭 Mango juice!

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<inactive> .
18:29 Aug 22, 2020

And the doughnuts are double chocolate, yes??

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Cheekati Meghna
09:30 Aug 21, 2020

It's amazing!! Keep writing dear!! Pretty talented at this very young age!

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12:46 Aug 21, 2020

Thanks!

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07:57 Aug 21, 2020

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12:44 Aug 21, 2020

Thanks! Yup, I’ll definitely check out a story of yours!

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04:23 Aug 21, 2020

Aerin, you may have noticed Lord Voldemort is back. I am Dumbledore (suhani). You must turn into a hp character and help me defeat him lol :)

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12:20 Aug 21, 2020

Hmm...hmm...can I be Hedwig, but, like...WITH MAGIC! *nods solemnly* Oki-dokes, I’m an owl with a wand, who can also talk. ABRA-CADABRA (riiiight. I don’t really have that many Harry Potter spells memorizes, 😬😬😬...but hey! I can poop on the Dark Lord from above! So....)

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17:59 Aug 21, 2020

Yes! The powerful hedwig poop bullets will surely defeat him!

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18:11 Aug 21, 2020

YESSSS YOU’RE GOING DOWN, VOLDE

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18:49 Aug 21, 2020

Oh, and Harry (amogh) will be so happy to see that you are alive!

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19:33 Aug 21, 2020

Yup!

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Amogh Kasat
03:28 Aug 21, 2020

It's a wonderful story Aerin. P.S upvote my comments and I will do the same. This is Amogh. I am writting a novel with Lord Voldemort's name in reedsy.

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12:14 Aug 21, 2020

Thanks! P. S. Okay, dang, I’m soooo confused. You are Harry Potter, but you used to be Voldemort, and before that (and normally), you’re Akshat Atal. But, um...everybody is calling you Amogh??? Is that your real name??? Ahhh I’m so confused. Writing a novel? Upvoting comments? Sure! I’ll upvote you a ton then you do me, and we both get more karma points! Ummmm...yeah.

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Noa A
01:49 Aug 21, 2020

I love your style, Aerin. It's so action-packed and really fun to read!

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01:53 Aug 21, 2020

Thanks! 😆

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Bianka Nova
22:33 Aug 20, 2020

Wow, I wouldn't have guessed your age! You're a very intelligent and creative young person! Keep up the good work! The only thing I've noticed: In your first line, I think you meant to write AT instead of AS - "panicked glance as the timer". Hope it helps ;)

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22:36 Aug 20, 2020

Thank you! Oop, yep, I’ll correct that!

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Jessie Nice
21:53 Aug 20, 2020

First off - I love the name Rosalie, it will always remind me of the Twilight Saga :) Second off - I really enjoy your creative dialect, to have such a long conversation and base the story mainly on speech but keep the reader gripped is a skill! Thirdly - did I just hear you're only 11?! And you write this good and have so many creative ideas? Hats off to you this is very impressive. I hope you get far with your writing in the future. :)

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22:04 Aug 20, 2020

Haha, thanks! I’ve never read the books (and I prob. won’t till I’m older cuz of the age suggestions) but I love the name as well 😄. Thank you! I use dialogue a ton—I definitely rely on it in my writing, because I think while too much dialogue is bad, a good amount of dialogue makes a story quicker and easier to read 😁. Yup, I’m 11! Thank youuu! I really want to be an author—as a job, cuz I already am one, LOL. I’ll actually be publishing my first novel (it’s a 300-page fantasy called Color Quest Ugh been working on for a year...) in a...

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Jessie Nice
22:14 Aug 20, 2020

Ah yes of course. There are mixed opinions on the series but when I was younger I really enjoyed the books in particular :) It's good to hear you are so ambitious of your author dream, and congratulations on your novel! Is there anywhere you know people will be able to purchase it because I would love to have a read! Never lose your enthusiasm for writing what you truly enjoy writing, this is coming from somebody who wrote and wrote until about your age and had a massive writers block for years. I am now almost 21 and Reedsy has helped in...

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22:28 Aug 20, 2020

Thanks ;) Yup, Color Quest’ll be on Amazon (I’m self-publishing with KDP)! Yessss thank you! Okay, I’m so glad you’re back into writing 😁, writing is definitely my favorite art 😍.

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Jessie Nice
22:29 Aug 20, 2020

Oh awesome! Looking forward to supporting your dream :) Being lost in words is the most wonderful feeling. I am glad it is!

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22:29 Aug 20, 2020

🥰🥰🥰

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Krishi Norris
20:38 Aug 20, 2020

Riddle: What word is right when pronounced wrong but wrong when pronounced right? Answer: da word wronggg

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20:39 Aug 20, 2020

Yessss! Congrats! 🤩🤩🤩

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21:18 Aug 20, 2020

Hey Trinity! I’m back cuz I just have a question. I really hope this doesn’t sound creepy stalker-ish, but how old are you? Yep, that sounded weird. Just, would you mind giving me a loose estimate? I’m in early middle school, and I dunno, I just imagine you around the age of me and Amany and Celeste and Rhondalise and all the younger authors. It’s fine if you don’t want to share your name on the internet, but I just want to get a loose idea ;). Bye! ~Aerin

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Krishi Norris
21:38 Aug 20, 2020

um okay... wasnt expecting that. but i don't think your creepy, don't worry. to answer your question, i'm almost finished with middle school :)

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21:41 Aug 20, 2020

Ahhh, cool. The middle school range is different for different places, but yeah, you’re, like, in the middle of Amany and me. Cool 😎

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Krishi Norris
21:44 Aug 20, 2020

😊😊😊

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UR 11?? YOUR STORIES ARE LEGIT SO GOOD. WOW!!! Also I was surprised there were 203 comments ! 😂😂

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18:26 Aug 20, 2020

AHHH THANK YOU! Your stories are also amazing for a 14-year-old—not that younger writers deserve ‘for’ in front of their ages (MINORS CAN BE AUTHORS TOOOO!). Haha, yup, I often have a loooot of comments cuz I say thank you to every comment, I often have conversation with people, and people comment for daily riddles. Thanks again!

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YOU ARE SO WELCOME, AND SO TRUE! And yes, same :3 I also say thanks to every comment 😂 Your welcome again! :DDD

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18:30 Aug 20, 2020

☺️☺️☺️

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Thom With An H
17:19 Aug 20, 2020

This is so well written and your imagination is impressive. I'm not usually a fan of dueling perspective but you pulled it off flawlessly. You also worked it perfectly to the prompt at the end. That isn't easy because it is more of a story starter than ender. I really love your writing and your style. Top notch.

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17:22 Aug 20, 2020

Thank you so much!

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Pragya Rathore
16:39 Aug 20, 2020

The word 'wrong'. Am I right? (I'm sorry, I just couldn't resist the pun.) :)

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16:40 Aug 20, 2020

HEHEEEEEEE Yeah, you’re right. I loved puns. One might say they’re...puniful. *an insane amount of laughter*

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Pragya Rathore
16:44 Aug 20, 2020

:) Lol But won't people see this in the comments, and then you'll never know who actually guessed it? Why do I never know what punctuation to use with 'Lol'? Lol. *Awkward laughter on realising that she probably isn't being funny*

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16:48 Aug 20, 2020

Hmm, well, yeah, people could TECHNICALLY scour the comments for the answers. But I don’t really see the point—the riddles are for people’s pleasure, so it doesn’t really matter if they get it right. It would be one thing if they got some sort of prize for getting it right, but if they just want to see somebody else’s answer and do it, nothing happens. LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL I dunno. I like never do punctuation after LOLs.

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Pragya Rathore
16:50 Aug 20, 2020

Yeah, I guess. Prizes would be way cooler. Hmmm, maybe the one who gets it right first will have his latest story reviewed by at least 10 people? Incentive :) Yes, but I'm a grammar nerd, kind of like your friend Sarah :p

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16:57 Aug 20, 2020

Haha, I’m a grammar nerd too, but definitely not like Sarah. She is aware of this, as is everybody in our grade, that’s she...grammar nerd to the extreme. Like, she has a shirt that says “I’m silently correcting your grammar” or something like that, and anytime she wears it, we always joke that she is NOT silently doing it. She’s very, very loudly, occasionally rudely, doing it, LOL.

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Ola Hotchpotch
15:26 Aug 20, 2020

Good story of normal people with such strong capacity to communicate. Right into the head. Must be Really scary for the person with whom Rosalee communicates like this. Talking into the mind with eyes boring into the soul and then got what she wanted . My younger brother is very much like your story character Rosalee. He has magic and can charm anybody and gets everything he wants in this way. But he is not alone.There are many like him. Keeping 6 feet distance is necessary. But keeping a charm to shield from peeping eyes is more urgent....

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15:48 Aug 20, 2020

Thank you! (Love your whole response 😁)

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12:15 Aug 20, 2020

Incredible story, Aerin! Extremely well made! The Elvish twist about Rosalee was nice! I wonder which parent is an elf? I am really looking forward to part 2! 😁 PS. I have posted a story after a VERY, VERY long time. I was wondering if you could read it? Thanks!

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12:19 Aug 20, 2020

Thank you! P. S. Of course! ;)

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12:24 Aug 20, 2020

Thanks!

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12:24 Aug 20, 2020

Okay, I left a comment and liked It! ;)

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12:32 Aug 20, 2020

Thank you!

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Krishi Norris
22:49 Aug 19, 2020

You're writing a novel? That's so cool! Good luck on that!

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22:54 Aug 19, 2020

Haha, actually, I already finished a novel! Color Quest is done, just not published yet (bout to be done editing). Although I’m working on the second book in the series: Errands for the Enchantress, so yep, I’m technically still working on a novel!

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Krishi Norris
22:57 Aug 19, 2020

Oh, cool! What's the series about? if you don't mind me asking

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23:07 Aug 19, 2020

Well, it’s kind of complicated. Color Quest is fantasy, kinda like Harry Potter and Percy Jackson in the sense it’s a whole new world—on Earth. It’s first person with the main character: sassy, spunky Isla Brooke. She’s a SemiMagical, meaning her parent got to the core and was gifted powers by the Divine Side gods who live there. She and Colin hafta go on a quest. Along the way, they acquire three new quest-mates: Celeste and Parker Pierce, and Abcde Amicale. Anyways, in the first book, there isn’t really an antagonist, but in the other bo...

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Krishi Norris
23:10 Aug 19, 2020

Wow! That sounds fascinating! Do you have an editor?

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23:13 Aug 19, 2020

Kinda. My friend Sarah Freeman edits (I do, too). She’s not official, or anything—she’s 11 just like me! But a second pair of eyes is always good, and she’s super helpful. Color Quest has currently gone through 10+ editing rounds between the two of us—all I need to do is type up the edits and have my family proofread more, then Color Quest’ll be on Amazon!

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Akshat .
09:23 Aug 20, 2020

WOW! You are ACTUALLY the most imaginative person I have ever known! 🤯🤯

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11:36 Aug 20, 2020

THAAAAAANK YOUUUUUUU! Wow, Reedsy is so nice, but you are one of the kindest people on here. Thanksthanksthanksthanks!

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21:53 Aug 19, 2020

Wow Aerin, this story was amazing! I'm so glad you decided to do this prompt, you did so well with it! I also loved the Harry Potter reference at the beginning, I loved Luna! Anyway, great story, hope you write more! Also: for the latest riddle in your bio, isn't the answer to just 'stop imagining'? It's clever!

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21:59 Aug 19, 2020

Thank you! Yep, that’s the aaaanswer! Congrats!

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01:16 Aug 20, 2020

Haha thanks!

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