Eagles Flying Above the Storm

Submitted into Contest #244 in response to: Write about a character who sees a photo they shouldn’t have seen.... view prompt

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Mystery Romance Historical Fiction

Eagles ride updrafts,

On airy sky trails,

Over the clouds,

Beyond rain and gales."


Elijah saw the storm squall whipping the waves. The wind howled. The ocean darkened. The clouds burst open.


A pair of eagles spread their wings and rode updrafts into the sky.


Gliding through low clouds, the eagles soared. Elijah knew they were flying to heights beyond his sight, above the rain and wind.


A sense of wonder and beauty filled Elijah. He felt as if he soared along with the eagles.


Sitting in the ground floor of the lighthouse, Elijah leaned toward the open flames of the wood-fired Franklin warming stove.


He took out the photo that he kept in his chest pocket, next to his heart.


In the wavering light of the flame Maryanne's photo image seemed to come alive.


When Elijah picked at the frayed corner of Maryanne’s photo, he gasped. Another photo peeled off the back of it.


What was this?


Elijah’s throat and chest tightened, he stopped breathing, and he felt his face tighten. 


Was this photo also Maryanne?


Above him, in the lighthouse beacon's lantern room, the glass facets of the giant fresnel lens rotated.


The sparkling light from the burning kerosene wicks beamed across the sea.


Hundreds of feet below the bluff, waves beat against the volcanic sea stacks in the ocean. Boom, crash. They sent spray high into the night air.


Elijah sat quietly for a minute. Corresponding with a lady on the other side of the country and having matrimonial intentions was challenging.


With so few available single women in the wilderness in 1898, he had no choice but to place ads in matrimonial magazines. He was lonely.


Like other single men in the wilderness and small villages, he had to seek a potential wife from a populated area, often on the East Coast where there were many women seeking husbands.


Many of the single men had gone west to the wilderness to seek gold, homesteads, and new lives.


After a long enough correspondence, if each person decided to become serious, the lady would need to travel across the country by train, horse-drawn wagon, and boat to reach Elijah's isolated lighthouse.


The face in the second photo looked a little like Maryanne. But instead of a polite, lovely seamstress in her fashionable, well-tailored frock, this was another woman.


She had similar features, but wore dirty, tattered clothing, digging in a garden, her face soiled, and her stringy hair tangled in knots.


He compared it to the other photo. They might be the same woman.


Where was this? What was she doing?


He reached for the folded letter in his pocket and read it again. Soon the folds would start to break apart if he kept unfolding it all the time.


The woman in the second photo looked tired and ragged, thinner and with more lines on her face.


What was going on?


Outside the window, Elijah saw the storm calming and the eagles returning.


He reached for one of the books in the wooden box of the traveling library.


There. He found it in the book of poetry.


"On rugged cliffs,

The lighthouse towers,

Beaming her light,

Through the stormy hours.


Howls of the wind,

Like a strange life form,

Waves booming and crashing,

Sounds of the storm.


Eagles ride updrafts,

On airy sky trails,

Over the clouds,

Beyond rain and gales."


Elijah wanted to follow the eagles, rising above clouds to a peaceful sky. He let his mind wander in a fuzzy daydream.


On the other side of the country, Maryanne sat in her family’s home outside of town, surrounded by orchards and crops. The shrubs had grown up around the house, the paint was peeling, and a broken window was covered with boards.


After her father's accident, his steady income had disappeared. Using a cane, he moved about but was unable to continue his line of work.


However, his will remained independent and energetic, like Maryanne's.


She looked at the rows of vegetables in the gardens, almost buried under weeds.


“I’ll have to start wearing gloves all the time to hide my hands,” she thought. Scratches and blisters covered her hands now that used to be smooth and soft.


“Are you going to accept the offer on the house?” Maryanne knew the younger couple was eager to turn it into a home for their growing family. 


“It is a good price. Plenty for me to find lodgings or travel. Something I’ve always wanted to do,” said her father.


“I appreciate all the work you’ve done, daughter, working in your shop and working my crops for me at the same time. Two jobs.”


Maryanne looked around at the walls holding the books she loved so much. 


“It may be time for me to move into town, daughter, away from the farm, and travel part of the time. I would so love to visit my friends up and down the coast.” Maryanne heard the enthusiasm in his voice.


“I know Papa. It’s hard for me to keep working here on the farm and at my dressmaking and tailoring business in town. Emily needs to be where she can make friends and it is so isolated out here, too.”


Maryanne felt a weight lifting. It was time for a change.


Her father smiled at her and they both nodded. The future beckoned.


A sense of peace and happiness came over Maryanne. She felt a decision had been reached and she was glad.


Back on the West Coast, Elijah looked again at the charming photo of the woman in her wide-brimmed hat, wearing the lace-trimmed dress. A little girl sat on her lap. There was strength and a sparkle in Maryanne's eyes, despite her serious expression. They expressed a steadiness of character.


Then he looked at the other photo of a woman struggling through hard times. Maybe they were both of the same woman.


Did Maryanne know the second photo had been enclosed with the first one when she replied to his letter?


Elijah thought if his own story. He pictured himself, taking the ship from Norway to England with his brother, then the long voyage to the American east coast. Working in the shipyard. Saying good by to his brother and wishing him well on his new marriage.


Then another voyage around the South American cape all the way to San Francisco. Working on the docks there, becoming a sailor, fighting the storms and treacherous jetty at the Columbia River on the way to Portland.


He knew he made a good looking figure now in his lighthouse keepers cap that reminded people of a captains cap. But he didn’t always look or dress like this. Growing crops below the lighthouse keeper’s house kept his hands rough but when it was time to made dinner he was glad to have the fresh produce.


Maybe Maryanne had a different but similar tale to his own. 


What was the real story of her life? 


The struggles and hard won successes?


Of course she must be a lot more than a pretty woman in a lovely dress in a picture.


Elijah decided he wanted to know more. What made her tick? 


He thought about the storm howling outside and the eagles flying upward through the clouds.


What storms had Maryanne flown through?


It would be several hours before he needed to climb the spiral stairs to the beacon room and replenish the kerosene to keep the light burning and shining.


The urge to write Maryanne a letter grew. Next to the lighthouse log book were pens, inkwells, and paper. He began to write.


Elijah did not know how to express what he wanted to say so he tried to imply it.


Dear Maryanne,


The two bonded eagles I last wrote you about flew by today when a storm squall came in across the ocean. I feared for them in these winds that almost knock me over. 


But they spread their winds and soared higher, then higher still. I saw them disappear into the mists above, together. Somewhere above the storm I knew they were soaring on outstretched wings, using the rising air from the storm to lift them. 


When other birds seek shelter on the ground or in trees, the eagles soar above the clouds, above the rain and winds.


It was almost as if I was there too. Rising, lifted by a storm instead of buffeted by the winds and rain.


Have you ever felt this way, Maryanne?”


Elijah hoped he was approaching the questions he had in a subtle way that would not offend her or embarrass her. He did not think she had intended to include the photo of herself in a state of disarray along with the one where she was a model of fashion.


He continued writing. “I have weathered many storms myself, and my story is not always easy to tell. Some of it seems so far away now.

Maybe you have weathered some storms too. Perhaps someday we can tell each other about it.”


He sighed. His chest had loosened and he felt better. It was a relief to approach the matter instead of trying to bury it. 


“I love my pair of eagles who sometimes soar by the lighthouse lantern room at the top when I am servicing the beacon. Perhaps someday you will be able to see them too.”


There. He had spoken fairly openly for him about his intentions. He was clearly interested in her.


Now he needed to get the letter posted in the village an 8 hour ride away from the lighthouse and wait for it to arrive and then for a reply. 


Elijah put both the pictures in his chest pocket, close to his heart.  


Images of eagles gliding above the ocean floated like sea mists through his mind.


That night he fell asleep with a smile on his lips.


He imagined a sign over the door to his lightkeeper’s house on the bluff above the sea that said, “Eagles Flying Above the Storm.” 

April 03, 2024 07:51

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43 comments

Jeremy Burgess
09:21 Apr 07, 2024

This is a beautiful meditation on the complexity of people - I enjoyed the lack of clarity on whether the pictures were both of Maryanne and what it might mean if they were. You convey Elijah's hope and his projection of his own experience onto her very well as well. Nicely told.

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Kristi Gott
13:19 Apr 07, 2024

Thank you very much for your thoughtful and encouraging comments!

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Mary Bendickson
06:06 Apr 04, 2024

This is more in your saga about the lighthouse keeper and the seamstress. Hope one day they they can soar together.

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Kristi Gott
06:15 Apr 04, 2024

Thank you for your thoughtful comment, Mary! :-)

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Kay Smith
14:52 Apr 07, 2024

I would definitely read more!! :)

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Kristi Gott
19:41 Apr 07, 2024

Thank you, Kay!

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Esther A
17:18 Apr 22, 2024

Great story in simple language. To me, marrying a stranger from the other side of the country sounds scarier than being alone! Maybe seeing that second picture will give him comfort that his beau is a well-rounded woman

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Kristi Gott
18:07 Apr 22, 2024

Thank you for your comments!

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03:16 Apr 15, 2024

The eagles are a good metaphor for their ambitions for a better future. I liked how you take us into the era with a lot of little historical details. Its interesting to think about how the idea of mail order brides and long distance romance existed even in 1898.

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Kristi Gott
04:30 Apr 15, 2024

Thank you for commenting. The research shows the actual mail order brides had often just arrived from outside the country and marriage happened quickly but the matrimonial correspondence brides often wrote letters for months or a year and sometimes the groom did a lot of research, got recommendations and hired investigators to meet the potential mate verify info. So I found there were variations on the long distance courtship. Good topic for the next story about these two.

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Amanda Stogsdill
02:01 Apr 13, 2024

Interesting story. I've always been interested in mail-order brides, so Maryanne's plot drew me in. Storms and eagles, beautiful symbolism of Elijah's love for his long-distance bride. Just a thought, would she have been happy, isolated on the sea if she hated the farm? There is a minor grammar error. I noticed a couple misspelled words in Elijah's letter. Still a beautiful story.

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Kristi Gott
02:05 Apr 13, 2024

Thank you very much for your comments. Good question about the farm and I will do a little revision on the version I use on my website after the contest. Thanks for the alert about errors in the letter.

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Jack Conlan
12:22 Apr 11, 2024

What a lovely story. I really enjoyed it. If anything I would have been happy with hearing only from Elijah in this tale. It could have been fun to see what qualities he had assigned Maryanne in the first picture and then, upon his discovery, how did that shake his world/view of her? Was it about the dream of her or about her in reality? He clearly has a poet’s soul so I would imagine if would be the latter. But reading him struggle through would have been compelling to me. If this was a novel, then chapter 2 would be all about Maryanne. To ...

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Kristi Gott
13:17 Apr 11, 2024

Thank you very much. Jack, for your thoughtful comments and suggestions! I appreciate it very much.

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02:37 Apr 11, 2024

I absolutely love his subtle way of asking questions to Maryanne. The use of the eagles throughout the story is breathtaking. A beautiful story.

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Kristi Gott
03:15 Apr 11, 2024

Thank you so very much, Brittany!

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Daryl Kulak
16:35 Apr 09, 2024

Two star-crossed book lovers! Nice story, Kristi! I like how you use poetry in your prose.

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Kristi Gott
20:09 Apr 09, 2024

Thank you very much for commenting, Daryl!

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Jon Little
16:07 Apr 09, 2024

This is an interesting story. I like how you made the reflections of the two characters the central point of the story, and the uncertain hope for the future they both have. And. Thanks for liking my story, 'Twixt Heaven and Hell'.

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Kristi Gott
20:08 Apr 09, 2024

Thank you for your comments, Jon!

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Darvico Ulmeli
05:39 Apr 09, 2024

Love it. Connected me on personal level. My wife was also from far away and we exchanged many messages before we actually met. Enjoyed.

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Kristi Gott
06:07 Apr 09, 2024

Thank you very much! That is interesting you and your wife had a correspondence before meeting, too.

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Darvico Ulmeli
06:13 Apr 09, 2024

Yes. Four long years before we met. It's gonna be 9 years of marriage now.

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Kristi Gott
06:30 Apr 09, 2024

That is amazing! You could write a wonderful story about that! :-)

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Darvico Ulmeli
06:32 Apr 09, 2024

Maybe some day. I have time only for one novel to write. All the others had to wait their turn. My wife and kids take 99% of my time.

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Kay Smith
14:54 Apr 07, 2024

I love the symbolism with the storm and the eagles, in particular, and have an interest in following these characters on further journeys! Well done!!

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Kristi Gott
16:17 Apr 07, 2024

Thank you very much, Kay! I appreciate your comments!

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14:42 Apr 07, 2024

Kristi, you did such a great job painting a picture of Elijah's world in the lighthouse and Maryanne's life out in the country. I love the way you used the eagles both as symbolism and inspiration for Elijah to write his letter. It's such a heartfelt story, great job!

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Viga Boland
14:41 Apr 07, 2024

Another excellent story Kristi. Love your imagination and ability to show it in both stories and poems. Beautiful!

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Renate Buchner
08:41 Apr 07, 2024

Wonderful writing style and you portrayed the letter in such a genuine way; this piqued my interest in your character, Maryanne, and made me want to read more about her. I observed you relate additional anecdotes about the lighthouse around this time in 1898, and I'll keep a watch out for them.

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04:53 Apr 06, 2024

I've always been fascinated by lighthouses and the job they perform. And the lonely life of those who tend to them. Reading the comments, I realize this stand-alone story portrays a life you have written other stories about. Beautiful letter he wrote back to her. Full of empathy, and mindful of the two photos and what they revealed about Maryanne. She will be very reassured, no doubt. Loved it.

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Kristi Gott
05:07 Apr 06, 2024

Thank you very much, Kaitlyn, for taking time to write these thoughtful comments! Each week I experiment with some new writing techniques and the encouragement is much appreciated while I continue learning. :-)

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Annie Hewitt
01:57 Apr 05, 2024

Your descriptions of nature are wonderful and the feelings of people from that time period are authentic and feel true. Good work

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Kristi Gott
02:16 Apr 05, 2024

Thank you so very much for your thoughtful and encouraging remarks. Annie! :-) Each week I try to practice something new and keep learning.

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20:58 Apr 04, 2024

love it and also ur stories r amazing

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Kristi Gott
21:50 Apr 04, 2024

Thank you so very much, Mariana, for your encouragement! I am trying to keep learning and experimenting. :-)

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22:12 Apr 04, 2024

Np 😁

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Helen A Smith
17:09 Apr 04, 2024

This is a beautiful story about reality and yearnings set amidst powerful scenery. I love your descriptions and the way you get across two different worlds. Lovely images with the birds. Maryanne needs to free herself and fly to a new life - even though it will have its own challenges. Let’s hope she finds the strength to rise above her present hardships. I really like your lighthouse stories.

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Kristi Gott
19:07 Apr 04, 2024

Thank you so very much for your thoughtful and encouraging comments, Helen! :-)

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Daniel Rogers
04:25 Apr 04, 2024

I enjoyed your story and the time period it took place. Especially seeing how arduous it was to travel back in those days from one cost of America to the other. The father seemed selfish to me, forcing his family into poverty on the count of his pride. I trust Maryanne will raise above it.

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Kristi Gott
04:51 Apr 04, 2024

Thank you for your feedback and comments. I appreciate you pointing out that bit about the father. I changed the part about the father so that now due to an accident he can no longer do his previous line of work. Thanks!

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Alexis Araneta
16:19 Apr 03, 2024

Once again, splendid work, Kristi ! I love the details you put in this. The emotional journey you created was stunning. Splendid work !

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Kristi Gott
18:28 Apr 03, 2024

Thank you very much, Stella. I appreciate your encouraging remarks while I continue learning and trying new techniques. :-)

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