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Submitted into Contest #54 in response to: Write a story about a TV show called "Second Chances."... view prompt
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I'm here, no worries! Wow, agreeing with Akshat, this was interesting! :o Some mistakes you should look out for are to place a comma before your dialogue starts, for example, "He told" should have a comma after the word "told." I like the question at the end (a second chance is kind of like after your first try, you decide you can do better so you do it again, but better!).
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Thank You :)
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Your welcome!
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The authors who will read my story please answer the last line. So, now can you tell what is SECOND CHANCE ?
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P.S. : Please read my story : Zilla Babbitt Aerin
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You can check my name off the list 😉
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XD
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Can you upvote my comments please and I will do the same
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Hello! What exactly is this list? You asked me to read and here I am. This is so good for a first story. Wonderful! I do think there is just one problem here. Try to use normal font please as it might be quite disturbing to the readers. Other than that a good story. If you don't already know where to change the font. At the time of submission there are two options H1 and H2 : you choose H1 for smaller font. Okay? Keep it up!
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My first line came in small font size but rest came big. Thank You :)
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Very interesting story! It's a good first try. There are some grammar mistakes but you can edit those. You should use Grammarly, it really helps out! Score: 4.5 out of 5
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Thank You Akshat
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:)
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Can you answer the last line : So, now can you tell what is SECOND CHANCE ?
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Nope, sorry.😅 Can you tell me the answer?
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And, also, you don't have to make the font of the story so big. A normal font can do just fine!
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This is my first story in Reedsy. Please like and comment on it. Hope you like it! ! P.S: Read it and comment.
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I am writing a novel with 𝔸𝕜𝕤𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝔸𝕥𝕒𝕝
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It is a fabulous and a amazing story
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thank you:)
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Why havent you submitted any stories?
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Hi Amogh! Good try! You sort of lost the thread in some places, and remember, you need to develop character and plot. I caught a lot of punctuation errors. You forgot to end a speech mark and forgot to place a full stop in places. It was an interesting concept, yes, but remember that grammar and punctuation matter too! :)
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thank you! I will work on it
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No problem :)
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Just wanted to say Amogh, since you asked, I WILL be making another part of Ambitions! Go to the first part, because I have posted a comment with more details.
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ok
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:)
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Congrats on your first submission. Well-written. The question at the end was interesting. Keep writing. All the best to you.
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thank you :)
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Cool story! It's a good first try. I agree with the other commenters that you should use grammerly or something else. Overall, great job!
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Thank You :)
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You're welcome!
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Amogh, I love the parable of the second chance. The storyline is strong however you have quite a few grammatical mistakes, I am guessing that English is your second language. English is the hardest language there is at least I think so. I learned to speak Spanish that is easy. English there are lot of words that are similar they sound the same but are spelled differently. It just comes with practice as does writing. Keep writing your two stories are very good. Sue
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thank you! I will work on it
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Good story! Keep writing!
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thank you :)
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Wow, what a great story!
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thank you :)
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Enjoyed the read. Kept you reading to find out the results. A second chance to succeed. We all need chances.
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Thank You :)
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was fantastic
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thank you :)
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Good first try. You should run through a grammar check, but rest is nicely done.
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Thank You:)
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Amazing story! I hope there is more as wonderful as this. -Faith
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𝚃𝚑𝚊𝚗𝚔𝚜
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Awesome job Amogh! Very interesting!
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thanks
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Great job!
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Thanks please read my other stories
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It is a sweet little story. Good work! I would just recommend revising it for grammatical errors. Keep writing:)
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thanks
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