Shattering Shuttle

Submitted into Contest #80 in response to: Write about a child witnessing a major historical event.... view prompt

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American Historical Fiction Middle School

โ€œClass please settle down! I know youโ€™re excited to watch the Challenger launch but we still have a few hours before the assembly.โ€ Ms. Jefferson called over the class.

โ€œI seriously donโ€™t wanna wait those extra hours! I want time to speed up so we can watch the launch!โ€ Elizabeth, my best friend, leaned over and whispered to me.

I nodded, the Challenger launch was probably the biggest thing that was happening this week. Everyone and I mean everyone, was excited about it. Elizabeth had been coming over every day ever since the Challenger launch was announced so we could talk about it together. I was especially excited about Christa McAuliffe. She was gonna be the first teacher in space!ย 

โ€œIf a teacher can go to space, then surely weirdos like us can go to!โ€ Elizabeth had said a couple of days ago.

โ€œOk right. Our lesson is almost over. Iโ€™m just going to pick a few students at random to solve the problems I wrote on the boardโ€ Ms. Jefferson said.

I noticed Elizabeth squirm. She wasnโ€™t the best at math no matter how hard she tried.

Ms. Jefforson reached into a cup filled with popsicle sticks and pulled one out.

โ€œMicheal!โ€ she read from the stick โ€œPlease solve problem 1โ€ย 

Elizabeth releases a sigh of relief as Micheal got up and walked to the board. He grabbed a piece of chalk and started writing quickly. When he finished, he glanced at Ms. Jefferson to see if he got it correct.

Ms. Jefferson nodded and told Micheal he could sit back down. Mary went next, then April, and then James.

โ€œOk great job everyone. We just have one more problemโ€ Ms. Jefferson declared and reached into the cup for the last time.

โ€œOk Jessie, youโ€™re up!โ€ย 

โ€œGood luckโ€ Elizabeth whispered to me as I got up from my seat and went up to the board to solve the final problem. I wasnโ€™t too worried truth be told because math was one of my best subjects.

I read the problem on the board. It was just a simple proportion. I cross-multiplied and divided and double-checked my work before turning around and looking at Ms. Jefferson.

โ€œGreat job Jessieโ€ I heard her say as I went to sit down.

โ€œWow, you solved that so quickly!โ€ Elizabeth gaped at me.

โ€œIt was simple. Just a simple proportionโ€ I shrugged.

โ€œOk then. We have around 5 minutes until the assembly. So how about you all work on your homework?โ€ Ms. Jefferson told us.

I pulled my folder out of my bag and took out my homework. I wrote and scribbled until I heard a bell ring.

โ€œEveryone in a single file line please! We are going to walk quietly and calmly to the gymโ€ย 

I got up and grabbed Elizabethโ€™s hand as we ran up to the front of the classroom to get in line. You could practically hear the excitement of everyone buzzing in the air. We all started walking down the halls and made our way to the gym. I could already hear the talking of all the other middle school classes. We made one more turn and walked into the gym.ย 

โ€œItโ€™s really happening!โ€ Elizabeth whispered to me and pointed to the screen at the front of the gym.

โ€œI know, I know! This is going to be amazing!โ€ I whispered back as we all sat down.

Mr. Sanders (our principal) got up and walked to the front of the room. Instantly, a hush fell over the gym.ย 

โ€œOk, everyone! The launch is about to begin so I need you all to be very quiet so we can hear what the announcer is saying. You can clap and cheer once the shuttle has taken off understood?โ€ he called.

โ€œYes sir!โ€ we all said in unison.

โ€œGreat! Now sit back and enjoy the launch!โ€ Mr. Sanders walked away and joined the other teachers at the side of the gym.ย 

All eyes turned to the screen. The announcer was saying something but I wasnโ€™t paying attention. I guess I was too transfixed.

โ€œAnd weโ€™re lifting off in t-minus 10...9...8โ€ฆโ€ the announcer said.

Elizabeth nudged my shoulder and mouthed โ€œIsnโ€™t this awesomeโ€ to me. I nodded excitedly.

7...6...5

The first teacher in space! There were so many things important about this launch. And the best part was...we got to see it! Live! In school!

4...3...2...1! ANd we have lift-off!

A thunderous cheer went up in the gym. I think I even saw Mrs. Wellston crying.ย 

โ€œLook at it, Jessie! Theyโ€™re actually going to space!โ€ Elizabeth shouted at me over the large cheers of the crowd.ย 

โ€œHaha, I know! This is ama-โ€ I started to reply but I was cut short by a large BOOM!

I whipped my head around and looked at the screen. My eyes went wide at the sight before me.

There was just a ball of gas and flame in the sky.

โ€œT-the Challengerโ€ฆโ€ is all I managed to say.

โ€œWhat just happened!โ€ I heard someone call from across the room. It sounded like Maxwell.

โ€œDid it explode!โ€ Massey asked.

โ€œAre the passengers alive!?โ€ Elizabeth asked, her voice cracking.

Several voices piped up and asked questions. Everyone was scared and confused. I could feel tears welling up in my eyes.

โ€œEveryone please calm down!โ€ Mr. Sanders called. It was no use. We were all in a state of panic. The Challenger had just exploded. People had probably died. And did that mean space travel wasnโ€™t safe anymore?! What did any of this mean!

***

Elizabeth sat on my bed playing around with my Walkman that I got for my birthday.

We were dismissed early that day. The teachers thought it wouldnโ€™t be a good idea for us to continue schooling after witnessing such a โ€œtraumatizingโ€ event. I guess there was some truth in that. I donโ€™t think I couldโ€™ve solved any proportions or anything like that.ย 

โ€œDo you think people will ever go to space again?โ€ Elizabeth asked, flopping on her stomach.

I shrugged and turned another page of my book โ€œMaybe, but I imagine not for a while. People are probably scared to go back after what happenedโ€

Elizabeth sighed โ€œDo you still wanna go to space? Do you trust that the shuttles will get better and everything?โ€ย 

I closed my book and leaned against the bed in thought.

โ€œI donโ€™t really know Elizabeth,โ€ I replied sadly.

February 12, 2021 15:02

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15:03 Feb 12, 2021

YAYYYY A NEW STORY! Youโ€™d better remind me to read this soon ๐Ÿ˜Ž Lol but really, Iโ€™m in school rn but Iโ€™m definitely going to read it after school XD

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
15:05 Feb 12, 2021

YES, NEW STORY! Can't wait for you to read it! I think you'll like it! And focus on school Aerin! Ik it's boring as heck but it's important!

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15:06 Feb 12, 2021

Haha, I know, but right now weโ€™re on a 5-minute โ€˜brain breakโ€™ so I checked REEDSY XDDD

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
15:11 Feb 12, 2021

"Brain break"? You aren't taking an I-ready diagnostic by any chance?!!

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15:16 Feb 12, 2021

Lolll nope. Itโ€™s basically what my teachers call a small break to get off the screen. Of course, Iโ€™m still on my iPad during brain breaks, XD, but hey, itโ€™s something ๐Ÿ˜‚

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
15:43 Feb 12, 2021

Oh oki!

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Aww I saw your comment on Nainika's story XD Thanks XDD (I mayyyy have dropped my computer on the floor from the first line XD) Also: https://forms.gle/qNZivM4VEGsXnH7Q9 :D FIll that out! <3

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Mira Caplan
00:22 Feb 20, 2021

PART 18 HAS BEEN PUBLISHED

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
00:30 Feb 20, 2021

WHOOOOOOO!

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Mira Caplan
00:31 Feb 20, 2021

There is Alarys. Lots of Alarys.

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Mira Caplan
00:31 Feb 20, 2021

There is Alarys. Lots of Alarys.

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
00:36 Feb 20, 2021

Ahhh nice.

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ViCtoRy Is OuRs! Apparently its a challenge where you say it to someone and then have them pass it on. I got it from luna who got it from sapphire who got it from kate who got it from jade who got it from emerald sorry this is really random XD

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
02:00 Feb 19, 2021

Nah ur fine. Time to find someone to pass it on to!

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Antonio Jesus
16:41 Feb 19, 2021

hi

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Maya -
03:52 Feb 18, 2021

Thanks for filling out my Reedsy cast form, I'll be sure to include you in the next part! :)

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
13:50 Feb 18, 2021

Yw! :)

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Sadie ๐Ÿค
21:58 Feb 17, 2021

sarah i luv this story. it was such a sad time when this happend (i think bc im 12 and wasent alive lol) btw me and my friendr big fans of u!! pls can u collab with us at some point we would luv to be friends!!!!!

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
22:11 Feb 17, 2021

awww thanks! that'd be cool, I've never done a collab before.

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Sadie ๐Ÿค
23:22 Feb 17, 2021

aw cool! so me and my friend were thinking u could share a google doc with us or we could share one with u if that ok so we could all work on it:) and tbh i have no clue what we should do lol bc im already working on a story for "Write about two people reconnecting after a rough patch in their relationship". and Koyuki is working on somthing for "Start your story with one character setting up a romantic dinner, and end it with them looking at a framed wedding photo." so ill let u make that call on witch promt:)

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
23:27 Feb 17, 2021

Oh, that's nice. I wasn't thinking of writing anything this week cuz of schoolwork. But I'd love to do a collab sometime!

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Sadie ๐Ÿค
23:29 Feb 17, 2021

oh ok, thats fine! just let me or koyuki know when u would like to:)

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Is this based off of history? I feel like it's from the space age and Challenger sounds familiar, but I'm not sure.

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
21:29 Feb 17, 2021

Yeah, it is. The Challenger was a real space shuttle explosion. You can google it.

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01:53 Feb 14, 2021

The punctuation threw me off, ngl. Some of the dialogue ends without punctuation (ex: "[..] Iโ€™m just going to pick a few students at random to solve the problems I wrote on the boardโ€). I'm just being nitpicky, tbh. Buuuuuut this story is still amazing! I loved the historical event you chose, and I also love the tone of this story as well. It sounds serious, which I feel is appropriate. Great job!

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
01:56 Feb 14, 2021

Oh ok! Yeah, punctuation is definitely not my strong suit but it's something I'm working on. Thanks for pointing that out! And thanks for the kind comments! :)

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02:07 Feb 14, 2021

No problem!

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Alright, so first of all, ur bio is literally perfect, and even though I've only watched danganronpa, I do know a little bit about assassination classroom. I liked your tone much more in this story than others; it felt solemn and thought out, if not a little bit more serious. Great job!

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
16:54 Feb 13, 2021

Thank you!

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
16:55 Feb 13, 2021

Thank you that's so nice! And uh yeah, I'd recommend Assassination Classroom (just keep some tissues nearby for the ending :') )

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It can't be worse than danganronpa's... right??

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
16:57 Feb 13, 2021

HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM! I've only seen a few Dangonronpa gameplays so I can't really compare the two... But it WILL at least make you feel something by the time it ends, trust me.

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
23:56 Feb 16, 2021

YASSSSS!

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