βI promiseβ¦ weβll escape somehow,β I vowed, placing my hand against my feeble beating heart.Β
βTonyβ¦ Iβm worried about Abby,β I managed a weak smile, ruffling Dianaβs brown hair.
βDonβt worry D, sheβs a smart girlβ¦ sheβll manage.β
βIf you say so,β She mustered her courage to sleep against me, I felt her shiver from the cold, her hands trembling as her body vibrated.
I watched Abbyβs precious little sister close her eyes, her breathing evening out as she mumbled in her sleep, something I couldnβt understandβ¦ girl things.
I looked across the cave to see Lily inspecting something, her eyes narrowed upward as if she was present but her mind was wavering into another dimension.
βLily?βΒ
βHm?β Her warm blue eyes were red from crying, her nose was runny, her cheeks were stained with unshed tears. She wasnβt behaving like the little sister Iβd known.
βWhatβs bothering you?β I asked. She broke off from my glance, looking back at the ceiling where I couldnβt seem to find an ending, an endless wormhole.
βIβ¦ I miss home.β
βWe all do,β I agreed, staring up at the ceiling with her, seeing what interested her.
βHm,β She went back in her thoughts.
I settled beside the rock where Abby had once sat, I forgot the look her curious coffee eyes produced, her steady emotions, she was a tough cookie to crack, never let anyone get the upper hand. I also choked a smile thinking of the moments weβd hadβ¦ before we were stuck.
I had reassured Diana that her sister will be fineβ¦ but will she? I was beginning to worry something went wrong, something always does. Our fate doesnβt seem to work in our favor.
I breathed. In. Out. Repeat. Calm down Tony Kennels.Β
It had only been 12 hours, last I checked since Abby had left. I didnβt know what to do without her presence always trying to find a way. I guessβ¦ I miss her.
Those memories helped me relax as I closed my eyes, seeing Lily walk up to me but I couldnβt hear or see anything else but darkness.
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βTony wake up,β I felt someone shove me back and forth like a rag doll. Only my sister would do that.
βW-whatβs wrong?β
She pointed at something at a distance. I had to cramp my eyes closer to glimpse at what she saw that intrigued her.
βAha,β I crawled backwards, gripping the sand with my fists as I grabbed Lilyβs hand and pulling her away.
βTony, whatβs wrong?β She asked, a brow going up.
βBat,β I whispered, βThat's a bat.β
She laughed, no wheezed is more like it. I almost gasped, patting her back as she coughed.
βDonβt do that again,β I warned, she leaned over and sat next to me. Keeping her hands glued to her sides.
βRelax Tonyβ¦ I think Mr. Bat has something to tell us.β
I gave her a puzzled look, wanting her to explain.
βIt talked,β She finally admitted guiltlessly.
βWHAT!?β I pressed my palm against her cold skin, she wasnβt sickβ¦ then what?
Diana had stirred awake due to me, rubbing her eyes as she walked over to us.
βWhat happened?β
βThe bat talked.β
βHuh?β Diana looked just as confused as me, searching around our surroundings.
βWhereβs the bat?β I asked.
Lily pointed behind me.
I turned around, meeting the golden brown eyes of the Chiroptera; the scientific name of bats. I almost patted my back in regards to remembering last monthβs lessons.
Diana froze, I felt her heart beat twice as fast. Usually Lily would run away screaming when it came to these flying specimenβs. How is she grinning at it like itβs her friend?
βMr. Bat, this is my brother Tony and my best friend Diana,β Diana and I exchanged baffled looks as Lily introduced us to βMr. Batβ.
Lily moved forward, her sneakers squeaking as she advanced ahead.
βDonβt be scared,β She cooed, βWeβre friends.β
βSpeak for yourself,β I mumbled, Diana faked a cough, only I knew she giggled.
Lily rolled her eyes at me but reached out into the darkness. Bits of sunlight that had leaked from the cracks spilled over her hand, creating weird illuminated lights on her skin.
I could hear the beating of wings, I held my breath when Lily held the bat in her hand, cradling it like a child. If we werenβt stuck in a cave now Iβd be congratulating her about breaking her phobia against bats.
βTony, meet Mr. Bat,β I could feel Diana step back, her eyes held a worried expression.
βLilβs, that's a wild bat, it could bite,β I gotta admit, I was a bit scared of it too.
βNo, noβ¦ heβs a friendly bat, arenβt you?β I almost felt nausea when she placed a rapid kiss on the creature.
βLily? Ewwβ¦ bats are contagious,β Diana replied.
βSpeak Mr. Bat,β She totally ignored our warnings, βHe spoke to me, I know he did,β I sighed, placing a tentative hand on her shoulder, careful not to touch the bat.
βLilyβ¦ I donβt thinkβ¦β
The bat shifted from her grasp, flying low enough that I could see its keen, gleaming fangs and its blood-thirsty eyes. I shivered from the chills, goosebumps appeared all over my skin.
βLilyβ¦?β I trailed off, seeing tears light her eyes.
βTony, weβre going to live!,β She exclaimed, hugging me tightly. I gagged from the tightness.
βHowβ¦?β Was all the words I could muster out.
βMr. Bat, heβll help us,β She blew an air-kiss at the creature who I thought almost smiled.
Diana remained silent, not the usual behavior.
I gave her an optimistic smile, she grinned back shyly. Her coffee brown eyes reminded me of Abbys, the feeling of loneliness erupted from my mind like a steaming volcano. Is she ok? Alive? Will we get out?
Diana faked a cough, snapping me back to reality.
βTrust me big brother.β
I saw Diana give me a slow, yet upbeat nod.
βFineβ¦ weβre in.β
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βSoβ¦ howβd my little sister get over her fear of bats,β I joked as we strolled after Mr. Bat in hopes of it- correction- him leading us to freedom.
βOhβ¦ Iβm not over it yetβ¦ Mr. Bats cute,β She gushed, her cheeks turning red.
βSayβ¦ how come I canβt understand the bat?β I saw Lily flash a disappointed look, βMr. Bat,β I corrected.
βWellβ¦ Iβm not sure, I was sitting and the next second I could hear a faint voice talking, I was scared out of my mind but Mr. Bat helped calm me down.β
βHow?β
βHe sang me a song.β
I looked surprised, a singing bat?
βWhat song?β
βThe midnight moon,β She whispered, a lump appeared in my throat.
Faint music played into my ears, only I could hear. The mellow piano notes flying in the background, the violin taking the lead, soft tapping of feet.
I felt like a little boy again. Memories flashed in my mind. Grandma was in everyone of them, her blue eyes were like the ocean on a breezy, summer day. Her hair was like the silk that came from the moon, her trembling hands always warm and welcoming. Howβs sheβll sing that song when I was scared of the roaring thunderstorms outside, when I heard that mom lost her job, when my dog died. Grandma was always thereβ¦ singing the same tune that echoed in my mind nonstop.Β
I could feel the power of her words, the way she carved each word out with precision.
Never give up hope
It will keep you alive
Take my words into your heart and chant
Don't let your fears misguide you
Never let them lead you astray
Be like the moon that illuminates the dark, midnight sky
Be the light that shines bright
βTony, look!β I saw my sisterβs face light up with joy as I followed her glance. We were at the beginning of our journey, the place where it started, I could feel the warmth of the sun and the fresh air just ahead.
βWow, Mr. Bat really did help us!β Diana exclaimed, jumping with jittery excitement.
I chuckled, leaning down to hug the girls.
βIβm so proud of you, Lily.β
She flushed pink, kissing my cheek.
βI am too,β Diana joined in.
βAww guys, thank Mr. Bat not me.β
Diana and I gave each other a stunned look but we walked towards Mr. Bat who had perched himself on top of a rock, his golden brown eyes never leaving us.
βThank youβ¦ Mr. Bat, how shall we ever repay you?β
The bat flew over the perch on Lilyβs shoulder, itβs rough tongue licked my sister's pale face.
βWhatβs he saying?β
βUmβ¦ he said heβs happy to help, also he said he saw Abby on the campsite last night.β
The reminder of Abby let tears stream down my face⦠she was alive⦠and so were we.
βShall we?β Diana asked, looking hopeful.
I looked behind to see Lily sorrowfully say goodbye to her little friend.
βBye Mr. Bat, thank you a bunch.β
I placed my hand on her shoulder, leading her away from the dingy cave, into the light again.
Diana was already outside, kissing the ground like Iβve seen people on TV doing but she spat out the dirt and wiped her mouth with her sleeve.
My eyes burned from the radiated light, my eyes had been adjusted to the darkness and sudden light had almost blinded it. Lily rubbed her eyes, I copied her and it worked!
I grinned at the girls.
βWe have to find Abby and get home, mom and dad must be so worried about us,β Diana explained, it had been almost nightfall but our aching legs didnβt want to give up.
We agreed, knowing that another adventure awaits us.
I just hope Abby would be alright.
βAbby, weβre coming for you,β I whispered into the midnight sky, βI promise.β
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Hey Varsha!! I really cannot believe that this is your 23rd story! You are such a talented person! I can tell you excel at writing! Also, you are also working on a novel simultaneously which is just AMAZING!! You are progressing so much in Reedsy, and I am so happy for you! Again, thank you so much for putting me down in the comments!! <3 <3 <3 P.S. We baked 2 cakes and watched the Ball Drop! :)
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Aww, thank you sooo much Hari!!! Yay, your also an excellent author and one of my best friends:) Thank you!!! Ya, its hard but I try to! And of course:) P.S- Ohh thats sounds like a wonderful new years!!! What flavor cakes?
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Your welcome Varsha. Also, thank you. =) To answer your question, one was plum cake (which I didn't wanna eat) so the other one was Red Velvet.
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:) Oh yes, I don't like plum cake either(only grown-ups eat it);) And red velvet is a good flavor!!!
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Exactly, right?? Mmmmm...yummy!
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:D
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Hi Everyone! I hope you all had a wonderful New years! Comment down what you did! This is my first story for 2021 so I'm very excited!!! Also I'm working on a novel so double excited!!! Thank you so much to all my followers for helping me get so far... I couldn't have done it without them:) Yay! 1400+ points and over 100 followers!!! Can't believe this is my 23 story, wow in just 2 months! I want some special thanks to theses people...(no particular order) ππͺπ₯ππ βπ£πππ€π ππ€π₯ππ£ Lillian Brooks AmΓ©lie Veva Maya W. πππππ π·ππππ β―πππ’π₯π πππ―ππ§πππ«β―(Hair...
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AW THANK YOU FOR INCLUDING MEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
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Of course:) Your my friend!
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:DDDDDD
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I loved the continuation of Trapped. It gave me a new insight on the story. Although this part of the story was amazing, I think I liked the first part much more than this one. Still, you did an amazing job!! You're such a good writerππ
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Aww, thank you Cookie!!! (Im put u in my bio in my BFF column!!!) Yeah, I liked that one too! Thank you! You are as well :D
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It would be my honor to be in your BFF column!!!π€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺ
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I already added u! do check it out!
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Aww thank youβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Of course cookie!
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Love this! HOW DARE DOWNVOTERS COME!
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Aww thank you Emmie!!!! This means so much to me:)
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:D I upvoted you.
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Thank you soooo much!!!!!!
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:D
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New storyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:) I'll check it out Kate!!!
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:DDDD
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:)
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I read it! And left a comment!
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I"ve been downvoted Kate:(
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I submitted the spirit animal story and you're mentioned in it. It's called "Endings and New Beginnings" :D
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I'll def check it out!
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Thanks! :)
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Sure! Thx for including me!
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Ofc!
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:)
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OMG VARSHAAAAAA THANK YOU SOOOOOOO MUCH FOR RECOMMENDING ME TO COCOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Of course!!!! Did she tell you I did?!
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Also check out my bio! I updated it!
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OMG I JUST SAW IT. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Of course!!!
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Yep!! :DDDDDD
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Hey Varsha! I loved the second part of this story, I think the details were good, and I'm excited to read the next part! :D
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Hi Jasey!!! Thank you so much:D, I'll let u know when I write part 3! How are u doing?
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No problem! Iβm doing alright, Iβm back at school, how r u? :)
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Thats good! Oh lucky:D, I'm fine!
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Awesome :P
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hey Varsha! I just wrote a new story!!!!
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I'll check it out!
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Hi Varsha! This was a fantastic story! Congratulations on 23 stories, and best of luck on your novel!! :D Thank you so much for mentioning me in the comment of this story and for adding me to your list of friends and BFFs in your bio!! :DDD You're such a sweet friend!! And congratulations on reaching the leaderboard!! You deserve it!! :D
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Aww, thank you Akshaya!!!! U are too:) Of course, your one of my best friends:) Aww, thank you so much!
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Thank you Varsha! :) You're one of my first and best friends here!
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Aww, of course! YAY!!!
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:DD
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Are your exams over?
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Hello Varsha! THIS WAS A GREAT ADDITION TO PART 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was such a nice story, and I loved Mr. Bat!!! Great job! :D
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Aww thank you Kate!!! Your so sweet! ALso me too;)
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Ofc!!!!!!! Thank youuuuu! :>
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:) anytime!
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