As I glanced back one last time at the empty room, tears flooded my eyes. The room that once used to be used when my parents had childish arguments was now empty. The guest bedroom was probably the one we used the least, but probably the closest to our hearts. The deep red suitcases distracted from the once pastel blue walls which looked like a gloomy sky. We had to move houses after my dad left usβ¦ Itβs been tough but I think Iβm getting the hang of this.
βΒΏListo para ir?β My mum said.
βIo penso di essereβ
We put all the cardboard storage boxes and the truck and finally locked the door behind us. I slid into the car scared for the journey ahead but curious about where i'll end up. I turned down the window to glance at myself in the side view mirror to check up on any red eyes. After night falling upon us, the weather had settled to consistent rain, matching my mood at the moment. The wind chattered through the streets, the rain danced upon the rooftops and the moonlight to keep the town in ever-glow.
The new town was nice. Nothing I was ever used to but at least it would be a fresh start. Amid the trees, amid the mirth of laughing meadows, lived the country town. The eye-catching feature was definitely the giant auditorium where people of all ages sang and performed and I was beyond excited to see it.
βMira por ahΓ mamΓ‘β I cried pointing out towards the distance.
My mum laughed saying that I should perform there. I could never. My fear of public speaking always kept a gap in my heart. As much as I liked to sing and dance, I never had the confidence to perform. Maybe it was finally time to face that fearβ¦
Passing by the town waiting for us to finally reach our house, I saw a billboard. It was a talent show in the auditorium. βMaybe I should goβ I thought to myself.
Once I got to our new house the first thing I did was set up my grand piano with the help of my mum. Music is everything to me. To me, the piano is a work of art that speaks directly to the souls of others in a language that predates words. Piano music is so fluent in emotion, there are words that can approach the complexity of such emotion, yet tell them so simply that all are given true sight. I was super hyped to perform this at the talent show and I canβt wait!
The storm had faded to nothingness, now the silence was as pure as the wintry blanket outside. It felt like every creature was sheltering, the birds had either flown south or had better things to do than sing, and there wasn't another human for miles. When my ears became more familiar with the lack of sound, I thought I could hear the tinkle of the river that was partially iced over, but other than that only my rhythmic breathing was in the air. The room has an array of myriad seats in two rows, parallel to each other. The hallway is stretched with countless doors each leading to a new journey. To a new performance. To a new stage.
I saw the soft wave of the womanβs hand gesturing me inside. The wave of the hand itself nearly broke the silence as it is pushing the millions of atoms. As I saw her repeating her gesture once more, my brain froze.Β All the reasons not to do this come flooding in. But there was no turning back now. I know I said there wasnβt another human for miles to be seen but as I stepped into the doorway, I saw numerous seats reaching the far end of the room. Each one with a person seated. Just stepping on the stage makes my breathing rapid and shallow. I can feel my pulse pounding. It's a relief to get to my chair because between the heels and my legs shaking, I'm afraid I'll trip.
βΒΏEstΓ‘ el piano ahΓ?β I asked
βsΓβ
Sitting in the middle of the stage. All eyes on me. It was like nothing I had ever experienced. The cheerful bright lights hurt my frail eyes making them even smaller than before. The silence was still persistent β it started since I stepped into this building. Great motivation. I thought to myself. My tongue was about the slip out the words βHello', but before they could, the lights went out. Every inch of the room covered in black. The inky darkness overwhelmed the frail light, diminishing the silence. Shrieks and confusion spread throughout. The darkness not only brought with it horror but also broke the tense silence.
I stood up from my chair looking around.
The lights turned back on.
Now once again, only silence lingered in the air. I shiver in the claustrophobic stage even though it was immense. Waiting for the signal to start, I look around. I see the same lady repeating her gesture for the third time that day. I try to start but a small sigh of anxiety leaps out of my mouth. Tersely, my eyes leave the staging ground and I spot the millions of people. Their faces are full of boredom yet excitement. I knew I had to commence.
βHolaβ My mouth finally let out. I had finally started and Iβm happy to say I finished alive.
Today was one of the best days of my life. The day I faced my biggest fear.
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AAA this is β¨AMAZINGβ¨ Wow, this really shows the emotions and portrays them in such a lovely way! Your vocab is GIANT. I LOVE IT! Also, like Silver Serpent said, could you please write the translations there next time? It would be super helpful as I wouldn't need to go to google translate every time. Notes: - "We had to move houses after my dad left us" (p1) maybe you could indirectly say this, as in say "As I thought about my dad's hearty old laugh, my heart throbbed. I would never be able to hear that sound again.", or smth like that. - ...
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AAAAAA THANK YOUUUUUU. NO YOUR VOCAB IS BIGGER. OMG THAT'S A BRILLIANT IDEA. i'll be sure to do that next time :) yay I'm happy you loved it!
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NO PROBLEMOOOOO!!!
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:)
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OMG!!!!!!! Rae! You write VERY fast!!!!!!! Once again, I LOVE THE VOCAB!!!!!!! And you were so creative with changing it to Spanish, it was really cool but next time... Can you write what the dialogue meant in English???? IN italics cause it was a bit hard to understand those parts and I am going to say they were important to the story :) But if you want it to stay that way, it's great anyway! Aye! You put it in your Bio!
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YAS!! Thank youuuuu. Hmm, I did choose dialogue that wasn't as important but yeah that's a good idea. YA I DID
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Welcome!!!!!!!!!!! Mhm! I'm glad I was a bit helpful! Hehe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You DID!
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HEYYYY GURLLL
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Idk if Iβve said this yet but βRaeβ is such a pretty nickname omg
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IKRRRRR. i can say thanks to silver serpent for that ;)
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XD
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AAAA AERIN HELP I CAN'T THINK OF WRITINGSSSS
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UMMMMM WDM BY THAT LOL
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writers blockkkk hahah
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ALSO ALSO~ πππ³οΈβπ
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TY
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Nice story. I loved the portrayal of the narrator's emotions here. It would have been better if you gave the translation of the Spanish (I am guessing it is Spanish) dialogues in brackets or something. In total, it was really sweet!
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Thanks!! Yeah, good idea.
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Welcome! Please do read my stories too...your reviews will be appreciated!
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RAYSHELLLLLLLLLL RAE RA-RA nah that went to farβ IβM SORRY IβM BORED OKAY LOLZ
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LOL
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Great job!! This is really amazing!
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AWESOME STORY! Flows smoothly!
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Thank you!!
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You're welcome. If you want, read mine.
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