William and Emily are a nice couple. They have a teenage boy and he's 18. Their beautiful home is at the end of the street near a food store and consumer materials. They have great relationships with the villagers. William was traveling a lot because of his job. He was a pilot who spent most of his time traveling. Emily was living with her son Tom, a wonderful and quiet life. Send it to the nearby stores. To bring some things to their house. Tom was a good boy. Helping his mother and becoming the man of the house. And also good at studying. And the superior of it. Father William was coming back to his family between periods. Tom felt he needed his father to guide him in this life. Like other parents do. But Tom didn't find his father. No one guided him. Tom started rebelling and coming out late at night. And learn how to smoke and take drugs. He also met a girl in his village and liked her. After William and Emily learned of their son's rebellion. They thought he was going to a dark road they couldn't bring him from. Tom finished a high school study and got an external study. He went out to study. Enjoy it more comfort. While drugs and wine drinks. Because there's no one watching him and advising him. When he returned to his mother country. He met his mother after two whole years of longing. Talked to her in he wants to marry the girl he loves is in the village. And her name is Wendy. The mother was scared. She was afraid of her son's grief when a girl refused to accept this offer to marry. Because Tom's not good. But she talked to William and decided to go with him to ask Wendy to marry, but she refused because he's not good. Tom got sad and went back to college. He was going to look over Facebook and see Wendy's account a lot. He found Wendy was in a relationship with another guy. Tom started planning to kidnap her and jointly with a criminal gang. He became a drug addict and a really bad gangster. Send some gangsters to kidnap her. While he's sitting at one weekend in a bar. He watched two lovers sit together and talk quietly and have fun. Wendy starts to feel like someone wants to kidnap her. People around her on the street were scary. She told her boyfriend about her fear of it. But he got scared and thought he'd leave her because she's wanted and they'll kidnap her. And they might hurt him. Tom becomes unacceptable to study. His grades are starting to fall. Because of his deterioration in health and drift toward drugs and Wendy's kidnapping planning. Wendy's going to accuse her boyfriend that he wanted to kidnap her, so he left her. So people can see that there's problems among themselves. He kidnaps her and kills her. But this is just unreal scenario that Wendy puts in her mind. Tom's memory came back to the day he was at the bar. When he saw the lovers there. Tom thought a lot. He decided to stop his plan in the kidnapping of Wendy. And he started fixing himself. And to propose to her again in a better way .Tom's day ended and went to sleep. The next day he went on a lake trip. He's looking around and thinking a lot. A decision to change his life, to start a new life .Two months later. Tom became a cook. In one of the restaurants next to his apartment. Got some for good friends. He's been doing activities, enjoying some time with them and he likes sports a lot. Then he got another job. And it's a delivery. By the motorcycle. He likes to ride a motorcycle and train for motorcycle races. He became religious. With the influence of his new friends. He became more social and more popular. He left a really bad life and started over to be good. He bought a house and became the restaurant manager. And after five years of this change, he went to his parents and they were happy to change it for the best. He made a proposal to marry Wendy for the second time. She refused because she feared Tom would be bad again. Tom completed his studies and got a PhD. He proposed to Wendy for the third time and she accepted. He got a job and bought a car. He was interested in trading and buying stocks. His company started out of nothing. Until he got out. To competitive stages with other companies in the field. Tom has celebrated his wedding. Wendy had one boy named Aiden Tom. Wendy lived a happy and perfect life with Tom and her baby. That's how love won over desires. Years later, Tom's father died of a heart attack and Tom's mother moved in with Tom at his house and with his family. Tom's getting more attention to raising Aiden. He was getting close to him, helping him, advising him and supporting him. So he doesn't get bad and rebellious. Tom taught his son to swim. Aiden was good at swimming and he liked it. Aiden participated in the children's swim races. He's got many awards. Aiden started primary school and he was superior. Wendy got two jobs. One at Tom's company. And the other to practice her hobby. Tom is supporting her. He sees that as an expression of her love. Tom was a good son to his mother, too. Tom's family traveled to tourism. And after they got back, Tom's mother married a man named Hunter. Hunter was very nice living in the same village. Tom's mother moved in with her new husband. They were living a very quiet life. Wendy had twins. Tom became the father of three children Aiden, Loki and Leo. He wasn't just a father. He was a very good father. He was able to raise his children well. He was always around them and he was helping, advising and guiding them.
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I think ill go and give this a 10/10 :)
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