Mr. Bond is walking towards Ms. Em's cabin.
"Ms. Em I am thinking that in this mission, I should take a companion with me."
"Why?"
"Because in most of the mission I only go. So, this time I was thinking that some agents should come with me. So, they can experience that the mission is hard or easy. In my absence, they can do the mission."
"How you will choose the companion?"
"It's simple, we will take an audition."
"Okay, can you describe it?"
"Yes, there would be six rounds including the final round. The round will get more troublesome and more troublesome when we will move ahead with the audition. There would be different criteria to mark the agents. There would be a form that would be filled by the agents who are ready to do the mission."
"Till what time the form would be ready?"
"The form is ready, I will email it to you when I will go to my cabin."
"Who are the judges?"
"The judges would be you and me. For more inquiry just come in my cabin."
"Okay."
Mr. Bond leaves Ms.Em's cabin.
Ms. Em receives the email in which the form and other details of the audition are there.
Dear Ms. Em, Agents from 001 - 100 [ excluding agent number 007 ]
The rules of the audition :
- Each agent would be marked out of 10
- There would be 5 audition round and 1 final round
- The result of the rounds would be announced when the round is over
- The task of the round would be announced an hour before the round starts
- For any inquiry email, it too - agent007.JB@MI6
- The audition would be held from 24/8/2020 - 31/8/2020
- You need to fill the form which is provided below. [ the form which would be emailed after 22/8/2020 GMT shouldn't be allowed to participate in the audition ]
SIGN UP SHEET FOR MI6 MISSION AUDITION
The place where this * is compulsory to fill :
Name* :
Agent Number* :
Date Of Birth* :
Email I’d [of MI6]* :
Phone Code* :
Medical Issues* :
Expert In Any Form Of Art :
Once the form is filled, email it to - agent007.JB@MI6
Thanks & Regards
Agent number 007
Mr. Bond types 746846694695 on the keyboard of his computer.
It's a secret number to call Ms. Em.
Ms. Em picks up the phone and says "Agent no. 007, should I come to your cabin?"
"Yes, Ms. Em."
"Ms. Em, we got all the agents form. Let's see how well your agents do.
It's the day for the first round of the audition.
Ms. Em comes and tells a speech, she says " Welcome to the first-ever audition for MI6. Mr. Bond has kept this audition for selecting a companion for his newest mission. You all would be thinking that Mr. Bond is sacred to go for a mission. In this case, you are wrong. Mr. Bond has kept the audition to see who can go for the mission in his absence. Let's start."
"In the first round, you will be given 5 situations, you need to write the answers in an email and send it to agent007.JB@MI6 and in this round only 70 people would be chosen from 100"
The situations are:
- If you have an enemy which has 5 bodyguards and you have just 1 bullet left what would you do?
- How you would jump in the water from 10,000 ft?
- Where to shoot a built on a person?
- How to treat a cannibal?
- How you choke a person with a belt?
The email should come in 15 minutes to Mr. Bond and we will tell the results after 30 minutes.
The agents you have crossed the round 1 are :
- agent no. 003
- agent no. 005
- agent no. 009
- agent no. 012
- agent no. 015
- agent no. 019
- agent no. 024
- agent no. 027
- agent no. 028
- agent no. 030
- agent no. 033
- agent no. 037
- agent no. 047
- agent no. 048
- agent no. 049
- agent no. 050
- agent no. 054
- agent no. 056
- agent no. 058
- agent no. 062
- agent no. 064
- agent no. 066
- agent no. 071
- agent no. 072
- agent no. 073
- agent no. 088
- agent no. 084
- agent no. 085
- agent no. 086
- agent no. 087
- agent no. 081
- agent no. 082
- agent no. 083
- agent no. 089
- agent no. 090
- agent no. 091
- agent no. 092
- agent no. 093
- agent no. 094
- agent no. 095
- agent no. 096
- agent no. 097
- agent no. 098
- agent no. 099
- agent no. 100
- agent no. 001
- agent no. 002
- agent no. 004
- agent no. 006
- agent no. 048
- agent no. 008
- agent no. 010
- agent no. 011
- agent no. 013
- agent no. 014
- agent no. 016
- agent no. 017
- agent no. 018
- agent no. 020
- agent no. 021
- agent no. 022
- agent no. 023
- agent no. 025
- agent no. 026
- agent no. 075
- agent no. 074
- agent no. 078
- agent no. 079
- agent no. 070
- agent no. 069
It's the day for the round 2
"In the second round, you need to shoot 6 bullets on the dummy were the sign % this is there. There would be a gap of 2 meters between the dummy and the agent."
All the agents come one by one and perform the task. from this round, only 40 agents would be qualified for the next round.
Mr.Bond comes up and says the agents who have qualified for the next round are :
- agent no. 081
- agent no. 082
- agent no. 083
- agent no. 089
- agent no. 090
- agent no. 091
- agent no. 092
- agent no. 093
- agent no. 094
- agent no. 095
- agent no. 096
- agent no. 097
- agent no. 098
- agent no. 099
- agent no. 100
- agent no. 001
- agent no. 002
- agent no. 004
- agent no. 006
- agent no. 048
- agent no. 008
- agent no. 010
- agent no. 011
- agent no. 013
- agent no. 014
- agent no. 016
- agent no. 017
- agent no. 018
- agent no. 020
- agent no. 021
- agent no. 022
- agent no. 023
- agent no. 025
- agent no. 026
- agent no. 075
- agent no. 074
- agent no. 078
- agent no. 079
- agent no. 070
- agent no. 069
The days past by the final round of the audition came only 10 agents were able to get in the final round.
The agents who qualified for the final round are :
- agent no. 022
- agent no. 023
- agent no. 025
- agent no. 026
- agent no. 075
- agent no. 074
- agent no. 078
- agent no. 079
- agent no. 070
- agent no. 069
"In the final round, you need to solve a situation you will get a code when you enter the answer if it's wrong you will get the code but will get a penalty of 30 seconds. Then you will go to a locker and take the gun. The gun will have 7 bullets. All the seven bullets you need to shoot 7 dummy's head. The dummies would be moving. When you have crossed it then you will open the cage from the code which you got at starting. There you will find the flag bring back to us. We will note the time. all the best!"
The round starts.
- agent no. 022 did the task in 4.56 minutes
- agent no. 023 did the task in 3.45 minutes
- agent no. 025 did the task in 5.56 minutes
- agent no. 026 did the task in 6.56 minutes
- agent no. 075 did the task in 2. 45 minutes
- agent no. 074 did the task in 7. 45 minutes
- agent no. 078 did the task in 5.45 minutes
- agent no. 079 did the task in 7.35 minutes
- agent no. 070 did the task in 3.14 minutes
- agent no. 069 did the task in 4.59 minutes
Agent no. 075 yelled, "I am the winner."
"You haven't won yet because I have decided that local people will also take part in the winner. The person whom I have called is Mr. Amogh. He will do the same task. Then if he does faster you would be the companion who will go with me."
Amogh does the task. He completed the task in 1.56 minutes.
"The companion who will go with me is Amogh and from now he is an official member of MI6. He is an agent from now and his number is 101.
The audition gets over and MI6 gets a new agent.
The companion who will go with the agent no. 007 is AMOGH.
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Very well done on the Bond story. Sean Connery actually just turned 90 years old. One of the better Bonds. Good read
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Guys, I am in top 100
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Good story! But the agent numbers can be reduced. Keep writing!
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I know that there are too many agent no
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Amogh, you're replying to yourself only. Anyways, nice story!!
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thanks
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:-)
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Good story. What’s at stake if 007 doesn’t get a partner? I’d keep this story in the present tense. Also, all the characters were flat. I didn’t feel like I knew any of them. The long list of names didn’t keep my interest. I want to be rooting for someone. Who could I be rooting for?
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Thanks and I will work on it
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Great story! I realized this was a part 2, so before reading this I read the first one. I loved them both! Outstanding job and I can't wait for your next story!
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Thanks
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Interesting tale, Amogh. You show an expansive mind. But I found your story difficult to read due to phrasing and word choices. These help writing flow and read easily. Obviously, you have seen Bond movies with 'M' as head of MI6. Seeing these characters and writing their dialogue you should stay within their styles of speech. For instance, Bond never says "Ms. Em". He always asks about 'M', and responds to her with "M" or "Ma'am". Also word choice: "... I only go." should be "... I go alone." "we will take an audition" > "we...
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Thanks and I will work on it
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This is a very unique take to this idea. I hope to see more of this.
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Thanksy
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I really enjoyed it and I like how you put your name in there. That's cool, but I'll point out some mistakes: 1. "Where to shoot a built on a person?" - 'built' should be BULLET. And 'on' is an incorrect preposition. It should AT. You shoot bullets at a person. 2. "The round will get more troublesome and more troublesome" - no need to add 'more troublesome' twice as it in itself shows the degree. 3. And as most people are saying here to omit the excessive use of agent numbers, you might want to actually reduce them....
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Thanks and I will work on it
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No problem:))
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This was a great story! Very well written. The only thing I suggest, like others, is to edit out the excess agent numbers. Whether you think the story needs it, it still adds unnecessary words that take away from the actual story.
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Thanks I know that the numbers are too much
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No problem!
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I haven’t read the first part yet. This is well-written. But the agent number list is overdone. If you remove that and add more story in the form of descriptions or dialogues, it would look so much better.
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I understand that there are many people agent no. But it's audition so I need to write
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I understand your point. You could shorten it. Instead of writing 1,2,3,4— you could put 1-25 or something like that. Just a suggestion since you asked me to read your story.
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Thanks for the idea but I want to stick with this
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Your story. So of course you will be the one making the decisions. Thanks for asking me to read.
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Please ask me to read your story
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Nice, Amogh! Like Akshat said, you shouldn't include so many agent numbers. Also, 'Mr. Bond is going towards Ms. Em's cabin.' Instead of that, I think you should write, 'Mr. Bond is walking towards Ms. Em's cabin.'
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Interesting story. A fun read.
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Your welcome
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You should’ve said “Thank you” 😂
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Thank you
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Reply to her not me! Lol
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Ok
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It was a very intriguing story. One thing I would suggest ( as others have said) is that you don't include all of the Agent numbers. Other than that, it was a very good story :)
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thank you
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If possible, please remove the excess agent numbers. Otherwise it's an interesting story. Keep writing!
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हम विचार करेंगे
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Awesome story! One edit—right before you start a list, you should do another ‘return’, or else the lines are stop close together, like this part of the story: The rules of the audition : Each agent would be marked out of 10 Those were too close. Other than that, great job!
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धन्यवाद हम करेंगे
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Great story! Good job.
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धन्यवाद
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