For once this story actually relates to the prompt.
This entire series was inspired by Ivy Carter and Lone Wolf, here are their links, go check them out they are so amazing!
Ivy Carter: https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/author/carter/
Lone Wolf: https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/author/536b84/
โBye mommy!โ I shout as I burst out the door, my bag full of party supplies. I skipped the field and ran straight towards the entrance of the enchanted forest, my heart fluttering in excitement. As I crossed the barrier, a shiver went down my spine. Something was wrong, I could feel it, so I sped up my pace.
I arrive at the pond, but the water seems a bit murkier than usual. It is said that the enchanted forest can sense when something is wrong, but it was also said that the animals were dangerous and mystical. Only thing Iโve encountered is Wolfie, and sheโs not dangerousโฆ although she could be.
โWolfie!โ I shout, roaming the area around the pond. After a few minutes, I give up and sit down by the pond, washing the dirt from face. I gaze into the murky water, an unsettling feeling wshing over me. I get up and grab my bag, walking through the forest to Wolfieโs cave.ย
As I near my destination, I hear shouting, and I instantly start running.
โWolfie!โ I shout, adrenaline shooting through my body. I recognized some of the voices, fathers of the little kids in the field that would come home with bags full of
wolf meat.
I sprint through the forest, my bag banging against my back as I nearly run into one of the hunters. Startled, he lowers his crossbow, his eyebrows raised in surprise.ย
โAbigail! What are you doing here?โ he exclaims. I glance forward to see Wolfie backed up against the cave, growling at the 5 hunters that surround her.ย
โNo!โ I shout, lunging forward. A pair of hands hold me back, and I struggle against them, screaming to let me go. I look behind me to see my bleary eyed mother, sadness and fear etched on her face.
โSo itโs true, Abigail?โ she mumbles, her voice cracking. โYouโve been running off every day to spend time with this- this- monster!โ
โSheโs not a monster!โ I yell. โSheโs my wolfie mommy!โ
She gasps, her green eyes glistening with tears. โDonโt you speak such nonsense, Abigail!โ
โDonโt worry, Ivy,โ says one of the hunters, his crossbow trained on a growling Wolfie. His eyes seemed oddly familiar, bright and amber-like, his black hair spilling in front of his face. Behind him I see another pair of amber eyes that quickly duck behind the hunterโs legs.
โYou!โ I shout at the boy, recognizing him as the one who would always watch me when I was in the field. โWhy are you here?โ
โIโm the one that told them,โ muttered the boy. โI followed you every day into the forest.โ
My blood ran cold, tears spilling down my cheeks. I thought nobody knew, I thought I was carefulโฆ
My mother holds me by my bag now, the straps wrapped tightly around my shoulders. The hunters train their crossbows at Wolfie once again.
โGet out of here, Alaska,โ she growls, her bright blue eyes cautious and unfaltered.ย
โNo!โ I yell, struggling against my motherโs grasp. โI canโt leave you!โ
โYou donโt need me,โ she hisses. โGo, scram!โ
At that moment, an arrow whizzes through the air, and the world seem to go in slow motion. I wretched myself out of the straps and run towards Wolfie, whipping my head around to face the hunters right as the arrow pierces my body.
*****
I groan, my head aching, fingering the thin fabric draped over me. I instantly shoot up, then lay back down as a rush of blood floods my head. A sudden pain shoots through my arm, and I look down to see bandages wrapped around my shoulder. I glance around the small infirmary, sunlight peeking through the wooden walls.
โMommy!โ I shout, tears spilling down my cheeks. The door instantly opens, my motherโs worried face red and puffy.ย
โAbigail!โ she cries out, wrapping her arms around me. I wince as she touches my shoulder, and she backs away, her face flushed.ย
โIโm sorry, honey. Are you okay? Does it hurt? Do you need more herbs?โ
โItโs okay, mommy. It doesnโt hurt that much,โ I lie.ย
โOh, good,โ she says, slightly relieved.
โMommy, whereโs Wolfie?โ
She sighs, running a hand through her already messed up brown hair.ย
โMommy?โ
โIโllโฆ bring it in,โ she mumbles, walking to the door.
โHer.โ
โWhat?โ she asks, turning around.
โSheโs a her. You called her an it. Sheโs not an it.โ
โRight,โ she says. โHer. Iโll bring her in.โ
I nod as she leaves the room, tracing the bandages on my shoulder. A few moments later, the door opens, and I smile as Wolfieโs bright blue eyes peek through the door.
โWolfie!โ I exclaim. She sits down next to my bed, her face emotionless.
โAre you okay, Wolfie?โ
โMhm,โ she responds. โPerfectly fine. After you got shot, your mother jumped up to help you. They decided to let me live, since you trusted me so much.โ
โOh. But look, Wolfie!โ I exclaim, pointing towards my injured shoulder.
โThatโs going to leave a nice scar,โ she comments.ย
โYeah! Iโm going to have a scar just like you!โ
She nods, a hint of a smile on her face. โYou are a trooper. Grown men would be whining more than you are right now.โ
โThatโs because Iโm strong! And Iโm only 9 years old!โ
โThatโs good,โ she says. โListen, Alaskaโฆโ
โYeah?โ
โYour mother says you canโt go into the forest to visit me anymore.โ
โWhat?!โ I exclaim, tears threatening to resurface. โBut what about our party?โ
โThatโs why I brought this.โ
She pulled out a small bag from underneath the bed, cups and plates spilling out of it.
โMy party supplies!โ I exclaim, bending down to set it up.
โI donโt know why you brought so many cups,โ Wolfie mumbles. โNot like I can use them.โ
I giggle, stuffing some red berries into my mouth. The door opens, the amber-eyed hunter standing in the doorway. The little boy stood behind him, cowering behind his fatherโs legs.
โTime to go, wolf,โ he grumbles.
Wolfie walks towards the doorway, her tail low, her ears droopy.ย
โGoodbye, Alaska,โ she says on her way out.
โGoodbye, Wolfie,โ I whisper. I stuff the party supplies back in the bag, then feel something smooth and round. I smile as I pull out the small blue fruit, and I hold it in my arms as I drift off to sleep.
*****
My shoulder is healed, although I cannot fully lift my arm nor sustain too much weight on my left hand. A ban was placed on wolf hunting in the enchanted forest, and I take great relief in knowing Wolfie is safe. I go to the field everyday now, and Iโve learned to play with the other kids. The whispers of gossip have stopped, and now they take great joy in asking countless questions about my arm.
But every so often, when the moon is full and the night is dark, I sneak into the enchanted forest to meet with Wolfie. We sit near the pond and stare at the moon, exchanging conversation during the few hours we have together. And whenever I head home, I always find a small fruit in my bag, blue and round just like Wolfieโs eyes.
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117 comments
Aah~ This was sad,again, but I loved it. <3
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tysmmm <3
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ofc~ <3
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Pls draw mineee-
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yesss i would love too! was going to anyway cuz how can i not draw a butterfly character XD. Pencil drawing (colorless and better shading/quality) or digital drawing (colorful but less quality since im not as experienced with that). For your character id suggest digital cuz its so colorful but its your choice :)
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Digital pls. I like color lol- also you talented
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aww ty- ill let you know when its done :)
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I love this Abbieeeee :DD it's really nice to read a happy story once in a while~ there's a LOT of sad stories on this site lol jsdhfsd can't think of puns AHHH GRATE ๐ง๐ง๐ง job!!! ~ Amethyst
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XDDDDDD lololol ty Shiny! Happy stories are not my strong point but i made one for once XD dont worry ill pull at our heart strings extra hard next time :)
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Np! :D Kendksnej it turned out really good tho :o Dhhhdhjdnjd okay thanks for preparing me lol XD I posted a new story :)
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yay ill gi check it out rn!
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Thanks!!
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Hey Draci!! New story posted! If you want to read...
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yayyy ill go read asap! been pretty busy lately but ill try and get to it Queenie :)
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Thank you!!
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np!
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:) Doc sometime?
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yeah we can go ahead back on the doc
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I did my part on the doc!
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Yay!!!
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Btw, what's your time zone? Mine is IST. So we can simultaeounsly come on the doc at a convenient time :)
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Btw, what's your timezone? Mine is IST. So we can simultaneously come on the doc at a convenient time :)
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Mine is central, its 7:21 rn
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Right! Nice!
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YAY!!! Wonderful story, despite the 'action bubbles' XD Seriously though, I LOVED it!!!! Btw, I was slightly confused about why a hunting ban was imposed, like was it because they felt wolves weren't all that dangerous, or because they felt sYmPatheTic towards the wolves cause of you.. or Abigail :D
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tysm for the feedback im glad u like it! It was partially a mixture of both, the people never really thought of the wolves as having feelings, just ruthless creatures you know? But after seeing how much me... er, Abigail... cared about Wolfie, it kinda changed their point of view on wolves :) plus, they knew abigail would never let them hunt wolves after that lol
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Aha, so it was a show of empathy on the hunters part, nice story!
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XD yup lol. tysm!
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:))
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so happy lol. i think it was still great despite the writer's block :) great job describing everything and the usual ;)
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aw ty :) yayyy I'm glad you like it, lol our lil fam was such great inspiration XD
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yeah it really was :)
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part 2 of how the characters rebelled is out :D
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YAYY ill go read asap!!
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:)
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Draci!!!! ME WANTS THY HELP.... What hath thee planned for the rp? Me wants to know who is in the bushy bushy bush? Sorry, my brain begs to differ in what defines craziness, and this certainly isn't according to it^^^
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you are in the bushy bushy bush XD you see me with the powers and you reveal your own powers- plus u notice Lukas and ur like "oh hey lukas" and im like "you know him" and yeah u decide after that lol
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Okay!! Here goes then, wish me happy landing, all I gotta do is WRITE!!! XD (recognize the song?XD)
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no i dontj lol XD
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Oh oop- disney? Aladdin? One Jump Ahead? I guess nowadays only the young 'uns watch dISnEy(young 'uns being before mATUrITy XD)
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OHHHH i got it now XD i lov edisney lol
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Hey Draci, Did my part on the doc :) Btw, don't be pressured or exert yourself, it's ok, we'll complete it somehow. :) Love ya as you are <3
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thx <3
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:) Unfortunately, I can't open the doc rn since I can't access my account rn(I'm logged on only on the laptop so-) Anyhows, how are you?
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im doing ok. hbu?
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I'm good :D Slightly miffed since couldn't do anything productive today, lol
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oof rip
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And I won't accept that as an answer, why 'ok'?! I mean you good? Or somewhat sad or something?(don't answer if you don't wanna, I'm just asking as a concerned friend :))
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idrk. still in a slump from before. Not doing great, not doing completely horrible either.
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Aw, this was much different that your typical style. By that I mean it has a โhappyโ ending. XD I liked how Abigail sacrificed herself for Wolfieโs; that was sweet. Think I can be the dead father if no oneโs reserved him? Just kidding, just kidding. Lol!
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yesss lol not my usual style, gave yall a break this time XD XD lol i was planning on mentioning more of the dead father but i woulnt have time to really continue this series too much :)
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Yes, we all got VERY lucky to get that ending! XD I think you ended this off well. You can infer on what happens next with Wolfie and Abigail. :)
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XDD dont worry, thats a once-in-a-blue-moon thing, im going back to my heart-wrenching endings XD yesss tyy :)
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I ALMOST cried... I love this! Abbie, let me tell you something. Keep scrolling Keep scrolling Abbie, you're an amazing writer and an amazing friend. You're beautiful. You're kind. You're- Oh my PB&J!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! I was about to type "you'...
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ty lol
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lol
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Abbie, please don't hurt yourself. You are beautiful, you are worth it, you are amazing, and don't think otherwise. God made you the way you are for a reason, and if your mom can't accept that, then she needs a serious change. God calls for us to love one another, and that isn't loving you.
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its just so confusing. she tells me she loves me and tells me im beautiful one minute then turns around and says the exact opposite the next.
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omg i read the poem and i thought those thoughts too but pls dont your mom need to be affectionate to her daughter like dont
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im trying cel
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i believe in you
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i believe in you
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<3
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Someone explain why "This Is Home" by Cavetown started playing in my mind towards ending this story? Idk maybe it just fits the vibe. Also r.i.p Abigail's shoulder lmao, that's tough. It's sweet that she went to protect Wolfie though.
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XDDD lololol. yeah rip XD kinda plays towards when i fell from a tree once and popped my shoulder out of place TvT (shh). yesssss had to add that lol
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that sounds SO painful
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yesss it hurt so much TvT rip me and my algophobia lolol XD my dad had to pop it back in place too o.O
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