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Fantasy Funny Kids

Author’s note: this story uses the same character’s as my previous story, ‘Can You?’. While it’s perfectly fine to read this story by itself, it might be more enjoyable and maybe more sense if you read ‘Can You?’ first. Thanks for reading, and ENJOY!



~*~ℝ𝕠𝕤𝕒𝕝𝕖𝕖~*~


“How’re you holding up?” Samantha whispers.

“Could be better,” I reply.

My gaze wanders over the multi-purpose room. We don’t have prom in ninth grade—we have a ‘DJ Dance Party’. 

It’s exactly what it sounds like: ninth graders pile into our glammed-up cafeteria, with the tables pushed up, the lights out, a disco ball attached to the ceiling, a DJ, and way too many glow-sticks.

The DJ Dance Party is loud and filled with people—kids who seem to have a knack for talking my ear off. Not my kind of night.

Most people like the social outing. But I’m like a meme I've read: I’m not prejudiced; I dislike everybody. People are really annoying—minus Samantha, that is.

It’s been a couple months since my best friend learned I had powers. She’s the only person who knows, and I intend on keeping it that way. Sammy’s sworn to secrecy, and I’m actually glad I told her. She looks out for me as a person, and a magical person. But mainly the first: we’ve been besties for a while. For instance, she’ll check on me every now and then at this dreaded dance party she made me come to.

“It’ll be fun,” she said.

“You need to be more social,” she said.

“Just give it a shot,” she said.

Sorry, Samantha, but this isn’t fun, and I’m perfectly content with only ever talking to you. I don’t even live with my family—ever since I was banished from the Enchanted Academy, I live by myself in a home only accessible by magic.

“Did you hear it?”

“Hear what?” I say, staring into the green eyes of my brown-haired friend. We’re leaning against the wall, watching everybody party.

“There’s a new kid at school,” Sammy says. “Her name’s…Margarita, I think.”

My blue eyes are probably the size of dollar coins. Margarita. I know a ‘Margarita’. She’s the girl who used to be my friend at the Enchanted Academy…before she got us both banished. 

It’s best if I forget about her. 

Besides, this is a different Margarita! My friend Mara couldn’t be here. It’s not the most common name, but there are over 100,000 Margaritas in the USA alone. Yup, it’s a different girl.

“She's over there, so I’m going to go talk to her,” Sammy continues. “Be back in a sec.”

She walks away and I’m left in a crown of partying teenagers. I stride towards the food table and I’m sipping on some punch when Samantha returns, a girl with a black hoodie and jeans next to her.

“Margarita, Rosalee,” Sammy says. “Rosalee, Margarita.”

The girl’s hood slips off and I resist gasping. She has thick, curly brown hair falling to her shoulders, and the bottom half is chock-full with streaks of red. She has brown eyes with a smattering of freckles thrown across her nose, her full lips wearing a playful smile.

The smile disappears when she sees me.

It’s her.

Margarita Draanen.

Are you kidding?!

Samantha’s grin wavers. “Guys, do you know each other? Or is something else wrong? ‘Cause you both froze up…Um, okay, this is awkward.”

“Sorry,” I say, shaking my head to get rid of the feeling. “No, we don’t know each other. Hi, Margarita.” I stick my hand out to shake—something I hate doing.

Her smile returns as she takes my hand. “Yeah, we don’t know each other. Hullo,” she says in her faint British accent. “Nice to meet you, Rosalee. You can call me Mara.”

I nod and back away from my friend and ex-friend.

Margarita Draanen is here. Seriously?!

This is a recipe for disaster, I think.

This night has taken an unexpected twist….


~*~мαrɢαrιтα~*~


I can’t believe this.

I can’t freakin’ believe this.

Rosalee Adams is here!

That girl and I have a…rocky relationship. We both attended the Enchanted Academy, a place where we and dozens of other teens with powers learned to master and control our magic.

Rose and I were close friends. Until…the incident.

I’m a rash person with a hot head and strong emotions. Magic has direct ties to feelings, and I’m really bad at controlling both. 

At EA, we learned that anytime we feel a strong emotion, magic can happen accidentally. Everyone mastered shutting down the magic when they felt happiness, sadness, excitement and more until called upon.

Everyone but me.

Rosalee and I didn’t think that was a problem until I got mad at her. And I felt an emotion, accidentally did magic, and one thing led to another until we were both kicked out of EA.

I vowed to forget about her.

But now she’s here?

At the same school the EA placed me in (even after we leave the academy, they still keep close tabs on its magical students by assigning us new schools) after I got kicked out of my other private middle school?

You’ve got to be kidding.

But I’m not going to get involved with Rosalee Adams. Nope. I’m going to ignore her, ignore my magic, and try to be a normal fifteen-year-old. Rosalee might exist, but I’m going to forget her as my ex-bestie. She’s just another non-magical human.

Okay. All that leaves is to ignore everybody else at this blasted party.

I despise parties. And people. I hate all these teens crowded into this noisy place—I dislike the people and the situation, I mean. It’s overwhelming and I’m afraid of what I’m going to feel and do if I hang around too long. 

Pretty much everybody at the EA is introverted at first, and doesn’t like parties and other gatherings because of emotions, but most adapted and now enjoy them.

Not me.

I want to, need to, get out of here. But it's barely eight p.m. Going home now would definitely be weird compared to the teens who dance till eleven, and I am trying to fit in…. 

No, I think. I can stand embarrassment if it keeps everybody safe from my stupid magic.

“Where’d Rosalee go?” Samantha wonders.

“I don’t know,” I say.

“She doesn't like large gatherings. Do you?”

“I’m going home in ten minutes,” I mutter, and only after the words come out of my mouth do I realize I’ve answered her question.

“Already, Margarita?” She frowns. 

“Yeah,” I say, taking a deep breath. “I’m going to go to the bathroom. Be right back.” I flip my red hair and march off.

It’s a wonder what empty hallways can do to you. As soon as I step out of the muti-purpose room, with all its action and madness, and into the deserted, air-condition hallways, I feel way more relaxed. 

I only got to this private school yesterday, so it takes me a moment to find the bathroom. As soon as I step into the restroom, I glance up into the mirror. My pale face is clammy with sweat.

I just want this night to be over.


~*~ℝ𝕠𝕤𝕒𝕝𝕖𝕖~*~


I watch Margarita disappear into the bathroom. By now, I’m just wandering the halls, migrating from place to place. The party’s too overwhelming—sorry, Sammy.

I wonder if Mara really has to use the bathroom, or is just trying to escape from the crazed teenagers. It could be both—lots of EA students and ex-EA students are introverted and dislike loads of people.

Especially Margarita.

I recall the day we both got kicked out. Mara and I were going to lunch when we got into an argument about…something. I forget. It’s barely been half a year, but I’ve been trying to forget about her—and it was working until now.

Anyways, Mara being Mara, she couldn’t stifle the magic woven into her emotions. She started doing magic—fight magic.

Fight magic is illegal at the EA.

And it was aimed at me.

Any fighting is illegal at the EA.

Margarita was—is—one of the most powerful EA students ever; she got her magic straight from raw emotions. But she couldn’t control her powers because of that.

I know she didn’t mean to start using fight magic, but she was—and she was about to hurt me.

I remember my strawberry-blond curls swinging in my face as I countered the magic with my own. I was barely fighting—just defense against Mara’s powerful fight magic.

The headmaster didn’t care.

Margarita got kicked out and so did I. To different schools.

But now…the same school.

What was our headmaster thinking when he thought it was a good idea to place Margarita and me together again? 

Whatever the reason, she’s here now.

Samantha seems to like her. That’s…good. But my friend can’t know I know Mara. I don’t know why, but she can’t. Sammy has no idea Margarita is magic, too. Which also means Margarita has no idea that Sammy knows I have magic. 

Hmmm….

“Hi, Rosalee,” Samantha says.

I jump and glance to my left. Sammy’s standing there, her greens eyes darting around. “Why’re you here? What ever happened to giving the DJ Dance Party a shot?”

I shrug. “Too many people.”

“Come on, Rosalee! You’re a teenager. This is fun!”

“Too many people,” I repeat.

“But—”

“Sammy, go away,” I groan.

“Fine,” she huffs. “Maybe I’ll go tell Margarita to stay. She’s leaving soon—she seems to hate parties like you.”

“You’re not going to be able to convince her to stay.”

Sammy gives me a funny look. “Why? And how would you know? You just met her.”

“Yeah, I know,” I say. “But I have a feeling she’s still going to”—I flick my wrists—“vamoose. I’d say just leave her alone.”

“You know,” Samantha says, “I think you’re jealous.

Of Mara?

“Nope,” I say, popping the ‘p’ sound.

“Mmhmm,” Sammy eyes me. “I’m going to go walk Margarita home. ’Night, Rosalee.”

“’Night, Sammy,” I echo.

She walks off to wait for Margarita.

I stand there and observe as Mara comes out of the bathroom. She and Samantha chat—it seems like Mara doesn’t want to be walked home (duh, I think. If she’s living like me, she’ll need magic to get home.) but Sammy insists. Margarita finally sighs and leads Sammy off.

I start to trot after them.


~*~мαrɢαrιтα~*~


“It’s a nice night, isn’t it?” 

I let out a breath out of the corner of my mouth. “Yeah.”

In truth, it does feel pretty good. The winter air is barely 40°, but I don’t wear any coat besides my hoodie—which I take off. The cool breeze feels amazing against my skin, especially after the hot, stuffy dance party.

“You can let me walk from here,” I tell Samantha.

“No, it’s okay,” she insists.

I inwardly groan. I need to use my magic to get home, and Samantha can’t see. I need to ditch her before the next block—I can enter my house from the woods, and the trees lining the sidewalk are about to end.

I stop. “No, seriously, please let me walk home alone.”

Sammy glances at me uncertainly. “Um, fine.”

I pick up the pace and am relieved to hear no footsteps follow. Samantha must’ve gone back to the school.

I continue my brisk trot until I reach the path into the woods. I walk into the forest and breathe a sigh of relief. I’m safe. 

No kids, no noise, not a single person to hurt with my magic.

My feet sink into the ground a little as I walk through the forest. The trees make freaky shapes in the darkness of 8:30 p.m., but I don’t care.

I eventually reach the clearing. I walk up to the tree I enchanted and glance at the hole in it’s trunk. Time to open the portal.

I wave my hand around the forest and the nearby plants wither as I suck the water out of them. “Sorry,” I whisper as a huge ball of water, easily a couple gallons, hovers above my palms.

The way I open the portal is by shooting water into the knot. I’m about to use my hands and magic as a water gun when I hear something.

Crack.

Something, stepping on a twig.

I whip my head around. If it’s an animal, I’m fine. If it’s a human—well, I’m doing magic. I hope it’s not a human.

Naturally, it’s a human.

“Margarita?” A voice calls.

I pale and turn around until I see Samantha standing on the path. The moon casts a sheet of white across her body, illuminating her startled expression. “You’re doing magic,” she breathes.

Instead of dropping the water, I do something way worse.

Panic builds up inside of me as I shift my gaze from her, to the floating patch of water, from her, to the water. I’m shaking and breathing way too quickly as I steady my hands.

But the pressure inside is too much.

I cry out and shoot the water at her.

Splash.

“AH!”

Crackle.

“AHHH!”

My eyes are shut tight and I don’t want to open them for fear of what I did. But I have to see the damage I just caused.

I slowly blink my eyes open.

Samantha is frozen, a coat of ice covering her entire body neck-down.

I’m hoping that’s the end of it when I see something else I did without realizing it:

Dozens of floating knives made of ice, positioned around Sammy’s head. 


~*~ℝ𝕠𝕤𝕒𝕝𝕖𝕖~*~


My feet pound on the ground as I run down the path.

I was just leisurely going after Samantha, to talk to her and repeat I’m not jealous of Margarita, when I hear screams.

Sammy’s screams.

So now I’m jogging, running, sprinting to the clearing I know is at the end of this trail. It’s the one I go to to practice my magic—the other clearing by the playground is the one I use at recess.

“SAMANTHA!” I yell. “I’M COMING!”

I burst into the clearing to see Mara, her brown eyes wide and a startled expression planted onto her face, backing into a tree.

Opposite from her—Sammy, frozen in ice, with knives hovering above her head.

Margarita seems to be trying to undo the magic, but it’s not working. Margarita’s not great at controlling her powers, when she uses them or has to fix the effects, so I’m worried. “Stop,” I say. “You’ll just make it worse.”

I ignore Mara’s eyes as I run up to Samantha.

I flick my wrists, and a second later, all the ice is just a pool of water at our feet. I hug Sammy and she hugs me back. “Thank you,” she says.

“I’m so glad you’re okay.”

Samantha pulls out of the hug and stares at Margarita. “You have…powers.”

“And you saw,” Margarita says miserably.

Mara jogs over to me and grabs my hand. She starts pulling me away but I rip my hand away. “We need to go,” Margarita tells me. “Samantha saw. We have to get out of here. Probably erase her memory, too.”

“Nobody’s erasing anybody's memory,” I say firmly.

“Rosalee, I know she’s your friend, she knows we have—”

“She already knew we have powers,” I say. “At least, that I have powers. Sammy’s known for months. She’s not going to rat us out.”

Samantha nods. “I would never.” She peers closer at Mara. “So. You have magic, too. And…Rosalee seems to know that already.” She backs up and gives a knowing look. “You guys have met before, haven't you?” 

Margarita and I exchange looks.

“…Yeah,” I say.

“But it’s a bit more complicated than that,” Mara agrees.

Samantha looks at me suspiciously. “Rosalee…?”

“We have a lot to explain. But let’s start with the Enchanted Academy.”


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“So,” I say, “mind blown, right?”

Sammy shrugs. “I wouldn’t say my mind is blown, but if I were a robot, I’d be saying ‘beep-boop-bop, circuits overheating’.”

Margarita and I laugh and Sammy joins in, before abruptly stopping.

“Hold on,” Samantha says. “Let me get this straight.” She turns to me. “You and Margarita went to school at this place called the… Enchanted Academy, a place for other teens with powers. You two were best friends, until Margarita's magic got out of control, you magic-battled, and you both got expelled. Banished. Whatever. And, here, Margarita’s magic got out of control again, because she didn’t know I’m already aware of magic.”

“Right. Sorry,” Mara apologized for the millionth time.

Samantha grinned. “Don't be. It’s fine.”

“You call frozen in place with knives over your head fine?” I throw my hands up. “Wow, Sammy. Just…wow.”

“Still,” Margarita says to my friend. “I owe you one.” The red-haired girl checks her watch. “It’s not even nine p.m.. Do you guys want to go get ice cream? I’ll pay.” 

Sammy looked like she wanted to protest but Margarita mouths, Again, I owe you one!

“Sounds good,” I smirk.

“Umm….”

Margarita side-eyes Samantha. “What?”

“I just got frozen in ice. Let’s skip the ice cream, please.”

Mara chuckles. “Riiight. Does bubble tea sound good?” 

“Yup,” Samantha says.

The two set off down the trail but don’t follow yet. I scan my surroundings. It’s chilly but I don’t mind. The full moon sports a halo of silky white light, and glittering stars are scattered against their blue-black backdrop.

I step into the path and start walking out of the woods, the only sound being the birds tweeting and my friends’ laughter ringing up ahead.

August 26, 2020 20:04

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נιмму 🤎
17:03 Sep 13, 2020

hey aerin! I'm pretty bored, and i have no yellow dot :( so i was wondering if we could go on a upspree of each others comments? dont think weve done that in a moment

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17:52 Sep 13, 2020

Sure-hure-hure! Although I’ve upvoted all of your comments on your own stories and comments I’m other stories are tricky, so I can’t upvote much. Maybe 50 points or so?

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23:24 Sep 05, 2020

Love this! Very well written and intriguing.

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23:33 Sep 05, 2020

Thanks!

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Jen Park
14:31 Sep 03, 2020

I love this! The three characters are so endearing. I liked the twisted emotions between Rosalee and Margarita, and how they sort of made up(?). I loved the idea of magic coming out straight from your emotions, so if you can't control your feelings the magic will be released out of you. I remember that there was something similar with that in Harry Potter, he accidently blew up his aunt because he was angry. :) Nice story!

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14:32 Sep 03, 2020

Thanks so much!! Ohhh YEAH, I forgot there was something like that in HP! Okay, thanks for stopping by! ~A

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Doubra Akika
11:54 Sep 03, 2020

Amazing job with this Aerin! I absolutely loved the ending and dialogue throughout! And congratulations on the leaderboard! Hope you’re staying safe and thanks for all the positive feedback you’ve given me!

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12:09 Sep 03, 2020

Thank you so much! You too! Haha, no problem!

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Doubra Akika
12:53 Sep 03, 2020

My pleasure!

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21:03 Sep 02, 2020

Finallyy!! Got to it! I'm about to read the next one too! I really liked this, the whole plot and story line was cool. I also liked Rosalee, and Margarita, cause I too hate parties, 10 minutes in and I already want to go home. I also like Samantha being a great friend to both! And promising not to tell anyone. It was also funny at some parts and I enjoyed the whole emotions-tied-to-powers! LOVED IT!! -Ugochi✨*~

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21:07 Sep 02, 2020

Yay, thanks! Thank youuuuuu, Snow!! Yeah, I like parties, but I’m naturally introverted and I’m too hot and louded-out that far in. My school actually has a DJ dance party, where I got the idea, and I always want to leave pretty soon ;) Thanks so much!! ~Aerinnn 🍭~

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21:13 Sep 02, 2020

Of course!! My eyes glanced over some comments and I saw that your birthday is on March ... OMG my brothers birthday is on that date!! I have a whole new respect for you now!!😌😆

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21:20 Sep 02, 2020

Wooooah, your brother is born on St. Patrick’s day? Cool!

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21:07 Sep 02, 2020

OUU YOUR ALMOST NUMBER 1!! Also me, upvoting a good amount of your comments!!! (girl you got like 400 comments I'll try my best!)!

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21:18 Sep 02, 2020

Yessss I’m so excited! Hopefully I’ll be in 1st soon 😄. I was, temporarily, but then Zilla got a new 800 points...hehe Awww thank you!! Really? I think I have more like 2,700...ohhhhh you mean comments on this story! THANKS!

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Akshat .
13:07 Sep 01, 2020

This is the 400th comment on this story!

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18:31 Sep 01, 2020

Wowza!

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Akshat .
07:35 Sep 02, 2020

xD

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<inactive> .
11:10 Sep 01, 2020

Aerin I have a lot of things to tell you- 1. AREN'T CHU'S POINT GETTING JUST A TAD BIT TOO HIGH!?! THEY'VE CROSSED 10,000!! 2. I'm so glad the hater's gone! 3. I'm friends with Celeste now, because of you, so thanks for introducing me to her! She's an amazing person! 4. Did you know a person dies every four seconds? It's sad, but because someone is born every second, it kind of makes up for it. Even though it's because of this we have overpopulation. Ok byeeee, homework is summoning me :'D

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11:19 Sep 01, 2020

Hey, Priyamvada! 1. HEHE BUT THEY CAN ALWAYS GET HIIIIIIGHEE 2. Yup! 3. Celeste IS awesome, isn’t she? I’m so glad y’all are friends! 4. Sad, but yeah. I swear, humans are multiplying WAY too fast. Ohhhh no! Homework! My school starts in a week, so...😏 Bye!

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<inactive> .
15:21 Sep 01, 2020

i'm still doing homework

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18:32 Sep 01, 2020

😬😬😬

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<inactive> .
05:27 Sep 02, 2020

lol i hate homework so much

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12:02 Sep 02, 2020

I Completely Agree H.O.M.E.W.O.R.K.: (H)alf (O)ur (M)ind’s (E)nergy (W)asted (O)n (R)andom (K)nowledge

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15:21 Sep 01, 2020

:')

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נιмму 🤎
01:20 Sep 01, 2020

HOLD THE PHONE SiS how aRE u at 10,000 points?? is it just me but everyone went up like zilla had 8,000 but now she has 10,000 in the matter of like one day wut?? i didnt even go up :(

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11:08 Sep 01, 2020

I dunno. Yesterday I got upvoted a LOT...I was the first person at 10,000 points, haha. Oh, yeah, and Zilla’s points SKYROCKETED. So now she’s first again 😭😭😭. 😂 but whatevs. Yeah, sorrrrrry, sis! When I start driving home from the beach (tonight) I’ll be upvoted evvvvvverybody who upvoted me, so at least you’ll have those new points!

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Hey, Aerin! Everyone is talking about that mysterious downvoter of yours. I was agreeing with you all until I found out who it was. I really hate to admit this. My brother was commenting negative things on my account and I had to apologize to those writers. I looked at your (and many others') comments, and I saw it was red which meant I downvoted them. I confess, I'm truly, truly, truly sorry about my brother. I am upvoting all of your comments that my brother decreased. I hope the downvoting has stopped for you. I hope my apology is accept...

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23:25 Aug 31, 2020

Ohhhh, this clears up SO much!! Ima response to that in order! 1. As I said above, that makes so much more sense!! Thanks so much for telling me...I’m really glad I know because I was starting to make assumptions and that is BAD!! 🤗 2. It’s not your fault at all!! You don’t need to apologize, Kendra!! 😘 Aw, thank you!! Hmm...okay...wow...I don’t really know what else to say! This is veeery interesting because I didn’t even consider it wasn’t another Reedsy-er...I hope this means no more downvotes, LOL!! Have an awesome day, and stay s...

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Thank you so much! I will upvote all 2456 comments if I need to :3 You too! 😊

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23:39 Aug 31, 2020

😄😄😄

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B. W.
21:15 Aug 31, 2020

Aerin! :D i'm so happy for you i just came back on and saw that you were in 1st place ^^ congrats :)

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23:03 Aug 31, 2020

Thaaaanks!!! You’ve been supporting me since the beginning (literally 3 weeks ago...😂😂😂) so THANK YOUU!!!

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B. W.
23:08 Aug 31, 2020

No problem anything for a friend like i've said ^^ jeez that was 3 weeks ago?? i thought that was way longer tbh! still no prob friend ^^

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23:14 Aug 31, 2020

Yeaaaah I only met you three weeks ago!! Wow....I feel like we’ve known each other at LEAST a month!! Bye, sis!!

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B. W.
23:19 Aug 31, 2020

Yeah i was honestly about to say the same thing it felt like more of a month than just three weeks

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B. W.
12:53 Sep 18, 2020

someone just down-voted me a lot a couple minutes ago- i don't even understand why and it's annoying and getting me mad

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Anika G
00:51 Sep 01, 2020

Hi, I just wanted to say congrats on moving up to second place in the leaderboard!!

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00:53 Sep 01, 2020

Thanks!

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22:54 Aug 31, 2020

OMG FIRST TO 10000 POINTS!!!! YOU GO GURLLLLLLLL! Stay safe and happy and keep writing! Btw, Hope you're having a wonderful time at Virginia Beach!

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23:12 Aug 31, 2020

YAAAAY THANK YOU!! You too! Ohhh, I am!! It’s actually funny because from 9 am to 7 pm I was on the surf...when I came back, I has 3+ pages of notifications and a LOT of drama that happened! With the whole downvoter thing going down it’s a bad time to be absent from Reedsy most of the day, LOL... Bye, sis!

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23:35 Aug 31, 2020

Lol! That's hilarious! So do you know who the downvoter is?

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23:36 Aug 31, 2020

Yes, I JUST did! I’m not going to say the whole story but there will be NO more downvotes!!! 😁😁😁 Oh and congrats on 100 points!!

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23:56 Aug 31, 2020

OMG, I JUST REALISED I HIT A CENTURY!! TY SO MUCH! It's okay u don't have to say who the downvoter is, although I'm really curious. LOL!

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00:08 Sep 01, 2020

Well, the downvoter was Kendra’s sibling! He logged into her account and downvoted...I’m so glad it isn’t a Reedsy-er! I never would’ve expected this...

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Great job with this one Aerin! I also wanted to congratulate you on being in first place. I can only hope that I'll make it on the leaderboard one day. :)

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23:05 Aug 31, 2020

Thankssss so much!! YES YOU WILL!!

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Aww, thanks so much! When you get the chance can you check out my stories? When and if you do, please tell me what you think. I know my most recent story had a few grammar errors.

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Hey again Aerin, if it's not too much to ask of you again could you check out the story I just wrote?

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Leya Newi
21:47 Aug 31, 2020

Aerin, you pass God-Zilla on the leaderboard. I cannot believe it. I'm not really sure what to say, I kinda expected her to be at the top forever and ever, so congrats!

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23:03 Aug 31, 2020

Thanks so much, Leya!

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20:41 Aug 31, 2020

Aerrrrrinnnn! Celeste doesn't seem to be anywhere around... Wanna go on an upvoting spree?🏃🏃😼 And I can't find the leaderboard, could you tell me how to get to it?

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23:00 Aug 31, 2020

Hmm, I guess not... Of Celeste? Or eachother??? Uhh...click ‘contests’ at the top to get to the home screen, then scroll to the top-ten leaderboard. There should be a button above it, like ‘see all’ or something, then click that!! Celeste’s somewhere around 20, I think...bye sis!

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01:26 Sep 01, 2020

No no, I mean Celeste's not ONLINE, and the other question was about an upcoming spree. Thanks anyway sis!!!!🎉

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11:10 Sep 01, 2020

Hehe, m’kay. Sureeeeeeeee! I love upvoting sprees ;) expect some points soooon!

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14:23 Sep 01, 2020

Peace!!!! Im right behind ya!🏃🏃🏃

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Zilla Babbitt
20:34 Aug 31, 2020

Hey girl! Congrats on first on the leaderboard! As far as I can remember, you're the third person to hold that spot. Joshua Insole was first when it first came out, then I held it for awhile, and now you. It's thrilling, I know ;). Just remember, don't let the points system depress what you're here for: good writing.

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22:59 Aug 31, 2020

Aw, thank you!! Ahhhh, I was wondering about that...wow, first place hasn’t changed that much in a year! But top 5 are all really close right now so I bet I’ll be second soon, LOL. But thanks so much!! Hehe, yup, I’m excited ;). Yesss I’ll be sure to remember...Reedsy is what I’ve nicknamed ‘social media for writers’, with likes and comments on STORIES, but I frequently remind myself Reedsy’s primarily for stories and karma points don’t really matter.... Thank youuu for dropping by to leave that comment ;). Have a good day, Zilla! 😄

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Zilla Babbitt
23:59 Aug 31, 2020

I know, right? And it actually has changed already, believe it or not. I got home after like two hours away and I'm sitting here with dripping hair and a new 400+ points. Harken Void and I have talked about the likes system... he thinks we should figure something else out that doesn't play on the dopamine in the brain so much. The conversation is on one of his stories if you're interested in reading it. Anyway, keep up the writing. For so young a writer you're incredibly prolific :)

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00:10 Sep 01, 2020

Yup, I saw, hehe! Ooh yeah. Mind telling me which story, if you remember? Aw, thanks!! You too!

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Zilla Babbitt
00:23 Sep 01, 2020

Sure, I'll have to go look it up. And I forgot to mention in my reply, if my 400 plus new points cost you points-- people downvoting you for some reason-- I denounce that and I'm sorry. Hopefully it's not the case though.

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00:26 Sep 01, 2020

Oh, no, it doesn’t look like anybody’s downvoting me!! But thanks!

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20:33 Aug 31, 2020

Hey B! Are you done with the riddles? I can't see the one for the week....

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22:56 Aug 31, 2020

Hey, Chimamaka! Yeah, I quit Daily Riddles a week or so ago...too hard to find decent riddles daily...but now, I’m doing Daily Clusters!! They’re under my updates if you want to check them out ;) Bye, sis!

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01:25 Sep 01, 2020

Kay Kay!!! I'll go check em out! Byaaa!

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11:09 Sep 01, 2020

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20:25 Aug 31, 2020

☺️😙😍🤗🙃😜🙉👧👯💃💅💘💖💝💞🐕🐈🐇🐼🐻💐🌻🌺🏵️🌹🌼🌸🌷💮🐝🐞🥂🏖️🎎⭐️🌠🌤️🌈🌈🌈🌞🌞🌈🌈🌈 Ahhhh, these are the things I feel about this story.... BYE!😋

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22:54 Aug 31, 2020

Thank you!! 😄😄😄 I love a good emoji comment...😆😆😆 Hehe, bye! Have a good day!

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01:24 Sep 01, 2020

You too!🎉🎊🎊

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August Jett
19:41 Aug 31, 2020

Aerin! I just hopped on Reedsy for the first time all day and I was like OMG Aerin's in second place! So I upvoted a ton of your comments and now you're in first!!! Congratulations!!! You totally deserve it!!! 😁

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