โMaxwell, did you drop her?"ย
โYes, sir. Should I come back, or will you do the opening?โย
โI need you here, Maxwell. I guess, there are some things we need to talk...to discuss about. Come back here ASAP.โย
โSure, sirย DallWall.โย
โGood.โ he was about to disconnect his speaker when he remembered something. โOh, and...sheย has no clue?โย
Maxwell chuckled manically, and replied, โNope. And I donโt think she ever will.โย
โHaha, good, Maxwell. Donโt let me down, not like that weasel did.โย
โOh, I wonโt, sir.โย
โYou know, there was something about you that felt trustworthy to me. I am never wrong.โย
Oh, sometimes everyone is bound to being incorrect, sir. Maxwell thought, but just chuckled as a response. โThank you, sir. It is an honor to be working for you.โย
โOh, I know. Thatโs how everyone feels!โย
โWell, other than that weasel.โย
DallWallโsย voiceย chokedย up a little, and he felt a bit uneasy about his words. โNow, Maxwell, donโt ever mention his name.โย
โOk, sir.โย
โI want you to reach the dome in another ten minutes. You remember, the app we were talking about? To track him?โย
โYes,โย
โWell, I think I am officially feeling comfortable with the app. Meaning, Iโve just become aware that we wonโt really need herย after all.โย
โWhat? No, sir, we need her!โย
โHuh? You dare speak against my words Maxwell?! This is low, even for you, and that weasel.โย
โBut the police can figure and might throw us in jail instead of her! Do you want that to happen? We built her so that she can take all the blame!?โย
โYes, yes, you do have a good point. But what if she isnโt behaving good? I did put emotions when building her, which was already risky.โย DallWallย spoke, hesitantly.ย
โWe did plan the punishment! Sheโll be afraid. Let her enjoy her first day of โWestview Middle Schoolโ. When she comes home, weโll tell her about theย norms andย consequencesย there are forย allย her actions.โย
โHmm, ok, I do like the sound of that. Great work today, Maxwell.โย
Oh, I am much cunning than you are,ย DallWall, and once the time comes, with her, you will be banished.ย
โThank you so much, sir. It is an honor for me, really, to be hearing such positive words from a wealthy man like you!โย Maxwell hated saying these gooey things to him, it made him flinch.ย
โNow, enough of the talking, start the engine.โย
โI sure will.โ he laughedย ferociously.ย
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Soon, Maxwell did reach their dome, andย DallWallย smiled a little, and stopped worrying. He relaxed a little, and soon, they both went inside to their main work room.ย
โSo, you had said something about our rouge tracker?โย
โYes, and I am quite excited. The thought which has come to me is that we can use this to track that weasel. Once we do, we can bring him here. Just, about that Beta, I donโt know. I feel like she is useless now.ย What are your thoughts, Maxwell?โย
โAs I had told you before, we need that android. You see, itโs not only that piece of technology we want from your soโโย
โDonโt you dare speak about him. He betrayed me. He changed into an android! He lied to me and almost tried toย kill me. He will never have a place in my heart.โย
Ha! Poorย DallWallย blames his child, but if only he knew that there was a darker force, toying inside him.ย ย
โI am humbly sorry, sir. I fear that I should not have spoken about him. Itโs just...nostalgia, you know? I just thought about your son and my mouth had blurted it out by accident.โย
โWhatever, Maxwell. But do not repeat this again...I cannot tolerate it.โย
โYes, sir.โ he looked down, but glanced atย DallWallย again. โYou may carry on.โย
โThank you.ย Now, what I was saying is that this app is the key to our success. Once we get the piece,ย Iย can doย what we wanted.ย Or,ย weย can do what we had plotted all this time. I feel like there is no point in waiting and waiting for something to happen.โย
โBut I think we should wait. Developing the app and all of that is good news. But, what if, some glitches occur. When we assigned Beta to do the work, and asย aย android, sheโll be able to do the mission with no problems!ย Patience is key, sir, so I feel like we should hold on to the idea of the app.โย
โHmm, since you are my most trusted adviser and my right-hand man, Iย trust you, Maxwell.โย
โThank you so much for listening to me sir, this will surely help our mission indeed!โย
Oh, poorย DallWell, this will help me very much, indeed...ย
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โHey, Lan 2.0?โย
โYes, master.โย
โYour father is on to you. He has developed this app, to track you down.ย To hunt you. He has also built some android, named Beta2021. Iโll tell you the location and all of that, and when I get the chance, I will make sure that you also become like aย fake human, like her. We will discussย all ofย this a bit later, but for now, make sure to amp your guards up. Iโve tried to distract him for some time, and bought you a chance to capture her andย DallWall, and escape, but you need to do as I say, ok?โย
โOh no, master. Are they on to me?โย
โYes, but you can first trick that Beta girl and make her be your friend. After that, Iโll tell you this all later, but you have to make her come to our dome, and I will deal with her later. That way,ย DallWallย and poor Beta wonโt know whatย is going to hit them.โย
โOh, I see, I see, master. I will be expecting you here soon.โย
โMe too, Lan, me too.โย
No one is going to know what will hit them...
And just like that, Maxwell disconnected the call and went back toย DallWallย to discuss more things with him. About this app the two had worked on for a long time, about how to hold off on it, and other more official and formal matters.ย
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Don't we ALL hate double-agents like Maxwell??? Haha, but anyways, I have an announcement for you all! I will soon have my 100th story in Reedsy posted, and just for the fun of it, I will pick 20 characters in that story who are ACTUAL people in Reedsy. This is kind of like first come first serve type of thing. There will be: 1. 1 Main Protagonist (the Leader of the good people) 2. 1 Main Antagonist (the Leader of the bad people) 3. 5 People who are working with the good people (including the leader, these 6 people are in the good side) 4....
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Hi! Can you please choose me? My name is Devaki!
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I'm the second one here! My name is Avnee!
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hi Laila! i think my name in the story would be . . Kamryn :) I'm 9th btw
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Hey! I'm Rachel. Looking forward to reading your story!
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THESE ARE ALL OF THE PEOPLE WHO ARE OFFICIALLY IN MY STORY. AGAIN, SO SORRY IF YOU ARE NOT INCLUDED. I TRIED TO FORM THE LIST BASED ON WHAT TIME EACH PERSON SAID THEIR NAME INTO THE COMMENT BELOW. AGAIN, SO SORRY! I WILL SURELY INCLUDE YOU (IF I ALREADY HAVEN'T) Main Protagonist: 1. Devaki Inadmar Main Antagonist: 1. Avnee Writes 5 People working with Protagonist: 1. Laiba 2. Rachel 3. Valerie 4. Isaac 5. Nainika 5 People working with Antagonist: 1. Kamryn (Amythyst) 2. Katya (Kate) 3. Leroy (Jose) 4. Luna 5. Sapphire ...
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Awww, thanks so much! and YAY I GET TO BE EVIL MUWAHAHAHAHAHAH ๐๐
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I AM SO SORRY BUT I CANNOT ACCEPT ANY MORE NAMES!!!! I already gave more than 20 names...so I have to check who wrote their comment the fastest...so sorry is you don't get picked. Please know it is NOT because I don't like you or anything, it's all about speed and time. THANK YOU FOR ALL THE PEOPLE WHO SUBMITTED THEIR VIDEOS...I REALLY APPRECIATE YOU ALL!!! <333333
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Hey Haripriya... Super story :) Woah 100 stories next? Thatโs some achievement. When I joined Reedsy you supported me so much, and thank you for that! Random question, but are you fluent in any other language (apart from English, youโre more than fluent in that)
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Hey!! haha I'm kinda late but I would LOVE to have the honor of being in one of your stories!! You've been supporting me and it makes me feel really welcome here on reedsy! we are all so lucky to know you <3
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Thank you so much Izzie and Sahana! I love your support! It really motivates me to read your comments! Also Sahana, hmm, not really. I am learning Spanish if that is what you mean.
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Heyyy same!! I'm using that Duolingo app tho! I'm learning Spanish, Greek, Japenense, and Thai! I've got my hands full but English is my main launguage!
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Haha, we have a talented person up here in the comment section!! THE ONE AND ONLY....IZZIE!!!! :)
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Awww!! Hahah that made me smile, thank you!!!
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Ooooh. I'm fluent in English, Tamil, Malayalam and Hindi, and I'm learning Korean, Latin, Greek, French, German and Chinese.
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omg thats AMAZING! Wow, you are really talented!! Wheres one place you really want to travel? You could show off your skills haha WHAT makes you want to travel? is it to see the culutre, to be with family, to eat food etc
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Oooh. Yes, that's exactly what I meant. That's interesting
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This story was great! The narration felt a little robotic and clunky, Iโm not sure if that was purposeful or not, but I loved it nonetheless! Well done and good luck for your 100th Reedsy submission!
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Thank youuuu Delta! You're surely in the story!
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Thanks so much Laila! :)
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Can I be in it? :D
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Oh, so sorry!!!! I can surely dedicate a single story just for you!
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:O but can my charater also be in that story? :D (the one that you decicate to my XD)
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Yes, of course!! :))
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:D
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:)
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Interesting story. Thank you for writing it. Sounds like Maxwell is a sort of double-agent, playing both sides against each other. It also reminds me a little of the movie "War Games", where Joshua (the supercomputer at NORAD) asked, "Shall we play a game?" Btw, were all the characters human? If not, which one was the app (or was there more than one app)? Editing comments follow: You dare speak against my words Maxwell?! [comma missing after "words"] which was already risky.โ [the period should've been a comma] โI sure will.โ he l...
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Thank you so much for your feedback. I will fix all of them. To answer your question, yes and no. I think if you read the first part of this story, you will kind of understand.
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I'll go back and re-read that section of your story ... and I'll try to do it as a reader, not as both reader *and* editor. Hopefully, that'll help too.
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You're welcome. I did go back just now to read the first part of your story (before the three large asterisks). And I'm sorry but I'm still a little confused. Maybe you could explain it more simply? If it was a game of chess, I would probably ask for a diagram showing the board, the pieces, and then the moves made each turn. Even then, I might still have to ask *why* a certain piece was moved and *why* it was moved to that specific square.
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Umm, ok, I will try to explain it as simple as possible. So, basically there is this android named Beta2021, and she doesn't know that she is being used for something bad. She thinks that finding that rouge robot will make her "master" (aka. DallWall) happy, but DallWall is a bad man, and only his trusted friend, Maxwell knows that. Now, Maxwell is being a double agent, because Beta2021 is being sent to find the rouge android (aka. DallWall's son, who turned himself into an android), and Maxwell knows that since DallWall's son betrayed him a...
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very well written. Would like to know more about dome. Like a cathedral? Like for astronomy? Hope a prompt so you can continue.
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Very well written. Would like know more aax
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I'm sorry that I really haven't been leaving feedback or anything on your stories lately, though you do make a lot really quickly. This was a great one like usual and I loved the prompt you used for it ^^ I'll give this a 10/10 :) good luck with your 100th story.
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No problem at all B, thank you so much!
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No prob ^^ so you're adding people into the 100th story?
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Yes!
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If you don't mind me asking this, could I maybe be in it? It's fine though if you already have a lot of people.
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I am so sorry, you kind of responded a bit late! I will definitely dedicate a story for you separately!
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