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Adventure Science Fiction

"You don't take warnings well," the Russian said as he sat in my booth.


Without moving my hand, I unsnapped my holster.


The Russian hailed a waiter, "Vodka, please." He looked back at me, "I'm going to have to kill you now. You know that?"


I never took my eyes off him. It was unlikely he'd try anything in a crowded bar, but I wouldn't bet my life on it.


"Not much of a talker?" The Russian took a drink.


"You're doing enough for both of us."


The Russian laughed, "Good one."


A couple of LTF officers walked in. The Russian stared at them and laughed, "What jokes. The entire Lunar Task Force is nothing but a bunch of clowns. I killed two in New London last week."


I know he's lying. I would have heard about it, although I don't doubt he has killed a few.


"You're boring company. You know that?" He finished off his vodka just as the officers came to our table.


"Everything alright here?"


"You know it," the Russian moved slowly with his hands in plain sight.


"Good. Make sure it stays that way." They moved to the bar.


"Just because we're prospectors," the Russian shook his head. "Anyway, I don't like killing a man without knowing his name."


"Tango."


"That's not your real name."


We locked eyes, measuring each other, killer to killer.


"I guess Tango will have to do. See you in the crater."


I watched until he left the bar and called my company contact, Jeeves.


"The Russian just paid me a visit."


"How unfortunate," the British male voice sounded bored. "I'll add a high-powered sniper rifle to your gear."


"And a bullet-proof suit."


"Those are hard to come by in a wasteland city, but I'll see what I can do."


"He took out Spec last month. Make it happen, or MoonCorp might never know if there are diamonds in that crater."


"Spec? I didn't know he was dead. That's very unfortunate. Will you be able to deal with the Russian? Or should we hire another?"


"I'll handle him. Just get me the suit."


I took the monorail to the hotel district, watching my back. I wouldn't put it past the Russian to make an attempt before we get anywhere near the crater. My gaze went to the projected blue sky and white puffy clouds of the city's dome, reminding me of Earth. I've been here too long. I'm tired of fake sky. I know what's on the other side-a wasteland of darkness and rocks, craters and chasms, hopelessness and death.


A drone flying outside my window shook me out of my ruminations. My instincts warned me to beware. Drones are as common in a lunar city as birds on Earth. However, a drone matching the speed and direction of a monorail doesn't happen often, if at all.


Suddenly, two miniguns materialized from the drone. I ducked just as it opened fire. Shattered glass fell on me. Passengers screamed. I pulled my pistol, rolled the quad barrel to scattershot, and destroyed the drone. I scanned for more drones before holstering my gun.


After a grueling round of questions from the LTF, I finally made it to my hotel. The rifle and suit lay on my bed. These should give me an advantage in the crater, assuming I make it out of the city.


I grabbed the rifle to feel its weight and peered through the scope. To my horror, I spotted a gun pointed at me from the opposite building. I pulled the trigger. Nothing happened. I hadn't loaded it. Just then, my window shattered, and a bullet grazed my cheek.


I fell to my knees and crawled to the corner, out of sight of the gunman. How is he always one step ahead of me? It's like he knows where I'll be before I do. Then it hit me-my phone. Jeeves gave it to me when I arrived. I almost threw it out the window, but then I had an idea.


I crawled to the edge of my bed, still out of sight of the window, loaded my rifle, and grabbed a drone from my gear bag under the bed. I secured my phone to the drone and entered Jeeves' hotel coordinates.


If the gunman could track my phone, then he'd think I retreated to my safe house. I carefully used a mirror to see if he had gone. He had. I quickly dressed my wound to avoid questions, threw on my long jacket, and concealed my rifle.


I found a low-rise building whose roof would be perfect for my plan. I positioned myself and waited. An hour passed before the Russian took his shot. Jeeves' window shattered exactly where the drone landed with my phone.


I saw the gun flash on the fifth floor of a building slightly to my right. I aimed for his head and fired. He instantly fell.


I walked to Jeeves' place and looked through the shattered window. He lay in a pool of blood. The Russian hit him between the eyes—an instant kill. Jeeves betrayed me. It's poetic justice that his asset killed him. The company who hired them must know there are diamonds in that crater. Or else, they would have never attempted to take me out in the city.


I hurried to the Russian before the LTF arrived. He lay where I shot him. For the first time in my career, the sight of death made me sick. He was just like me–a prospector. It's just business. Nothing personal.


I saw myself lying in a pool of blood, like the Russian. I, too, will make a mistake one day and take one between the eyes. Suddenly, it began to feel very personal. I've had enough of this rock. The vultures can have it.


I looked back down at the Russian.


"Back at the bar, you asked for my real name. I don't know why it's important to you, but I owe you that much. It's Tom. Nothing fancy. Just Tom."


I left for the nearest shuttle port.


February 08, 2025 03:40

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Darvico Ulmeli
15:43 Feb 11, 2025

Nice one, Daniel. Fit you well. I had a similar idea - only on Mars. I didn't find time to put it on paper. Enjoyed yours.

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Daniel Rogers
02:49 Feb 12, 2025

Thanks. I'd like to read your mars take someday 😀

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Denise Walker
21:56 Feb 10, 2025

Great story, Daniel! I really enjoy a good sci-fi adventure.

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Daniel Rogers
02:26 Feb 11, 2025

Thank you 😀

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Terry Jaster
06:25 Feb 15, 2025

Kind of an odd story but well written. I do enjoy shorter stories like this one.

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Daniel Rogers
16:18 Feb 15, 2025

Thank you. I do keep them short 🤣

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Patrick Druid
02:47 Feb 15, 2025

Very cool!

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Daniel Rogers
04:13 Feb 15, 2025

Thank you 😀

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Giulio Coni
17:45 Feb 13, 2025

This is a sharp, atmospheric piece that nails the hard-boiled sci-fi tone. The lunar setting feels gritty and believable (as for an earthling). Especially the bar scene, which sets up the rivalry with effortless precision, got great dialogue. The Russian is a classic, dangerous antagonist, and the way the story gradually shifts from a standard showdown to an existential reckoning gives it real weight. Slick and smart, I deeply enjoyed it. Great!

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Daniel Rogers
01:46 Feb 14, 2025

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Also, I appreciate your insightful comment.

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Martin Ross
16:34 Feb 13, 2025

Awesome space spy craft with a cool noir flavor! It played out in my brain like an action movie, which is my gauge for a first-class thriller. Excellent work!

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Daniel Rogers
01:47 Feb 14, 2025

Thank you so much, Martin. It was also thrilling to write 😀

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Mark Pippen
00:29 Feb 13, 2025

Tight and neat story. Sounds like a chapter in a book.

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Daniel Rogers
02:54 Feb 13, 2025

Thank you.

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Tirzah Morris
21:48 Feb 12, 2025

Enjoyed this, Daniel! And I'll second someone else's comment with the dialogue. "You're doing enough for both of us." was a fun one. Also liked the ending words: "It's Tom. Nothing fancy. Just Tom."👌

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Daniel Rogers
02:56 Feb 13, 2025

I'm glad you enjoyed it 😀👍

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10:56 Feb 12, 2025

This felt like a movie scene, really cool :)

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Daniel Rogers
13:10 Feb 12, 2025

Thanks 😀👍

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Ken Cartisano
21:35 Feb 11, 2025

Brilliant!

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Daniel Rogers
02:44 Feb 12, 2025

Thank you

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Ken Cartisano
06:26 Feb 14, 2025

This deserves more than just a mere 'brilliant.' This is a clinic on how to write. Just when you have us think things couldn't get worse for your character--this happens: 'I grabbed the rifle to feel its weight and peered through the scope. To my horror, I spotted a gun pointed at me from the opposite building. I pulled the trigger. Nothing happened. Just then, my window shattered, and a bullet grazed my cheek.' Absolutely brilliant.

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Daniel Rogers
02:25 Feb 15, 2025

Thank you. I'm flattered. I enjoyed your bio. A man who appreciates humor is a man I can respect.

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Tom Skye
18:03 Feb 11, 2025

This was an exciting read. The dialogue, particularly the ending, painted the MC as a bit of a badass :) Cool sci fi with some well crafted action. The setting and MC probably have more mileage in them. Great stuff.

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Daniel Rogers
02:47 Feb 12, 2025

Thank you. Tom definitely has some of that in him 😀

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Korinne H.
17:34 Feb 11, 2025

Well done!

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Daniel Rogers
02:47 Feb 12, 2025

Thanks 👍

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Thomas Wetzel
05:34 Feb 11, 2025

Cool story, Daniel. Loved it. Really nice job here. Gritty. Bud' ostorozhen! That's basically how you say "Be careful!" in Russian. It's the closest thing I can think of to the threat that your character says in the opening passage. (Not every language translates perfectly into others and my Russian sucks anyway, plus I can't read much Cyrillic. Mne zhal'.)

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Daniel Rogers
02:51 Feb 12, 2025

Thank you. Well, you know tons more Russian than me, since I know zero 🤣

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Emma Parker
16:53 Feb 10, 2025

How you were able to fit such an immersive and descriptive world in a short amount of time is so amazing. I loved this story so much. Could make for a great book! :)

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Daniel Rogers
02:30 Feb 11, 2025

Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it. I was afraid it might be too short.

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12:27 Feb 10, 2025

Nice story, Daniel. The pacing was great, and the action was just right. Skillful writing!

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Daniel Rogers
02:32 Feb 11, 2025

Thank you, I appreciate your compliments.

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Rebecca Hurst
10:46 Feb 10, 2025

I've always been reluctant about going to the moon, but now I know they have bars, I'm rethinking. Honestly, it's a weight off! Great work, Daniel. Short and punchy.

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Daniel Rogers
02:33 Feb 11, 2025

Ha Ha. The comfy hotels got me. Thank you for reading.

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Paul Hellyer
08:42 Feb 10, 2025

The lunar environment is immersive. I enjoyed this.

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Daniel Rogers
02:34 Feb 11, 2025

Thank you 😀👍

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Amanda Rose
04:59 Feb 10, 2025

Great job!! I'm not normally into sci-fi stuff, but I really enjoyed this!! The moonworld was very intriguing... could make for a great novel🙃😄

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Daniel Rogers
02:36 Feb 11, 2025

Thank you. I agree, but novels scare me. Perhaps one day I'll overcome my fear.

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Amanda Rose
05:03 Feb 11, 2025

I can relate! The idea of a novel is very intriguing, but every time I sit down and try to start one.... well suffice it to say my story ideas have found permanent residence solely in my mind 🙃 You have talent, Mr. Rogers, and if one day you find yourself honing it into a novel, I'd like to know about it😊

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Daniel Rogers
02:52 Feb 12, 2025

That's very kind of you. I promise if I do, I'll let you know. 😀

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Amanda Rose
06:50 Feb 13, 2025

Sounds good, can't wait!👍😄

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Viga Boland
03:47 Feb 10, 2025

Not too short for me Daniel. Just theperfect length with enough going to keep me reading. 👏👏

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Daniel Rogers
04:00 Feb 10, 2025

Thank you. You put a smile on my face. 😀

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Heather Rogers
14:33 Feb 09, 2025

This was a little bit short for me. Almost like a snippet from an episode in a season from a long running series. If that makes sense, but you know how I feel about stand alone books vs series. However, I do really like the concept of this story!

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Daniel Rogers
01:30 Feb 10, 2025

I may have tried to pack too much into too little. However, I love this moon world with its lawless prospectors and massive domed cities.

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