Fragments of Memory

Submitted into Contest #279 in response to: Follow a character who’s looking for someone or something. ... view prompt

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Fantasy Adventure Mystery

Reva paused in the kitchen doorway, a hand on her hip and a slight frown creasing her forehead. She stood there, the late afternoon sunlight streaming through the window over the sink, highlighting the swirling dust motes in the air. Her gaze swept the room, her eyes flicking from the fridge to the countertops, from the cabinets to the cluttered kitchen table.

"What was I looking for?" she muttered, her voice soft but tinged with frustration. It had been happening more often lately—a sense of purpose leading her somewhere, only to dissipate the moment she arrived.

The hum of the refrigerator seemed louder in the silence, almost like a subtle mockery. Reva crossed her arms and tapped her fingers against her elbow, hoping the rhythmic motion might jog her memory.

She moved to the counter first, absently pushing aside a bowl of fruit that had seen better days. Nothing there. Her eyes wandered to the fridge, and she opened it, scanning the shelves for something—anything—that might spark recognition. A half-empty carton of milk, leftovers from dinner, a jar of pickles. None of it felt right.

She shut the fridge door with a sigh, the faint thud echoing in the quiet house.

Reva's mind wasn't just blank; it felt... disjointed, like trying to piece together a puzzle with missing edges. Her frustration deepened. It wasn't just the object she was searching for—it was the feeling attached to it, a flicker of importance just out of reach.

She drifted to the kitchen table next, her fingers brushing the edge of an old photograph. It was of her and her younger brother, taken years ago. They were standing in the woods, a beam of sunlight catching their wide grins. She stared at it for a moment, something tugging at the edges of her consciousness.

Reva sighed heavily, the weight of her scattered thoughts pressing down on her as she slid to the floor, her back resting against the cool kitchen wall. She hugged her knees, her eyes unfocused as she tried to grasp the slippery thread of her memory. Why had she come here? It wasn't just hunger or habit—there had been a reason, she was sure of it.

The silence of the kitchen buzzed in her ears, the hum of the refrigerator and the distant ticking of the wall clock the only sounds to keep her company. She exhaled slowly, pressing her palms to her temples, as if the answer might rise to the surface under the pressure.

Her gaze wandered aimlessly, eventually landing beneath the refrigerator. She squinted, noticing the corner of a forgotten envelope sticking out from the shadows. Leaning forward, she crawled across the floor and fished it out, brushing off the dust. The envelope was empty, but the faded handwriting on its surface caught her attention. 

It was her grandmother's—a graceful, looping script that instantly pulled her back to childhood summers spent listening to stories about the mysterious places her grandmother had once traveled. Reva's heart skipped as she spotted more forgotten items beneath the stove: a tarnished coin, a red pencil, and a small toy car. The coin, especially, made her breath hitch; she recognized it from a game she and her brother had played as kids, where they pretended it was a treasure map marker. 

The tug of memory was strong now, urging her to get up and look deeper. That was when she turned to the kitchen's junk drawers, the thought sparking like a match in her mind. She turned to the nearest junk drawer, yanking it open with a faint creak. Inside was a chaotic collection of odds and ends: rubber bands, a half-melted candle, old batteries, and a tangle of mismatched keys on a rusted ring. Her fingers hovered over them before picking up a key shaped like a delicate flower. The sight of it sent a pang through her chest.

She remembered this key. It had once unlocked the jewelry box in her grandmother's attic. Her fingers tingled as she thought of the countless afternoons spent sifting through the trinkets inside—strings of pearls, faded postcards, and the tiny notebook where her grandmother had scribbled strange symbols and stories. Reva closed her eyes for a moment, the scent of lavender and old wood flooding her senses.

A smile ghosted her lips before fading. When she opened her eyes again, her gaze shifted to a brass compass nestled beneath a roll of duct tape. Her hand reached for it instinctively. It felt heavier than she remembered, the smooth metal cool against her palm. The compass had been a gift from her father before he disappeared. She flipped it open, watching the needle waver briefly before pointing north. A chill crept along her spine. The compass hadn't worked in years—why now?

The woods. 

She turned abruptly, her bare feet whispering across the floor as she made her way to the back door. As soon as she stepped outside, the crisp autumn air filled her lungs, and she stopped short. The scent of damp leaves and distant smoke filled her senses, and with it came a memory—fleeting but strong. 

She was looking for something important. A clue. Something connected to the woods.

Reva set off down the worn path behind the house, her heartbeat quickening as she stepped into the embrace of the towering trees. The forest always had a way of calming her, its quiet hum soothing the noise in her mind. But today, it felt alive in a different way, as though it shared her urgency.

Her footsteps crunched against the leaf-strewn path, the sound breaking the stillness. She reached a small clearing she hadn't visited in years, the sunlight piercing through the canopy above like golden ribbons. She froze.

In the center of the clearing, half-buried beneath the dirt and leaves, was an old wooden box. It was small, the kind of box that seemed almost ordinary, except for the intricate carvings on its surface—patterns of swirling lines that looked vaguely familiar.

Reva crouched down, her breath hitching. She brushed away the debris, her fingers tracing the carvings as a rush of memories surged forward. The box had belonged to her grandmother, and inside, there had been... 

She opened it with trembling hands. Nestled within was a small, worn key. The sight of it made her heart skip a beat. This was it. This was what she had been searching for.

But why? What did the key unlock? And why now, after all this time?

As she stared at the key, the sunlight seemed to grow dimmer, the woods whispering secrets only she could hear. She wasn't sure what she was looking for when she walked into the kitchen earlier, but now she knew she was part of something much larger—something she wasn't sure she was ready to face. 

Reva clenched the key tightly in her hand. Whatever lay ahead, she had to find it.

December 01, 2024 14:55

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Graham Kinross
00:40 Dec 08, 2024

The best sentence was: "Her fingers tingled as she thought of the countless afternoons spent sifting through the trinkets inside—strings of pearls, faded postcards, and the tiny notebook where her grandmother had scribbled strange symbols and stories." It was mysterious and nostalgic. Great story.

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Bob Faszczewski
14:03 Dec 15, 2024

Raises interesting questions. What does the physical key unlock or is the key just a symbol--to unlock some personal mysteries?

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Raye McLaughlin
21:43 Dec 07, 2024

This story is oddly comforting to me and as I read it, I was filled with a sense of home. Reva reminds me of my mother, who struggles with ADHD. Even if it wasn't intentional, you captured ADHD perfectly in your description of Reva in the kitchen. My mom does that all the time. I love your part about the woods- I also find comfort in the woods- and it turned a character that reminded me of my mother to a character that reminded me of myself. That's just what I got from this. Truly, thank you for writing and sharing your talent!

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