The popsicle is going to kill me.
Not directly. No, it’s the heat plus the popsicle that will end me.
I remember those times when a popsicle melting was mildly annoying. Less to be eaten, more to be cleaned. It dripped down my leg, leaving a sticky trail of artificial flavoring.
Now, the popsicle melting is deadly.
I gulp and try to calm myself as it melts a little more. Because…
Every drip that slides off shaves more time off my life.
Every drop means I get closer to perishing.
Every little bit of cherry ice that dares melt makes me clutch myself in fear.
Even though it happened five months, thirty days ago, I still remember I got my curse. After all, how could I forget?
It’s the day that changed everything.
“Oh geez! I’m so sorry, Tori!”
I knelt down to pet my startled Zhelly—a baby Zhella, a kind of pet that has the small, furry body of a Yara and the cute, floppy-eared head of a Balt. “I swear I won’t accidentally step on your tail ever again,” I said solemnly, my straight face dissolving in a grin as she licked me.
I patted Tori one more time and continued my trot to the kitchen, where my mom was calling me.
“There you are!” She exclaimed. “Jay Moore, you've been on planet Yiika for sixteen years. You should know by now that when I say come here, it does not mean come here in five minutes!”
“Sorry, Mom,” I smiled, grabbing a donut off the table and munching a bite. “Why did you want me?”
“King Hark will be providing popsicles for any kids—they have to prove they’re under seventeen, though. Cherry is your favorite, right? Here’s six Airgead”—she pressed the coins into my hand—“which should be enough.”
“Thanks, Mom!” I hugged her then ran out the door.
Yiika was always hot. It had two seasons: Yeh and Tah. Yeh was warm, Tah was extremely hot. I wished I was a Freezer.
There was no way to get cool on Yiika. Our only source of coldness is Freezers—the small population of Yiikans born with the ability to freeze things. They freeze food, make frozen things like popsicles and ice cream and ice, and are like heroes to society.
There are only ten or so of them anyway, and they are closely regulated. They sell their services, but a cut of the profit must go to the king. Not that he needs more money.
Our rich but old king, King Hark, was the most powerful Freezer of them all. He was pretty nice, and often hosted events where he gave out free frozen treats.
It only happened once or twice a month, so I sprinted as fast as I could over the hills—until I got to the biggest hill of all, the one that you could see from everywhere in the village. The royal palace towered over me, providing a little comfort from the burning noon sun.
It was twelve-oh-five when I made my deadly mistake.
I got in line. But it was long. The king sat on an ice throne—must be nice to have your butt be cold, I thought bitterly—handing popsicles to the kids. I was impatient at the back of sixty people. I had to get home to finish my homework, and these children had all day.
Why should I have to stand in the back? I thought.
That’s when I did the regret of my life.
I cut. Everybody. I squeezed to the front, where I took a spot behind the kid getting a popsicle. Before he was even done walking away, I knelt before the king and said, “Cherry, please. It’s my favorite.”
I thought I was pretty polite, but apparently, the king thought something else.
“You cut!” He boomed. “You’re a liar, a cheater, a disgrace to this world!”
It wasn’t even that big of a deal, but he went on and one about how awful I was. I just stayed there, on the ground, as he ranted about how I was raised.
“Girl, stand.”
I did, my head still bent.
“You’re a disgrace to this planet, do you hear me? You’re going to be banished.”
My eyes widened. “From…where? Here? Our village?”
“No,” he said coldly, “the planet.”
My heart was thumping, pounding in my ears. “What do you mean?”
“You’ll be sent in a bubble-rocket tomorrow,” he said, “to Earth. Maybe the people there will take you in. You’ll be in the rocket for six months.”
My breathing turned shallow. What have I done? The little voice in my head said, scared. I was going to be sent away. From the planet. I was a Yiikan, so I didn’t need food or water to live, but surviving six months in solitary, in space, still sounded…awful.
I gulped. Gulped again. Then… “Is that all?”
“No,” King Hark bellowed. “You’re not only a disgrace to this planet, but you’re a disgrace to this world. You are not worthy of living.” I ONLY WANTED A POPSICLE! My brain screamed. I CUT A LINE, AND NOW YOU’RE GOING TO KILL ME?!
I hadn’t realized I had said the last part aloud until King Hark frowned. “Yes, but no.” He waved his hand, and a red popsicle appeared. He handed it to me. “You like cherry popsicles so much? Here.”
I took a cautious lick, then stopped when I saw King Hark’s grin. “That popsicle is your life,” he said, “it is bound to you by fate. As soon as it’s completely melted…”
He made an ice bucket then stood up and kicked it into the hills. It shattered.
“What?!” I exclaimed. “But… but… it’s Tah! It’ll be gone in an hour!” My eyes widened again. “I’ll be gone in an hour!”
“Don’t worry. This popsicle is magic. You have six or so months before it's completely gone. Six or so months in the rocket, too. Now…I suggest you get back home.”
His lips curled into a small smile. “It’ll be your last time there, Say goodbye, Jay. Say goodbye.”
I took a shaky breath as I am whisked back to the present. My eyes dart around, taking in the view of my current location.
It’s nothing new.
I’ve been floating through space for five months, twenty-nine days. My bubble rocket is a large, clear sphere the size of a gym. It’s unbreakable, and the only way I can get out is through a small door that I can open just once—when I land on Earth.
Speaking of Earth, I’ll be there soon. Very soon. The bubble rocket magically hurls through space super-fast towards Earth, and it’s been doing that for almost six months.
My life, in the form, of a cherry popsicle, has been shrinking for almost six months.
I used to have hopes and dreams. I wanted to be an adventurer, to find the magic of how to become a Freezer.
Now, my only hope is life is to get to Earth before the popsicle is completely melted. I wanted to see this other planet. What do its inhabitants look like? Technology? I wonder about its hierarchy.
I hope it doesn’t have an evil king.
“EARTH!” I shout, jumping a second later. The only sound I’ve heard for the past half year is my own voice, but I hardly speak. Any sort of noise startles me, even if it’s my own.
But soon, I’ll hear other people’s voices!
Earth is in sight. It’s huge! And so pretty! Green and blue, wrapped in a bundle of white. I wish Yiika looked like this—and I knew what it looked like from space, seeing I had a blast-off on it.
I shut down the memory and focus on the gorgeous planet up ahead.
I glance at my popsicle. It’s in a clear sphere hanging around my neck—the sphere is made of a mix between plastic and glass, making it quite durable and hard to break. The temperature inside is a constant forty degrees by magic.
Anyways, the popsicle is extremely thin. A little bit of flavored ice lashed to a stick. I gulp as a single drop drips off the popsicle and into the pool of red sugar water at the bottom of the sphere.
I just want enough time.
Enough time to see Earth.
I have a couple days left to live, and a day or two before I get to Earth.
That seems possible.
Right?
Space is always dark, so I choose when I go to bed and wake up. It looks like I’m almost there, so I decided to go to bed.
Hopefully, when I wake up, I get to see Earth before my popsicle completely melts.
Before I die.
I try to make myself comfortable on the hard, curved floor, and although I try to blink my sadness away, a tear still slips down my cheek.
I awake to being smacked against the side of the bubble.
“ACK!” I holler as I crash to the ceiling and to the floor again. This took being jostled around to a whole new level! But why?
I look around. Actually, this time. And nothing prepared me for what I was seeing next.
I was entering Earth’s atmosphere! The planet is right below me now, the shapes of land getting closer and closer. My body flies to the tip of the sphere as I hurtle towards the Earth.
Suddenly, I’m afraid.
Will the bubble-rocket make it?
Most things burn up in Yiika’s atmosphere, but I don’t know about Earth. I know the bubble-rocket is supposed to be unbreakable, but does that mean it’s in-burnable?
I’m terrified as I continue falling. My back is pressed against the top of the sphere, with so much force pressing against me my body counters gravity.
Oh, god…GRAVITY!
There’s gravity on Earth! I haven’t encountered the sensation for so long! In the rocket, I just let myself drift around. It was super hard to sleep. Now, for my remaining time on Earth, I would be STUCK ON THE GROUND!
No, I tell myself, trying to shut the gleeful thoughts down. Earth might not have strong gravity. Plus, you might die—from the fall or from your popsicle—before you get there, anyway.
My eyes crash shut as I wait until I arrive at my destination.
It takes so long.
So long.
In reality, it takes only minutes for the fall to happen. But right now, it seems like I’ve been falling for years and years and years.
And now, I’m about to land.
My rocket just popped a parachute. How, though?! Magic, probably. The sphere is completely clear, so I would see any hatch. Anyways, the parachute is so huge my mind can’t even register the huge-ness.
I’m falling. Slower, now. I think it’s more magic to soften the fall. I’m back on the floor of the sphere as I drift down, down, down…
ONLY TWO HUNDRED MORE FEET!
I’m so excited!
I’m about to die, but I’m so excited!
I’m slowly floating down to the ocean. Oh look, everybody is staring up at me. Hey, these guys look like Yiikans! Nice!
And…I’m…ON EARTH!
My sphere crashes into the ocean. I get jostled around even more, but somehow, I’m alive.
Water is over the sphere now. I walk over—yes, WALK—to the hatch and pop is open. Water starts gushing in, so I swim out of the doorway and up to air.
I gasp and my lungs breathe.
And breathe…
And breathe.
EARTH AIR! I’m so psyched.
I, Jay Moore, am on Earth.
I glance at the popsicle around my neck as I flounder on the surface. I’d say I have twenty-four hours before it melts completely. Before I die.
I’ve never been this close to death.
I’m literally on the edge, on the border.
It’s certain. My existence will be gone in a couple days.
The thought makes me want to break down and sob. It’s really hard, knowing when and how you’ll die. I’ve known for months, although uts feel like years. The only reason I’m still sane is because I’m trying, trying, trying to be cheerful.
I know I only have a day left to live.
But I don’t want to spend my last day before death worrying about dying.
I’m going to swim to shore and have fun.
I’m going to forget about this popsicle.
“GAH!” I shrieked. “Ahh! No!”
Hands are clutched around my waist. What’s happening?!
“It’s okay,” a female voice says from behind me, “I’ve got you. You’re not going to drown. Just relax.”
I get the idea. This Earthling is trying to save me.
I let whoever-she-is swim me back to the shore. Once there, I climb onto the sand and face her. “Hi.”
My savior looks around my age. She’s in a teal tankini with her inky black hair falling down her shoulders in curls. Her eyes are a brilliant blue and her lips are extremely red. She’s easily the most beautiful person I’ve ever seen.
“Hello,” she smiles.
“Hi!” I say again. A HUMAN!!! “Thanks for saving me!”
She gulps. I can tell she’s freaking out. “How…how did you come from the sky?”
“First,” I say, “let’s talk.”
She leads me off the beach and to a… weird, flat stretch of rock. Big hunks of…metal? were scattered around. The girl walks up to one and pulls open a door. A row of leather seats are inside. She pats one. “Come on in.”
“What is this?” I breathe when we’re both seated.
“A private place,” she says. “Now, please, explain.”
“I’m Jay,” I said, “Jay Moore.”
“I’m Zippora,” she smiled. “I live in Arlington.”
I’m contemplating how to answer when Zippora put her hands on her knees. “Are you an alien?”
“What?” I say in delight.
“Well, you just hurtled from the sky. In a bubble.”
“A bubble-rocket,” I correct her. “And, I guess I’m an alien. I’m not from here, anyway. See, I used to live on the planet Yiika. I messed up and got sent here. I’ve been in space for half a year. Also, I’m about to die.”
“What?” She says, horrified.
“Long story short, my life is tied to this popsicle.” I lift my necklace up so she can see the sorry excuse for a dessert. “As soon as this baby melts, I die.”
“How can you live knowing that?!”
“It hasn’t been much of a life in space,” I muse, “but I’m here now. And I have around a day to have fun.”
Zippora stares at my popsicle. “Can’t you put it in a freezer?”
“In a Freezer?” I squint. “What? I don’t want somebody eating it.”
“‘Somebody’?”
“Yeah?”
We’re both super confused.
“All I know is that I have a freezer,” Zippora says, “and if you put your popsicle in there, it won’t melt.”
“A Freezer?” I say. “You can own a Yiikan?”
Zippora sighs. “Okay, what do you think a freezer is?”
“A Freezer is a person with magic ice powers.”
She giggles. “Well, our freezers are a kind of technology.” Another drips slides off my popsicle. “No!” I shout, looking down at my pop. “No, no, no! Hang in there, buddy!”
Zippora is definitely freaked out. I’m kind of amazed she believes me, but then again, she just saw me hurtle down from space. When that single Earthing came to Yiika ten years ago—he was an inventor, I think—we sure didn’t believe him, even though we saw him enter the atmosphere. It was especially hard to believe him when he spoke of a planet called Earth, but we eventually listened.
“I need to get you to my house,” Zippora decides.
She gets out of the back seat and a second later, she’s sitting in a seat in front of me. “Buckle up,” she says, glancing back at me. “I’m driving.”
Driving is terrifying.
The whole time, I was afraid the hunk of metal was going to jerk off course and kill me early.
Surprisingly, I lived.
We get to Zippora’s house just as the sun is starting to set. She takes out another bit of metal and slides it in the hole of her door. It opens and we walk in.
Her house is super different from mine. It’s cool—by which I mean cold, but it’s awesome, too.
Without even letting me admire her home, Zippora grabs my hand and leads me to her kitchen. In it is ANOTHER hunk of metal, tall and silver.
Zippora grabs a handle near the bottom and pulls.
I gasp. Part of the hunk of metal is a door!
I place my hand in and shiver. That’s cold.
“Okay,” Zippora says, “let’s put the popsicle in here. Can you break the container?”
I suck my breath in and smash it.
My life topples out.
Zippora scoops up the last bit of popsicle and places it in a bowl on the counter. Then, she puts the bowl into the…freezer.
Before she closes it, I watch as the popsicle melts a little. A drip is falling down, but before it slides off…
It stops.
Frozen on the popsicle.
I gasp and swallow, my eyes swimming, as Zippora shuts the freezer. She looks up and smiles at me.
I tackle-hug her, so much salt water steaming out of my eyes I was afraid my tears ducts would break. I’m safe. I’m SAFE! The popsicle is frozen in time!
“You’re going to live a long, long time, Jay,” Zippora’s voice says from behind my neck.
I smile as more tears stream down my face. “I know.”
I bury my face in her shoulder, my body so full of raw emotion I’m afraid I’m going to burst. The curse is broken. I’m going to live. I finally choke out,
“Thank you.”
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This was such a clever idea. Having your life-force tied to an object like a popsicle... I never would've thought of that. I wouldn't be surprised if a similar concept appeared in one of my future stories. Also, is the answer to the riddle a hole?? I was reading your bio, and my brother was yelling at me to come look at his hole, and I said I was trying to figure out a riddle. And he said he wanted me to help him dig it bigger. So I did, because I'm apparently a sucker, and when I came back with dirt under my fingernails (I hate that so m...
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I also can't wait to make my characters lives suck, because I always get writers block about 5-7 pages into a long story/novella/novel idea, so hopefully (for their sake and mine) your tips work. :) :) :)
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Hi, Leya! Thanks so much! I actually got this idea from Beauty and the Beast, with the rose and all. Glad you enjoyed it! 😁😁 Yeah, you got it right! Congrats! Haha, that’s a funny story. Oh, geez, yep, I HATE when there’s dirt or sand under my nails. Hehe, yeah. Actually, I have a weird relationship with writer’s block. I call it the feeling where I don’t have any ideas for a short story, but never in a novel. Because I plan out my novels pretty detailed, so I always know what’s happening. But the midway point in a novel when I lo...
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Goodnight! I rarely plan stories out, I get bored fast when I do that. But it also leads to writers block and losing steam. I can’t wait to try your trick!
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Interesting story. It’s really challenging to write a story based on a single experience, in this case a melting popsicle. I see an opportunity to explore the senses - what does the melting popsicle look like, taste like feel like, smell like and yes, even sound like.
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Thanks for the feedback!
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This was really engaging and fun to read! I like your take on the prompt.
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Thanks so much!
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A very creative story. I enjoyed it immensely. Good luck.
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Thank you!
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I love your writing style! Also love this story! :)
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Thank you! Actually, in this story, I tried a different writing voice, but I’m glad you still enjoyed it! 😄😄😄
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Oh! Well, I enjoyed reading it very much! You did a great job!
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Hey Aerin! How are you? Thanks again for another great story. The creativity I'm seeing is incredible. I love the uniqueness of the plot, the singularity of the characters, and the present tense narration. For a rookie to that, you did great. You're getting better with the show, not tell aspect. I'm very impressed. I think you can work on the redundancies. There's a bit too much repitition of the same words, so I think you can expand your vocab and use stronger terms to enhance your writing and make it better. Grammar needs a little work...
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Thank you, Saron! Yay, I’m glad I did alright with present tense. Oh, thanks for catching that typo! 😄 Thanks again! ~Aerin
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Anytime!! And while you're on Reedsy, would you mind checking out my new story, Frontliner? I'd love to hear your opinion. Thanks again!!
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Sure!
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Heya There Aerin ^^ i decided to check out this out since i think this might be the last one from you i had to check out though i'm not entirely sure. I still haven't ever found anything wrong in or about any of your stories you made and its just kinda amazing with all of yours when mine i feel like are really bad most of the time. so do you know what you get this time? you should probably know by now, another 10/10 for ya. ^^ and i hope i'm not being much of a bother with this and i'm not sure if your not busy anymore or anything but i was...
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Thank you! Haha, I actually just did that ;)
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oh boy- i finished another one because i don't know why it just seemed interesting. "Goddess child" is the name of it, if you want to you should go read it and tell me what ya think. i always love seeing what you have to say
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What a great concept! Taking the prompt and making it... deadly. :D Well done!
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Thanks!
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How do you make 7 even without division, multiple, adding, or subtracting? (No exponents and stuff like that, either) You write it down?
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Interesting guess, but that’s not the answer I was looking for! Keep trying!
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Great story! Keep writing!
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If you are only a tween, you can't submit on this website. Go through the Terms of Use, it's illegal. And it also says that you might get sued if any terms are violated. This is strictly for adults, not for kids.
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there are a lot of non-adults on this website. I've read the terms. You just can't receive the award if you are under eighteen, (no credit card of anything ) but most just write to write on here, not to win
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Yep! Also, it doesn’t say they’ll you sue you.
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But then, by submitting your story, you are agreeing that you are above 18, aren't you? And everybody knows how serious companies are about their terms these days. But I think they probably won't do anything about it. My intention was not to make fun of you, I was merely informing you, because various stories here are intended for mature audiences.
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Thanks, but’s it’s okay. Taking place is the contest is pretty much just getting the prize. I was worried about the rule at first too, a bunch of Reedsy people assured me people under 18 can still post stories to get better at writing. Actually, over 50% of people are ‘underage’ (as you can see in their bios). Also, for the last sentence—if it IS, then the stories usually have a disclaimer so I can steer clear.
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That was different too. Your take on the writing prompt intrigued me. As a newspaper editor, I have to say that some of the formatting, and phrases bugged me a little at first, then I did a couple of reads of it. I think some minor editing might make it a little smoother - if that is your concept for it. If not, I still think it was a good read. I hope you will give comments to some of my stories sometimes. I could use tips too! Have a great night.
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Thank you so much, Rebecca!
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This story is so good!! I love the world building and how excited Jay is to be on Earth.
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Thanks so much, Cara!
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Great take on the prompt! I loved the world-building of Yiika and the Freezers. And congrats on your fantasy book!!
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Thanks so much!
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What can you catch but not throw? Is it.... A cold??
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Yeah, you got it right!
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Thanks!
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Awesome story Aerin!! You're very creative and this one of my favorite genres of stories, FANTASY. Thank you so much for the tips btw. I just can't end the story I'm writing sometimes and for me that's the worst part. I'll surely try out those wonderful tips. And also would you mind telling me which grade you're in at school? Just being curious (P.S. not unusual..I always am). - K
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Okay, I deleted the ages.
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Thanks!!
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This was lowkey cute! It was really cool how you created a whole different race, planet, and invention? (Bubble-rocket; GENIUS!) Liked it lots, keep on writing!
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Haha, thanks so much! 😁
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What gets bigger the more you take away? I know the answer is a hole but here's an alternate answer. The suffix "less" or prefix "un" from any word. Example: Flavorless, take away the "less" and you get more flavor Unequal: Take away the "un" and equality gets larger. Unhappy, take away the "un" and your overall level of content will get larger. Get it? I'm trying, lol. Your friend, A.
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Haha, great answer. 😁😁😁
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Thanks! -A.
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Hey Aerin! You did a pretty good job with the present tense! I'll leave the critic to the experts, but I really loved this! Awesome job!
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Thank you!!! 😊😊😊
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You're welcome! Also...for the answer to today's riddle...is it a hole?
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Yep! 🎊🎊🎊
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Yay!
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