"Beware the shadows of tales once told,
For within their whispers, darkness unfolds.
The paths to innocence are lined with dread.
In forgotten pages, monsters are fed."
Dr. Henrietta Jacqal had always been pulled toward the forbidden, a fascination that thrummed within her like a heartbeat, tightening its hold with each discovery. Every ancient, unfiltered fairy tale added a layer to her hidden world, where the innocent met their doom in dark forests, and witches bore teeth as sharp as knives.
Her collection was vast; stacks of brittle, yellowed pages and tattered bindings lined her shelves, their horrors gleaming like hidden gems beneath layers of dust. To her, each tale was a portal, each page imbued with secrets that lived just below the surface, inviting her into shadowed worlds filled with unspoken malice.
Tonight, in the quiet sanctuary of her study, she sensed something different - a feeling thick and cloying - that drew her to a new addition she hadn't remembered bringing home.
On her desk sat an ancient book unlike any she had seen. Its leather binding was dark and worn, the color of dried blood, and as her fingers brushed over it, she felt a strange warmth, almost a pulse, thrumming faintly beneath her hand. The leather seemed to breathe beneath her touch as if it were alive, each worn patch concealing secrets she couldn't yet imagine. A shiver rippled up her spine, unsettling the quiet.
A slip of yellow paper fluttered from the book's pages, landing softly on her desk. In spidery ink, a single line beckoned her closer:
"To see the shadows you crave, only look inside."
A chill settled in her chest, but her curiosity won over her caution. Her fingers trembled slightly as she turned the ancient pages, thick and rough beneath her fingertips, releasing a stale, earthy smell that filled the room — a scent mingling damp soil, decaying leaves, and something more sinister. She paused, inhaling deeply, almost hypnotized by the earthy rot, her pulse echoing in the stillness.
The first story was unfamiliar, written in a language that seemed to coil around her tongue, twisting her voice into something foreign and ancient as she read it aloud. The words tasted heavy, dense, and dark as if each bore a secret too terrible to be spoken. She felt the air around her shift, a weight gathering like a storm cloud, pressing in with a quiet, almost tangible malice.
"The woods lay silent, waiting for the Huntsman, who carried the scent of rot and blood as a wolf might carry fur." The words slipped from her lips, and the room seemed to exhale with a cold, dark breath.
Shadows stretched from the edges of her study, clawing across the walls, moving with a sinister intent she couldn't name. She could feel them creeping closer, curling around her ankles, sliding over her arms, the dark tendrils brushing her skin with a frigid touch.
Her gaze drifted to the tall window by her bed, where her reflection was barely visible in the dim light. But she froze, her heart stuttering. There, in the faint outline, a face looked back at her, a face that wore her own features but was altered, twisted.
Her breath caught in her throat, and her skin prickled as if someone, or something, had pressed its icy fingers against her spine. She blinked, her hand flying to her mouth to stifle a gasp, but the twisted expression vanished, leaving only her pale, horrified face staring back.
Henrietta sank into the stillness, pulse pounding in her ears, yet unable to look away from the place where her reflection had transformed, if only for an instant, into something that watched her from the other side of the glass.
The room was silent, but the air vibrated with something dark and ancient, a quiet warning reverberating in her bones. Henrietta's fingers hovered over the open book, and though she felt the urge to close it, to push it away, she couldn't shake the dark thrill, the tantalizing curiosity pulling her back in.
The oppressive silence that seemed to hum just below the edge of hearing caused her breaths to come in shallowly, swallowing each one. Henrietta's heart hammered, each beat loud and frantic as a foreign sound crept into the silence, a wet, labored rasp so close it felt as if something monstrous were breathing against her skin.
She froze, caught in a moment that felt stolen from her nightmares. The dread seeped into her bones, sinking deeper with each rattling exhale.
The sound clawed at her senses, dragging her from the safety of her desk and compelling her toward the door. Her feet felt too cold as she moved, her fingers brushing against the wood, as though something dark and insidious called to her from the other side. She opened the door slowly, her breath catching as the darkness seemed to expand, swallowing her room behind her, leaving only a corridor stretching endlessly before her.
The walls loomed close, narrowing around her like the gaping maw of a beast, the shadows pulsing in time with her heartbeat. Each step she took was accompanied by the muffled sound of her sharp and shallow breath, her footfalls devoured by the heavy silence. The corridor pulled her deeper into a place that felt as foreign as it was suffocating. She could feel the weight of unseen eyes, cold and malevolent, tracing her every movement, an icy presence that clung to her skin.
And then, in the dim light, she saw him.
A figure stood in the far corner, his body hunched, shoulders taut with a tension that spoke of restraint and predatory readiness. He lowered his head, the shadows surrounding him like a shroud obscuring his face. A figure's presence was all-encompassing, an entity carved from darkness, radiating a quiet, insidious power that chilled her to the core. He held an axe loosely at his side, the blade glinting faintly, smeared with a thick, dark substance that gleamed wetly, a stain of violence made manifest, almost pulsing with the life it had stolen.
It was him—the Huntsman.
Henrietta's feet rooted to the floor as his head slowly rose, his face emerging from the shadows. Her stomach twisted as she met his gaze—two bottomless voids that drew her in, devouring her instantly. Huntsman's eyes were not eyes at all but empty, black chasms, pulling her into an endless darkness that stretched into a nothingness more terrifying than death itself. They were eyes that promised ruin, that spoke of hunger too vast, too ancient to be contained.
A grotesque smile stretched across his face, wide and unnatural, revealing jagged and broken teeth sharpened to points that gleamed in the dim light. His mouth opened, and a low, mocking chuckle slipped past his cracked lips, curling around her like thick, suffocating smoke.
"Dr. Jacqal…" Huntsman rasped his voice, a twisted, syrupy murmur that filled the space between them, slithering over her skin with the familiarity of a lover's caress but with the chill of something from a nightmare. "You've called to me. And now... I've come to play."
The words seeped into her, cold and venomous, chilling her from the inside out. She stumbled back, her hands flying to her mouth as dread tightened its grip around her heart, twisting her stomach with a terror that threatened to swallow her whole. But before she could react, he lunged forward, his movements sudden and brutal, his axe slicing through the air with a dark, lethal grace.
The blade met her flesh, and pain exploded across her back, a line of fire that seared through her, stealing her breath. She staggered, bracing herself against the wall as her vision blurred, expecting the warmth of blood to pour from the wound, but what spilled forth was something else entirely. Thick, oily smoke poured from the cut, dark, and pungent, coiling up into the air around her, filling her lungs with a bitterness that made her choke.
The Huntsman inhaled deeply, his nostrils flaring as he drank in the smoke, his head thrown back in a twisted rapture. His body convulsed, muscles bulging grotesquely as he fed on her, his bones cracking and shifting beneath his skin, his form expanding and twisting, becoming something even more monstrous. His breath came in guttural gasps, each one deep and ravenous, his skin stretching painfully to contain his grotesque transformation.
"Your darkness feeds me, little doctor," he crooned, his voice wealthy with a delight that was as dreadful as cruel.
As he spoke, Henrietta felt a strange intrusion — images flooding her mind, invading her thoughts. Memories that were not her own, pictures of him lurking in the shadows, watching, waiting. The thrill that pulsed through him as he stalked his prey, the way his heart leaped with savage joy as he swung his axe, the warmth of blood splattering against his face. She felt his hunger, raw and insatiable, a craving that gnawed at her mind, seeking to consume every flicker of light within her.
The corridor seemed to close around her, the walls pulsing with his presence. As he stepped closer, his eyes locked on her. She knew that whatever darkness lurked within her had been waiting for him all along.
With every step, Henrietta forced herself further down the corridor, the darkness around her pressing in, thick with the fetid stench of rot and decay. It filled her lungs, mingling with the metallic tang of her fear as her pulse raced, beating out a rhythm of panic in her veins. The shadows writhed along the walls, shifting and pulsing like something alive. Each faint glow that slipped through the narrow windows overhead was swallowed instantly, as though light could not survive in this twisted place.
As her eyes adjusted to the dark, she saw figures she had known from childhood tales, now twisted into grotesque displays, nailed to the walls like cruel trophies.
Her gaze fell on the first, and horror rolled through her. Little Red Riding Hood hung limply, her bright red cloak tattered and stained with dark patches that trailed down her limbs. Her hands were skewered above her head, her fingers splayed as though reaching for an escape that would never come. Her face was frozen in a silent scream, her mouth open in eternal terror, and though she made no sound, the echo of that scream seemed to reverberate through the shadows. Little Red's eyes, wide and glassy, followed Henrietta, filled with a terror that seemed alive, a silent plea that clawed at Henrietta's heart, begging for release.
Further down, she saw the White Rabbit, his once-pristine fur now matted with dirt and stained with grime. His ears hung limp, torn, and bloody, and his eyes had been sewn shut with thick, black thread, sealing him forever in darkness. A shattered pocket watch dangled from his neck, swinging slowly, each tick punctuating the silence like a twisted countdown. As she passed, the pocket watch seemed to pulse, its broken hands moving backward in a mocking rhythm, a reminder that time was slipping away, trapping her here as though she belonged among these tortured figures.
Her own heartbeat thundered louder as she heard a noise behind her, the echo of heavy, deliberate footsteps growing closer, a sound that sent a bolt of terror through her spine. She turned, catching sight of the Huntsman, his shadowed form hulking in the dim light, his shoulders hunched, and his axe gleaming faintly as he raised it.
Before she could move, he was upon her, his arm swinging forward in a brutal arc. The blade embedded itself in her shoulder, a flare of white-hot pain shooting through her, and she staggered, her vision blurring as she braced herself against the wall.
His fingers elongated, stretching into clawed digits that scratched against the handle of his axe. Huntsman's frame expanded, his muscles bulging and warping beneath his skin, joints popping as his bones stretched, grotesquely adapting to his growing form. His grin widened, his baring teeth sharpened to jagged points, and his black eyes gleamed with dark satisfaction.
"Each slice makes me stronger," he crooned, his voice slithering through the darkness, low and venomous, a whisper that wrapped around her, tightening like a noose.
Then, from the darkness ahead, a figure staggered into view — a gaunt, wild-eyed man, his clothes torn and filthy, his hand clutching a tarnished sword that shook in his grip. Recognition flooded through her: Prince Charming, or at least what was left of him, his face smeared with grime, his once-bright eyes hollow and lost.
"Run, Dr. Jacqal," he whispered, his voice rough and ragged. "He'll kill us both... but I can buy you time."
Henrietta barely had time to comprehend his words before the Huntsman's axe came down in a brutal, unrelenting swing. The blade met the prince's chest with a sickening crunch, splitting flesh and bone in a spray of blood that spattered across the walls, staining the corridor with fresh crimson streaks. Prince Charming crumpled, his face twisted in an expression of eternal despair, his sword slipping from his fingers, clattering uselessly to the floor.
Rumpel's laughter filled the air — a mocking, gleeful sound that echoed off the walls, feeding on her horror, growing louder, consuming her in its malicious glee.
“Ha-ha-ha! U-ha-ha-ha”
The corridor stretched on endlessly, and with every painful step, new horrors came into view, twisted remnants of characters that had once been symbols of hope and innocence, now desecrated and displayed like warnings.
She stumbled past Cinderella's delicate glass slipper, now drenched in blood. It was still attached to a skeletal foot that dangled from a nail, the remaining flesh clinging to the bones in shreds. Her ball gown hung in tatters beside her, the fabric soaked in dark, sticky stains, its shimmer lost beneath layers of dirt and decay.
Further down, Tinkerbell's tiny, broken body was pinned to the wall like a butterfly in a twisted display. Once shimmering with iridescent light, her wings were torn and shredded, their edges blackened and charred. Her face was frozen in an expression of agony, her mouth open in a scream too small to be heard, her eyes wide with terror, her tiny hands reaching out as if trying to grasp the last fragments of hope.
Their gazes seemed to follow her, hollow and pleading, hands reaching, fingers curling, pulling her deeper into the nightmare.
A sudden, sharp pain tore through her side as the Huntsman's axe found her again, slicing through her flesh, and Henrietta's scream echoed down the hall, a raw, primal sound that mingled with the cries of the tortured figures around her. More black smoke poured from her wound, swirling around them as the Huntsman inhaled deeply, his face contorted in twisted ecstasy as he fed on her suffering, his body swelling, his skin stretching, his limbs elongating further, morphing into something monstrous and barely human.
As he drew closer, his steps heavy, she could feel the air thickening, her fear suffocating her, each breath a struggle as the darkness closed in. She was trapped in a corridor lined with the bodies of those who had come before, and their silent screams joined hers, filling the endless darkness with a symphony of despair.
Pain and exhaustion clouded Henrietta's vision, her thoughts fraying under the relentless assault. Shadows clawed at her mind, whispering promises of release and power, urging her to surrender to the darkness she had always secretly craved. She stumbled around a corner, her steps faltering as she caught sight of a cracked, foggy mirror on the wall. She peered into it and gasped; a twisted version of herself stared back, lips pulled into a wicked smirk, eyes dark and empty, a cold satisfaction gleaming in their depths.
"It's time, Henrietta." Rumpel's voice coiled through her mind, soft and inviting, a whisper of dark promises. "Let go. Let me in."
The words wrapped around her heart, steadying her breaths and dulling her pain as she felt something in her shift. In the mirror, her face twisted further, her lips curling into a malevolent grin, her eyes glinting with dark delight. Henrietta was deteriorating; the hunger gnawing through her veins was consuming the last vestiges of her humanity.
Miss Edwina Hyden emerged, her thoughts razor-sharp, her heartbeat slowing to a cold, measured rhythm. She turned, meeting the Huntsman's gaze with an icy calm, her smile widening as he faltered, recognizing the change. The Huntsman's axe lowered as he knelt, his monstrous form shrinking back, defeated by the darkness he had tried to feed.
As she strode past him, the twisted fairy tale creatures lining the walls bowed their heads in silent acknowledgment. They, too, recognized her transformation, a creature of shadows, a story of innocence lost and darkness embraced.
With a final glance at her reflection, where Dr. Jacqal's terrified face lingered, watching from beyond the glass, Miss Hyden smirked and disappeared, her laughter fading into the shadows. And the corridor, now silent and waiting, lay ready for the next soul to lose themselves in its twisted tales.
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This is excellent dramatic gorgy stuff. An orgy of gorge, nothing left behind in the pen. An X rated Shrek story. Your normal style comes through it all. Well done, Darvico!
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Thank you, John. I adapted a story about Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. From a female POV.
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You understand horror far too well.😱
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I read almost all Steven King books as a kid, watch hundreds of horror movies, so it's kind grow up with me. I get carried away (wrote 6 horror stories in a row) . Sorry for scaring you 😔.
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Did you recognise which story I did remake here?
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Was it Little Red Riding Hood? Not up on all horrific stories.
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Female Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde.
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Oops. Should have examined it again.
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