It was last summer
Sitting there
The green leaves of the canopy above
Cast over a face more beautiful than sunlight
Hands so gentle they weave moonlight
Into dreams
Lips softer than ferns and dew
In morning sunlight
As your angelic face
Stares into
The plainness of my own
Honey-colored eyes
Forever lost
Preserved
In the amber that surrounds your own
My eyes trace the fineness of your features
Each one unique
Like the points on a star
Casting halos
On even the most malevolent of creatures
The summer sun washes over us
Like the warmth of that familiar pink blanket
I see around your shoulders
While your perfectness lies in my arms
I've bought an identical copy
The same baby pink that adorns you
Under the sanctuary of your bed
Yet, for some reason
I prefer to lie with yours
We were sitting there
The cool mahogany wood surrounding my treehouse
Pressing into our backs
As we both stare up
At the cool blue of the sky
Of late noon
Cloud gazing
Finding miscellaneous shapes
Sizes
Pictures
People
Things
To make out amongst the blobs of white
You point at the largest of the few that line the sky
And we watch as the suns rays
Filter through it
Like Magic
You stand up
My calloused hands placed in those of an artists
And pull me along
Past mahogany wood
And the deep green of the ferns that surround
The atmosphere around us
And lead me to the clouds
Endless horizons of brilliant blue
The golden rays of the sun dance
Across your trusting smile
And we float there
Above it all
We float amongst the clouds for hours
Until
Vibrant hues of red splash against the horizon
The same shades of red that adorn
Your canvasses
And paint-splattered hands
As your hands weave the sunlight
Into the vast array of colors
That color my once so lonely
Dark
Rainy
Gloomy
Skies
Into something of light
Life!
Love
We spin through currents of wind
My hair flicking into my eyes
Sad I have to lose sight of you
Even for a moment
Stray leave caress our ankles
Twirling past large towns
The size of ants against the naked eyes
And continue
To Travel
Up
Up. past the hundreds of stories of skyscrapers
Up, past the polluted lakes that adorn our town
Up, higher than the birds
Up. higher than the tallest of evergreens!
We continue to fly amongst these things
Traveling deep into the troposphere
And far beyond
The galaxy surrounds us
You in my arms
The earth far below my feet
That have walked a hundred roads
And seen a thousand days
Without you
But, now we're here!
Dancing amongst the planets!
The earth a simple afterthought
You give me the moon
And I let it's roughness caress my long fingers
Staring deep into its craters
Each one a pool of memories
We've had
And are yet to create
The cosmos and nebulas bow to you!
Overwhelmed by your infallible grace
Beauty
Your laughter the tickling of bells!
It's soft against my ears
It's warmth envelopes my heart
Its bliss surrounds my soul
It's familiarity simply a blessing
It's a soulful laugh
Rich, and with meaning
The flavor of a thousand smiles
The color of the calmness of twilight
The scent of baking bread
And it makes me laugh too
For as seeing you happy
Makes me happy
And we both smile at that
You sprinkle stardust in my hair
It glitters like the stars in your eyes
No, there not reflecting those around us
They were already there
Burning brighter with passion
With every lovely grin
And bubble of laughter
That escapes my lips
And I feel it too
We fly past Saturn's rings
Taking just enough time
To give them a small nudge
And watch the spin
In slow motion
Around the huge planet
It plants an I love you on my lips
And a kiss on yours
As we continue our way through the cosmos
The coldness of space bites at my skin
Tiny flakes of frost align my fingertips
I shiver
But you, my darling
My sun
My star
My warmth and comfort
Take my hand in yours
And It all melts away
As you melt my heart
With your touch
The lights of the galaxy blind us
As you align the supernovas
And paint more stars
Into the darkness
Of my own night sky
With your long fingers
And teasing glances
That put the butterflies back into my stomach
And send my nerves compulsions of anticipation
For that long-awaited kiss
And hug
And your lips part into that beautiful, beautiful smile
I admire it so
You etch light into the darkness
As we continue to float
Up and up
Past the blinding lights of the milky way
Past the splashes of colors that dot our horizon
Past the thousands of constellations
Each one waving a sad goodbye
Each one sad to see you go
We reach the ever anticipated line of the heavens
And you let me go
The glossiness of tears brims your eyes
Sad you have to let me go
Sad I can't come with you
Sad you have to lose me
Yet, somehow
I'm happy for you
Tears in my eyes as I let you go
Watching you sob
As you take your rightful place
Amongst greatness
But, you leave me here
Floating aimlessly amongst the planets
Trying to find my way back home
Lost inside a sea of darkness
There are no stars
No light
No Bliss
You took it all away from me
Like how you took my heart
When you left
But I'll wait for you!
I'll wait for you to come back to me!
Rip your way through the heavens
And take me in your arms once more!
I'll wait for you!
Wait for my chance to join you
Among the podium of the great
I'll wait for you
I'll love for you
I'll wait!
I love you
Our memories
Forever preserved
In those amber eyes
I looked into
Not that long ago
And knew
That
You
Were
The
One
For
Me
To
Love
Authors Note: Special thanks to Rhondalise Mitza for the idea of not writing something morbid and sad. I'm pretty happy with the way this poem turned out and I hoped you enjoyed it. I'm dedicating it to my partner, who I'm so lucky to have and so happy to love.
Your friend,
A.
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Once again fantastic story! Love your writing! I love the poetic touch <3 Great idea for the prompt P.s think you could check out my new story "Promises are Broken?" That'd be most appreciated :)
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Thank you and definitely! Sincerely, A.
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Wonderful, descriptive, and warming my heart. Here is a heart<3
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Beautifully written ! well done. Do you mind reading my stories and give me feedback?
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Of course! I'm a bit busy right now though, but I'd love to check them out later! Sincerely, A.
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I love the intricate details you placed in the poem to feel and understand it, not just read it. Keep writing!
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Thank you! Sincerely, A.
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this was so good! i loved how you decided to write in verse for this prompt - such a great idea, and i think it paid off extremely well! i loved all of your imagery and space metaphors (i am such a sucker for anything that has to do with space symbolism or metaphors), and there is just something about your writing here that makes me feel extremely nostalgic. this part was my favorite, i think, but all of it was extremely well-done: But, now we're here! / Dancing amongst the planets! / The earth a simple afterthought / You give me the moo...
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Thank you, Courtney! -A.
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The reason I am so awed is that I know I can't write a 500 word poem, not to talk of 1000+! And it's actually really beautiful! Say do you mind checking out my new mystery story called "Her Dark Brown Eyes" ? Thanks!
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Thanks and I will! I do hope that you realized you posted the same comment ten times...right? Sincerely, A.
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Ooooooops 😁😁
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This is a wonderfully written poem. Loved reading it! Also, would you mind checking my recent story out, "Red, Blue, White"? Thank you!
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Thank you and I did! Sincerely, A.
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This is wonderful. Have I told you before that you are one of many authors on Reedsy for who's work(s) I look forward too? This is very, very sweet. I love it. Mind checking out my new story and sharing your views on it? Thanks.
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Batool, thank you so much! You're so sweet and so talented and I'd love to check out your story! Sincerely, A>
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Ahhh, I'm so proud of you! You did it and it was beautiful and I can see how much you love your partner through your wonderful poetry. My best to both of you, and maybe keep writing like this, I don't know... I just really enjoyed seeing a different side of your writing! I did poetry this week too for a prompt and if you could check it out that would be fantastic. It's kind of the opposite of this poem, though. Ah, it was so great. I'm happy I challenged that this week. :)
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Thank you! I normally don't write 1,012-word poems so this was new to me. I'll make sure to tell them that you send your love and I'd love to check out your poem! Sincerely, A.
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