Rain lashed against the windows, and the strong wind howled down the chimneys. It was cozy inside the library but the inhabitants still shivered as a breeze blew across the room. The fire had long ago died.
Despite the thick curtains, they could all sense the thick fog surrounding them, almost as if the moor was penetrating into the house.
Madame Kiri coughed and cleared her throat. It turned into a racking, chesty hack which she tried to stifle with the sleeve of her dress. The rich embroidery on the material was quickly dampened.
“Now then," she croaked, placing both her hands onto the table in front of her," let’s all place our hands together, fingertip to fingertip.”
One by one, they placed their hands on the table top.
The green velvet felt smooth and cool, as the tips of their little fingers all touched.
Pulling a face, the man closest to Madame Kiri gingerly touched her.
Glaring at him, her voice now it’s normal, rich tones, she called out,” Are their any spirits out there? Do not hesitate; we are all your friends!”
The wind howled louder.
There never seemed to be good weather on the moors, but this was different. Almost as if the wind was alive, savage.
Madame Kiri cleared her throat again,” Spirits! Talk to us!”
The old fashioned gas lights ensconced either side of the heavy, wooden mantel, flickered. The shadows around the room became darker, heavier.
Looking around her, Madame Kiri frowned.
“There is some one here who doesn’t believe," she whispered. " The spirits sense this. They will not appear.”
Guiltily, they glanced at each other.
Clearly none of them believed.
Closing her eyes, Madame Kiri moved her head from side to side, almost as if someone was holding her.
A low hum came from her mouth.
It was a tune that none of them recognized.
The man stared at her before looking at the others.
“ Is she alright, do you think?” he mouthed silently to them.
One of the ladies shrugged, the worn lace shawl slipping slightly off her shoulders as she did. Shivering, she moved one of her hands from the table and wrapped it more tightly around herself.
“And what do you think you’re doing?”
The lady jumped.
Madame Kiri’s eyes were open and fixed on her, but it hadn’t been her voice.
“Well,’ she repeated, her head still moving from side to side,’ what do you think you’re doing?”
“Erm, I was just moving….”
“No!’ Madame Kiri yelled, her voice echoing around them,’ no one breaks the circle!”
The gas lights flickered again, and then extinguished. The room was left in darkness.
Those gathered around the table collectively shivered, and seemed to move closer together.
“The spirits are with us,” Madame Kiri whispered.
Silently, the shadows seemed to press closer, as if they were trying to peer over their shoulders.
The lady glanced behind her slowly. The shadow that had been behind her, moved away.
She gasped, old sweat covering her skin.
“I think I’m going to faint,” she whispered, but either no one heard, or no one cared. They were all silently waiting.
“There are many of them here tonight," Madame Kiri again whispered." I sense them, all around”.
A crash of thunder sounded above them, making them all jump.
“Oh this is ridiculous,” the man said, standing up.
They could hear him as he stumbled around the room, crashing against furniture and knocking books off of the shelves. Several of the people screamed.
The room suddenly became light again as he reignited the gas lights. The shadows retreated.
The lady sniffed as the strong odour reached her,” Should it smell that much?”
“The spirits have much to tell us,’ Madame Kiri said, her eyes focused on the table,’ they mention the gas. It should not be lit.”
Rolling his eyes, the man strolled around the table, his hands fishing in his waistcoat pocket for his pocket watch,” Enough already! There are no spirits!”
The gas lights flickered again and, as a peal of thunder echoed across the night skies, extinguished once more.
The lady screamed.
“Oh no,’ she sobbed, fumbling for her handkerchief,’ my nerves can’t stand this.”
“The spirits are scared. They know something is about to happen.”
The man moved towards one of the windows, obviously determined to ignore her, and peered behind the curtain.
His body stiffened and, as he turned to face them, his face became deathly white.
“No one look outside,” he muttered.
“What? Why not?” the lady said, tears trickling down her cheeks.
“There’s nothing there.”
The lady leapt up from her seat, her long skirts swirling around her legs, and looked outside.
The fog was pressing up against the windows. She couldn’t even see her own reflection against the glass.
“Spirits!” Madame Kiri groaned. Her chin was now resting against her chest.
The man tutted in impatience.
He reached out to touch her shoulder, but his hand passed straight through her.
Madame Kiri shivered,” They’re confused. They don’t know what is happening.”
The man stared around him, wildly.
“What is happening?” he asked the lady.
“I don’t know.”
She twisted her hands together and looked back at the circle of people. There were already people sitting where they had been.
“Where did they come from?”
“This isn’t funny!" the man yelled, his face turning red. "Stop it!”
Bright light dazzled them both as the room lit up.
Neither one of them recognized the torches that the people around the table had switched on.
“Well, that was a bit disappointing, wasn’t it?” one of the people said, stretching his hands high above his head.
“They were here,” Madame Kiri said, resentfully, as she started to pack her belongings.
The man nodded,” It’s okay, we believe you.”
He winked at his companions.
“Hey, what about us?” the man yelled, leaping around the table, and running his hands through his hair until it stood on end.
Slowly, everyone left the room, leaving the man and lady standing in the dark.
“What was that about?” he whispered.
Lightning lit up the sky and the room.
The lady gasped.
The walls were blackened, the furniture charred and the wall where the gas lights had been, were large holes that the wind howled through relentlessly.
“You don’t think….”
The man nodded,” Yes. I guess there really were spirits present tonight.”
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Great story! Loved the twist at the end and well-written! Excellent descriptions and tone! I loved the lady's character, how she reacts strongly with the events of the story. Amazing work, keep writing!:)
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Thanks so much dalyane
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Oh, I love this! That twist at the end was awesome. I wasn't expecting it at all. You have a wonderfully descriptive voice and skill, and I felt myself sink into this story. A few very tiny grammar/mechanical fixes with dialogue: “Now then,’ she croaked, placing both her hands onto the table in front of her,’ let’s all place our hands together, fingertip to fingertip.” --Instead, should be: “Now then,” she croaked, placing both her hands onto the table in front of her, “let’s all place our hands together, fingertip to fingertip.” ...
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Thanks so much Lina. I've made the changes you suggested. I've always enjoyed reading ghost stories. Would love to write a novel about one, one day
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I absolutely believe you can––would love to read it!
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Thanks. By the way, I read your joke in your bio to my husband. He loved it 😁
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That made my day––glad someone enjoyed it lol! :D
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Thank you for writing this story. It's never easy knowing if you're at a real seance or a fake one. So many fakes probably obscure the existence of the real ones. Have I ever *been* to a seance? No. But I've heard about many of the fake ones. It's easy to fool gullible people with what they expect to see and hear. The real thing is probably stranger than the fake ones are. Years ago, a Christian friend once told me, "We live in a strange and wonderful universe created by a strange and wonderful God." I still agree with that statemen...
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Thanks for the comments. I love stories that are spooky.would like to write the perfect one
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You accidentally clicked twice on the blue REPLY button (it doesn't react the normal way right now; the blue UPDATE button, however, is still working normally). To make it easier for you to know which duplicate message to delete, I chose this one to reply to. You can delete the next copy of your message without accidentally deleting my reply message also. You're welcome. When your character said "There's nothing out there", it reminded me of the second-to-last scene in the "Jonathan Hoag" story. The wife asks the husband (his name isn't...
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Thanks for that. I haven't read the story but it sounds interesting.
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It most definitely is. I think that many of Heinlein's 1973 and earlier stories and books are better than his later ones. He seemed to be more willing to take risks and let his imagination go wherever it wanted to. Even if it sometimes meant writing about things that his editor at Astounding Stories did like but hoped that he wouldn't write about again. If it'd been left up to me, I would've told Heinlein in the 1940s, "Write about whatever you want to write about. Just as long as you also edit them sufficiently before submitting them t...
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Very riveting, moved nicely forward to an interesting conclusion. Really enjoyed it!
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Thank you joey
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Nice twist. I thought the story was going somewhere completely different, with the man who got up being the accomplice to Madame Kiri, and the twist being that there were actually spirits around...the revelation at the end was so concise and abrupt that it caught me off guard. This was a fun ghost story, where the tragedy wasn't front and center but the mystery was. Thank you for sharing it!
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Thanks for the comments ray 👻
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Great story. Excellently written and superb ending! Amazing job!
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Thanks so much Chris
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