โHey, just relax. Itโs okay. Youโre doing great. Iโve got you.โ
โDonโt let me fall- you canโt let me fall!โ
โI wonโt let you fall, all right? Ow, your fingers...Stop looking down! Everything's fine, just hold on to me.โ
โItโs s-s-s-so f-f-far down.โ
โItโs gonna be okay! Do you trust me not to let you fall?โ
โYes...Ah! Iโm slipping! Lucas!โ
โYouโre not slipping, itโs alright. Weโre alright.โ
โIt...itโs pulling me, Lucas! I donโt know if I can hold on without bringing you down too.โ
โIf we go down, we go down together. We will come back together, as well. Geez, Ry, stop gripping my fingers so hard, you're gonna break emโฆโ
โIโm sorry, okay? Iโm scared. You canโt hold on to me forever.โ
โI donโt have to. Iโm gonna hold on until help comes.โ
โI...My foot! Lu, somethingโs got my foot! Itโs pulling! You have to let me go! Youโre not gonna die because of me!โ
โI would have died many times over if not for you, Ry. If Iโm going to die anytime soon, it will be for you. Iโm not going to let you go, ever. I wonโt give up on you.โ
โOkay, Lucas.โ
โWe go together, Ry.โ
Four hours earlier
โCome on, Lu, we donโt have all day!โ
โYouโre right, we have all week. Let me sleep, Ry.โ
โGet up get up get up!โ
โFine, fine, stop throwing pillows at me! I said fine!โ
โSorry.โ
โHmph.โ
Twenty minutes later
โTook you long enough, Lu.โ
โShut up, Ry.โ
โI donโt shut up, I grow up. And when I look at you, I throw up. Blegh!โ
โIf only you werenโt such a Stand by Me fanatic.โ
โWhat? Itโs a great movie, and you know it!โ
โAnyway, where to?โ
โUm, how about...do they have movie theatres here?โ
โOf course they do! Itโs Great Britain, Ry, not a third world country.โ
โ...โ
โLetโs just go.โ
โThe movie theatres are so nice here!โ
โDuh, Ry, I already told you, itโs not a third world country.โ
โMega hush, itโs starting.โ
โMega hush? What is that supposed to mean?โ
โIt means you need to do a mega hush. Shhhhhhhhhhh!โ
โYou are impossible.โ
โYouโre even more impossible.โ
โWell, youโre-โ
โSHHHHHHHHHHHH!โ
โOkay, okay.โ
โWhat next?โ
โAh, itโs so bright out here.โ
โYeah. There's a thing right there. Itโs called the sun.โ
โYeah, Lu, I know.โ
โSo, where to?โ
โHow about the ice cream shop over there? That looks good.โ
โAlright.โย
โAh, this is so good. I donโt think Iโve ever had anything that could top this.โ
โNot even my grandmaโs homemade ice cream?โ
โUhโฆโ
โThe pain. It hurts, so much.โ
โHa-โ
โWhy...the groundโฆโ
โYouโre right, those cracks...MOVE, LU!โ
โOw, why did you shove me?โ
โSink-โ
โRY! NO!โ
โSlippingโฆโ
โOh no, you must have hit your head on the table...thatโs a big sinkholeโฆโ
โSlippingโฆโ
โIโve got you...Iโve got your hands, I wonโt let goโฆโ
โSlipping.โ
โRy, donโt look behind you! Look at me. Looking behind you wonโt help anything.โ
โDonโt let me go, Lu. Donโt drop me.โ
Present
โHey, just relax. Itโs okay. Youโre doing great. Iโve got you.โ
โDonโt let me fall- you canโt let me fall!โ
โI wonโt let you fall, all right? Ow, your fingers...Stop looking down! Everything's fine, just hold on to me.โ
โItโs s-s-s-so f-f-far down.โ
โItโs gonna be okay! Do you trust me not to let you fall?โ
โYes...Ah! Iโm slipping! Lucas!โ
โYouโre not slipping, itโs alright. Weโre alright.โ
โIt...itโs pulling me, Lucas! I donโt know if I can hold on without bringing you down too.โ
โIf we go down, we go down together. We will come back together, as well. Geez, Ry, stop gripping my fingers so hard, you're gonna break emโฆโ
โIโm sorry, okay? Iโm scared. You canโt hold on to me forever.โ
โI donโt have to. Iโm gonna hold on until help comes.โ
โI...My foot! Lu, somethingโs got my foot! Itโs pulling! You have to let me go! Youโre not gonna die because of me!โ
โI would have died many times over if not for you, Ry. If Iโm going to die anytime soon, it will be for you. Iโm not going to let you go, ever. I wonโt give up on you.โ
โOkay, Lucas.โ
โI donโt know if I can hold on much longer.โ
โT-thatโs alright.โ
โOof.โ
โAre you okay, Ry?โ
โYeah, Iโm fine. That was just a hard fall. Are you okay?โ
โI landed on my arm and...itโs killing me. I think it might be broken.โ
โWhy did you fall with me?โ
โBecause I love you, Ry. You know that.โ
โYou love me enough to die for me?โ
โYes.โ
โHardcore.โ
โAlrighty, now how do we get out of this sinkhole?โ
โThereโs a path, over there.โ
โWe canโt follow that. It may be unstable.โ
โWell, itโs not like we can climb out, can we? This hole is a hundred feet deep!โ
โThen weโll just wait for help.โ
News report: London, England, 11/25/19
โAction.โ
โHello, this is Reyna Lewis with London News Three. Weโre here at the scene where a large sinkhole has opened up, and swallowed two customers of the coffee shop. Rescue workers are working to secure the area to rescue them.ย
โEfforts will continue, so for now avoid the area. This has been Reyna Lewis for London News Three, London, England.โ
โCut!โ
Twenty five minutes later
โGah!โ
โLu, are you okay?โ
โItโs just my arm.โ
โHey! Weโre gonna get you guys out of there! Weโve finished making sure the area is secure! Grab onto the rope!โ
โSee you up there. Are you gonna be okay, climbing with your arm?โย
โIโll manage.โ
News report: London, England, 11/25/19
โAction.โ
โThis is Reyna Lewis, London News Three, here to provide an update on the sinkhole situation. The two people who were in the sinkhole have been rescued. Only one sustained injuries, a broken arm, but they were otherwise unharmed. Reportedly, they were both Americans, and will be headed home early tomorrow. This has been Reyna Lewis for London News Three.โ
โCut!โ
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Hey loved the story so much Carolina! I can tell the story prompts worked! :)
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Thanks Haripriya!
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Your welcome Carolina! :)
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I apologize not only to all of you for reading this, but to the story itself, this is really terrible... I used "Write Now" story prompt cards to help me with this. Theyre really awesome!
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awww, it was stilll awesome :D loved it a lot, Carolina!!
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๐ Thanks!
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yeah!! :D
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:))))))))))
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Well, the plus point is that you achieved a tale using conversation only. The negative is that the story is a bit lame and forced.
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yeah. this was a hard one. thanks for stopping by :)
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Amazing story, Carolina!!! Great choice having the beginning be the climax of the story, it was super gripping. The plot was unique, and you definitely made the all dialogue prompt work well. Nice job!!! :D
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Thank you so much!
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No problem! :)
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what a creative side to the prompt. i absolutely loved the plot twist laced into the middle! i should take some notes from you. :)
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thank you!
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