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Adventure Fantasy

Hey all!!


Here is a little something I decided would be fun to try to write: a choose your own adventure! This is just something I put together over the last week or so, and it is by no means completely done. Think of it as a part one. I would really appreciate it if you took the time to complete it (it will take like 10 minutes tops). It would be amazing if you also told me what you thought about it and what path you ended up on in the comments! (It’s really obvious at the top of the slide what path you took- it’s a number/letter combination, like 3a-1). Hereβ€˜s the link: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1G7Zu4tgBr6ADkoREZgMEm-n_geA5KAvAo0K0y2c1DCU/edit?usp=sharing


** If you don't know what a CYOA is, here is a definition: An interactiveΒ book or visual novelΒ written from a second person point of view, with the reader assuming the role of theΒ protagonistΒ and making choices that determine the main character's actions and the plot's outcome.




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Dhwani Jain
14:23 Aug 06, 2021

Hey, Are you here, Katie?

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on the document? No, but i can be

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Dhwani Jain
14:43 Aug 06, 2021

Waiting there...

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Sia S
11:31 Jun 30, 2021

Whens the next part????? Im stuck on the dang cliffhanger sis

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Rosie 95
17:44 Jun 28, 2021

This is wonderful! I love it!

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Thank you for reading!I really appreciate it, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Out of curiosity, what path did you end up on?

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Rosie 95
00:52 Jun 30, 2021

ummm... The red flower one.... At the end, I ended up at 3B-2

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Dhwani Jain
03:35 Jun 28, 2021

When are you going to write more stories? Would love to read more...

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Well I have been pretty busy writing Trapped (the novel I think I sent you the first few chapters of a while ago…?). And I haven’t been feeling very inspired. Really, I should try to do a story for this week or next week. But, I can send you the full Trapped document if you would like. It’s kind of long (about 80 pages I think?) and 35000ish words. You don’t have to, it’s just an offer. And I cannot tell you how much it means to me that you want to read more of my writing! 😁

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Dhwani Jain
15:48 Jun 28, 2021

Yeah... I read some of it. Okay. Um, maybe not now....Will ask for it though when I'm free to read :) Yeah...what can I say, I like to read (I think everyone here does :) ) I don't think I asked these: --> Where are you from? --> Would you ever like to do a collaboration with me?

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In response to the first question, I want to keep some privacy on this website, so I haven't told anybody on Reedsy where I am from... But for the second question, I would love to! That would be really fun! :)

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Dhwani Jain
16:08 Jun 28, 2021

Okay...no problem. Sure, we can do it soon. Just email me through this: https://djdhwanijain.wordpress.com/contact/

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So, I clicked the link, and it looks like I have to put in my personal email? I am so sorry, this must be getting a little annoying, but I don't like giving out my private email, either...😬 However, I have done some collabs through Reedsy comments, though. We can do that, if you are willing to try it...

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Dhwani Jain
03:30 Jun 28, 2021

Hey Katie, Thanks for the character, I will use it in the Aqua's Squad or in some other story. No, there is no problem with your answers ;) I might change it a bit to fit the story....

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Okie! That’s fine! :)

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Dhwani Jain
14:43 Jun 28, 2021

Yes, any new story soon?

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Esther :)
23:39 Jun 26, 2021

OOOOH!!! That was sooo fun can't wait until you come up with a part 2!!!

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Hey Esther! Thank you so much for doing it! I’m glad you enjoyed it! :) Just wondering- which path did you end up on?

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Esther :)
17:07 Jun 27, 2021

FIRE!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Nice! The fire is pretty cool… :)

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00:49 Jul 02, 2021

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Ahh thank you so much for the dolphins!!! <3 Oh, Trapped is the novel I'm currently writing about a girl transported to a land of gargoyles. If you want to read it, I can send you the link to the first few chapters. Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!! It's SUCH an amazing movie though! I'm still singing "Rewrite the Stars" and "The Other Side" four years later.

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19:40 Jul 02, 2021

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Awesome!! Here is the link to the first three chapters: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-bnObqCdNkVj8drp1KdZqipOUt3dANWbjtGFwem_joc/edit If you want to read more later, just let me know! :)

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01:58 Jul 03, 2021

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I added the next few chapters to the same document. :) I appreciate you reading the chapters! Also- I also love HSM- but the first and third ones are the best.

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