The Secret Organisation { part 4 }

Submitted into Contest #58 in response to: Write a story where the power goes out on a spaceship or submarine.... view prompt

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Adventure Thriller Mystery

As the days past by, the mission came up.


The mission is that Kane Richard was going to Atlantis with his companion Hannibal Lectre, but Hannibal was the best agent of Spectre.


They were going to Atlantis after a week.


Mr. Bond went to Amogh's cabin.


"There is a serious mission."


"What's the mission?"


"The mission is that Kane Richard the son of Luke Richard is going on an adventure to Atlantis."


"So what's the harm?"


"The harm is that Luke Richard organized an audition to select a companion, who will go with Kane. The companion which was selected is Hannibal Lectre, the best agent of Spectre. He is going there to take all the treasure of Atlantis."


"What is Spectre?"


"Spectre is an evil organization formed by Mr. Ernst Stavro Blofeld, Mr. Auric Goldfinger, Mr. Jaws, Mr. Alec Trevelyan, Mr. Francisco Scaramanga, Mr. Le Chiffre, and Mr. Dr. No."


"Oh, I see. So, let's start planning."


"Let's go to the research room."


The went to the research room.


"By the way Mr. Bond, how many days are left for the mission?"


"We have just a week for the mission."


" If I am not wrong, Atlantis should be in the Atlantic Ocean?"


"Yes, but we will follow what the Greek Philosopher Plato has mentioned, that Atlantis is located in the Strait of Gibraltar”


"We would need a submarine for following the submarine of Kane."


"Yes, I have told the designer to make a submarine which could be driven, it could fly and it could go inside the ocean."


"Can you add one more thing in the submarine?"


"What?"


"Can you add some weapons in it?"


"Yes, I will."


The days past by.


Two days were left for the mission.


They started collecting the instruments, which were required.


The submarine's design was ready. The mechanic started developing the submarine.


It was the day for the mission.


They went inside the submarine and touched the flying button. The wheels went inside and the wings came outside.


Their journey started.


"Mr. Bond, how we will follow the submarine of Kane?"


"Don't worry yesterday night I went to their house and stuck a tracking device on their submarine. So, where they will go I will get their location."


"That's good."


They tracked Kane's submarine.


They got a notification that Kane has gone underwater.


They also went underwater.


When they went into the water, there was a huge splash!


Some ice-bergs came in front of them. They used the torpedo to blat them.


Suddenly, a huge ice-berg came in front of them. They couldn't launch the torpedo. It hit the submarine and the power of the submarine was cut off.


They were worried, how would they complete the mission.


Mr. Bond went to check the batteries.


There he saw that the batteries were working but because of the hit, the wires had got some issues. They needed a huge amount of current to start the submarine again.


He went into the pilot cabin.


"Amogh we need a huge amount of current to restart the submarine."


They started thinking about how could they get the current.


At that time a huge electric eel was passing their submarine.


Mr. Bond saw it and got an idea.


"Amogh bring the extra wires and connect with the batteries then attach to a poll. The pole should be electric proof."


Amogh did the preparation.


"But why did you want all these instruments?"


"I need it to start the submarine."


"How?"


"Can you see the electric eel?"


"Yes, what will you do with it?"


"I will go outside and stand on the submarine. Then when the eel would be passing again that time I will point the pole towards the. So, when the eel will touch it the current will flow inside the wires and reach the batteries. Then the submarine will start."


"What if you are injured?"


"If I get injured, you go according to our plan."


"Ok."


Mr. Bond went outside.


The electric was coming towards them but Mr. Bond could not connect the pole with the eel.


He was thinking how would the eel come towards me.


He got an idea. He threw an ice-berg towards the eel. The eel was furious and came towards Mr. Bond.


When the eel came toward the pole, Mr. Bond connected the pole with the eel. The current came and the submarine started but unfortunately Mr. Bond also got current and he died.


Amogh remembered what Mr. Bond told him, that if I get injured please go according to the plan.


He saw the tracking device and followed the other submarine. 


He saw that they reached Atlantis. They were collecting the treasure.


Amogh wears his scuba gear and goes outside. He went inside the submarine of Kane and hide a place where no one cant's find him.


He stayed there till Hannibal doesn't show his real face.


Hannibal was going to trick Kane and go to his headquarters, that time Amogh jumped out from his place and shot him on his head.


"Who are you?"


"I will tell you, first take me to your home."


They reached Kane's home.


Luke had many questions in his mind.


He started asking one by one.


"Who are you?"

"Where is Hannibal?"


"Hannibal is dead."

"I am an agent of MI6."


"Who killed Hannibal?"


"I killed Hannibal because he was an agent of Spectre."


"What is Spectre?"


"Spectre is an evil organization formed by Mr. Ernst Stavro Blofeld, Mr. Auric Goldfinger, Mr. Jaws, Mr. Alec Trevelyan, Mr. Francisco Scaramanga, Mr. Le Chiffre, and Mr. Dr. No."


"Who are they?"


"They are the evil people who destroy everything."


"Thanks for saving my child."


"Don't say thanks, it's my work."


"What's your name?"


"My name is Amogh."


Amogh went to the headquarters of MI6.


There he told the full incident. He also told how Mr. Bond died.


The days past by. Amogh had killed Mr. Ernst Stavro Blofeld, Mr. Auric Goldfinger, Mr. Jaws, Mr. Alec Trevelyan, Mr. Francisco Scaramanga, Mr. Le Chiffre, and Mr. Dr. No. 


Then all the evil people had died and MI6 was closed.




















September 07, 2020 07:48

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Corey Melin
01:26 Sep 08, 2020

Very entertaining read. I would say to leave a crack open just in case you want to write stories about M16 in the future. Maybe Bond gets resurrected? Well done.

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Amogh Kasat
02:02 Sep 08, 2020

If a prompts comes I can do some changes

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00:32 Sep 08, 2020

Love the reference to Plato! But sad that Mr. Bond met his end...

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Amogh Kasat
02:01 Sep 08, 2020

thanks

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Lynn Penny
20:31 Sep 07, 2020

Wow! What an end to the series! Great job.

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Amogh Kasat
02:01 Sep 08, 2020

thanks

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18:55 Sep 07, 2020

Hello, Amogh! This was a great ending story to the James Bond series! It upset me that James died, but the fact that Amogh (from the story) was able to carry on the mission was amazing. Also, the additional detail of Amogh defeating all of the other villains was awesome. Overall, this story was magnificent! Keep writing and stay healthy, Brooke D.

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Amogh Kasat
02:00 Sep 08, 2020

thanks

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21:05 Sep 09, 2020

No problem!

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Lily Kingston
14:10 Sep 07, 2020

I like bond's quick thinking to start the submarine--though I'm sad he did die. keep up the good work and keep writing!!

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Amogh Kasat
15:53 Sep 07, 2020

thanks

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Nandan Prasad
13:36 Sep 07, 2020

This is a great ending to an enjoyable series. But one thing I noticed, you've written 'The days past by' for 'The days passed by.' You might want to change that, but otherwise, great story and keep writing! Also, I read some of your previous requests for upvotes, so I have done that for a couple of your stories. I would appreciate it if you could do the same. Thanks!

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Amogh Kasat
15:52 Sep 07, 2020

ty thanks

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12:27 Sep 07, 2020

Ooh, nice 4th part! Good jo!

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Amogh Kasat
15:50 Sep 07, 2020

thanks

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Doubra Akika
11:15 Sep 07, 2020

A very wonderful way to end the quartet! I think you could do a bit more with showing and not telling but, you still have a while to edit. Just a few suggestions... The went to the research room. I think this line is a bit unneccesary, but maybe it's just my opinion. If you choose to leave it, you should change the to they. So, where they will go I will get their location." This should be so, wherever they go, I will get their location." Overall the idea you had with the prompt was great! Keep writing! Hope you're staying safe!

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Amogh Kasat
15:49 Sep 07, 2020

Thanks and I will work on it

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Doubra Akika
16:01 Sep 07, 2020

My pleasure!

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B. W.
22:50 Oct 22, 2020

i'll give this a 10/10 :)

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13:18 Oct 08, 2020

Awesome story! Does this sound right, "Mr. Dr. No."? I think it's just "Dr. No" no "Mr" in it. But anyway, it great! PS. Would you care to read my new story? Thanks!

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Amogh Kasat
02:10 Oct 09, 2020

Thanks and sure

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B. W.
22:42 Sep 28, 2020

Okay, this was a good story and i think that you did a great job with it. i'm not really that good at giving advice but mine should be that you should continue to make more stories. though really only when you aren't busy or if you can think of ideas for a story. So do ya want to know what i'm gonna go ahead and give this story? a 10/10 :)

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Amogh Kasat
15:19 Sep 29, 2020

Thanks

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B. W.
15:21 Sep 29, 2020

No problem ^^ if it's alright could ya maybe help me with something?

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Keerththan 😀
02:57 Sep 24, 2020

Hey Amogh, I have written a new story. Please read it if you can buy some time.

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Amogh Kasat
14:32 Sep 24, 2020

Yes I will but after sometine

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Keerththan 😀
14:40 Sep 24, 2020

Okay!

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Jesna Anna S.
10:52 Sep 07, 2020

Nice story! Keep writing!

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Amogh Kasat
15:49 Sep 07, 2020

thanks

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Hriday Saboo
10:51 Oct 08, 2020

Pls read my new story

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Amogh Kasat
02:10 Oct 09, 2020

ok

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Hriday Saboo
07:21 Sep 27, 2020

Hey Amogh I think you should remove that question from ur bio abt reading ur stories. Its not appropriate to ask such a question to anyone. And if u still want to keep it,its upto u And it’s stories not srories

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