Write about two characters who both want what the other has, without knowing the feeling is mutual.

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“Confused cravings” by Christopher Albert

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“And he scores again!! Folks, Deshawn Teele just might be the best player who’ll ever touch this field!”. “Shawny, why don’t ya take a seat and grab some water.” Coach Warner said as he clapped me on the back. I sat down and closed my eyes for a second; the crowd’s cheering suddenly evaporated. I opened them again; no longer was I sitting on the steel slab of victory that was the Gramble high varsity soccer team’s bench. I was lying on my bed, the sun’s rays awakening me to yet another day of alienation and loneliness, the only excitement an...

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“Eye of the Beholder” by Greg Short

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Lucy moved her hand slowly, her eyes fixed on her pout lips, trying hard to control her breathing. She wanted her lipstick to be perfect, but the wine had already gone to her head. She knew she would have to slow down, but the wine was giving her the courage to go through with it. Satisfied, she dropped the lipstick back in her bag and kissed the air, smiling at her reflection in the mirror. She gave her little black top a tug and readjusted herself, to show a little more cleavage. She had been much less provocative when Dean made a move bef...

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“Second Thoughts” by Kevin Quin

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Second Thoughts I never had second thoughts. He had just bought a new, up to date, 70” smart television set, so I had to get a bigger one. It was inevitable that I would outdo him. I always did. Like the wristwatch he bought. It was fantastic and did everything but make a cup of tea! It forecast the weather, had the internet, and even told the time and date! I had to get a better one. It was difficult but the research paid off and I bought a state-of-the-art smart watch. It answered questions, searched the internet, and connected to my TV an...

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“Goodie Basket” by Kevin Herrmann

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I wanted to drop the basket of goodies into a trash bin. But that might be noticeable. Especially at a hospital, which would seem to make the gesture all the more heinous, when such a kind gift could bring a much-needed smile to any number of people here. I decided to hold onto it, even though it felt heavier as the moments passed. I did, however, make a thin slice of an opening which allowed me to extract and indulge in some sweet treats. And why not? I was hungry and needed something to do. After being involuntarily volunteered to deliver ...

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“Two Peas in a Messed Up Pod” by Ashlyn Oboyle

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Every superhero story that you have seen or read about has two distinct roles: the Hero and the Villain. The Hero is viewed as hope, security, loyalty, and love, and stands as a symbol of protection against those that wish to bring harm. The Villain is regarded as evil, tricky, rude, irresponsible, and violent, and creates an environment meant to be hostile for everyone. Yet, the one detail nobody ever considers, is what if there are Heroes and Villains with the opposite qualities? Are they still considered “good” or “evil”, or does it becom...

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“THE CRYSTAL DAISY an THE MINI HORSES IN THE PRAIERIE” by Mara Masolini

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THE CRYSTAL DAISY and THE MINI HORSES in THE PRAIRIE From some months in the house in front of Clara’s, which had remained uninhabited for years, after a terrible crime that had been committed there ____a child of three years had been killed by his mother, who smashed the child head with a pan _____Julie, an elegant and good-looking forty year woman had come to live with her daughter Angie, a little girl of nine years. Angie was very pretty, and she was also lame. She and Peter, Clara ‘s son, ...

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“Perspectives” by Whitney Devor

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I walk into the kitchen to find a Post-It note on my coffee cup that says I love you. I used to think it was romantic, now I just see it as a cop out—Frank’s way of sweeping anything unresolved between us under the rug. But the rug can only cover so much. For weeks I’ve been trying to conjure up those feelings of excitement and passion that I know I used to feel for Frank. There was a day early on in our marriage, after an unusually harsh winter, that felt like spring and we were itching to get out of the house. I made bologna sandwich...

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“Mirror, Mirror” by Lorilyn Roberts

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DR. WILLIAM CHRISTENSEN pulled up to the beach house with his wife and two daughters. “We’re here,” he exclaimed. He turned off the engine and pointed. “And the house is right on the ocean,” His teenage daughters squealed. “Go check it out. Your mom and I will join you later.” The girls leaped out of the car. William winked at his wife. “That didn’t take too much convincing.” She surveyed the sandy shoreline and clipping waves in the distance. “It’s a dream come true. One week away from everything.” William nodded. “With my brother and his f...

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“Core Memory ” by Abigail Rae

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It shouldn't have bothered him. Cole grabbed a blade of grass and absent-mindedly pulled it apart. He was sitting on the lawn in front of his house. The sun was burning at its highest peak and the stillness of summer kept his mouth parched. He held a flask in his hands- twirling the contents before deciding to quench his thirst. He glanced at his watch again, annoyed that his last days of freedom had no urgency in his friend's mind. Twenty minutes late, he thought to himself as he heard the heavy breathing and light footsteps head...

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“On The House” by Kasey Kirchner

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A pale orange square-handled coffee mug sat on the counter in front of Nina as she sketched, completely oblivious to the din of the diner. “One slice of cherry pie, fresh out of the oven,” said Jess, the pregnant 32-year-old server. She placed a speckled blue plate with a slice of sweet, steaming pie on the counter. “I didn’t order that,” said Nina, not bothering to look up from her sketchbook. Despite being almost forty, she spoke with the tone of a teenager. “Eat it. It’s on the house,” said Jess, a hint of motherly irritati...

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“Decisions, Decisions” by ER Castaneda

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“Hey, Davis! Boss said he needs that pitch by 8 tomorrow morning.” Steven sighed. It was already just past 10PM and he was putting the finishing touches on another ad campaign, thinking he’d finally get to head home at a reasonable time tonight. But with this new deadline, he’d definitely have to pull an all-nighter. “Thanks Michael. Looks like I’m staying here tonight.” “Sucks,” said Michael, “but this is the life we signed up for! I’m meeting up with a couple of the...

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“SPOT THE DIFFERENCE” by Brian Bywater

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SPOT the DIFFERENCE I am not jealous, I am envious. Jealousy is when you worry someone will take what you have. Envy is wanting what someone else has. What I feel is envy. Homer Simpson. “You are not jealous Jeannette. What you are is envious.” “There is a difference?” “In this case, yes. You are not jealous of Martha, but you are envious of the fact she moved into the house next door, the one you originally wanted to buy.” “I think I am both. Can you be both at the same time? Martha is much younger than I am, I am envious of that ...

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Write about two characters who both want what the other has, without knowing the feeling is mutual.

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✍️ 27 stories

“Confused cravings” by Christopher Albert

“Eye of the Beholder” by Greg Short

“Second Thoughts” by Kevin Quin

“Goodie Basket” by Kevin Herrmann

“Two Peas in a Messed Up Pod” by Ashlyn Oboyle

“THE CRYSTAL DAISY an THE MINI HORSES IN THE PRAIERIE” by Mara Masolini

“Perspectives” by Whitney Devor

“Mirror, Mirror” by Lorilyn Roberts

“Core Memory ” by Abigail Rae

“On The House” by Kasey Kirchner

“Decisions, Decisions” by ER Castaneda

“SPOT THE DIFFERENCE” by Brian Bywater

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Write about a relationship, either romantic or platonic, that is being affected by jealousy.

Write about someone deliberately trying to make somebody else envious.

Write about a character who discovers the grass isn't actually greener on the other side.

Write about somebody looking for love on a reality TV show.

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