I woke up to the golden sunlight that poured into my room. I stretched then took the covers off and smiled. My diaper. I couldn’t believe I was wearing one! And it was all thanks to Jade! I stood up and felt the urge. I shrugged. Might as well. I watched it swell up. Ah, relief! I undid and took it off. “Now for a nice shower!” I walked into my bathroom and looked in the mirror. My blond hair was getting awfully long. Should I? I looked at the razor and bit my lip. Nah. I stepped into the stall and turned the water on.
After my shower, I returned to my room and opened my dresser. I rummaged through my panties and stopped. I had a couple of diapers left. Should I? I turned around, grabbed one off my chair, and opened the plastic brief. I paused. No, this was crazy! I'm not into diapers! I grabbed my panties and put them on. That's better! I grabbed my shorts and put one leg through when I looked at the diaper.
"I don't like diapers!"
I put my shirt on and walked out into the hall.
The deal was over. I did what Jade wanted.
But, it sure was enjoyable. I went into the kitchen.
I mean, the diaper wasn't that bad.
Do I really…? Oh! What the hell! I rushed back into my room and took my blouse off. I dropped my panties and snatched a diaper. I'm fucking doing this! I opened the diaper, closed it around my crotch, and stuck the tapes on.
It felt… nice! I walked into the bathroom and looked in the mirror. I smiled. “Yes,” I whispered. My diaper looked cute on me. I twirled around. This was awesome! I never thought I could be happy, wearing a diaper! I mean when I came home yesterday, I was going to change into my clothes, but I realized my dad was still at work, so I stayed in the diaper, except when I had to go because that would be too... My stomach rumbled. Breakfast time! I patted my diaper and smiled.
I felt comfortable. No bra riding up, no sweaty shirt and pants… Just a cool, comfy diaper!
I walked out into the hall, enjoying the freedom of being almost nude. “Hey, Maxie," I said as my German Shepard sat on the ugly brown couch. He panted as I walked into the kitchen and made toast. This is pretty cool. I'm in the kitchen making toast… in just a diaper. My diaper. Hmm… I took a bite. My diaper… Hmm? I finished eating and rinsed off the plate. I put it back in the cabinet and glanced at the clock: 10:09. I wonder what Jade is doing right now.
I returned to my room and I checked my phone. One message from Cecilia. I opened it:
Girl, check this video out!
Below her message embedded a video:
CHICK IN A DIAPER.
Nice title. I rolled my eyes and tapped the video. It played. I watched as I took my pants off in front of a crowd of students. My diaper showed clearly. I watched as I said: “Babies don’t wear grown-up clothes, then took my shirt and bra off. “Awesome!” I whispered, .a sense of proudness overtook me. Yeah, that really happened. I smiled and typed: Yay! i'm famous! =]
I felt like I was changing, but into what? I didn’t feel like a baby. I looked at my phone. How should I carry this? I looked down at my diaper. No! not there! I shrugged. I’ll figure that out later. I laid my phone on the table.
I have to talk to someone,
I stood up and walked to the door. I looked down at my diaper and patted it. Taking a deep breath, I opened it and stepped out. the sun hit my bare body. it felt so nice. I covered my breasts and walked to my bike. I stopped and sighed. Do I really want to expose them? or should I go put on a shirt? I looked down. it’s just my chest, and I have the right to show it. I bit my lip..
well… I did this once… I uncovered them and felt a warm breeze blow on my breasts. Close my eyes and took it in. I opened my eyes. I must be insane, but who cares? I hopped on my bike pedaled in ties e street. Luckily, no one was around. I rode to the end and turned. I rode five houses down and turned into my friend’s driveway.
I rang the doorbell.
the door opened. “Hello — Whoa!”
“Yeah, I kinda like diapers now.”
“ Come in, you're so lucky my dad is out of town!”
I stepped in. “I don’t know. I stayed in it after I got home and slept in it
“So you like diapers? I don’t care. you be you. although, you really need to cover up in public. don’t your parents know?"
“Not yet. they got home late as usual."
"Oh."
“But, I think I prefer wearing this over clothes.”
“Wait, are you considering—"
I nodded.
“You can't go around in that.”
“But, I love the freedom. Plus, my diapers are super comfy… you should try, Mimi.”
“”Uh, no thanks. What about school?”
“I know. What do I do?”
“If you really like diapers, wear them to school. “You can wear them underneath your clothes.”
“The more I think about putting clothes on, the more I don't want to.”
“Beth, what's wrong with you?” She placed her hand on my shoulder. “You need to wear clothes.”
“I know. Hey, walk with me outside.”
“WHAT?”
“Come on, it’s a beautiful day.”
“Let's get your clothes first.”
“No.”
“Then, no.”
“Please.”
“Beth, this is crazy! Like, what the fuck?”
"Please. we won't go very far.”
She sighed, “Alright. but, if we get sent to juvie, I’ll never talk to you again.”
“There’s no law against exposing my boobs in this state.”
Mimi sighed. “Lets just go.” she opened the door and stepped out with me. I should get award for best friend on earth… or craziest friend!”
I laughed. “Well, this is crazy!” I walked in the street as a nice warm breeze blew between my thighs. I smiled.
“I know it’s legal but we’re gonna get in trouble.”
“Oh, stop worrying and enjoy!” I said, patting the front of my diaper. This feels so right! I felt reborn., a yellow SUV drove by
‘”How far are we walkin, psycho!”
“Duhnno… let's go to the park.”
“Oh, HELL no! you can go to the park half-naked! I’m going home!”
“But, Mimi…‘
She turned around and walked away.
“OK, fine!” I continued walking
a red-haired lady walked in the street. “Where are your clothes?”
“Right here.” I pulled my diaper up.
“How old are you?”
\”Fifteen
“A little old to be wearing diapers, eh?”
“I don't care, I like it.”
She grunted and waved me on.
I continued walking,.
I entered the park.
“Such a wonderful day. this is great!”
A man played with his black lab Two ladies read under a maple tree. Guys whizzed on skateboards.
I sat down on a bench and undid my diaper.
getting a bit naughty! I giggled and farted loud. I had never been impulsive
“It's the new me and I like it!”
“Hey!” someone yelled and I looked up. :”Enjoying yourself there?”
“Yeah! I am!”
“Not into clothes, much?”
“No, I’m not, starting today\
“Oh. well, I hope you don’t get arrested
“My diaper is still on, isn’t it?”
“Uh, OK… Well., , gotta go
“Bye
he left.
I rubbed my head, I should really get a new look. I changed. I smiled and fashioned my diaper, I watched a man throw the frisbee, his dog ran after the disk. I should bring Maxie out here, … while I’m in a diaper! I squealed at the thought. what about Jade? Would he hang out with me like this? Hmmm?
a tall guy in a red shirt waved at me.
“Hey, you’re that girl in the video.
“Why, yes, I am
“How are you]
“Excellent! enjoying this beautiful day
he laughed. “I see! Nice diaper
“Thank you! I laughed and patted itl
“What brand?|’”
“Pampers
“Cool. do you go to Markus Middle School..
“Yep
“ Cool, I go to Griffin High
“What grade?”
“Ninth
“Cool, I’m in eighth.
“Ooh, one more year! what High School are you going to?”
“I don’t know
“Oh.”
“I’m going through, … some stuff right now.”
“Oh
I adjusted my diaper. “Yeah
“Well, I hope everything works out for you
“Thanks, what's your name?”
“OSKAR<
“Cool, I’m Beth.”
“Well, Beth, I hope I’ll see you around.”
“You too
“?Keep a fresh Pamper handy!”
in laughed, “THANKS< I WILL |
he walked away
“Beth?”
I looked and saw Dad
“Where are your clothes
“I decided I don't need them
“What
i don't need clothes. I wear diapers now
you're not making any sense
“I decided im going to wear diapers from now on. I love them.
/”When did this come up
“Today
“Why?
“They're comfy”
“Beth, you can't go like this
women can go topless in public
“I know, but it's shocking for others
“I don't care.
“Have you gotten into trouble?”
|”No
“Beth
“I want to wear them! I feel… just amazing in them … just…”
“Just what?”
“Diapers are amazing
“Tell me why you want this
“I need to change my life. I guess I’m sick of being normal
“I see. Well., .. wear them
seriously?”
“Yeah, if u wanna hang around like this, I totally support you."
“Really?”
“Really… but, be careful, please. Going out like this…” He sighed. “I just don't want anything to happen to you.”
“I will be careful, I promise
“OK.”
“Thanks, I hug him.
You must sign up or log in to submit a comment.
32 comments
Okay, so here Beth goes all out for her desire to wear diaper? That's pretty original. Keep writing!
Reply
Thank you. Did you like it?
Reply
Beth was obviously willing to risk everything to pursue her heart's desire. Choosing to pursue powerful, buried, secret desires can be one of the scariest, riskiest things anyone can do. As far as the prompt was concerned, this was spot on. Here is my critique, mind you, I'm not experienced as a writer, so I'm not an authority on the subject: 1. If she is choosing to "risk everything" as the prompt suggests, I would make the risks more clear. Beth never shows any real hesitation, there doesn't appear to be any significant conflict, and co...
Reply
Hi Brian. You read. So you are an authority on what you like and what you read. You backed up your opinion very well. I hope you keep doing this when the "recommended" stories are released.. you can offer workshop value to the author's as long as they're into that. Some are not into that. Clapping for an excellent response.
Reply
Hi Tommy, Thanks. I'm not on Reedsy as much as I'd like because my schedule makes it difficult. But I would sure like to offer as much feedback as I can, on as many stories as I can. I think any feedback can be helpful, whether encouraging or critical. I'm going to try an be more committed to reading the recommended stories, and take I'll take the time to leave more meaningful comments. I appreciate the encouragement sir. :)
Reply
Thank you. i've added a little. Can you reread it?
Reply
Clapping for all the responses you have garnered. So let's pretend that the author is not put two stories about nakedness back to back. :) Even if this was a fetish then you are alongside people that cut off their ear for women. You are alongside Shakespearean love etc etc etc... Good art is a fetish. Good art is an obsession. The symbol of someone that wants to wear diapers... This is historically called infantilism. Psychologically it goes with someone that wants to be taken care of.. realistically is someone that is avoiding or ditch...
Reply
Thank you. I think Beth wearing dresses would be a boring solution. I enjoy breaking social norms in my stories.
Reply
It works.
Reply
Excellent story, like it so much. keep it up.
Reply
Thank you. What did you like about it?
Reply
I submitted a new story, Mimi's Clothing Dilemma. Can you read it?
Reply
Love it! IMHO even more adventures! what happens when Beth goes to school, does she becomes the leader of a clique, The Free Diapers movement? :)
Reply
Thank you. What exactly did you like about it? Can you give it a like?
Reply
i submitted a new story, Mimi's Clothing Dilemma. Can you read it?
Reply
Laughing
Reply
Nice handling of an unpleasant and often undiscussed subject. Your command of narrative voice is compelling and your economy of words impressive. I see you've stirred up a lot of unrest with the Reedsy natives. (Pssst!: That only means you've done something truly creative.) Well done, my friend. Keep ticky-tapping away at your keyboard!
Reply
Thank you. What do you think about Beth? And can you give my story a like?
Reply
I was one of the 8 individuals that already gave it a "Like". Beth is someone I have no desire to meet.
Reply
Not my normal type of story, so I may be missing something. But... this didn't seem like a story, seemed more like the author wanted to write about a potential fetish? Like feeling out the reactions of others before wearing a diaper himself? There's no storyline. The external conflict was weak and didn't move along at a similar speed to the internal conflict (which isn't necessary, just what I prefer to read).
Reply
Thank you, it's too late to edit on Reedsy because it got approved but I'll revise it per your suggestion.
Reply
Well, I don’t think I’ve ever read a story about diapers, so points for originality. Your main character has a lot of spunk!
Reply
thank you. what did you think when Beth went out in her diaper?
Reply
What makes you write about diapers? May I ask? LF6
Reply
I'm not sure
Reply
Maybe write about something you are passionate about.
Reply
I have dozens of scifi/horror stories thats not about baby teenagers. would you like me to send my booksie link?
Reply
Maybe just bend one to adhere to the next prompt and then I'll read it when you post it. Just let me know. LF6
Reply
what
Reply
Try to make one of your horror/sci-fi stories adhere to the next set of prompts, and then I'll read one for sure. LF6
Reply
I thought the story was a bit out there. It was an enjoyable read but I would change some of the grammatical errors so that it reads with better flow. I'm not sure if you can still make the changes, but maybe for the next one you write. Try reading it out loud before you submit it. I still get myself into trouble sometimes too. It happens to us all. Incidentally, where I live women can go topless it is legal. “I woke up the golden sunlight poured into my room,” I woke up to the golden sunlight that poured into my room? You’re missing ‘to’ a...
Reply
“I woke up the golden sunlight poured into my room,” I woke up to the golden sunlight that poured into my room? You’re missing ‘to’ and ‘that.’ Or you need to edit that sentence a different way. It doesn’t make sense right now. “I paused. do I really…? Oh!” Do should be capitalised. “I mean when I came home yesterday, I was going to change into my clothes, but I realized my dad was still at work, so I stayed in the diaper, except when I had to go because that would be my stomach rumbled.” This sentence is too long. “when I had to go becaus...
Reply