Together in The Silence of The Night (Forever and Always Pt. 2)

Submitted into Contest #58 in response to: Write about a family who decides to camp out in the back yard during a power outage.... view prompt

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Romance

I toss another small piece of popcorn in my mouth, smiling at my screen. My hair falls in my face and I push it back, scoffing at the message. I shake my head laughing, typing out a response.

Suddenly, I’m engulfed in darkness. I gasp lightly and walk over to my light switch, flipping it repeatedly. 

“Elaine?!”

“Right here, Sandy!”

“Ugh, the power went out. I’m going out to buy some flashlights, okay?”

“K, get some candles too.”

“Alright.” The door slams behind her. I frown. I hate it when the power gets out, it’s always so boring. Quite suddenly, I hear a ring of the doorbell. 

Is Sandy back already? I walk over to open the door. 

Standing there, grinning, is Jacob, holding a couple of plastic bags and blankets in his left arm.

Jacob? What are you doing here?”

“Well, you know, your parents are outta town, mine have a work trip, and I know you hate power outages, and-” 

“Oh, just come inside already.” I grab his empty hand and pull him in, slamming the door with my foot behind me. We hold hands until we’re outside in my backyard, where the stars are brightly shining. I don’t let go even as he puts the bags down. He clears his throat.

“I can’t spread out the blankets with only one hand Elly,” I blink.

“Hm? Oh,” I blush, dropping his hand. He smirks, spreading one of the blankets out on the grass. I plop down on it. Jacob sits beside me. He looks up at the sky and drops his hand on top of where mine is, resting on the blanket. I turn my hand and he holds it. I squeeze back. 

“What’s in the bags?”

“Oh, it’s just some s’mores stuff, if you have a fire, I thought it would be fun to make em, and then we could, like, stargaze a bit, and I’d just stay until you fell asleep or something like that, to make sure you aren’t bored in the power outage.” I smile.  “What?”

“You’re just...adorable…” I say,  not breaking the smile from my face. I let go of his hand and walk over to the bags, picking them up.

“Let’s go! I don’t have a fire, but we can do em over the stove, okay?”

“Alright,” he replies, getting up.  We walk over to the kitchen, and I turn on the stove. We get out the sticks, stuffing the marshmallows at the tips.

We hold them over the little fire for about 2 minutes each,. When all the marshmallows are toasted, we go back outside. We eat a bit of the marshmallow along with graham crackers and Hershey’s.

I lay down on the blanket, staring at the night sky. I hear Jacob lay down beside me. 

“It’s pretty, isn’t it?” I marvel, turning my head to look at Jacob. 

“Yeah…” he replies, not taking his eyes from the stars. “Hey, where’s Sandy?”

“Hm? Oh, she went to get candles and flashlights and-Hey, she’s been gone a while…” I sit up. Jacob does too, running a hand through his hair. I get up quickly, speed walking inside. Ring Ring Ring Ring. I run for my phone, pressing the answer button shakily. I didn’t even check for the caller. 

“Hello? Is this Elaine, Sandy’s sister?” a voice says.

“Um, yeah. Is everything alright?”

“Oh, everything’s fine sweetheart, your sister just got into a small car accident, we’ve got her getting checked out over here in the hospital, but overall she’s okay.” I take a shaky breath, my eyes brimming with tears.

“Which hospital?”

“Beaumont. Would you like me to send you the address dear?”

“Um, no thanks I got it. Thank you.”

“Mmhm, no problem.” The call is ended with a small click. I set my phone down.

“Elly? Is everything-” 

“No, everything is not okay. Sandy got into a car accident and…” The tears finally fall down my face. 

“Hey, hey! It’s okay!” he comes over to me, wrapping his arms around me in a hug. I hug him back, numbly thinking about the fact that this is sorta the first time he’s hugged me since we got ‘together’. 

“We gotta get to the hospital.” I sniff, pulling away from the hug. He nods.

His hand somehow finds mine and we walk to the car with them entwined. He grabs the key from beside the door, gently letting go of my hand and getting into the driver’s seat. I get into the front seat, leaning my head back as he drives. 

“Is it….bad?” he asks, breaking the silence and momentarily looking away from the road. His green eyes meet mine.

“The lady said she’s okay, but….”

“...But you’re worried she’s not?” I nod.

“It’s gonna be alright Elly, don’t be so nervous, if the lady said she’s fine, she’s probably fine,” Jacob says, putting his right hand on top of my left, the one that’s busy playing with my bracelet. I sigh. 

“We’re here.” he gives my hand a small squeeze before letting go and getting out of the car. I get out too, shivering in the cold. A familiar large jacket is draped across my shoulders in seconds. Despite the situation, I smile. I look into his bright green eyes, shining in the moonlight. He holds out his hand. I grab it, using my other hand to make sure the jacket doesn’t fall off. 

We stand in front of the front desk.

“Um, I’m here to see Sandy? She’s in the emergency room I’m pretty sure.”

“Okay. That’s right, just turn right in that hallway, okay?” I nod. Jacob and I walk through the hallway, and towards the door labeled Emergency Room- Minor Injury. I hold my breath as Jacob opens the door with his free hand and we walk inside. In there is Sandy, sitting on the bed looking anything but hurt. She just looks bored

“Sandy!” She turns around smiling. As she turns, I notice a small set of stitches above her left eye. Could be worse, I suppose.

“Elaine!” I let go of Jacob’s hand and run over to her, giving her a big hug. 

“Is this- Is this his jacket?” she whispers. I giggle.

Yeah, jealous?” I whisper back. She laughs as we break away from the hug. Jacob stands there sorta awkwardly to the side.

“If you’re so ‘okay’, why didn’t you call! Why did that lady?”

“Oh, ugh, they put me in directly for like an x-ray and everything, so I couldn’t really do anything till 5 minutes ago.”

“Well, what even happened!” I sit down beside her on the bed and pat the spot next to me, motioning for Jacob to come. He blinks, blushing slightly and coming over next to me. I let my hand quickly find his as Sandy starts explaining.

“Well, the whole town had a power outage, it was crazy, I couldn’t see a thing, and next thing I know, the air bag’s comin up in my face!” she says, throwing her hands up in the air. 

“But you’re okay?”

“I’m fine.” I elbow her. 

“You scared me!”

“Sorry!” she laughs. I get up, just realizing that I’m still holding Jacob’s hand. He gets up too.

“Ready to go?” I cock my head to the side at Sandy.

 She shakes her head. 

“ I’ve got a lot of paperwork to fill out. You two lovebirds can leave though. I’ll catch up” I roll my eyes, smiling as Jacob gives my hand a squeeze.

“Ready?” he asks. I nod, and we walk out, back to the car, back to stargazing, back to being together in the silence of the night...

September 11, 2020 23:46

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238 comments

B. W.
13:03 Sep 18, 2020

Amany could you help me?? i'm being down-voted a lot (whoever it is, is literally still doing it while i'm telling you) could we maybe go on a upvote spree with each other?

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Amany Sayed
13:05 Sep 18, 2020

I'll go on one for you, but you don't have to do mine, I don't care about points anymore! Don't go through the trouble :)

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B. W.
13:19 Sep 18, 2020

alright thank you ^^ tbh its just more of annoying that they're even doing it and it makes me mad

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B. W.
23:49 Sep 17, 2020

My gosh, i was so worried until ya came, and yeah i guess your right with that tbh ^^ I mean I don't think any of the characters have powers so that couldn't work but maybe the others could, i was also kind of hoping for a bit of a sad death with it. though thanks with the advice ^^

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B. W.
23:27 Sep 17, 2020

hey i was wondering if you could maybe help me with something again?

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Amany Sayed
00:37 Sep 18, 2020

Hey whats up?

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B. W.
00:42 Sep 18, 2020

you know my novel right?

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Amany Sayed
00:45 Sep 18, 2020

Indeed I do

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B. W.
00:47 Sep 18, 2020

i need some more help with it again if thats alright?

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Amany Sayed
00:50 Sep 18, 2020

Go ahead, I'll try my best!

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B. W.
01:06 Sep 18, 2020

My gosh, i think i just need to have someone to talk to someone rather than ideas tbh, i'm getting a bit mad about something

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04:25 Sep 17, 2020

Okay, just making sure...does your new account start with a K?

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B. W.
00:18 Sep 17, 2020

Wait the down-voter is getting you as well? jeez why are they doing it to so many people?? they're doing it to me now to

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Amany Sayed
00:20 Sep 17, 2020

Yeah, I got no clue.

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B. W.
00:41 Sep 17, 2020

Me and some others could try and upvote ya again if you want?

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Amany Sayed
00:47 Sep 17, 2020

A couple people raised me a lot, so thank you so much, but I really don't want you to go through the trouble :)

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B. W.
00:57 Sep 17, 2020

Well if it ever happens again, then i will

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B. W.
19:04 Sep 15, 2020

I don't think ive told you yet so go check out "Universe" which is kind of a preview thing to the story with its first two chapters and tell me what you think ^^

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Skyler Grey
18:29 Sep 15, 2020

Hi again. Is it cool if I make a character in the story loosely based off you? I'm trying to give a nod to the two nicest friends I've got on Reedsy (that would be you and Aerin) so she's either gonna be named Erin and nicknamed Sunny or named Amany and nicknamed Rainbow. What do u think?

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Amany Sayed
18:33 Sep 15, 2020

Squeeeeeeeeeeeee Yes, of course! I dont know, it really depends on the character. Whatever you want!

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Skyler Grey
19:03 Sep 15, 2020

Thanks! I'm leaning more towards Amany, just because I don't like the name Erin for her. However Sunny would be a better nickname... hm.

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Amany Sayed
19:14 Sep 15, 2020

Hmmm indeed. Maybe add a character?

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Skyler Grey
19:22 Sep 15, 2020

So, the siblings are Mindhi and Sandy Callisto. I'm thinking of giving Sandy a twin named Amany or Aerin (I decided to just use Aerin's name spelled as it is because it's the only way I like it spelled). As it stands right now it's Mindhi, who's 19, and Sandy and "Sunny" (Aerin), who are 12. I'm keeping Sandy, cos I love her, but mayyyybe there can be a 15 year old- Amany? Rainbow sounds more like a younger sister though... okay. Mindhi is 19. Sandy is 12, Aerin 'Sunny' was Sandy's twin. Amany is 15. No nickname. There we go. Finally.

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Skyler Grey
20:43 Sep 15, 2020

Ok, here's the description (physical and emotional) of the Callisto sisters: I stare into a pool of water on the forest floor. The water ripples with the wind, and the dancing light distorts my features. I have long brown hair and blue eyes. Small nose, just enough baby fat to keep me on the “normal” side of the line between normal and model. I’m wearing a green hoodie and some black leggings, just kinda casual. Seeing myself reminds me of my sisters. Sandy has my mom’s eyes, we all do. She’s got golden-brown hair, freckles for days, and...

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Skyler Grey
23:10 Sep 13, 2020

hiiiiiiiiiiii, amany, im bored, need the yellow dot, so ima just do another upvoting spree whilst i wait :)

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Amany Sayed
23:35 Sep 13, 2020

thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

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Skyler Grey
23:44 Sep 13, 2020

thank you! just realized u took my quiz!

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✨Abby ✨
03:41 Dec 02, 2020

Very well done. loved this. Do you mind commenting on my story and letting me know what you think? Thanks!!

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Amany Sayed
03:56 Dec 02, 2020

Thank you, and of course I will! Welcome to Reedsy :D

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✨Abby ✨
17:00 Dec 02, 2020

Thank you! I really appreciate it!

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B. W.
15:20 Sep 23, 2020

I'm being down-voted again and i have a feeling it's probably her again, could we maybe go on a up-vote spree?

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Amany Sayed
15:23 Sep 23, 2020

How annoying. Sure. You're so close to top ten!

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B. W.
15:25 Sep 23, 2020

yep. thanks ^^ yeah i know, i've been getting so excited

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B. W.
23:30 Sep 20, 2020

gosh, this weeks stories aren't really that good to me because all of it is about the Apocalypse when they could have done some more stuff since its 'face your fears' though i can't think of anything for it, could you maybe help me get some ideas for it?

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Amany Sayed
01:30 Sep 21, 2020

Yeah I'm having some trouble too ngl. Maybe try the funny one? Just think up some random things that could be funny and pair them with zombies or something like that.

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B. W.
01:32 Sep 21, 2020

can ya list me some cliches?

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Amany Sayed
01:36 Sep 21, 2020

Funny cliches?

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B. W.
01:36 Sep 21, 2020

horror cliches

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00:16 Sep 19, 2020

Heyyyy! Upvote for upvote spree??

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B. W.
20:26 Sep 18, 2020

Hey amany? could you go and check out "Crossover: the plan" if thats alright and leave some feedback?

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Amany Sayed
17:24 Sep 19, 2020

Sure!

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B. W.
17:34 Sep 19, 2020

Thanks ^^ i'm excited to see what ya say for it

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The Cold Ice
04:43 Sep 17, 2020

Good story .Great job keep it up.Keep writing. Would you mind to read my story “The dragon warrior part 2?”

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B. W.
13:47 Sep 15, 2020

so how's it going with it? did you maybe do the thing in chapter 3 you were talking about yet?

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B. W.
19:52 Sep 21, 2020

Hey, could you maybe help me? someone's beginning to down-vote me again

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