Fantasy Science Fiction Adventure

Selena's alarm went off, and she toppled out of bed with a crash. 

 Her rimless glasses fell from the dresser on her head.

Selena groaned, picked her glasses up, and pushed them onto her nose.

Her room door was thrown open, and her mother was standing there.

" Selena, Honey, is everything alright?"

"Yep." Selena pushed herself to her feet, "I just fell out of the bed. It's nothing too serious."

Her mother let out a sigh of relief, "Ok. We leave in five, hurry."

Selena opened up her closet and pulled out an outfit.

She changed her clothes and was pulling on her shoes when her mother's head popped in again.

"Ready?"

  "But it's only been two minutes!" Selena complained, "Let me brush my hair. Gimme two seconds."

" One. Two."

Selena groaned, "Mom!"

"Ok. Ok. I'll be waiting in the living room."

Selena stood in front of her mirror on the back of her door. She brushed her jet-black hair into the neatest ponytail she would manage and ran downstairs.

 Her mother was wearing her standard uniform. A dark blue button-down shirt and black dress pants. Her boots were so shiny they reflected the lights from the kitchen.

"Ready."

Selena pulled on her shoes and followed her mother out the door, locking it behind them.


A military jeep was waiting outside for them.

 Selena climbed into the back, and her mother climbed into the front.

In the driver's seat was her mother's boyfriend, Kai. Kai wore the same outfit she did. His hair was slicked back out of his face, and his eyes glinted mischievously.

 "Hey, gorgeous." he smiled at Selena's mother.

He leaned toward her and they shared a kiss.

Selena rolled her eyes. "UGH! Get a room you two!"

Kai laughed and pulled away, then he turned out of their neighborhood.

  Selena watched the scenery outside. It always amazed her at how alike this planet was to earth.

Kai dropped them off at the dock station where Selena's mother worked to inspect trading ships.

Selena jumped from the car and looked around for her friend, Xander. She saw him in the distance waving his hand.

He dropped the crate he was carrying and ran towards her. "Hey! I didn't think you'd be coming!"

Xander had pale skin, white blonde hair, and bright blue eyes. He was lean and muscular from hauling things back and forth to the port.

"Well, here I am. Come on, let's go catch up with my mom, she'll want to see you."

Selena turns and ran to catch up with her mother, who was in the middle of a conversation with another woman.

Her mother turned towards her. "This is my daughter, Selena. Selena, this is my boss, Mrs. William."

Mrs. William was middle-aged with dark skin, brown eyes, and long dark hair. When she smiled the skin around her eyes wrinkled. "Hello there, a pleasure to meet you." she turned back towards her mother. "Well, you better get started. You have lots of ships to inspect. I'm heading to a meeting." she bows her head and touched the brim of her hat before turning and walking away.

 Selena's mother saw Xander and she gasped. "Oh my gosh! How are you!" She squeezed him in a hug. She pulled away. "You've gotten so big. How are your parents?"

Xander frowned slightly. "Oh . . . my dad died this past Friday. My mom's surviving as she would say."

Selena gasped. "Died? Oh, gosh. I'm sorry."

Xander waved her away. "It's alright."

"Good heavens!" Selena's mother gasped. "Tell your mother I'm sorry for her loss!"

"Will do."

Selena's mother turned towards the docking station and Selena ran to catch up. "Hey, mom, do you know how long you'll be here?"

"Probably a couple of hours, why?"

"Well . . . I was hoping to hang out with . . ." Selena trailed off and glanced up at her mother. 

"Hm. We'll see. Behave yourself while you're here, and we'll see."

Selena squealed in excitement and squeezed her mom in a hug.


Selena and Xander walked with her mother and her crew as they went to each ship. 

Usually, Selena would be excited to get to explore the ships, hoping she might become an intergalactic pilot. But today, Xander was here, and he was very distracting.

  While her mother and the crew were distracted, she convinced Xander to sneak off with her, and she leads him towards a different part of the ship that holds storage.

There were boxes everywhere, and Selena and Xander walked around and started exploring.

Xander called her name. "Hey Selena, check this out!"

Selena walked toward him to see what he was looking at and she saw a box. She raised an eyebrow. "Uh. What is it?"

"This is from the planet Ionia. Wonder what it is." he grinned mischievously. "Truth or dare."

"Dare."

Xander grins. "I dare you to open this box."

"What?" Selena gasped. "That's not right! It's not my business to know!"

"It's only far. You asked me to sneak away with you, and I did." Xander grabs a hatchet. "Come on, open it."

After a moment, Selena gave in and opened the box. Inside looked like a little recording box.

Selena picked it up and pressed play.

 "This is a message from the planet Ionia. We have agreed with your proposition. Megedagik has agreed to start the search for Mecha. We will search this entire galaxy for it if we have to, killing anyone who stands in our way."

Xander raises an eyebrow. "Mecha? It sounds like a toy robot."

"Shh!"

"Megedagik is grateful for your services. You will be paid greatly, hopefully, the bomb device we gave you has been of use. Once you've completed your mission report back to me immediately."

The recording cut off and Selena and Xander stood there in shock. 

Selena wasn't sure how to interpret this information, should she tell someone? 

A couple voices startled them both. Selena tucked the recording device into her pocket and she and Xander hid behind a stack of crates.

 She peeked around the side. 

Two men entered the room. One was tall, bald, and muscular. The other was short the potbellied.

"Hey, Henry, are you sure those inspector people left?" the tall man asked.

Henry opened his mouth to respond but he saw the open box. His mouth dropped open. "What the hell? Marcus, the box." 

"Dammit. That was from Megedagik, we'll have to contact him and tell him we've been found out."

"What?" Henry squawked. "He'll have our heads!"

Marcus started pacing back and forth. "We have no other choice. Come let's go get another communicating device that can't be tracked."

As they were leaving Henry said, "That was very important information. What do you think will happen to whoever found it?"

"They'll be found eventually. We have spies everywhere, they'll be on the lookout. Hopefully, they don't tell anyone otherwise they're dead meat."

When Selena was sure the men were gone she and Xander left the ship and sat on a bench outside by the docking station.

 "What the hell?" Xander muttered. "What the hell just happened?"

Selena shook her head repeatedly. "I-I don't know, Xander."

"What are we going to do? We can't say a word about this to anyone." Xander stood up and started pacing back and forth. "Maybe we could leave. Yeah. Pack up some belongings. Or-"

"Stop it!" Selena hissed. "You're making me nervous!"

"Nervous?! You should be terrified!"

Selena pushed her glasses up on her nose. "I'm not. Since we're the only ones who know, we have to do something."

"Like what?"

"Well, first we'll need to do some research, get to know more about...you know. Then we'll pack up and leave." Selena sighed. "I'm not sure how long it'll take."

Xander was furiously typing on his portable laptop. "Ok. So the thing they were talking about is a myth, fantasy."

"Keep looking, if it were a myth. They wouldn't be looking so hard for it if that were true."

Selena looked around them to make sure no one suspicious was watching them. People were milling about doing different things, hauling crates, and checking ships.

"Found it! Apparently, it consists of five lions?" Xander raises an eyebrow. "They're all in this galaxy, just scattered about on different planets. They were made by an Amourus king. Twenty years ago this king and that Mege dude's father got into a fight over who should have the lions. That's when the king sent the lions away to keep them safe. They haven't been found since."

Selena nods. "Ok. Is there a list of possible places they could be in?"

"Yea. I'll print it out later today." Xander closed his laptop. "By the time they're finished looking for it, this galaxy will be destroyed."

"Well," Selena said, "We have a galaxy to save."





Posted Aug 30, 2022
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Sarah Parker
20:58 Sep 12, 2022

Here's the second chapter!!

After school on Friday, Selena went to Xander's house.
His eleven-year-old brother, Jaime, answered the door with peanut butter smeared all over his face.
"Hey, Jamie!"
He beamed, "Lena! What are you doing here?" he tried wiping the peanut butter from his face with his shirt, but he smeared it in, making it worse.
"I came to see Xander. Is he home?"
Jamie nods, "Yep. Upstairs, working on some project, he said. You can come in." he walks back into the house and shouted, "Zane! Your girlfriend's here!"
Selena blushed, "I'm not his girlfriend."
"Mhm. Could've fooled me." Jaime skipped into the kitchen, "Want a sandwich?"
"Sure." Selena looked around the house for Mrs. West but didn't see her. "Where's your mother?"
Jamie scooped some jelly onto a spoon. "She went out with some friends."
"Oh."
While Jamie was slathering on the peanut butter, Xander came downstairs.
His eyes widen when he saw Selena. "Jamie, what did I tell you about opening the door when-"
"You told me not to. But I looked outside before I opened it." Jamie scowled. "I'm not dumb 'ya know?"
Selena took her sandwich, "But you sure are a mess!"
"Go on upstairs and wash up kay?" Xander dumped some papers on the counter. "Maybe I'll let you watch television."
Jamie narrowed his eyes, "Why are you trying to get rid of me so fast?" he smirked, "I know why. It's 'cause-"
"Jamie." Xander growled, "Go. Upstairs. Now."
"Sure, whatever." Jamie turned and stalked upstairs, slamming his room door closed.
"You know was just joking around, right?" Selena bit into her sandwich. "He's a kid, don't be so hard on him."
Xander opened his mouth to say something, but he shook his head and pulled a paper from the stack.
"Oh. This is the list?" Selena nods, "Ok. Did you happen to do any research? Are any of these planets like Earth and Zion?"
Xander sat beside her, "Some of them are. But some are occupied by alien species. Remember the Amourus king we were talking about?"
Selena nodded.
"His kind lives on the planet, Oceanu. A few days trip away from this planet." Xander cocked his head to the side. "When do we plan on leaving?"
Selena put her sandwich down, "I'm not sure, those two men have a bomb, and heaven helps us. Who knows what they'll do with that thing."
A large earthquake answered her question.
Jamie screamed.
Xander and Selena raced upstairs and threw open Jamie's room door. The bomb must have landed close by because half of Jamie's wall was missing.
"Jamie!" Xander screamed. "JAMIE"
"Right-coff-here. Help! Please, help!"
Selena walked to the gap where Jamie was hanging, holding on to a piece of his bed. She reached down and hauled him back into the room before the rest of the floor gave way.
Xander scooped him up. "Oh my god. Oh my god. Jamie, are you hurt?"
Jamie shook his head. "I'm fine, what's going on? We're not at war again, are we?"
Selena looked out the gap and saw another bomb hit another part of the neighborhood. "They're onto us, Xander. We've got to get out of here, now."
"What-" Jamie started.
Xander shoved Jamie towards Selena. "Take Jamie. Go to docking station 29. I need to grab a few things."
"Xander, we don't have-" another explosion shook the house, and she stumbled forward.
"Go!" Xander shouted.
Selena nodded, clutched Jamie's hand, and raced downstairs and out the front door.
People were running around screaming, people were lying in crimson puddles, and some had served bodies. Most of the neighborhood had been destroyed.
Selena took the recording device from her pocket and threw it into the distance. She no longer needed it since she took a recording on her phone.
Then she and Jamie raced towards the docking station. Jamie was looking around with a panicked expression on his face.
"Mom?!" he cried, "MOM!
Selena kept running until they reached the entrance to the docking station. It didn't look like it'd been bombed yet.
"What's going on out there?" Kai asked, coming out of the guarding booth.
"The Oakwood neighborhood's been bombed. I-my friend, Xander is still in there, and I-"
Kai waved them inside. "Go on. I think I know who you're talking about. Xander West, correct?"
Selena nodded, "Yes."
"And my mother. Amanda West." Jamie blurted.
Kai nodded and took off.
Selena snatched up Jamie and ran to docking station 29 as Xander requested.
A ship named Versatile was sitting in the docking space. Selena dragged Jamie inside.
"Lena? What's going on?"
Selena started pacing the room, muttering to herself.
Xander had to be fine.
He's smart, strong, and fast. He would have made it out.
"LENA! Please, just tell me what's going on. I'm scared." Jamie sat down and curled up into a ball.
Selena crouched beside him. "I know you are. I am too."
A shadow loomed over her. She jumped up and stood protectively in front of Jamie.
"Well, well, well, just who I'm looking for."
Selena scowled. "You."
"Me." Marcus sneered. "So, we were found out by a couple of kids, uh? I'll show you what you get when you poke your pretty little nose where it doesn't belong."
Before Selena could lift a finger, Jamie jumped up from behind her and moved faster than she could follow. A moment later, the man was on his knees, howling with a knife sticking out of his eye.
"What-?" Selena started.
Jamie grinned back at her. "I learned from the best."
A robotic voice overhead announced, "We take off in five minutes."
Selena raced towards the open ship door, scanning the docking station for Xander. She couldn't see him through all the smoke.
Selena turned around to see Jamie tying the man up with some ropes. He looked up and nodded, he must have seen the desperation on her face.
Selena ran onto the docking station, jumping over bodies.
People were everywhere screaming. Mothers were scooping up their children, and men were grabbing their families.
It was every man for themselves.
"Xander!" she searched the crowd for his white-blonde hair. "Xander!"
Selena stopped when she saw a woman face down on the ground with her black hair splayed around her.
"No," Selena murmured. She knelt next to the woman and slowly rolled her over. Selena gasped.
It was her mother. Her eyes were wide and glassy, and her mouth was open.
All Selena felt was emptiness. The feeling of numbness ate at her from the inside. She placed a quivering hand on her mother's chest, where a wound was bleeding freely.
She heard someone call her name, but they sounded far away. Xander and Kai crouched in front of her, both of them were saying something, but she couldn't hear them.
Someone helped her up and was guiding her back to the ship.
She felt a burning sensation in her leg, another explosion.
Then nothingness.

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Mel Dingwall
10:35 Sep 09, 2022

This is such an imaginative concept (blending sci-fi and ancient mythology), if this were a novel I’d read it!

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Sarah Parker
12:18 Sep 09, 2022

Thanks! I do plan on making it a novel, do you have any ideas for the plot? If so, I'd love to hear them! :)

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Michał Przywara
21:14 Sep 06, 2022

I like the dilemma this story poses: you uncover a dangerous secret, but you do it while breaking the rules. It's like seeing someone murder someone else while committing a burglary yourself. Well, I guess it's even more dangerous in this story, since Henry and the others appear to be part of some big organized crime group, willing to tear the galaxy apart.

Critique-wise, I think the story could use another read through to correct some minor issues. For example, there's some mixing of tenses, like in "Selena turns and ran to catch up with her mother". Also, there's two spots where Selena runs to catch up with her mother. That's not wrong, but it did catch my eye, and if it's possible to reword it to reduce duplication, that might be a good idea.

The reaction to the death of Xander's father, "died this past Friday", seems a little off, too. Nobody seems too concerned, Xander included.

Other than that, it seems like this is the start to a big adventure. We don't know who the mysterious people working with Megedagik are, nor why they want these lions, but we understand they are very dangerous people. Selena and Xander stumbled into a galactic conspiracy, and it's up to them to save everyone. Is this part of a bigger story? It kind of reads like it could be part of a YA space opera

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Sarah Parker
21:43 Sep 06, 2022

Thanks for the feedback. Also yes, I was planning to make this in a novel or perhaps a book series. If you have any ideas for the rest of the book, let me know! I'd greatly appreciate it!

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Michał Przywara
22:31 Sep 06, 2022

No ideas, alas, most of mine are tied up in my own books.

Just some things I'd expect though; they came by the myth information very easily. That tells me it's easily searchable, public knowledge. And thus, I expect it to be wrong, or only partially true. Maybe this organization, or their enemies, know the "true secret" of the lions, and because the protagonists don't know this, perhaps they accidentally work for the bad guys, thinking they're the good guys. That kind of thing. I could see a lot of space travel and treasure hunting too, and you already have a budding romance, which often features in YA. Maybe add some treachery into the mix.

If you haven't already, check out some stories like Hunger Games or Divergent. They're more about dystopian futures than space adventures and conspiracies, but they might inspire some ideas. And heck, on the topic of space adventures, maybe Star Wars could be an inspiration. All sorts of bizarre planets and shifty aliens, and no shortage of conflicts messing up plans.

But above all, conflict. Don't let your characters coast through the story. Trip them up over and over again, and make them pay for what they want. For example, if they *need* to defuse a bomb, it's an opportunity for the bad guy to get away with the artifact, that kind of thing.

Good luck!

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