1 comment

American Contemporary Fantasy

"That's the thing about this city," Carson whispered, "it is only partially visible."

Dane leaned closer because that could not be what his best friend had said to him.

"Huh?" he replied, definitely not whispering.

An older gentleman, who had been half-heartedly reading his newspaper, glanced over at them as the bus wheeled around the corner of 9th and Vine, pulling up with a rough stop in front of the Public Library.

Carson straightened, pressed his lips together to indicate silence, and nodded his buddy off the bus.

"What did you say?" Dane asked again as they smacked down onto the sidewalk and strolled over to the steps that led to their study group.

"Let's talk about it later," Carson dithered.

"Uh, no - let's talk about it now. Did you say," Dane again leaned towards his friend in a slightly menacing pose, "this city is only partially visible?"

"Yeah," Carson admitted softly, lowering his eyes to search for something under his fingernail.

"This city..." Dane reiterated.

"Mmm-hmm, Cincinnati, yep." Carson agreed.

Dane straightened up and stared first at his childhood friend's downturned profile, then up to look at this partially visible town he had lived in all his life.

"I'm not following,:" he finally admitted. As he had admitted in a thousand other conversations with Carson.

Carson smiled. He had a sweet smile. Very gentle and thoughtful and coming from real joy that was in him no matter where, what or when.

Dane felt his lips responding in kind.

Carson looked suddenly into his eyes and pulled him into the library where other friends were waiting to study economics for the test tomorrow. In their sophmore year at UC, they had found a group they mostly fit into from their business courses, and moved through the days and nights with them - studying, playing, drinking, dancing, dating, loafing. And occaisionally, doing laundry.

It was understood they woud discuss this eccentricity on their hometown's part later.

Joining the group, they were the last to arrive, they made seven. Tipping their heads in various greetings were Dean and Jodi (couple), Wyatt and Kim (couple), and Jarod. Jarod was the only freshman among them. He was kinda brilliant and they all followed his lead in economics, which none of the rest of them liked at all.

Laughter and reading followed by arguing about politics and new information about COVID's impact on the economy - two years out now. A little more homework, closing with flash cards for tomorrows test.

"Let's go to Bogart's," Wyatt said as they poured out of the library and down the steps.

All agreed, except Dane.

"Nope, Carson has some 'spaining to do." he laughed. "And I would drink too much for my early class."

Carson did not argue - but looked wistfully at his five other friends as they blew down the street calling Uber and acting drunk already.

The bus home was short as they still lived on campus, and very silent. It was packed with more people than Carson thought should be there on a Tuesday night. He was not about to engage Dane in this conversation among so many listening ears.

At home, shoes kicked off, burrito's in the microwave, the boys set music rolling around the room and laid back in their favorite arm chairs. Dane put his feet up on the coffee table. Carson's mom would turn over in her grave if he did that. He shifted uncomfortably, but bit his tongue.

"OK," Dane led, as he bit down on his burrito, the innards squishing at the corners of his lips.

"Cincinnati is only partially visible to the human eye, what you see is not all you get." Carson stated as though he had already made a long case about it and this was his final, concluding remarks.

"Really?" Dane asked in his most sarcastic drawl. "Where is the rest of it hiding?"

"Do you really want to know, or are you just ready to fight me on this?" Carson purred smoothly.

"I don't even know what made you blurt out such a ridiculous statement in the first place!" Dane responded, burping up chili seasoning.

"Gross." Carson pronounced.

"We were riding to study group and the conversation had been about getting tickets for the Red's this summer...when you got quiet and then inform me the thing about this city is it is..."

"I remeber what I said," Carson interrupted.

"But what the heck?" Dane cried, his feet plopping down and his upper body doing that lean- in thing it did when he was upset or perplexed.

"I just realized that you were unaware of the fact that only part of this town can be seen most of the time." Carson explained quickly. "I understood it for the first time in our 15 years of hanging out together! I understood there on the bus - suddenly - because when a big, huge piece of the usually unseen city appeared back on Vine street...and you were looking out the same window I was - you did not comment on it, look surprised, or anything."

"What?" sputtered Dane. "What, what...neither did you, as far as I can recall..."

"That is because I have known this about Cincinnati since I was a baby. I thought you knew too, for some reason. When those circus performers popped out of nowhere, juggling and riding unicycles, and clowning along side the bus as it took on more passengers - well, I am used to seeing stuff like that." Carson stopped, a little out of breath.

Dane leaned back with a frown. Shades of Psychology 101 ricocheted around his noggin. He breathed in and out deeply and on purpose, to focus his thinking.

"Dude," he finally reponded, "that is just wrong. Have you told your parents about this?"

"They see it too!" Carson informed him, crossing his arms over his chest momentarily. Realizing this body language shouted defensiveness, he uncrossed them and laid his hands, slightly trembling, on the armrest.

"Clowns and such?" Dane asked, because he could not focus enough to figure a good next question.

"I was surprised at that too - usually it is just a building not usually there that is now there. Or a street appears where there was a field before. Sometimes it has been animals, a few time people...but they were just normal people and animals fitting into the...into the...environment. Like a cat appearing on your front porch."

"Kitty?" Dane asked. "Kitty is one of the animals that just appeared suddenly out of nowhere?"

"Yeah - I told you that when we were kids," Carson struggled to stay calm when he realized how badly words had failed them over the years.

"But I thought you meant, he just showed up one day - like all strays do," Dane explained. "Not that he popped out of the netherworld and just stayed."

"They don't always stay." Carson added.

Dane now bolted up, paced around the room, and glanced nervously at Carson. Shouold he call the - who? The police? A doctor? Carson's parents? A sigh leaked out of him as he came back to his arm chair and sunk once more into it's cushy embrace.

"Well, I don't know that they don't stay," Carson started trying to fill in more details to this nonsense. "Because a lot of times, the animals or people just show up when I am away from home - going somewhere. So I don't know if they disappear again or not. Some of them. BUT, I have seen people pop out in the middle of a sidewalk and once at the playground - look surprised, and pop right out again!"

Carson concluded this statement with a flourish of his hands as though this proved something special about the secretive Cincinnati.

"Is it only Cincinnati?" Dane asked out loud, while still trying to figure out who to call.

"We don't know," Carson answered. "Dad thinks so, as he travels a lot for work, and has never seen the phenomenon other places. But how can we know for sure?"

"Well, that is the questions, isn't it?" Dane agreed. After a steady five minutes of thoughtfuol silence, he continued,

"Dude - you know I am going to have to tell someone about this if you don't stop pulling my leg?"

Carson looked at him strangely. "I was thinking the same thing," he replied.

"What do you mean?" Dane wondered at him.

"Dane, every other Cincinnatian knows this fact to be true about our city. Only new babies have to learn about it."

"Right," Dane snarled, "then why does no one ever talk about it."

Carson went over and knelt in front of his oldest, dearest friend. He looked sort of sad as he began, "We do, buddy."

Carson put his hand over Dane's right hand and continued. "Your parents came to my family while I was visiting last week and told us all this - they said they thought you would outgrow it, like a stigmatism or something. But you haven't. I did not beleive them, Dane. I stood up for you - but they asked me to watch you the next time an appearance happened, when we were together. And tonight it did. They asked if when I was convinced you did not know this, I would be the one to tell you. That you trust me the most."

Dane felt his heart hammering because even though Carson was a joker, he could always tell when he was trying to pull one over on someone. Especially when that someone was him.

His tongue felt dry and he thought he heard flies buzzing in the background.

"How about we go home after the test tomorrow afternoon?" Carson said softly and gently. "I will let your folds know you are coming home for a day or two...they want to get you looked at by a specialist. I gues this has happened once or twice before over the centuries."

Dane had quit listening though,

He was staring out the window of their little apartment at the building across the street. A building that had never been there before. A buiding that had lights on and a guy coming out the front door carrying packages.

Dane had never failed a test in his life, but he took a hit in Economics that semester. And for a few semesters to come.

Susan Whitlock


March 15, 2021 20:27

You must sign up or log in to submit a comment.

1 comment

Bonnie Clarkson
04:28 Mar 27, 2021

I thought you meant that there is more going on than we notice and that then you would tie it into God being omniscent. Interesting story anyway. At the end, you had a couple of typos: folds for folks and gues for guess. Keepwriting. I have written for some more prompts, if you feel like reading them.


Show 0 replies
RBE | Illustration — We made a writing app for you | 2023-02

We made a writing app for you

Yes, you! Write. Format. Export for ebook and print. 100% free, always.