A whirling whisk of rotor blades stirs the puffy batter of string-shaped clouds, its lifting force, a dragging weight to the metal rotaries that flap a pair of windswept wings. The skies sense a certain groan, unmistakable, in the wavering flight of unsteady airfoils that seem mistakable for unsuspecting onlookers who shall be left unnamed.
Directionless, the angles bend at the swipe of a sudden gale, its drafts thieving the helpless craft amid tussling, tossing drafts of flowing current, brash and shaken, rattled and brazen.
ㅤ The lonely sea reaches out, demanding that we part with our 3,000 feet of altitude, but we weren't given much of a choice on whether the height we drifted in was ours to cede, for the ruling of the higher spheres have always claimed the reigns up here and while we sway and steer, despair knows, somehow, exactly where to find us.
The hierarchy of control starts and ends at the hands of nature, whether we deem it true or not. There is no escape in the limits of mankind, but ─
we can damn sure try, at least...
just not today.
We are stranded, standing beside the haplessly heart-clenching mound of a flying vessel ─ though now, it should be renamed a dying vessel, because the enkindled crate of scrap, and flickering heap of shredded junk, still latching on to its final moments of solidity before its vital signs on the heart-beat monitor flat-line into a dredged-up bed of chips and flakes strewed and dispersed, sunk and submerged by the granular and gritty shore, the field of grain stained forevermore;
but the funny thing is, before it was swallowed by flame, and before it had crumbled to ash, the useless carrier seemed almost a sermon before the burial site of the soon-to-be-dead party of victims to Mother Nature, soothing us into a state of acceptance for our entombment.
My only hope is that future explorers stumble upon my gravestone and really read its carving: "If I am found intact, make it so I am no longer that, and let me dip and meld and ebb away into the rolling quilt of salty foam so that it may envelop me whole, like the under-watery inhabitants of sea: the quiet offscourings."
It'll be quite the lengthy message, so I ponder starting it now, scrawling the writings into stone before
I
lose
my
life
and no one thinks to save me an urn…
but desperate times call for desperate measures and so I'll have to settle for a jar.
Farallon, a member of the luckless team, extended his hand and broke my train of thoughts. See ─ I signed up to an air touring agency to be taken on a scenic flight around the world, and now the pilot is somewhere swathed by swelling waves and spilt cascades. The service allowed for a maximum of five sightseers at a time, to not bombard the weight of the chopper, but suppose it falls anyway?
What are we to do now? I haven't even learned the names of the crew of people I'm now stuck with on an island just off the coast of whoknowswhere. But I know who takes charge of the situation. The 'leader' of a pitiful pack, shall we say.
Even from having just met the guy, it wasn't hard to tell Farallon always had something to say ~and at times like these, a little speech of encouragement really goes a long way~ in tricking the band of dopey twits into thinking we will actually find a means out of here without the slightest trace of normalcy or state of things not quite so kindly enough to win in our favour;
smack-dab, the test of patience wears me out faster than the dread that sprouts its set of roots across the loam and soil and clay that hides the bones that don't decay, while the layered sediments that shelter limbs and flesh and meat all meshed into one, the soil, a hoarding miser, relishing its handy traps and gimmick ploys to put stuck souls like me to bed, to rest, to croak a rushed finale of meaningless words in an attempt at wishing away the world with a proper adieu despite the soundless sigh that will arise and fall back to the floor without another ear to catch its drip and trip and limp and dip into the dust where it belongs.
Oh spare me the cruel net of catacombs clipped like a gentle, swaying pair of arms from Death herself, and so, bear me my load, I ask the crust of earth to brace itself a bassinet, in advance, for I must warn the heaviness of burdened minds, like that of mine, will otherwise surely capsize, thus I implore the sand and stones and dunes and bones to cushion up their cradle propped and build a bank that won't be flopped, a crib of slit that I can't topple over and dismantle, for who knows the damage I could cause? What more can the subsiding shore and tide take from the slumping weight of a sorry state and tempter of fate, and can it really last, provided, that the landmass left behind is blighted, for it isn't I that ends lopsided.
Quivered breaths thrum out in prayers, in shaken soughs matched by the woeful, wafting wind, the mutterings of "hail mary's" unlike myself, the spells I cast existing by themselves; the sleepless night that drones us by has us getting ahead of ourselves.
I used to scoff and scorn at hopeful speech givers like him── but after facing what I had faced ──on the subsequent days of treachery and near-death experiences, the spear with which Farallon had used to strike the tirelessly thirsting tiger that fought its way through foliage and forestation to usurp its dominance in this meager isle, abandoned and stripped of delectable, writhing morsels such as I to take easy pickings off of and haul onto the rigidity dinner table of cobbled slabs on gravel mountains that protrude like pedestals, or totems, only beasts are fit to stand upon, for the ravening brutes of the brutal biomes, barbaric, bellicose, too busy brawling to buy into blessings of mercy or weak links to soft things that humans like too much: out here, the frail of hearts will blacken into steel-cold blood, without enough warmth― the waning buds of fear, and doubt, and gloom, all close-knitted and matted and coiled, bodaciously, fittingly fueled and spoiled by the bleak feedings of an emptying mind, seemed… now … things of the past.
It was then, at the wisp's end of life, the threat of a flimsy thread coming apart in the silent snip of a split -scaring me stiff- in its fluttery flitter, almost slips from the sultry slick sweat of my soggy palms, the fluttering wire, not so thin anymore. A sense of powerlessness is plucked from out of my perpetual pit of pessimism.
And I owe it all to Farallon.
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~ poetic rendition ~
{specially composed format)
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A whirling whisk of rotor blades
stirs the puffy batter
of string-shaped clouds,
its lifting force,
a dragging weight
to the metal rotaries
that flap
a pair of windswept wings.
The skies sense
a certain groan, unmistakable,
in the wavering flight
of unsteady airfoils
that seem mistakable
for unsuspecting onlookers
who shall be left unnamed.
Directionless, the angles bend
at the swipe of a sudden gale,
its drafts thieving
the helpless craft amid
tussling, tossing drafts of flowing
current, brash and shaken,
rattled and brazen.
~
~
The lonely sea
reaches out,
demanding that we
part with our
3,000 feet
of altitude,
but we
weren't given
much of a choice
on whether the height
we drifted in
was ours to cede,
for the ruling
of the higher spheres
have always claimed
the reigns up here
and while we sway and steer,
despair
knows, somehow, exactly
where to find us.
The hierarchy of control
starts and ends
at the hands of
nature,
whether we deem it
true or not.
There is no escaping
the limits of
mankind,
but ─
we can damn sure
try, at least.
Just not today.
~
~
We are stranded,
standing beside the
haplessly heart-clinching
mound of a flying vessel─
though now,
it should be renamed
a dying vessel,
because
the enkindled crate of scrap,
and flickering heap
of shredded junk,
still latching on
to its final moments of
solidity
before its vital signs
on the heart-beat monitor
flat-line
into a dredged-up bed of
chips and flakes
strewed and dispersed,
sunk and submerged
by the granular and gritty shore,
the field of grain
stained forevermore;
but the funny thing is,
before it was swallowed by flame,
and before it had crumbled to ash,
the useless carrier
seemed almost a
sermon
before the burial site
of the soon-to-be-dead
party of victims to
Mother Nature,
soothing us into a state
of acceptance
for our entombment.
~
~
My only hope is that
future explorers stumble
upon my gravestone
and really read its carving:
"If I am found intact,
make it so I am
no longer that,
and let me dip
and meld and ebb
away into the rolling
quilt of salty foam
so that it may
envelop me
whole,
like under-
watery
inhabitants of sea:
the quiet
offscourings."
It'll be quite the
lengthy message,
so I ponder
starting it now,
scrawling the writings
into stone
before
I lose
my
life
and
no one
thinks
to
save me an urn.
...but desperate times
call for desperate
measures
and so
I'll
have to
settle
for a jar.
~
~
Farallon,
a member of the luckless team,
extended his
hand
and broke my
train of thoughts.
See ─ I signed up
to an air touring agency
to be taken on
a scenic flight around
the world,
and now the pilot
is somewhere swathed
by swelling waves,
and split cascades.
The service allowed
for a maximum
of five sightseers
at a time,
to not bombard the
weight of the chopper,
but suppose it
falls anyway?
~
~
What are we to do now?
I haven't even
learned the names of
the crew of people
I'm now stuck with on an
island just off the
coast of ─whoknowswhere─
but I know who takes
charge of the situation.
The 'leader' of a pitiful
pack, shall we say.
~
Even from having
just met the guy,
it wasn't hard to tell
Farallon always had
something
to
say
~and at times like these,
a little speech of encouragement
really goes a long way~
in tricking the band
of dopey twits
into thinking
we will
actually
find a means
out of here
without the slightest
trace of normalcy
or state of things,
not quite so kindly
enough
to
be
in
our
favour;
smack-dab, the test
of patience wears
me out
faster than the
dread that sprouts
its set of roots
across the loam
and soil and clay
that hides the
bones
that don't decay,
while the layered
sediments
sheltering
limbs and flesh and meat
all meshed into one,
the soil, a hoarding miser,
relishing its handy traps
and gimmick ploys
to put
stuck souls like me
to bed,
to rest,
to croak
a rushed finale of
meaningless words
in an attempt
at wishing away
the world
in a
proper
adieu
despite the
soundless sigh that will
arise and fall
back to the floor
without another
ear to catch
its drip
and trip
and limp
and dip
into the dust where
it belongs.
~
~
Oh spare me the cruel net
of catacombs
clipped like a gentle,
swaying pair of arms
from Death herself,
and so, bear me my load,
I ask the crust of earth to
brace itself a bassinet,
in advance, for I must warn
the heaviness of
burdened minds,
like that of mine,
will otherwise
surely capsize,
thus I implore
the sand and stones
and dunes and bones
to cushion up their
cradle propped
and build a bank that won't be flopped,
a crib of slit that I can't top-
-ple over and dismantle,
for who knows the damage I could cause?
What more can the subsiding shore and tide
take from the slumping weight
of a sorry state and
tempter of fate,
and can it really last,
provided, that the
landmass left is blighted
and it isn't I
that ends
lopsided.
~
~
Quivered breaths
thrum out in prayers,
in shaken soughs matched
by the woeful, wafting wind,
the mutterings of
"hail mary's"
unlike myself,
the spells I cast
existing by themselves;
the sleepless night that drones us by
has us getting ahead of ourselves.
~
I used to scoff and scorn
at hopeful speech-givers
like him,
but after
facing what I had faced,
── on the subsequent days
of treachery and
near-death experiences,
the spear with which
Farallon had used
to strike
the tirelessly thirsting tiger
that fought its way
through foliage and forestation
to usurp its dominance in this
meager isle, abandoned and
stripped of
delectable, writhing morsels
such as I
to take easy pickings off of
and haul onto the rigidity
dinner table of
cobbled slabs
on gravel mountains
that protrude
like pedestals, or totems,
only beasts are
fit to stand upon,
for the ravening brutes of the brutal biomes,
barbaric, bellicose,
too busy brawling
to buy into blessings of
mercy or
weak links to
soft things
that humans like
too much:
out here,
the frail of hearts
will blacken
into steel-cold blood,
without
enough
warmth ──
the waning buds of
fear, and doubt, and gloom,
all close-knitted and matted and coiled,
bodaciously, fittingly fueled and spoiled
by the bleak feedings of an emptying mind,
seemed, now,
things
of
the
past.
~
~
It was then, at the wisp's end of life,
the threat of a flimsy thread
coming apart
in the silent snip of
a split,
-scaring me stiff-
in its fluttery flitter,
almost slips from
the
sultry
slick
sweat
of my
soggy
palms,
the fluttering wire,
not so thin anymore.
A sense of powerlessness
is plucked from out of
my perpetual pit
of pessimism.
And I owe
it
all
to
Farallon.
─
─ - ─
── - ──
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Thank you for reading!! I wanted to try exploring a new format for the story, so there are 2 renditions: one following the natural prose of a short tale, and the other, a poetic composition. Feel free to view either or even both! And I hope it was an enjoyable read! (*˘︶˘*).。.:*♡ ~ Further Information ~ • This story is set in the Farallon Islands, hence the name of the recurrent character. • The names of the five members from the scenic flight service are as follows: Farallon, Phoenix, Marmanuca, Auckland and Teteparen. ^^All of which we...
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