the day of the wrong suspect end.by Ammaar Yusuf

Submitted into Contest #72 in response to: Write a mystery where the detective realizes at the last moment that they have the wrong suspect.... view prompt

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Adventure Crime Mystery

I was walking down the path when I saw a man's body. Then I saw a police officer and a detective the police officer yelled put your hands up , the police officer handcuffed my hands and put me in to the police car, I peeked to see what the detective was doing, the detective said "he has been stabbed twenty three times", " what?" I said to my self, then I check if I had a knife in my pants I was happy to see that I had no knife but why would the police officer think that I was the person who killed the man? the police officer came in " you know that your go to court" he said, I heard what the detective say "he was shot one time and stabbed  twenty three times". I saw blood on the detective hand it been fifteen minutes I saw how big court was ,the police said "we're here", the police open the door I walk out I was happy to have fresh air I walk in to the court room there was so many people the police officer walked me to my chair the judge asked "are you guilty?" I said "no" because i knew i was not the killer, the police officer said " would do you mean?" I was frustrated the detective said my name is Dave, then he run away I was curious where he want. I was bored I miss my cat named Jack and who will feed him. it been 5 hour" luke" the judge said, is the police officer name. The judge said Luke I said to my self so his name is Luke I don't care if his name is Luke, officer Luke said the judge check dave if I has a knife officer....he check all over my pant and my shirt officer Luke said he does not have a knife or a gun the judge said "good". I was going to jail I said "what!!!!!! why me!!!I'm the wrong suspect please I have cat to feed" I said to the judge " i don't care" the police said I'm going to jail I walk to the jail cell there was a prison roommate I said the police said yes he was here for like 13 years wow I said the roommate name was jack, I said" hi I'm will" I asked "why are you here" I asked, " I killed someone" he said, "why?" I said, "I have dog name JJ and a man call my dog stupid so I killed the man" jack said. "its getting dark", " we better go to sleep" I said...the next day I woke up I was at the top and my buddy sleeping on the floor I woke him up too I yelled to the police officer where is my food then one person said '"shut up", "I'm sleeping" someone said, "where my food", "stop being annoying" the same person said .That guy is so mean I said I'm so exhausted I want food finally we got food I was so happy... yuck I said what in the food and why is it cold I said jack said it frozen food. What I said there so mean I hate being at jail jack said yeah me too I wish I that I do not go outside. I have 16 years I said. Do we have outside time to get fresh I said air yes we do it fun said Jack I have so many friends in this prison does some of your friends try to escape I said yes when I came I had a roommate but he left so I was sad that time I had no friends being new in jail is boring I wanted more friends but I can't because all them will call stupid or idiot why do I walk down the path I'm so dumb. Stop calling your self dumb or idiot I'm so annoyed. will stop jack said I miss my cat and my friends I'm so frustrated. finally" we get to go outside" wow how big jail I said someone said it so big said jack. I want to play basketball I said ok jack said I will get the ball I'm good at basketball I said good for you jack said.... 1-19 wow your good will said jack thanks when I was a kid I was a pro at basketball will said who that guy he's coming to us hi I'm mason hi mason we both said your good at basketball can you teach me please sure next time mason I said thank you mason said. police came up to us I was and said sorry for putting you to prison the detective found the killer we have to get him ok sure but how but mason my friend....there my friend know how to play basketball ok now we need get that killer"....there he is wow he's good at parkour" go to opposite side now go go go!!!!!! more cop came, no!!!!!! he's running away go go he's so fast he so good at parkour how he could do a flip wow more police ok I'm going call for back up..... go go go police officer what I say to my self why is there Luke why why why Luke I hate Luke omg we are " so fast yes yes yes yes we I'm so fast I got he's shirt no no no he's so fast come on come on please police block yes!!!!!!!got him punch pow pow kick..... ouch ouch pow pow pow yes police officer get him please yes ha ha ha ha your going to court shut up no you shut up no you shut up no you shut up stop boys..... bye have a good time at jail will you can one of the prisoners I pick jack because he's my friend hi jack buddy don't kill. Ok hi jack my cat do you miss me I 'm eating I'm going to feed you too THE END

December 13, 2020 23:43

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Hawwa Yusuf
00:25 Dec 14, 2020

good job!!!!!!!!!

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Ammaar Yusuf
00:17 Dec 14, 2020

sorry about the miss spelling! im just a kid please send me feedback thanks!!!

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