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Submitted into Contest #79 in response to: Write about someone who decides it’s time to cut ties with a family member.... view prompt
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I want to try and give you a little advice. I would try to develop your characters more deeply through detail and dialogue. The storyline is difficult to follow due to it being written in upper case. Try to integrate the theme into the elements of the story, such as plot and characters. The setting should be integral to the story. Try to use vocabulary to make the story unique. Try to use 'prose that sings'. Unique metaphors and similes. My main point would be that it was difficult to read due to all words being in upper case. I wish you th...
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Yes ma'am..Thank you for picking out cons for making them turn into pros.
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