The jealous girlfriend of the boyfriend with superpowers.

Submitted into Contest #32 in response to: Write about two people in a relationship. One of them has special powers, the other does not. ... view prompt

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Once upon a time there was a young lady And a man that dated. The young lady became obnoxiously anger with her spouse she got very upset that her boyfriend had extra ordinary super powers and she did not . one day her boyfriend tried to charm her and he wanted to use his superpowers ,so he had roses just falling from the sky and freezing in the sky with snowflakes falling down she became very upset she love that idea and but she knew any girl would dream of that but with her ungrateful ways she became very angry and she told him they need to talk so she pulled him aside after he did this wonderful thing for her and she told him that they can no longer see each other he became very upset and started crying she broke it off with him after that she never seen him again so moral of the story is care for your spouse even if they're showing you their affection because it's some people out here does not have that, hurt and abused and don't have that, the end.

Part 2 so then good news seen her walking down the street with her new boyfriend and she was so explaining herself in so excited and he just looked at her he said what does he have that I don't have so she she still walk down the street she never spotted him a day of her life so he began to go about his day and one day it was a real big party and he knew everyone in town was going to be there so he grabbed his fancy new slacks with his nice fancy shirt and put on his nice shoes and slicked his hair back with his gel and he figured out he didn't know what coat he was going to wear the top off his outfit so as he sit there to himself decided if he was going to wear a hat to top it off so then he began sitting there pondering and wondering if she was going to be there with her new dude and he's looking all nice he bet she'll be looking all nice to and how she broke his heart and how he was see her there with her boyfriend then again new boyfriend she will have on her nice fancy dress at this glamorous ball every girl in their will hit it off with him but he knew that was the one that he wanted so he came up with a routine of how he was going to dance and still her back but he know that she would never want him back because he have super powers and she just didn't like that so he said oh man how can I get a rid of these super powers so that I can be an ordinary man ordinary boy and win her back but he knew that was impossible so you said well maybe I'll start dancing with another girl at the ball and make her look at me but he knew she was in that fun of jealousy of other girls so he knew that wouldn't work so he said how man how can I get him away from her haha I know I'll get her a ring and proposed to her and tell her that I really love her and I think we should run off and be together but he thought that would be too big of a scene and then she'll just cop off with this little it's not time yet I don't really want to do that and plus why would you causes big commotion in front of my boyfriend.so he knew this wasn't just any ordinary party so he just don't like well I still buy the ring it's just showed her that I really want to be with her and that I think that we are meant to be but he knew that he had still had his superpowers and he knew that even if they was Marry it still wouldn't work. So he like I've spent all this money on this nice big diamond ring and it won't even get her attention she doesn't look at me like I know you're just doing this because you know that I don't want to be with you and that I have all this other just cause a big drama scene so he sat there and slumped over and looked at his nice suit and his nice outfit with tears just dripping and drenching down his eyes still hurt from the fact that he couldn't do nothing about him having these wonderful superpowers and he know that he was a wonderful person and anyone would dream to be with him but it wasn't that it was that he had these wonderful magnificent super powers in that she didn't care nothing of it even if he didn't use it or even if he use it to charm her so he was getting ready for the dance for the big ball of his life a sudden thought upon himself I have to make this happen I had to make this right so he wrote a note to himself explaining what he'll do it how he'll do it to win her back he knew maybe it wouldn't work but he had to shoot his shot so he's getting ready for the dance he got his nice rides nice outfit on and it's almost time he's about a hour and to start he's about to hop in his car and drive off as he getting his car and started his engine, he's looking around like oh man I remember her reminiscing about her being in the seat next to him. So as his adrenaline began to rush he become frightened scared of what may happen or how it may happen or when it may happen but he know that this was his only shot it's a big dance a lot of people around he had the Ring of his life ain't know that he was going to win his woman back over his princess his Queen do you know even if she be mean he just had to have her so as he's cruising down to the ball he's saying everybody going inside everybody's going inside so he puts the ring in his pocket right in the side of his jacket m&m sizes so it won't slip out a perfect fit for his pocket not too big not too small just the right size he knew that he was going to pop the question as he drop it down in his pocket he's walking he began to step out of his car he pop his door open he steps out looking sharp looking nice he knew he had it going on hair slicked back nice outfit but he just know that she'll be there he'll be there and he just has to have this one moment with her to make it right so he walks in the ball and he's dancing and he's dancing as the night gets darker he see her walks in with her nice shimmer and glittery gray and white with the wear her cape going over it nice Shaw. And when you see her he realize that she's alone he's like yeah she came by herself but then he thought to himself or no maybe he's out fixing a car or something but I know she would have come here alone so her date walks in right couple of seconds late behind her oh honey can I take your coat and check it in she's like yes yes yes sudden he just knew that it wasn't going to be that easy 😂😡 then he thought maybe I'll go use the bathroom and freshen up then she started dancing with him dancing with him you know time went by laughing tripling all over him he's like can I get you a drink and their ex-boyfriend thought yes this the perfect time I can win her back he's not there is he's going the lines long for the drinks he won't be back until probably like 5 or 10 minutes that should give me enough time she can't possibly say no that fast so he goes and she's not he's not is you okay to sit down and wait for me until I come back with your drink she's like yeah yeah I'm okay I'm okay so he goes and he's got goals to go grab her a drink and then as he see him walk off and drop her off into the crowd she goes and sit down at the table and wait for him so I guess and then he pulls a ring out of his pocket he looks at it he open and he's like yes I will leave this with her and she has to accept that she just has to accept my gift I had to have her so he walks over there and he's looking at her and you just hurry up and burst out Hi how are you she's like I don't want to be bothered why I see you I see that you're busy and you're sitting here by yourself she's like no I'm not by myself then I tell you that I don't want to be with you because you're too different you're just too different you just need to bug off so she just goes and wanders off gets up then you say no before you walk off I had something for you she's like what is it he thought that she wouldn't even be interested how she just act so he hurry up and grab it out of pocket knowing that she may not accept will you marry me what kind of magic joke is this is this some type of joke are you kidding don't you ever embarrass me like that in front of these people why do you have to be so horribly mean when I just try to show you my affection she's like you're serious yes I'm serious you just see me with somebody else and you just just don't want me to be happy she's a how could you use a how could you be happy with somebody and we was happy together I know sometimes I make you upset with the extraordinary stuff that I do but I do it because I love you so then she just looks at him and just smiling and glazing and then she just thinks back oh I have a boyfriend new boyfriend is she just have to tell him that she has somebody else so she just breaks it off I have somebody else and I'm here with him and I don't think that would be appropriate and besides don't you have something else better to do why don't you just bug off so she just looks looking around wondering where could he be and then he's like just just take it and just think on it and let me know so she's like let me see it let me just see it then since you so interested in me so he opened a ring up and she sees it and she's like oh my gosh this has to be like a very expensive ring is just so beautiful he like where you accept and then she's like he know that she may not accept or he would know that he may have one but he just knew that he has to make things right and they had to be together so you know it's meant to so she's thinking and thinking and thinking and thinking and he's like please hurry up please hurry up I just really want to know and then she just burst out I guess I can give it a try yes we can get married and he was like what about whatever then I walked off and I started dancing and dancing get her boyfriend comes up not thinking nothing of it oh we're here together then she just tell some well I don't know if we should be together you know I have something I just think we should just take this time and be apart the end.

March 08, 2020 20:16

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James Offenha
22:04 Mar 18, 2020

Not sure why there’s no punctuation. Difficult to follow. A lot of stereotypical language. I’d be careful using emojis in a story too. I got the basis of the story. Also, you use engfish (look up online) a lot. This story was difficult to read.

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