The Ice Veins

Submitted into Contest #281 in response to: Set your story during the coldest day of the year.... view prompt

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Fantasy Horror Thriller

The coldest day of the year had arrived in Black Hollow, and no one dared venture beyond their doors. The frost was unnatural, deeper and sharper than anything that came before it. The townsfolk whispered that it was the doing of the ice veins—strange fissures that had appeared across the frozen lake in the past few weeks, glowing faintly blue as if alive.

Samantha "Sam" Miller didn’t believe in the town's superstitions. She believed in science, in reason. Ice veins were just a natural phenomenon, caused by trapped gases or thermal pressure—nothing magical about them. But tonight, as the frost deepened and the world outside her cabin seemed to still, a creeping unease gnawed at her.

She stared out the frost-covered window at the frozen lake, her breath fogging the glass. Beyond the skeletal trees, she could see the faint glow of the ice veins pulsing like a heartbeat, lighting up the snow-covered ground in shifting waves of blue. She shivered, though her fire blazed hot behind her.

Sam turned away from the window and pulled her coat on. Enough was enough. She’d been meaning to examine the lake since the rumors began, but bad weather and work had kept her away. The mystery of the ice veins was too good to pass up, even on a night like this.

With her lantern in one hand and her ice pick in the other, she braced herself against the bitter wind and stepped into the night. The world was silent, save for the crunch of her boots on the frozen ground. The frost seemed to hang in the air, sparkling in the light of her lantern like suspended diamonds.

As she reached the edge of the lake, the glowing veins became clearer. They spiderwebbed beneath the surface, crisscrossing the ice in intricate, unnatural patterns. Sam knelt and pressed her gloved hand to the surface. It felt warm, even through the thick leather.

"Impossible," she muttered.

She swung her ice pick against the surface. The blade glanced off the ice with a loud crack, but no shard broke free. She struck again, harder this time, and the ice groaned in protest. Her lantern flickered.

Then, the veins moved.

Sam froze, her breath catching in her throat. The faint blue glow pulsed brighter, and she swore the veins were shifting, rearranging themselves into new patterns. The ice groaned again, louder this time, like a great beast stirring beneath her feet.

Before she could move, the surface shattered.

Sam plunged into the freezing water, the cold stealing her breath instantly. Her lantern extinguished, and the world went black. She clawed at the ice, gasping, her gloves sliding on the slick edges. But as she thrashed, something caught her ankle.

A hand.

She screamed, bubbles exploding from her mouth. She twisted, kicking wildly, but the grip was ironclad. A face loomed beneath her in the eerie blue light, pale and lifeless, its hollow eyes staring into hers.

With a surge of strength, Sam tore free and dragged herself onto the ice, coughing and gasping for air. She scrambled away from the hole, shivering violently, her soaked clothes stiffening in the freezing air.

But she wasn’t alone.

Figures began to rise from the ice, their forms pale and spectral, their limbs twisted unnaturally. Their glowing eyes fixed on her as they moved closer, the frost trailing them like smoke.

Sam stumbled to her feet, her body screaming in protest. She turned to run, but her path was blocked. A towering figure stood before her, its form wreathed in frost and shadow, its face obscured by a crown of jagged ice.

"You should not have come here," it said, its voice like the howl of a blizzard.

"What… what do you want?" Sam stammered, her teeth chattering.

"You trespassed where you do not belong," the figure said, stepping closer. "The ice veins are not of this world. They bind the living to the dead, and now… you are theirs."

Sam shook her head, backing away. “I don’t belong to anything!”

The figure raised an icy hand, and the veins beneath the lake glowed brighter, the patterns shifting once more. Sam’s heart sank as she realized what they had formed: her own face, etched into the frozen surface.

The ground beneath her feet cracked. She fell again, plunging into the icy depths—but this time, the water felt warm, almost welcoming.

The pale hands reached for her once more, and this time, she didn’t resist.

When the townsfolk ventured out the next morning, they found the lake frozen solid again, the ice veins glowing faintly beneath the surface. But among the patterns was something new:

A figure, encased in ice, her face frozen in a serene expression.

Sam had joined the ice veins, becoming part of the strange, pulsing web beneath the lake. And as the frost deepened that year, the glow of the veins seemed brighter than ever, as if they were growing—waiting for the next curious soul to come too close.

The lake froze over again, smooth as glass, but beneath the surface, the glowing veins writhed, shifting their patterns as if alive. The townsfolk who dared to approach felt the unnatural cold radiating from it, deeper than the bitterest winter chill. Whispers spread quickly about Samantha Miller’s disappearance.

“She was too curious,” said old Mr. Barrow, shaking his head. “You go pokin’ at what shouldn’t be disturbed, you get what’s comin’ to you.”

But others whispered darker rumors—that they had seen her face beneath the ice, etched among the glowing veins, her expression oddly calm. Some claimed they could hear a faint voice carried on the wind, calling for help, though none dared get close enough to listen.

Far beneath the ice, in a world of freezing blue light, Sam woke.

The air wasn’t cold here—not anymore. It was warm, the glow of the veins pulsing around her like a heartbeat. She floated, weightless, surrounded by shimmering shapes that moved like shadows in water. Her body felt strange. She looked at her hands and found them translucent, pale and almost crystalline. Her movements left trails of frost in the water, like ripples on a frozen pond.

“You’ve awakened.”

The Frost King’s voice echoed through the chamber, though Sam couldn’t see him. She turned, her eyes adjusting to the shimmering world. The figures that had once reached for her now drifted in the distance, their faces blank, their movements listless.

“What have you done to me?” Sam demanded, her voice shaking, though the sound came out strangely hollow.

“I have given you a choice,” the Frost King said, appearing in a burst of frost and shadow. His towering form radiated power, the crown of jagged ice on his head glowing faintly. “You could have accepted your fate as one of the forgotten, lost among the veins. But you resisted. That resistance makes you… useful.”

“Useful for what?” Sam asked, her anger rising.

The Frost King gestured to the writhing veins around them, the glowing lattice that seemed to stretch endlessly into the frozen abyss. “These veins are ancient, older than your town, older than memory itself. They are a bridge between worlds—between the living and the dead. The foolish mortals above have disturbed them, and the balance is breaking.

Cracks are forming.”

“What does that have to do with me?”

“You will repair the cracks.”

Sam shook her head, backing away. “I didn’t agree to this. I just wanted to understand what was happening—”

“And now you will,” the Frost King interrupted, his glowing eyes narrowing. “You are bound to the veins, Samantha Miller. Their power flows through you now. You can feel it, can’t you? The connection?”

Sam froze, her breath hitching. She could feel it. A pulse, steady and rhythmic, like her own heartbeat but… not. It was in her chest, her hands, her mind. Every flicker of the veins around her felt as familiar as her own thoughts.

“This isn’t a gift,” she spat. “It’s a prison.”

The Frost King’s expression didn’t change, but the air around him grew colder. “The balance must be preserved. If it breaks completely, the living and the dead will spill into one another, destroying both. The veins chose you to protect them.”

Sam clenched her fists, the frost around her swirling. “And what if I refuse?”

The Frost King leaned closer, his icy presence suffocating. “You would cease to exist, lost forever among the others.” He gestured to the pale figures drifting in the abyss. “Their faces are gone. Their names forgotten.

Is that what you want?”

Sam’s mind raced. She hated him, hated what had been done to her. But she couldn’t deny the truth: she felt the veins calling to her, their song filling her mind. And deep down, she knew he was right. The cracks were spreading. If they weren’t repaired, something terrible would happen.

“What do I have to do?” she asked finally, her voice low.

The Frost King smiled, the expression cruel and cold. “You will know when the time comes. For now, I will return you to the surface. But remember: the veins are part of you now. You cannot escape them.”

Sam woke on the edge of the lake, frost clinging to her skin. The townsfolk found her there the next morning, shivering but alive.

“You’re lucky to be alive,” the doctor told her, wrapping her in blankets by the fire. But Sam barely heard him. The glow of the veins still pulsed in her mind, faint but insistent.

Over the following weeks, she tried to return to her old life, but it was impossible. She could hear the veins humming beneath the ground, feel their energy coursing through her. And then, one night, the cracks began.

It started with the frost. It spread unnaturally fast, crawling up the walls of homes and snapping tree branches with explosive force. Ghostly figures began to appear in the streets, flickering in and out of sight.

Sam stood at the edge of the lake, staring at the glowing veins that now spread into the town itself. The Frost King’s words echoed in her mind:

“You will repair the cracks.”

Taking a deep breath, she stepped onto the ice. This time, the frost didn’t burn her—it welcomed her. She knelt, placing her hands on the surface, and felt the veins respond, their light growing brighter.

The cracks closed, and the ghosts faded, but Sam knew this was only the beginning. The balance was fragile, and it would take all her strength to keep it intact.

Sam was no longer just a scientist, no longer just a curious explorer. She was the keeper of the ice veins, bound to their power for as long as the cold endured.

And in Black Hollow, the cold never truly left.

December 15, 2024 07:04

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