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Kids Mystery

Authors Note: This is one of the presents I am giving to my almost 5-year-old brother. His birthday is on September 14th. Just a heads up, this story is not true in case you didn’t already know. So happy birthday Joe!!!!


“Yes, I understand he is talented but can he attend this school?”

“Ms. Roberts I can assure you that my son is a very talented young boy. He has never received a grade lower than an ‘A’ in his life! He is also a talented athlete and musician. He does it all!” Mrs. Tate said convincingly.

Joseph Tate is a talented young boy. He was thirteen years old and already a better basketball player than LeBron James. His mother was trying to get him into the best school in the world. But as you could imagine it was really hard to get into.

Joe had applied last year but they denied his application. He had worked harder and harder each month trying to get in. He could play the piano like Mozart, and he knew every country, state, and provinces in the world. But yet there were students attending Bridgewater school considered as more intelligent.

The principal of the school (Ms. Roberts) had put Joe on the waiting list until further notice. She told us a lot of people couldn’t take the pressure of the school and dropped out. That was good news for Joe because he was first on the waiting list. 

Today they were visiting the school to make sure it was the right fit. They had always assumed it would be perfect and never went to visit. 

“So this is our science room. I was told Joe was very good at this subject.” She turned her head to look at Joe.

“Um...Yeah. I love all subjects.” He looked down at his shoes and kept walking.

“What he means is, he’s good at all the subjects.” Mrs. Tate said with a laugh. Joe was a smart kid but he never intended to go to a kind of school like this. He wanted to be a normal kid.


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“Joe!!!! Guess what, guess what, guess what?!” Mrs. Tate yelled from upstairs.

“What?” Joe asked softly.

“Some kid got kicked off the school list because he lied on his application. I guess his mom just really wanted him to go there. I just don’t get what kind of parents would do that!”

“Yeah, I wonder.” He muttered.

“Aren’t you excited? Oh, we need to get some proper school clothes for you. You need to look like a nerd!!” She said excitedly. 

Joe nodded and walked upstairs.

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It was the first day of school and Mrs. Tate had picked out the perfect outfit for Joe to wear. Joe put on his outfit fast, even though he didn’t want to go he never liked to be late.

They got in the car and started to drive there. Joe’s bag had to be enormous. The school sent out an email saying all the supplies you would be needing. It was much more than his former school had asked for.

Once they got there Joe got out slowly and said goodbye to his mom. The school was located in Ulm, Germany. But since Joe and his family lived in California they attended the same school but in a different place. They decided to make more of the Bridgewater schools because they realized not everyone could fly to Germany every day.  

Joe assumed the school would be much easier than everyone made it seem, even if it was the best school in the world. 

Once he walked into the school he saw what he least expected. It looked like people were flying. But when he looked closer he saw they were standing on drones. A girl jumped off her drone and walked over to him.

“Hey, are you new here?”

Joe replied with a simple yes and continued to look around. “You're going to love it here. Did you know one of the founding fathers of our school was Albert Einstein? I guess that’s one of the reasons we have a reputation for being super smart.” She paused to look at Joe. Joe didn’t answer, he was too amazed by the drone technology.

“Oh, the drones! Do you like them? I designed the blueprints for them. Sally over there put them together. I’m Rachel by the way,” She said, sticking out her hand. Joe shook it and looked up at Rachel.

“I’m Joe,” He said simply.

“Your Joe? I’ve heard lots about you! You are supposed to be smart, huh? What’s 10 × 4 - 2 × (16 ÷ 4) ÷ 2 ÷ 1/2 + 9? Don’t think, just answer.”

“I don’t know, 22.5?” Joe said unsure of himself.

“You don't know? It’s worse to answer and say you're unsure than to not answer and really know the correct answer.”

“What?” Joe asked.

“I’m saying...You know what never mind. Here I’ll show you to your first class.” She walked in front of Joe while he followed. While they were walking through the hallways Joe saw many different inventions students had made. This school was nothing like he had ever seen before. 

He could have sworn he saw a saber-toothed tiger in the science lab. He almost asked about it, but he didn’t want to look dumb in front of Rachel.

“I saw your mouth open,” Rachel said, staring him down. “What were you going to say?”

“Nothing.” He said looking away from her.

“You know it doesn’t make you dumb to ask a question.” She said turning away. Joe thought about that for a moment. He had heard that from numerous teachers before but there was something about Rachel that made it sound more true. 

“Are you in my first class?” Joe asked, trying to change the subject.

“Oh, no. I was told you needed to be taught about our school. You see we have made many different science inventions, unlocked many doors in the math program, and our sports teams have been playing phenomenally lately. Ms. Robert’s told me that you needed to be loosened up. That you need to be informed about nature.”

Joe didn’t know how to respond but he nodded. When Rachel stopped he almost bumped into her. “Here we are, just through those doors. Well, nice meeting you!” She walked back down the hallway and Joe opened the door. 

He couldn’t believe what he saw in the classroom and he was never able to describe it to anyone.





September 12, 2020 21:36

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236 comments

B. W.
14:37 Sep 23, 2020

Hey Evelyn, will ya make some more stories soon? i'd love to see more

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Evelyn ⭐️
14:09 Sep 25, 2020

Hopefully, I am just really busy with school right now.

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05:57 Sep 23, 2020

Love this story!! Are you up to an upvote spree for an upvote spree? I just got downvoted 200+ points, and I want to help you cause I know how ya feel!

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Evelyn ⭐️
14:08 Sep 25, 2020

Oh man, I would love to help you out!!

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16:00 Sep 25, 2020

Alright, I'll upvote ya!

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16:15 Sep 25, 2020

Kay, I just did!

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Evelyn ⭐️
15:46 Sep 28, 2020

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!

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B. W.
21:29 Sep 22, 2020

i know who the down-voter is

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Evelyn ⭐️
21:44 Sep 22, 2020

Same, It's that Mia girl

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B. W.
21:48 Sep 22, 2020

don't ya think we should do something?

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Evelyn ⭐️
21:48 Sep 22, 2020

I don't know!! I just commented on her page

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B. W.
21:49 Sep 22, 2020

well alright

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18:09 Sep 20, 2020

Hey, Evelyn would be kind to watch the first video it's on Harry potter. https://youtu.be/KxfnREWgN14 Sorry for asking your time, I would ready your story

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Evelyn ⭐️
18:14 Sep 20, 2020

Ok cool! Thanks for reading!!

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Ariadne .
22:39 Sep 19, 2020

Happy bday to your brother! This story was excellent - makes me wish my siblings would do something like this for me. Alas, I have not been so fortunate. Anyhoo, your story is crazy good. The dialogue is great, unlike some stories where they just take away from the overall plot. I noticed some errors here and there. "But as you could imagine it was really hard to get into." ~ Try replacing the 'but' with 'however' or another phrase. The 'but' kind of messes with the flow, if you get what I mean. That's the only type of mistake I saw, but ...

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Evelyn ⭐️
14:49 Sep 20, 2020

Thank you so much for the advice and reading!! I would love to read your stories! Omg she's my favorite princess too!!!

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Ariadne .
02:37 Oct 02, 2020

I just looked at your bio and I'm so sorry you got downvoted! It sucks! Luckily, there are tons of other people willing to help with that. So, upvote for an upvote? Starting number of points: 2152 Ending number: 2404 Congrats on your new points!!!! I got you around 250-ish!!!! Mind upvoting me as well? Thanks!

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Evelyn ⭐️
20:56 Oct 05, 2020

OMG!!! Thanks so much!!

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Ariadne .
21:51 Oct 05, 2020

No problem! Could you upvote me a little too? Some meanie has been attacking me everyday this past week, so I've been receiving tons of comments and likes but getting no points for it. It sucks...

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B. W.
14:39 Oct 14, 2020

Hey, what do you think of the update?

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C.j 🤍
00:24 Oct 06, 2020

Do you have any new story’s?

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C.j 🤍
03:25 Oct 04, 2020

I have a new story out 🙂 !

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C.j 🤍
21:56 Oct 03, 2020

How are you doing

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Evelyn ⭐️
20:57 Oct 05, 2020

Great, how about you?

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C.j 🤍
00:21 Oct 06, 2020

Good....could you please read my new story

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