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Fantasy Inspirational

In the city of Brightmoor, your soul wasn’t private. It was written on your skin. Life Threads, intricate tattoos that grew and shifted with every emotion, told the story of who you were. Joy painted streaks of gold; love etched soft pinks; anger burned jagged black scars. Your thread was both your truth and your sentence.

Nora Gray hated hers. Deep black streaks twisted and coiled across her arms, remnants of years spent drowning in envy and rage. Faint traces of blue and yellow peeked through—a life that once held promise, was now smothered. She wore gloves, long sleeves, anything to hide her thread, but Brightmoor’s judgment was relentless. People glanced at her and saw a warning.

Her sister Lily, by contrast, had a Life Thread like sunlight. Pink and gold wove across her skin, glowing with warmth. Lily was everything Nora wasn’t: adored, charming, perfect. Wherever Lily walked, people softened, drawn to her light.

One afternoon, Lily burst into their father’s tiny kitchen, her laugh slicing through the air.

“Nora!” she said, holding out her hand. “Guess what?”

Nora didn’t look up from the dishes. “What?”

“Jake proposed!” Lily’s grin stretched impossibly wide, the diamond catching the light like a dagger.

Nora froze. Jake. The man who had once kissed her under Brightmoor’s lanterns, whispering that she was different, special. The man who had promised her a future, only to drift toward Lily’s golden glow.

“That’s… wonderful,” Nora forced out, her voice tight with effort.

“You’ll be my maid of honor, won’t you?” Lily asked, oblivious.

Nora turned and smiled. “Of course.”

She wanted to scream.

That night, alone in her cramped apartment, Nora rolled up her sleeve and stared at her thread. A new black streak had formed, cutting across her arm like a fresh wound. She pressed her fingers to it, the burn of jealousy and betrayal spreading through her chest.

She grabbed her paintbrush, hoping to find solace in her art, but the canvas mocked her. Every stroke was wrong. The colors bled together, muddy and lifeless. Furious, she threw the brush across the room. It hit the wall with a satisfying thud, the sound breaking the suffocating silence.

By midnight, Nora couldn’t stay inside any longer. She threw on a coat and wandered the glowing streets of Brightmoor, the icy wind biting at her skin.

Her feet carried her to the edge of the district, to an alleyway she’d never noticed before. A small, dim shop sat at the end, its neon sign flickering: Ezra’s Etchery. Something about it pulled her in.

Inside, the air smelled of ink and burning sage. The walls were covered in sketches of Life Threads, intricate and vibrant, more beautiful than anything Nora had ever seen.

Behind the counter sat a man. His dark eyes pinned her in place, sharp and curious, as though he already knew why she was there.

“Rough night?” he asked.

Nora hesitated. “You could say that.”

He stood, gesturing toward the chair. “I’m Ezra. You look like someone ready for a change.”

Nora sat, her curiosity overpowering her caution. “What kind of change?”

Ezra opened a leather-bound book, flipping through sketches of threads in transformation. “I rewrite Life Threads. I can take away the marks you don’t want—the scars, the black streaks. Start fresh.”

Her breath caught. “You can erase them?”

Ezra nodded. “But there’s a cost. I can take the pain, but the memories tied to it will go, too. The anger, the jealousy, I think it will all disappear. You’ll feel lighter, but you’ll lose the parts of yourself that caused those marks.”

“What’s the catch?” she asked, her voice trembling.

“The scars are part of your story,” Ezra said. “Erase them, and you erase the lessons they taught you. You might not recognize yourself anymore.”

The idea of being free from her pain was intoxicating, but something about it felt wrong. She stood abruptly, wrapping her arms around herself. “I need time to think.”

Ezra nodded. “Take your time. The ink will wait.”

Over the next few days, Nora tried to ignore the temptation. But Lily’s wedding plans were everywhere—her voice, her laughter, her golden thread wrapping tighter around everyone who came near. Jake’s name was on Lily’s lips constantly. The burn-in Nora’s chest became unbearable.

One evening, Nora stormed back into Ezra’s shop, her sleeves rolled up. “Do it,” she said.

Ezra didn’t ask questions. He guided her to the chair, his touch steady and unyielding. The process was painless, a faint warmth spreading through her arm as he worked.

When it was over, Nora stared at her thread. The black streaks were gone, replaced by faint traces of light. She should have felt relief, but all she felt was… nothing.

At first, it was a relief. She attended Lily’s engagement party, smiling, laughing, and playing the part of the supportive sister. But as the days passed, she began to notice the emptiness creeping in.

Her art lost its edge. The passion that once drove her brush was gone, leaving her paintings flat and lifeless. Her connection to people frayed, her emotions dulled to muted whispers.

One night, staring at a blank canvas, the realization hit her like a blow. The scars she’d erased weren’t just marks of pain—they were marks of growth. They had shaped her, given her depth, and driven her to create. Without them, she felt hollow.

Desperate to fix what she’d done, Nora returned to Ezra’s shop.

“Put them back,” she pleaded.

Ezra shook his head, his gaze soft but unyielding. “I can’t. What’s erased can’t be rewritten.”

Tears streaked her cheeks. “I made a mistake.”

“You’re not the first,” Ezra said gently. “But scars aren’t the only way to tell a story. You still have a canvas, Nora. What you do with it is up to you.”

In the weeks that followed, Nora forced herself to paint again. She stopped hiding her thread, baring the faint colors and empty spaces for the world to see. Slowly, new marks began to form—vibrant hues born not from anger or jealousy, but from hope, resilience, and determination.

At Lily’s wedding, Nora stood by her sister’s side, her sleeves rolled up for the first time in years. As she watched Jake and Lily exchange vows, she felt a pang of loss but also something new: peace.

Her thread would never be perfect, but it was hers. And for the first time, Nora felt like that was enough.


January 26, 2025 03:39

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Mecyll Gaspary
11:44 Feb 15, 2025

Higdon's lovely story emphasizes the power of embracing one's shadow, specifically how we see our scars. It took me years to heal and change mindset, consuming my twenties condemning my injuries, hiding them because it is shameful. Upon healing I realized these scars are lovely marks, a tangible proof I survived something. And the fact I am able to smile looking at it, just like Nora felt when she returned to Ezra, trying to put those marks on her arms, is a living proof I have progressed; that I am, indeed, in the journey of self-love and ...

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Korinne H.
17:48 Feb 11, 2025

Very creative! Liked this story a lot! :)

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01:08 Feb 06, 2025

I think the idea behind this story is really cool and I love the arc. It's amazing that you managed to fit so much complexity and emotion into this!

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Elizabeta Zargi
10:44 Feb 05, 2025

Nora’s journey of accepting herself and her flaws and finally finding peace was really beautiful. I really enjoyed how she learned to embrace her story, scars and all. Great job!

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18:04 Feb 04, 2025

A lovely tale of self-discovery, and the ascendancy of self. Spiritually, the artist within her strives for a seemingly elusive goal, beyond her grasp or vision, when achieved, realizes it was already within her.

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E.M. O'Hair
15:19 Feb 03, 2025

Excellent! Very creative!

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L.A. Rogers
21:18 Feb 01, 2025

What a wonderful story! I really enjoyed how you pulled us into the magic of the world in your first paragraph. I loved your use of imagery and how the theme was deep but not burdensome. Great work! Thanks for sharing!

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Helen Murat
19:04 Feb 01, 2025

The imagery of the emotional threads weaving themselves onto the characters skin is amazing. I loved the idea behind this story and think it would have potential to become something even more than a short story. I also loved how you made Nora an artist and the change that is seen between her artwork in the beginning, to her artwork in the middle, and even to her artwork at the end. Between the elements use of the emotional threads on the skin and her artwork, I could imagine a clear picture of what Nora was feeling/experiencing. Thank you fo...

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Valerie Odell
16:53 Feb 01, 2025

Loved it. Very Unique and thought provoking. Thanks for sharing. :)

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Martha Kowalski
16:44 Feb 01, 2025

Truly loved this - the concept, the wording, the story telling. Really unique and clever idea

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Trudy Jas
13:43 Jan 30, 2025

Really enjoyed this one, Higdon. Taking the concept of wearing your emotions on your sleeve (or rather under it) and making it literal, was unique. The end, however, feels a little rushed. I would have liked to see more of her development in relationships, thoughts and feelings. Keep them coming. :-)

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L J
23:00 Jan 28, 2025

HI ! Welcome to the Reedsy bunch! Thus is a great beginning story! Love this idea! I will look forward to reading more and thanks for taking time to read mine !

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BRUCE MARTIN
02:38 Jan 27, 2025

Higdon, I really like your writing. I found the imagery and creativity quite alluring. Very interesting and fascinating story with beautifully woven phrases. I think you're a talented writer. There is one phrase that I thought was a bit awkward: "...the heartbreak—it’ll all disappear." I think "it will all disappear" somehow sounds better. But overall, excellent story!

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Tommy Goround
20:58 Jan 26, 2025

Please consider adding an email. So I'm scanning stories. Your voices comes through and I'm totally into the theme. Waiting for Kafka to Camus, that certain something.... It's actually not edgy enough. You're worth telling this. Kafka would have chopped the arm off. Camus would probably kill the sister or stare blankly in the ceremony with a cigarette that ignites her sister. I mean it looks like it's all there. It is very good. You have 4 more days to edit if you want that timeless universal story instead of a "good" story. Take a ...

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Mary Bendickson
20:26 Jan 26, 2025

Unique idea and artfully illustrated. Thanks for liking 'Life in a Suitcase'. And for following Glad you liked 'Two-cute Koolridges'

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Kim Olson
19:45 Jan 26, 2025

Powerful story with a great lesson. The life thread is a great metaphor.

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Philip Ebuluofor
12:24 Jan 26, 2025

Whenever I come here, I always have this mindset of meeting those like me, but I think you are those types I read in the paper backs editions. Words careful chosen. Fine work. No joking. But, I guess it comes with four names.

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