Submitted to: Contest #320

Whispers in the Ashwood.

Written in response to: "Center your story around a mysterious forest fire, disappearance, or other strange event."

Adventure Fantasy Suspense

The scorched earth crunched beneath Claire Hawthorne’s boots, each step a harsh reminder of what the fire had taken. Weeks had passed since the inferno swept through the village forest, yet the charred trunks still smoked faintly, curling like blackened fingers towards the sky. The scent of ash clung to her clothes, bitter and suffocating, but Claire didn’t care. Most villagers had already given up. They whispered behind her back, calling her search a lost cause. “She’s clinging to ghosts,” they said, shaking their heads. “Beckett’s gone. Let it go, girl.” The baker had refused to serve her bread last week, muttering that grief could burn more than fire ever would. Even the children in the village avoided her gaze, afraid her sorrow would stain them too. However, Claire refused to believe it. Nobody had been found, and every instinct in her heart screamed that Beckett was still out there. Every day, she returned to the forest, walking the same blackened trails, scanning the ash for footprints, for a scrap of evidence. She marked trees with small scratches, noting where she had searched and where she hadn’t. Day after day, she combed the burnt ground, her fingers bleeding from thorns and splintered bark, yet she never wavered.

Her mother had begged her to stop. “Claire, you can’t keep going back. You’ll wear yourself down. We must accept.” However, Claire refused, slamming the door behind her, tears burning her eyes. Each time she stepped into the forest, it felt like stepping into the belly of the fire again, yet hope, fragile, stubborn hope, drove her forward. She paused near the blackened stump of a great oak, staring down at a deep fissure the fire had left in the earth. Smoke still drifted faintly from it, curling like silver serpents in the evening air. The wind whispered through the burnt branches, carrying voices that made her spine tingle. At first, she thought it was her imagination. “Claire”, a voice echoed. Her heart thumped. She knelt, brushing the ashes from the ground, hoping for a sign, a clue, anything. Nothing, but the whisper came again, soft, almost beckoning. It seemed to rise from the fissure itself, calling her name, urging her forward. Against every instinct screaming at her to turn back, she followed it. She returned night after night, creeping through the burnt forest alone while the villagers slept, listening to the faint, haunting whispers that seemed to follow her steps. Each time, the whispers grew clearer, forming words she could almost understand, but never fully.

Tonight, as the sun sank behind the horizon and the last light fell over the blackened trunks, the fissure glowed faintly with a silvery shimmer. Claire’s heart raced. This was no ordinary fissure. She knelt, tracing the edges with her fingers, feeling a warmth beneath the cold ash. A pulse, like a heartbeat, throbbed faintly under her palm. She took a deep breath and stepped closer, the ground trembling beneath her. “I’ll find you, Beckett,” she whispered. “I don’t care what anyone says. I will find you.” The fissure seemed to respond, the silver light intensifying, swirling upward in mist. It beckoned her forward, a promise of something beyond the ashes, and a test she had no choice but to accept.

The night air pressed against Claire’s face like a weight, carrying the bitter scent of charred pine. The forest floor crackled underfoot, and each snapped twig made her flinch. She clutched a small lantern, its feeble light barely penetrating the creeping darkness. Still, she pressed on, guided by the faint whisper that had haunted her for weeks. Tonight, the whispers were stronger, urgent, calling her name. “Claire…. Claire.” She paused near a burned clearing where the grass had been reduced to cinders. Her fingers brushed against something soft in the ash. Pulling it free, she discovered a tiny feather, iridescent, unlike anything she’d ever seen, a faint glow pulsing from it like it carried life. She stared at it, heart pounding. Could it be… a sign? As she walked further, the shadows shifted unnaturally. Shapes appeared at the edge of her vision, dark slithering figures that vanished whenever she turned her head. The wind carried whispers now, voices overlapping, forming sentences she could barely comprehend; Turn back…. It’s too late…, but a counter-voice rose, soft yet persistent, urging her onward; Find him…Follow.

Then, movement caught her eye, a fox, but unlike any ordinary creature, its fur shimmered golden, and its eyes glowed like twin lanterns. It stepped from behind a burned stump and sat, tilting its head as if studying her. “You’ve come,” it said, voice crisp and melodic, startlingly Claire. “You…you can talk?” Claire whispered, gripping her lantern tighter. The fox nodded. “I am Lyric. You walk where few dare. The forest whispers to you because you carry hope, and only hope can pierce the Ashwood. Claire swallowed hard, a mixture of fear and wonder twisting inside her. “My brother…Beckett. He’s still alive, isn’t he?” Lyric’s golden eyes softened. “Taken, yes. However, not lost…yet. You may save him, but the path is dangerous. Shadows feed on grief, on doubt, on fear. Are you willing to face them?” “I have to,” Claire said firmly, though her voice wavered. Lyric nodded. “Then follow the silver light, but beware the first trial, the Ashlurkers.”

Claire stepped cautiously forward, and a thin mist began to rise from the scorched earth, curling around her legs like grasping fingers. Shapes emerged from the fog, long, eel-like creatures with eyes burning red. They slithered through the mud and ash, their mouths snapping at the ground with a dry, hollow click. Heart in her throat, she leapt over roots and debris, narrowly avoiding snapping jaws. One lunged for her lantern, which flickered wildly, almost extinguished. Claire swung it like a club, feeling panic rising in her chest. Sweat burned her eyes, but she pressed on. The creatures hissed and receded into the shadows, leaving her gasping. Her hands shook, but she refused to look back. Each trial pushed her further, a river of black sludge she had to cross using fallen logs, vines reaching for her like grasping hands, whispering voices trying to turn her away. Through it all, Claire noticed subtle hints of the magical world waiting beyond the shadows. Tiny luminescent insects hovered near the fog, forming patterns in the air like constellations. Flowers with petals of silver and violet opened and closed as if breathing. She felt eyes watching her, not threatening, but curious, from the trees and the undergrowth.

After what felt like hours, she reached a glowing fissure in the ground where silver light pulsed the strongest. Lyric emerged from the mist beside her. “The threshold is near,” said the fox. “Cross carefully for beyond this lies the Ashwood proper, the heart of the forest where light and shadow are locked in struggle.” Claire’s breath caught. She had come so far, faced the forest’s first trials, and now the whispers swelled around her like a tide. Claire… Beckett…Find him…. The fissure widened, shimmering with an almost liquid silver glow, revealing the path that would lead her into the magical woodland. Taking a deep breath, she stepped forward, gripping the lantern tightly and whispering to herself, “I will save you, Beckett. No matter what.” The world shifted beneath her feet, and for a moment, the forest disappeared in a dizzying swirl of silver light and shadow. She fell through the void, the whispers fading into a haunting melody, until at last she landed softly on the mossy floor of a forest unlike any she had seen, alive, glowing and waiting.

Claire’s feet sank into the soft, mossy floor of the Ashwood. The silver light from the fissure faded behind her, leaving the forest bathed in a soft, ethereal glow. Everything seemed alive; trees swayed though there was no wind, and delicate motes of light floated lazily through the air like drifting fireflies. She took a cautious step forward, heart pounding. The forest seemed welcoming at first, almost peaceful, but the shadows lurked just beyond the light. Twisted forms moved silently among the glowing trunks, and occasional whispers floated from the darkness, turn back… too late… he is ours. Suddenly, a pair of Will-O-Wraiths appeared, hovering just above the forest floor. Their bodies were translucent, shaped like flickering flames, but their eyes burned an icy blue. They drifted toward her, circling, humming in a low tone that made her chest tighten. “Keep moving,” Lyric whispered, appearing silently at her side. “They test your courage. Fear gives them power.” Claire swallowed hard around the lump in her throat and forced her legs to move. The Will-O’-Wraiths darted forward, their light brightening then dimming as they skated through the mist. She noticed that when she looked directly at them, they flickered and wavered, losing their form. She realised quickly that acknowledging her fear without letting t consume her was the only way to pass.

The path narrowed as she approached a grove of Crimson Oaks, their bark deep red like blood. Beneath the branches, the forest floor was covered in a thick, black fog. Claire’s lantern barely pierced the gloom, revealing glimpses of Shadow stalkers, wolflike creatures with elongated limbs and teeth that glinted in the dim light. Their glowing eyes followed her every move. Claire’s hands trembled, but she remembered Lyric’s advice. She focused on her purpose: Beckett is alive. I have to reach him, I must. The Shadow stalkers advanced, silent except for the low growls echoing through the fog. She leapt over gnarled roots, twisted around tree trunks, and stumbled over fallen branches. One snapped under her weight, and a Shadow stalker lunged. She rolled, narrowly escaping its grasp, and scrambling to her feet, heart hammering in her chest. “Steady,” Lyric murmured, brushing past her. “The Ashwood senses determination. Show it.”

Claire continued forward, the path opening into a clearing bathed in soft silver light. Here, the shadows retreated, revealing a small pool surrounded by glowing mushrooms. Tiny Glimmerfins, fishlike creatures with translucent bodies and flickering wings, leapt from the water, scattering droplets that sparked like diamonds. Their laughter sounded like the chime of bells, and Claire felt a strange sense of hope swell inside her. However, the forest was not done testing her. From the trees above, Thornwings, large owl-like creatures with wings covered in sharp thorny barbs, swooped down. They screeched, slicing the air with their talons, forcing Claire to duck and roll behind a fallen log. Her lantern flickered as one grazed the side of it, sparks flying. “I… I can’t fight them!” she shouted, panic clawing at her throat. “Not with weapons,” Lyric said calmly. “With will. Move with purpose. Show no fear.” Claire drew a deep breath, steadying herself. She ran through the clearing, dodging the Thornwings and trusting the forest’s subtle guidance. A faint glowing plant bent toward her path, and the soft glimmer of the pool seemed to mark the safest way forward.

As she neared the far edge of the clearing, the forest shifted again. The trees grew taller, their branches forming an arch overhead, and a faint melody floated in the air. It was Beckett’s favourite lullaby, distorted and haunting, but unmistakable. Her chest tightened with both hope and fear. “Beckett,” she whispered, tears stinging her eyes. “I’m coming. Hold on.” From the shadows ahead, she saw movement, faint, shivering shapes gathering. Ashwraiths. The dark side of the forest had sensed her presence, and they were converging to test her resolve. Claire’s grip on her lantern tightened, and she moved forward, stepping into the clearing that would lead her deeper into the heart of the Ashwood, closer to her brother, and the confrontation that would define both their fates.

Claire emerged from the silver-lit clearing into a part of the forest where the light seemed dimmer, heavier, almost suffocating. The trees twisted and blackened, their branches clawing at the sky as if to escape. A low mist hugged the forest floor, curling around her ankles like grasping fingers. The whispers were louder now, insistent; turn back… too late… he is ours. Her heart hammered in her chest, but Claire forced herself forward. The melody of Beckett’s lullaby drifted through the fog like smoke, distorted and fractured, as if the Ashwood itself were trying to confuse her. “I’m coming, Beckett,” she whispered, voice trembling. “Hold on.”

From the shadows, Ashwraiths emerged. They were numerous, shifting shapes that slithered and flowed, mouths opening in silent screams. Eyes that glowed red in the mist, following her every move. Claire’s lantern flickered dangerously, casting weak light across the writhing forms. One stepped forward, larger than the rest, its body a rolling mass of darkness. Its voice was a hiss, echoing in her mind; you cannot save him. Let him go. “I won’t,” Claire spat with venom, gripping the lantern. “He’s my brother!” a shadow-lurker, wolflike and enormous, lunged from the mist. Claire rolled aside, narrowly escaping its snapping jaws. She scrambled to her feet, and the Ashwraiths hissed, closing in. Panic threatened to overwhelm her, but she focused on Beckett, the small, familiar warmth she remembered from countless childhood memories. He’s still here. I can reach him.

Then she saw him. Beckett knelt in a small hollow, pale and trembling, his form flickering between boy and shadow. His eyes glowed faint red, the Ashwraith's corruption seeping into him. He looked up at her, and for a brief moment, clarity flashed across his face. “Claire…” he whispered, voice cracking. “I…I can’t…” Claire ran to him, throwing herself to her knees. “Yes, you can!” she cried. Holding him close. “Listen to me! Remember who you are! It’s me, your sister! Beckett, fight it!” the Ashwraiths shrieked, forming jagged shapes that lashed out toward them. One reached for Beckett, tendrils of shadow wrapping around his limbs like barnacles. Claire pressed closer, tears streaming down her cheeks, she closed her eyes and began speaking, pouring every memory in her voice, climbing trees, hiding from storms, reading together by candlelight, laughing under the summer sun. Her words were raw, powerful, a stream of love and grief that she refused to contain. The shadows shrieked, twisting and hissing, but Claire felt a spark of Beckett’s essence flicker in response. His glowing red eyes began to dim, hazel peeking through. One by one, the Ashwraiths recoiled, shrieking as though the force of her love burned them away.

Then, a new threat appeared; the Shadow Wyrm, a serpentlike Ashwraith with glowing white eyes and barbed tendrils, slithered from the mist. It coiled around the hollow, trying to separate Claire from Beckett. Panic surged, but Claire tightened her hold on him. “I will not let you take him!” she shouted. From the corner of her vision, the Lightborn emerged, creatures of radiant light that resembled deer, with antlers of crystals and wings of shimmering feathers. They charged at the Shadow Wyrm, their horns glowing and wings slashing through the darkness. The wyrm hissed and recoiled, giving Claire the chance to lift Beckett from the ground. “Come on!” she urged, running through the mist. The shadows lunged, but wherever Claire stepped, faint glimmers of light followed, repelling the darkness. Each step was a battle, each heartbeat a declaration of her refusal to let him go.

Finally, they reached a narrow path where the shadows thinned, sunlight, faint but growing, spilling through the treetops. Beckett clung to her, trembling, his form stabilising with each step. The Ashwraiths lingered at the edge, shrieking in frustration, unable to cross the boundary of light. Claire collapsed to her knees, holding Beckett tightly. His eyes, fully hazel now, blinked at her. “Claire… you… saved me?” “I never gave up,” she whispered, brushing ash-streaked hair from his face. “I promised I’d find you.” The forest around them sighed. The Ashwood shifted, blackened trees healed, glowing flowers opened, and the air hummed with soft music. Lyric appeared beside them, tail brushing the ground. “Balance has returned,” the fox said. “The forest remembers. Your courage and love restored it.” Claire helped Beckett to his feet. Together, they followed the faint silver path back toward the fissure. The moment they stepped through, they were back on scorched earth, but the smoke had cleared, and the dawn’s golden light painted the forest in warmth instead of ash. Beckett looked around, dazed. “Was… any of that real?” Claire smiled, tears glistening. “It had to be.”

Though they returned to the human world, Claire knew a part of her would always belong to the Ashwood, the glowing flowers, the Lightborn, the whispers, the trials. She had faced despair, darkness, and the unknown, and she had not faltered. And as they walked home hand in hand, a faint, melodic whisper followed them in the wind, thank you…. The Ashwood had survived. And so had they.

Posted Sep 18, 2025
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Rabab Zaidi
09:04 Sep 21, 2025

Absolutely wonderful and inspirationalLoved it ! Well done, Melony!!

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