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Drama

This is really short, but it's the 17th part of Home. 😁




Daniel wakes up to the smell of bacon and pancakes. 

He yawns, and sits up. He didn't have any more nightmares, which is a relief.

He walks into the kitchen, where Catherine is at the stove, scooping bacon off of a skillet, and dropping them on a plate.

“Hey, Daniel.” She smiles when he walks beside her.

He smiles, too. “Hey. Can I help?”

“Sure.” She says. “Can you flip the pancakes for me?”

He didn’t expect her to have him help with food, but he nods, and reached for the spatula. She doesn’t ask about why he was in the living room, which he greatly appreciates.

Somehow, he doesn’t burn anything. He helps her make the food, then they put plates on the table.

“Smells good,” They hear Angel mumble as she walks into the kitchen in pajamas. She raises her eyebrow. “Daniel cooked? Is it safe?”

He huffs. “Yes, it’s amazing, and you’re going to love it.”

She laughs, and sits at the table after giving Catherine a hug.

“Daniel? Want to go wake TJ up?” Catherine asks.

He nods, and walks upstairs. TJ’s laying on the bed, his arm over his eyes, snoring. 

“TJ, wake up.” Daniel says, poking his side. 

He rolls over, mumbling at him. Daniel tickles his side, and TJ laughs into a pillow. “Okay, okay, I’m up.”

“C’mon, we made breakfast.”

He yawns, and sits up. “We?”

“Yeah, I helped.” 

He squinted. “And nothing burned?”

“Nope. C’mon.”

“Wait,” TJ says, grabbing his wrists. “Do you want to talk about the nightmare?”

Daniel shakes his head. “No.”

“Okay. But you’ll tell me if it happens again?”

“Mhm-hm.”

TJ kisses him, then they go downstairs. Daniel doesn’t mention the nightmare to anyone. He doesn’t want them to worry.



The nightmares come back, almost every night. TJ can’t stay over all the time though, so Daniel wakes up alone. Oddly, sleeping in the living room helps. Angel, Riley, and Catherine haven’t said anything about it, but he’s sure Angel wants to ask.

Angel seems to get it, though, and her and TJ try to distract Daniel from thinking about it.

Daniel meets more of his family. Antonio, Catherine’s brother, who doesn’t have any kids, Diamond, who has two girls, Crystal and Sapphire, and Marcus, her youngest brother.


The police found out that Blake was tracking Daniel’s phone, but then it fell in the water, and broke, and he couldn’t find him. But he already had Catherine’s address, though he didn’t know it was her at the time. 

So, he showed up, then realized whose house it was. That didn’t help at all, though.

All in all, he’s in jail right now.

Daniel doesn’t really want to hear about it, but hearing it does make him feel better. He knows Blake won’t be going anywhere near him.






March 12, 2021 23:28

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85 comments

00:26 Mar 13, 2021

Lol I forgot that you and Mira completely beat me in terms of how long you could make a series run. Still, it’s getting more and more developed!

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Ari Berri
00:27 Mar 13, 2021

=) I read the last Anima App. Nice ending!

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00:30 Mar 13, 2021

Thanks!

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Ari Berri
00:30 Mar 13, 2021

No problem.

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16:30 Mar 13, 2021

Lol I started reading boy meets boy and idk if it’s in ur bio or not but like... home vibes lol.

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Ari Berri
16:35 Mar 14, 2021

I read that one a while ago. Thanks!

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Ari Berri
22:41 Mar 23, 2021

Last part of Home is done!

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Meera Lakshmi
17:48 Mar 22, 2021

Hello Ari! I have been so incredibly busy with school and haven't had much time to do much on reedsy except reply to comments and whatnot. I will finish up home over my spring break soon. Promise. :) On another hand, do you want to do an upvote for upvote?

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Ari Berri
18:12 Mar 22, 2021

=) It's fine. Sure!

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Meera Lakshmi
18:12 Mar 22, 2021

Yay ok :)

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Meera Lakshmi
18:25 Mar 22, 2021

Sorry. I wrote some comments then deleted them. If you happened to read them before I deleted them. Please ignore them. No idea why I wrote them in the first place......anywayyyy. There are some people in my bio that got downvoted. Could you support them in restoring their points?

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YES DANIELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

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Ari Berri
00:16 Mar 13, 2021

XD

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Ari Berri
22:41 Mar 23, 2021

Last part is done!

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Meera Lakshmi
02:39 Mar 25, 2021

OMGGGGG...he is in jail...wow..good!! Being LGBTQ isn't wrong, yay Daniel!

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Ari Berri
14:09 Mar 25, 2021

XD

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Meera Lakshmi
18:45 Mar 23, 2021

Oh no!!! How did you get downvoted so fast??!!!!

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Ari Berri
19:56 Mar 23, 2021

I don't know, it was, like, 3000 points.

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Meera Lakshmi
20:35 Mar 23, 2021

4900 I think....

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Ari Berri
20:38 Mar 23, 2021

Are you the Positivity Account?

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Meera Lakshmi
00:32 Mar 24, 2021

Nope, I don't have enough time to start another account and keep up with it lol.

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Meera Lakshmi
00:33 Mar 24, 2021

I did my best to upvote as much as possible, then I deleted the thread so downvoters can't find it

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Jasey Lovegood
23:14 Mar 18, 2021

Hey Ari! My Reedsy Cast story is out, your character isn't in this one yet, but he'll be in there soon hehhehee

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Ari Berri
14:38 Mar 19, 2021

I'll read it!

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Jasey Lovegood
22:59 Mar 19, 2021

Thanks so much!

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Ari Berri
01:29 Mar 20, 2021

=)

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Ari Berri
22:41 Mar 23, 2021

Last part is done!

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Jasey Lovegood
22:45 Mar 23, 2021

OKIE IM GOING TO READ NOW-

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Jasey Lovegood
20:01 Mar 14, 2021

Hey Ari! I forgot to ask you, would you like to be apart of my Reedsy Cast series? I need one or two more people, and I would love it, if you wanted to be in it :)

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Ari Berri
21:43 Mar 14, 2021

Sure!

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Jasey Lovegood
06:22 Mar 15, 2021

Tysm! The link is in my bio :D

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Ari Berri
14:08 Mar 15, 2021

=)

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Jasey Lovegood
20:46 Mar 15, 2021

I had a look, I’m very excited hehehe

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Ari Berri
20:54 Mar 15, 2021

Tell me when it's finished!

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Meera Lakshmi
19:59 Mar 14, 2021

Happy Pi Day!

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Ari Berri
21:43 Mar 14, 2021

Thanks!

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Amel Parvez
12:40 Mar 13, 2021

is it the ending? anyways i L O V E D it!!!!!! and yes! Daniel was at last successful! XDXD

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Ari Berri
21:10 Mar 13, 2021

Maybe, maybe not. Thank you!

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Amel Parvez
12:26 Mar 15, 2021

.......... you're welcom!

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Ari Berri
22:41 Mar 23, 2021

Last part is done!

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Amel Parvez
09:01 Mar 24, 2021

WOAH! gonna check it out:)

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Jasey Lovegood
04:54 Mar 13, 2021

[He yawns, and sits up. “We?” “Yeah, I helped.” He squinted. “And nothing burned?” “Nope. C’mon.”] That was my favourite part! There are a couple easy grammatical mistakes e.g, you can get rid of the comma after 'yawns', but other than that it's great! It feels like Home is coming to an end, I'd be super sad if it is, but also not, bc this has been an amazing series. Wonderful work, Ari! ~ Jasey :)

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Ari Berri
21:12 Mar 13, 2021

Thank you! I might do one more.

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Jasey Lovegood
22:03 Mar 13, 2021

No problem, I can’t wait! :)

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03:36 Mar 13, 2021

this had a bit of a time lapse, and everything seems to be fixed and Daniel didn't burn pancakes! omg!, Does this have an invisible the end in the end? 0_0 like this is the best epilogue-ish story!, but......, hope that you are writing part 18 XD Happy Today

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Ari Berri
21:09 Mar 13, 2021

Thank you! I might!

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14:22 Mar 14, 2021

=) You might?!

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Ari Berri
16:32 Mar 14, 2021

Maybe? If I can think of what to write.

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Ari Berri
22:42 Mar 23, 2021

Last part is done!

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06:06 Mar 25, 2021

Oh, wow, balloons!, streamers!, crackers!, and........ a kinda gloomy face "It's.... finished!" AND SO SORRY I DIDN'T REPLY BEFORE, like i was, er, am in a break!

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Ari Berri
14:32 Mar 25, 2021

XD It's fine.

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Sunny 🌼
00:58 Mar 13, 2021

This low-key felt like an ending story PLEASE don't tell me this is the end (even tho this wouldn't be a bad ending ig). I STILL WANNA SEE THESE CHARACTERS GROW AND INTERACT!

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Ari Berri
01:08 Mar 13, 2021

It might be, but I might do one where it's what happens when they'r older.

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Sunny 🌼
01:09 Mar 13, 2021

Ah okiQ

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Sunny 🌼
01:09 Mar 13, 2021

Ah oki

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Ari Berri
22:42 Mar 23, 2021

Last part is done!

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Kate Reynolds
00:05 Mar 13, 2021

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Ari Berri
00:06 Mar 13, 2021

Thanks! Okay.

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Kate Reynolds
00:09 Mar 13, 2021

Ofc!

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15:29 Mar 13, 2021

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Ari Berri
21:11 Mar 13, 2021

XD Thanks! I think I might do one more.

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Ari Berri
22:41 Mar 23, 2021

Last part is done!

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22:47 Mar 23, 2021

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Ari Berri
22:47 Mar 23, 2021

=)

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*Ahem.* Attention please. I haven't heard (is it read?) your amazing stories in a while, so this is just-*breathless*. It's really hard to explain this in words because-well, how do you explain a breathless story that can contain so many things in such a short amount of words? I've decided to put this: 🌀 in the middle of this so people don't copy it and see it instead of reading your long (I love long bios-yes you already saw) bio. Anyways, I'm doing a story soon, wanna be in it?

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Ari Berri
23:56 Mar 12, 2021

=)

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I updated it (I dunno if you saw it)

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Ari Berri
00:01 Mar 13, 2021

Just re-read it. Thank you! Sure, I'd love to!

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Ari Berri
22:42 Mar 23, 2021

Last part is done!

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Yay...Please check out my latest story :)

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Ari Berri
22:47 Mar 23, 2021

Going now!

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