The boutique hummed with the frenetic energy of post-Christmas sales. Shoppers jostled for space, arms laden with discounted luxury goods, their voices blending into a discordant symphony of complaints and excitement. Sarah Jensen stood behind the counter, her forced smile threatening to crack under the weight of another 12-hour shift. Her reflection in the glass display case stared back at her—a pale, tired face framed by hair that refused to cooperate despite the expensive products she used.
“Miss! Excuse me, miss!” a sharp voice cut through the din. Sarah turned to see a woman, her arms stacked with silk scarves, glaring at her.
“Yes, ma’am, how can I help you?” she replied, her voice coated in faux cheer.
“These are marked as 40% off, but they’re ringing up wrong,” the woman snapped.
Sarah bit her tongue and nodded, mechanically punching the register. The scarf woman wasn’t the first difficult customer of the day, and she wouldn’t be the last. As she resolved the issue, Sarah’s gaze flicked to the far end of the boutique.
A figure lingered by the antique mirror display—a woman draped in a long coat, her dark hair veiling her face. She seemed out of place among the boutique’s usual clientele. Her movements were deliberate, almost hypnotic, as she traced her gloved fingers along the edge of a large gilded mirror.
“Miss Jensen!” The scarf woman’s irritated bark snapped Sarah back to reality. She completed the transaction, apologized for the inconvenience, and handed over the neatly bagged scarves.
When she looked back, the mysterious woman was gone. In her place, on the counter near the register, sat a package wrapped in shimmering silver paper.
Sarah frowned. “Did someone leave this here?” she called to her coworker, Heather, who was restocking handbags.
Heather glanced over, shrugged, and returned to her task.
Curiosity got the better of her. She picked up the package and turned it over. Her name was scrawled across the silver wrapping in elegant script: Sarah Jensen.
Her breath caught. “What the…?”
“Secret admirer?” Heather teased, smirking.
Sarah flushed. “No idea.” She hesitated, then carefully peeled back the paper. Inside was a wooden box with delicate carvings. She unlatched it, revealing an antique hand mirror nestled in velvet.
It was breathtaking. The silver filigree frame was adorned with tiny, intricate designs—flowers, vines, and what appeared to be a pair of eyes etched at the top. The glass was oddly pristine, almost luminous.
A shiver ran down her spine as she gazed at it. The shop’s fluorescent lights dimmed for a brief moment, flickering just enough to make her look around uneasily.
“Spooky,” Heather said, her tone light but her eyes wary. “You gonna keep it?”
Sarah’s fingers lingered on the mirror’s handle. She wanted to say no, to put it back in the box and leave it there, but something about it called to her.
“Yeah,” she said softly. “It’s… beautiful.”
Heather shrugged and returned to the handbags. Sarah slipped the mirror back into its box and placed it in her bag.
The rest of the evening passed in a blur of customers and complaints, but Sarah couldn’t shake the image of the woman at the mirror display.
As she locked up for the night, she glanced over her shoulder one last time. The boutique was empty, save for the faintest impression of a handprint on the glass of the largest mirror.
***
Sarah settled into her apartment, a modest one-bedroom filled with mismatched furniture and an air of functional neglect. The antique mirror sat on her coffee table, its polished silver glinting under the dim light of a single lamp.
Her cat, Milo, circled the mirror, sniffing at the velvet-lined box before retreating to his perch by the window.
“You don’t like it either, huh?” Sarah murmured, pulling her blanket tighter around her shoulders.
She couldn’t explain why she had brought it home. Something about the mirror tugged at her, a mix of unease and fascination. She reached out hesitantly and lifted it, her fingers tracing the intricate designs along the handle.
When she finally looked into it, her breath hitched.
The face staring back wasn’t hers—or at least, it wasn’t the face she was used to. Her reflection was flawless. Her skin glowed with a porcelain smoothness that seemed almost too perfect, her lips were fuller, her eyes brighter and more alive. Even her hair fell in soft, elegant waves, like something out of an advertisement.
She touched her cheek, half-expecting to feel the warmth and suppleness of the reflection, but her fingers met the usual uneven texture. Her reflection smiled faintly, though she had not.
Her stomach twisted. She set the mirror down quickly and rubbed her eyes. “Long day. I’m losing it,” she muttered.
But curiosity gnawed at her. She picked it up again.
The reflection was the same—perfect. Yet as she studied it, she noticed something disconcerting. Her eyes… they weren’t quite right. Behind the radiance lay a coldness, an almost predatory gleam. She tried looking away, but her gaze kept returning to the glass.
A soft knock at the door jolted her, breaking the spell.
She set the mirror down and crossed the room, peering through the peephole. Lisa stood on the other side, her arms laden with a bottle of wine and a bag of takeout.
“Thought you might need cheering up,” Lisa said as Sarah opened the door. She kicked off her boots and plopped onto the couch.
Sarah forced a smile. “You didn’t have to do that.”
Lisa shrugged. “You’ve been weird lately. Figured you could use some company.”
As Lisa unpacked their dinner, her eyes landed on the mirror. “What’s this?”
“Just something someone left at the boutique,” Sarah said quickly. “Weird, right?”
Lisa picked it up, turning it over in her hands. “It’s gorgeous. Antique?”
“Probably.”
Lisa tilted the mirror toward herself and frowned. “This thing’s creepy. It’s like…” She trailed off, her face tightening.
“Like what?”
Lisa handed it back hastily. “I don’t know. It just gave me the shivers. You should sell it or something.”
Sarah laughed nervously. “Yeah, maybe.”
The two settled in, eating and catching up, but Sarah’s attention kept straying to the mirror. After Lisa left, she found herself sitting alone with it again, the room unnervingly quiet.
She picked it up one last time before bed.
The reflection was still her, but the longer she stared, the less she recognized the person in the glass. It wasn’t just the perfection—it was the way the image seemed to breathe, to shimmer faintly as though it were alive.
A single word echoed faintly in her mind: More.
Startled, she dropped the mirror. It landed with a dull thud, unbroken.
Shaking, she turned it facedown and left it on the table. But even as she crawled into bed and pulled the covers over her head, the whispered word seemed to linger in the air.
***
The New Year arrived quietly. Sarah had spent the evening alone, ignoring calls from Lisa and other friends, unable to shake her preoccupation with the mirror. It remained on her coffee table, face down, but its presence loomed like a living thing.
When she finally picked it up again on January 2nd, the reflection stunned her.
It wasn’t just her idealized self anymore. Her face in the glass had changed subtly but undeniably—higher cheekbones, a sharper jawline, and eyes that gleamed with a confidence she had never possessed.
The strangest part? When she stepped into her bathroom and looked into the plain, unenchanted mirror above the sink, she saw the same changes. Her real reflection matched the one in the antique glass.
She traced the contours of her cheekbones, marveling at their new definition. Her skin was clear, her lips fuller, her hair shinier. It wasn’t as exaggerated as the reflection in the antique mirror had been, but it was unmistakable.
The compliments began almost immediately.
“Did you do something different with your hair?” Heather asked at work.
“You’re glowing,” a regular customer remarked.
Even her boss, who usually ignored her, took notice. “Looking sharp, Sarah. Keep it up,” he said with a rare smile.
At first, she basked in the attention. For the first time in her life, Sarah felt seen, appreciated, envied. She began to carry herself differently, walking with her head high and a sway in her step. Her wardrobe, once utilitarian, shifted to highlight her changing figure.
But there were side effects.
Her energy waned. Simple tasks left her winded, and dark circles began to form under her eyes, marring her otherwise flawless appearance. No amount of sleep seemed to help.
“Are you okay?” Lisa asked one afternoon over coffee.
“I’m fine,” Sarah said, brushing off the question.
“You don’t look fine. You look… tired. And pale.” Lisa leaned closer, concern etched into her face. “Seriously, Sarah, have you been to a doctor?”
Sarah shook her head. “I don’t need to. I’m just… busy.”
Lisa’s frown deepened, but she let it drop.
At work, Sarah noticed something odd about her coworkers. Heather, who was usually full of energy, appeared drawn and sluggish. Their boss seemed frailer, his usual booming voice reduced to a rasp. Even the regular customers looked subtly diminished—less vibrant, their laughter less frequent.
The change was subtle, but once she saw it, she couldn’t unsee it.
That evening, Sarah sat alone in her apartment, clutching the mirror. She didn’t want to look into it, but the compulsion was irresistible. When she finally turned it over, her reflection greeted her with a knowing smile.
The face was stunning, almost inhuman in its beauty. But the eyes were wrong. They gleamed with a cruel intelligence, and for the briefest moment, Sarah thought the lips moved, mouthing a single word: Mine.
She gasped and dropped the mirror.
As it hit the floor, the room seemed to shudder. Milo hissed and bolted under the couch, his fur bristling. Sarah clutched her chest, her heart hammering against her ribs.
When she dared to look at the mirror again, it lay face down, unbroken.
In the silence, a faint whisper slithered through the air: More.
***
By mid-January, Sarah’s transformation was undeniable. Her appearance had become the very image of the idealized reflection she’d seen in the mirror. She drew stares everywhere she went—admiration from strangers, envy from colleagues.
But the cost was becoming impossible to ignore.
Lisa had stopped visiting, her once-lively face now gaunt and shadowed. The boutique was eerily quiet, its usual hum of activity dulled by the fatigue of the staff and customers alike. Even Milo, her ever-loyal cat, had grown lethargic, curling into tight balls of fur in dark corners, avoiding her entirely.
Sarah’s own health was deteriorating. Though her face remained flawless, her body felt like it was withering. A deep, bone-weary exhaustion gripped her, making it hard to even climb the stairs to her apartment.
That night, Lisa showed up unannounced, her face pale and her eyes sunken.
“We need to talk,” Lisa said, pushing past Sarah into the living room. She froze when she spotted the mirror on the coffee table.
“Sarah,” Lisa began, her voice trembling, “something’s wrong. I’ve been feeling sick ever since you got that… thing.”
Sarah’s stomach twisted. “It’s just a mirror.”
“No, it’s not.” Lisa grabbed her by the wrist, her grip surprisingly strong. “Do you even hear yourself? You look like a goddess, but you’re barely standing. Everyone around you is falling apart. Look at Milo!”
Sarah turned to her cat, curled motionless in the corner. Panic gripped her. She picked him up, his tiny frame alarmingly light.
Lisa gestured to the mirror. “It’s that thing. You need to get rid of it.”
Tears stung Sarah’s eyes. “You don’t understand. I can’t. It’s…” Her voice broke.
“It’s killing you,” Lisa said, her tone firm. “And it’s hurting everyone else, too.”
For the first time, Sarah truly looked at the mirror—not at her reflection, but at the object itself. The silver filigree seemed darker, tarnished, and the glass shimmered faintly, almost as if it were breathing.
She grabbed the mirror and hurled it to the floor with all her strength.
The glass shattered, shards scattering across the room. For a moment, everything was still. Then a low, resonant hum filled the air.
The shards began to melt, pooling into a dark, inky substance that snaked across the floor like living shadows. Lisa screamed, stumbling backward as the tendrils slithered toward her.
Sarah stood frozen, watching in horror as the shadows swirled and coalesced into a humanoid shape. Its form was amorphous, shifting, its surface shimmering like the mirror’s glass. Eyes—cold, piercing, and impossibly ancient—locked onto hers.
“You broke the mirror,” the entity said, its voice a chilling symphony of whispers. “The gift is not undone, but unleashed.”
Sarah’s legs gave out, and she crumpled to the floor. “Please… I didn’t know…”
The entity loomed closer, its voice like frost against her skin. “Desire is a binding contract. You took without thought, and now the cost is yours to bear.”
Lisa tried to pull Sarah away, but the shadows lashed out, pinning her against the wall. “You will watch,” the entity hissed.
Sarah’s reflection materialized in the dark surface of the creature’s form, twisted and grotesque. As she stared, her body began to change. The radiant beauty she had cherished dissolved like smoke, leaving behind a visage that was hollow, gaunt, and lifeless. Her skin sagged, her eyes dulled, and her hair fell in brittle clumps around her.
The creature’s shadowy form melted into the walls, the room falling silent once more.
Lisa rushed to Sarah’s side, her hands trembling as she touched her friend’s shoulder. “Sarah…”
Sarah turned to her, her voice barely a whisper. “I’m sorry.”
Lisa held her tightly, but her expression was one of horror.
The next morning, Sarah was gone. Lisa found only a note on the table, scrawled in shaky handwriting:
“I can’t undo what I’ve done. The mirror will find another. Please forgive me.”
The shards of the mirror were gone, as though they had never existed.
Miles away, in the display window of a quaint antique shop, an elegant hand mirror sat on a velvet cushion, its silver filigree gleaming and its glass pristine. A small tag hung from the handle, reading:
“Beauty Beyond Compare – $150.”
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13 comments
Really enjoyed this retelling of a classic allegory. A little bit of Wilde's Portrait of Dorian Gray. Thanks for sharing.
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Nice one. Love it.
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Your buildup was classic. Drew me in; couldn’t stop reading. Sadly, I’m not into the supernatural and/or horror, but for those who are, what a treat you’ve given them 😉
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I was so eager to see what happened next, very suspenseful! But I'm left wondering, why was the cost of her "beauty" so high?
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Creepy! Enjoyed this jim
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I'm glad you liked it!
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Fantastic little yarn!
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Excellent story, Jim. Gave me shivers.
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Thank you, Barbara!
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I wad drawn into the story immediately, such a gothic feel, loved it!
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Jim, another of your gripping formidable journeys into the mystic. Thanks for liking 'Spin Cycle'. And 'Two-Cute Koolridges'.
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A mysterious atmosphere that attracts the reader like a magnet. It is very successful.
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Oooh, chilling, this one. Your use of description is, as usual, very much excellent. Great job !
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