My story is entitled : The young man James Brown had to hide the gold watch and the identity of the twins because they did not know their biological fathers.

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My story is entitled: The young man James Brown had to hide the gold watch and the identity of the twins because they did not know their biological father.

Once upon a time, in a large town, there lived a King who was very wealthy but had no children. This King of Babylon was known as the richest man of Babylon, and as much could often easily buy slaves. Also, the King needed children who might rule after him in his absence.

Due to that the King, King William went to the foster home to adopt two children, who were known as twins and warriors. The two twins were left with a magical gold watch by their biological father before they were taken to the foster home.

The King, King William, named the first older twin as Merishmati and the younger twin as Bathulabi. Also both of the twins were raised by the Queen mother , Queen Victoria.

King William gave them the best of education and wealth. Also he trained them to become strong and then lead the Army in times of war.

When the twins grew up, they always did things together, but Merishmati wanted to be King due to that he envied his brother Bathulabi and he was not in good terms with him. They were mostly at loggerheads sometimes. There have been instances where Merishmati had wanted to kill his twin brother Bathulabi.

Aftermath of the demise of King William, the Queen, Queen Victoria was made to rule. The two twins were very young by then.

However, when the two twins reached the age of thirty, Queen Victoria was worried about who to choose to become King.

Again, their Uncle, Uncle Daniel, who was known to be wicked, had wanted Merishmati to become King, so he named the town after Merishmati since he was the eldest among the twins.

The town Merishmati had enemies who were also cruel and often came to their town for war. These enemies were black people and black in complexion , they were well known as the black Indians. The Queen , Queen Victoria enacted a law among the two twins that who ever kills their opponent , the Black Indian King will be made King of Merishmati.

Again, the time was set for war , that the two twins Merishmati and Bathulabi were given the opportunity to go to the battlefield to fight.

Some of the soldiers of Merishmati had wanted to rape Princess Diana so they made fond of her anytime they saw her passing by.

At one instance, one Friday, whilst Princess Diana was passing by one of the soldiers of Merishmati had wanted to touch her body parts, so she took out her knife and then cut the very fingers of that soldier. It was then that Queen Victoria heard about the cruel act. So Queen Victoria had wanted to punish Princess Diana at that moment.

Again, Bathulabi came in defending the dignity of Princess Diana, due to that he cut off the head of that very soldier out of annoyance. It was by then that Queen Victoria got angry , annoyed and ordered for the banishment of Bathulabi.

Merishmati , the King also got angry so he informed his mother, Queen Victoria that Bathulabi had wanted to kill him. King Merishmati killed the young soldier who heard that he the King had wanted to kill his brother Bathulabi.

Merishmati informed his mother that Bathulabi wanted to kill him. Bathulabi went to the battlefield to defend his Uncle James Brown to kill Bathulabi on the battlefield.

Since the Queen , Queen Victoria motivated and informed Bathulabis Uncle, James Brown to kill him on the battlefield.

Also his Uncle James Brown out of mercy and compassion could not kill him but only wounded him by stabbing him with a sword.

After, it was Merishmati who killed his own twin brother Bathulabi out jealousy and envy. At that time Bathulabis wife Princess Diana was pregnant with a son for Bathulabi.

Later Princess Diana gave birth to a baby boy and the Queen, Queen Victoria named him Amendra Bathulabi after his father.

Rumours has it that Amendra Bathulabi was fatherless , he was looked after through single parenting by his dear mother.

The King, King Merishmati had wanted to kill the baby. Due to that his mother run away with the baby boy to Italy to look after the baby. After twenty five years Amendra Bathulabi grew under the arms of a single parent Princess Diana.

Amendra Bathulabi grew up and joined the Roman soldiers. He was trained to become a skilled soldier.

Also Amendra Bathulabi also became a skilled Martial artist. At the age of thirty, he was informed by his mother Princess Diana about his wicked Uncle , King Merishmati who killed his father Bathulabi during a war.

Due to this information Amendra Bathulabi decided to go for revenge of his fathers death. Also Amendra Bathulabi went to the Palace of Merishmati to fight his Uncle Merishmati in a war. Amendra Bathulabi fought and then killed thousands of his soldiers in a battle. At last, Amendra Bathulabi fought the King, King Merishmati, in a war, that he even wounded him and then killed him. Also, out of annoyance, Amendra Bathulabi burnt him with explosives just as he killed his father. That happens to be a Tit for Tat.

Also, their mother the Queen , Queen Victoria who was still alive by then, made Amendra Bathulabi to become the next King of Merishmati.

Lastly, the inhabitants of Merishmati lived with their family without any slave trade happily.

When Amendra Bathulabi was crowned as the King of Merishmati , the Queen mother, Queen Victoria, gave the gold watch to Amendra Bathulabi because his father, who was to be crowned King, was dead and his twin brother Merishmati who was so cruel by then, was also dead. It was Amendra Bathulabi who showed compassion on the battlefield and kept some of his enemies as prisoners.

Finally, Amendra Bathulabi was crowned the King of Merishmati by the Queen Mother, Queen Victoria. Later Amendra Bathulabi got married to Princess Wendy and they gave birth to four children two boys and two girls.

Posted Sep 23, 2025
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