Submitted to: Contest #317

A Shotgun Through Fog

Written in response to: "Center your story around someone who has (or is given) the ability to time travel."

Speculative

He appeared out of nowhere, bleeding profusely. I ran to help, but he stopped me. He held a small, octagon-shaped device and motioned for me to take it. I grabbed the blood-covered object and noticed its edges contained strange, otherworldly markings.

"You must stop her!" The dying man coughed up blood. "The Lion must survive!" He fell, but regained his balance. "If she succeeds. Earth will undergo a hundred-year civil war. The Earth you know will never exist."

He attempted to speak again, but started convulsing, and fell face down on the concrete sidewalk. I checked for a pulse, but he had none.

Absentmindedly wiping his blood off on my suitcoat, the trauma slowly began to sink in. A man died right before my eyes—a man who appeared out of thin air, like a magician.

The device in my hand grew heavier, as if it were trying to get my attention. The strange markings began to glow green, then slowly flickered in a rhythmic pattern.

A fog-like substance billowed in from beyond the dorms and educational buildings surrounding me, blocking out the campus from my sight. It drew closer, covering the street, then the sidewalk, before engulfing me. A metallic smell overwhelmed me, and I couldn't breathe. Then the fog vanished, and I no longer stood in the middle of my college campus, but in an empty room.

The device lay at my feet, but I have no memory of dropping it, and to my shock and horror, in its place, I held a shotgun. Taking a quick look around, it became clear the device had transported me from my university to this desolate room. It didn't have any furniture. A small kitchen sat in the corner, and next to it, a tiny walled bathroom—a typical studio apartment, but one that nobody lived in for years. Cobwebs filled the corners and windows, and a thick layer of dust covered the wooden floor.

I took a second look at the floor. There were footprints in the dust.

My adrenaline pumped as I suddenly felt a presence in the room. In the shadow of the main door stood a woman with her back to me. Had she been here the whole time?

"Another time-cop!" She said without turning around. "Are you going to shoot me or take me in?"

I've been aiming the shotgun at the back of her head since I arrived, like I had traded places with the dead man. I've never shot a gun in my life, but my finger lightly pressed against the trigger, like I knew what to do.

"Who are you?" I asked, as I carefully relaxed my trigger finger.

"You don't know? Aren't you a time cop?"

"I'm a professor at Danville University."

She snickered. At least I thought I heard her snicker. "Would you mind if I turn around?"

Something told me to say no, but instead, I only gripped my gun tighter and said yes, but told her to raise her hands. There must be a reason I'm pointing this gun at her. She is likely the assassin the man warned me about.

She turned. Her black hair and bold blue eyes struck me like a slap across the face. I don't know what I expected, but it certainly wasn't this specimen of feminine perfection.

I didn't know what to say, so I just repeated my question.

"I'm the good guy here," she smiled. "Why don't you put that gun down? No one is going to kill the Chancellor today."

"The Lion?"

She tilted her head in surprise, "His political opponents gave him that name. Now he proudly claims it for himself."

"Then you must be the one." I stared into her eyes. How could I shoot her? Even to stop a hundred-year civil war? I'm not a killer.

She could see the conflict in me. "If you allow me to walk out of here, you'll return to your time. None of this matters. Just go back."

I wanted to let her go. It isn't my fight. It's none of my business. Or is it? What if my father fights? What if he dies before having me? I won't exist. Even if I do exist, there won't be a Danville University. A world at war doesn't need higher education? Everything I know will cease to exist.

"I can't let you do that."

She lowered her hands slightly. "You're not a killer. I can see it in your eyes. Just let me go, and you can return to your university like nothing ever happened. All you have to do is lower the gun, and all will return to normal."

Is she correct? Could everything go back to normal? What if the time cop is wrong? I don't want to kill her. It would be easy to lower my gun. I wouldn't be doing anything wrong. I don't even belong here. It's not my responsibility.

She grew impatient, "I'm not going to keep standing here. Either you'll have to shoot me, or I'm leaving. It's your choice."

The device lying on the floor lit up and began vibrating. A strong desire to ask for her name overcame me, like the device had given me the idea.

"Before you go, tell me your name. I want to know if I'm doing the right thing."

She smiled and lowered her hands. "My name is Veronica Windmiller."

That name is familiar. I've read about her somewhere. Then it hit me. She saw the change in my eyes and tried to dash out of the room, but she was too slow. I pulled the trigger. She lay dead at the threshold of the room.

The fog returned, and the studio apartment evaporated, replaced by the familiar grounds of Danville University.

I ran to my office, frantically searching through my collection of out-of-print history books. As a professor of history, I've been collecting for most of my career. I found the two-hundred-year-old textbook I wanted and flipped through the pages until I came to the chapter on Chancellor Lionel.

I couldn't remember much about this little-known World Chancellor. I most certainly don't remember anything that would make me believe his assassination would cause a worldwide civil war.

He died of pancreatic cancer only six months into his chancellery, but before he died, he began talks with the Landnorians, the first alien race to agree to speak with us. Almost everyone credits Lionel's successor for leading Earth to join the Union of Systems, but Lionel actually began the process.

I set the book on my desk. So, if Lionel hadn't begun the talks, his successor would have dropped the ball somehow, plunging Earth into the worst war in history.

The history professor in me gobbled this information up, but I still hadn't found what I needed to sleep tonight. I skimmed around until my heart jumped. The author only made a passing reference, a mere mention that an unknown hero thwarted an assassination attempt on Chancellor Lionel by a woman named Veronica Windmiller.

I sighed in relief. It pays to know history.

Posted Aug 30, 2025
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Heather Rogers
13:58 Aug 31, 2025

Good job, babe! I’m glad you’re writing short stories again. I’ve missed reading your work every week! 😘

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Daniel Rogers
02:09 Sep 03, 2025

Thank you for supporting me. You are my ideal reader - the one I write for (and that's huge coming from a writer).

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Amanda Rose
04:14 Aug 30, 2025

Ooh, ooh, this is great! I mean, certainly a different flavor of story, to be sure, but once again your unique style of writing had me grinning the whole way through😁
Good work!

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Daniel Rogers
13:37 Aug 30, 2025

Thank you so much, Amanda. It's refreshing to be writing short stories again. I tried a novel for a month and hated it. I wrote almost everyday and laboriously filled 26 pages. The joy of writing never came, until I wrote this. It's funny how we can still learn new things about ourselves even at a half a century old, and I learned I'm not a novelist. 🤣

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Amanda Rose
16:35 Aug 30, 2025

Yes, I know the feeling🤣
I'm still experimenting tho🙃
But yes, I've been on a writing hiatus for a while too, and getting another one done the night before last was a really awesome feeling😎

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Shauna Bowling
22:45 Sep 06, 2025

Excellent story! You seamlessly tied the present with the past and future. The beginning line hooked me and kept me tethered to see what lie at the end of your expert casting (of the proverbial line).

Great job, Daniel!

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Daniel Rogers
00:27 Sep 08, 2025

Thank you very much 😀

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Aaron Kennedy
02:25 Sep 04, 2025

Saw the word “shotgun” in the title so I stopped and read it. It did not disappoint.

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Daniel Rogers
00:19 Sep 05, 2025

Thank you 😀👍

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Helen A Howard
08:53 Sep 03, 2025

I really liked this one, Daniel. Well written and engrossing. Felt like I was part of the story from the get go. Good characterisation and dilemma.
I saw that you’ve been having a go at novel writing. The trouble is it takes so blooming long to write a novel. I did write one but some of that was in lockdown when there was more time because I wasn’t working. I discovered short story writing is kind of addictive. I never expected that when I joined the Reedsy site 3 years ago.
Good to see you back again. I too enjoy your stories.

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Daniel Rogers
00:33 Sep 05, 2025

Thank you, Helen, it's good to be back. You're right about taking too blooming long. After work, dinner, and chores, I only have an hour at most to write. At that rate, it would take a year to finish the rough draft. Who knows how long to write the second draft, the third, and how ever many more I might need. I'm beginning to believe I'll have to wait until retirement to write a novel. I also agree short stories are addicting. 😀

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Mary Bendickson
19:25 Sep 01, 2025

Interesting story and welcome back to shorts. Good discussion going on here.
In 2022 I started pecking away on my laptop. By the end of year I had 80000 plus words and called it a novel manuscript. I had not written anything since college days decades before. I entered a contest and took home awinning medal in my genre. The poor thing has sat on the shelf evver since after being rejected by several hopefull posibilities. I started writing here sometimes picking apart that manuscript to make short stories. Haven't tried another novel length but have done a couple of series that may hold promise if I strung them together. Always struggling to come up with ideas for prompts. A much as I say I'm going to concentrate elsewhere, I don't. Sure if I would finally give in and study the art I could improve.😆

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Daniel Rogers
01:16 Sep 02, 2025

Thanks, it's good to be back, and thank you for a peek into your writing life. I admire you for finishing the first draft of a novel. I've discovered it's no small feat.

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David Sweet
17:14 Aug 31, 2025

It does pay to know history! Fun read, Daniel. I loke the vagueness of the actual time period until toward the end. Chancellor can be such a loaded term, but it works here.

I hear you on novel. I can seem to gain momentum on anything? Do you outline or have a certain approach where it seems like you're writing chapters like short stories? Or writing connected stories about specific characters? I would be curious on other's processes.

I have mostly worked on short stories. I just completed one this week to submit for an anthology. It is too long for Reedsy!

All the best to you in your writing journey. From the comments it seems to be good for you to be back in the short story game.

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Amanda Rose
02:47 Sep 01, 2025

Hi, I know you were asking Daniel this question, but I thought I might be able to comment on it too🙃
I personally really like the idea of making a novel out of a bunch of short story-like chapters! In fact, I've been working on a short story series that honestly was never meant to make it past part 1, but with every one I write, I need another to come after it, and I am curious to see if I could make enough for novel... A short one, anyway😁
All that to say, yes that seems like perfectly suitable medium to me😄
I'm glad I'm not the only person to think of it, lol

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David Sweet
04:31 Sep 01, 2025

I am working on a series about my dad and his grandfather. My Reedsy stories of "Southbound" and "Old Man Buckhart" are just two. I'm hoping thet they will connect like a short novel. Best of luck to you. Let me know if you ever want to bounce around ideas.

Email: davidmsweet.author@gmail.com

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Amanda Rose
06:19 Sep 01, 2025

Thanks, you too!
That would be great!
Mine is amandarosetheauthor@gmail.com

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Daniel Rogers
16:01 Sep 01, 2025

I "spoke" an outline to my wife while driving to the city one day. We had a lot of fun - I was making it up on the fly. 🤣 Then I began at the beginning. The process bored me. Never finishing a story got on my nerves. At the rate I was going (8000 words a month) I wasn't going to have a complete rough draft for ten months, then I'd have to do a second and then third and then...you get the idea. I just don't have the staying-power for such a huge piece.

I began writing to have fun, so I'm going to stick with the short. My wife also suggested writing short stories in a series that could be turned into a novel. It could work, and I may try it.

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David Sweet
16:29 Sep 01, 2025

I completely understand. It’s nice to have someone to bounce ideas off of. Have you looked at the studio option on Reedsy? It helps organize information for a novel. My daughter and one of my former students have used it for their novels. I use Scrivener. I started something of novel length, but I encounter similar barriers as you. You may want to consider it. I'm available via email to bounce around ideas with too. I wish you the best of luck. All I know to do is to keep writing and realize that your work is not for every reader. You will find a niche.

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Daniel Rogers
01:22 Sep 02, 2025

Thank you for your encouraging and helpful ideas. I agree with you, all we can do is keep writing. 😀👍

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