Mr. Bond is walking towards Ms. Em's cabin.
"Ms. Em I am thinking that in this mission, I should take a companion with me."
"Why?"
"Because in most of the mission I only go. So, this time I was thinking that some agents should come with me. So, they can experience that the mission is hard or easy. In my absence, they can do the mission."
"How you will choose the companion?"
"It's simple, we will take an audition."
"Okay, can you describe it?"
"Yes, there would be six rounds including the final round. The round will get more troublesome and more troublesome when we will move ahead with the audition. There would be different criteria to mark the agents. There would be a form that would be filled by the agents who are ready to do the mission."
"Till what time the form would be ready?"
"The form is ready, I will email it to you when I will go to my cabin."
"Who are the judges?"
"The judges would be you and me. For more inquiry just come in my cabin."
"Okay."
Mr. Bond leaves Ms.Em's cabin.
Ms. Em receives the email in which the form and other details of the audition are there.
Dear Ms. Em, Agents from 001 - 100 [ excluding agent number 007 ]
The rules of the audition :
- Each agent would be marked out of 10
- There would be 5 audition round and 1 final round
- The result of the rounds would be announced when the round is over
- The task of the round would be announced an hour before the round starts
- For any inquiry email, it too - agent007.JB@MI6
- The audition would be held from 24/8/2020 - 31/8/2020
- You need to fill the form which is provided below. [ the form which would be emailed after 22/8/2020 GMT shouldn't be allowed to participate in the audition ]
SIGN UP SHEET FOR MI6 MISSION AUDITION
The place where this * is compulsory to fill :
Name* :
Agent Number* :
Date Of Birth* :
Email I’d [of MI6]* :
Phone Code* :
Medical Issues* :
Expert In Any Form Of Art :
Once the form is filled, email it to - agent007.JB@MI6
Thanks & Regards
Agent number 007
Mr. Bond types 746846694695 on the keyboard of his computer.
It's a secret number to call Ms. Em.
Ms. Em picks up the phone and says "Agent no. 007, should I come to your cabin?"
"Yes, Ms. Em."
"Ms. Em, we got all the agents form. Let's see how well your agents do.
It's the day for the first round of the audition.
Ms. Em comes and tells a speech, she says " Welcome to the first-ever audition for MI6. Mr. Bond has kept this audition for selecting a companion for his newest mission. You all would be thinking that Mr. Bond is sacred to go for a mission. In this case, you are wrong. Mr. Bond has kept the audition to see who can go for the mission in his absence. Let's start."
"In the first round, you will be given 5 situations, you need to write the answers in an email and send it to agent007.JB@MI6 and in this round only 70 people would be chosen from 100"
The situations are:
- If you have an enemy which has 5 bodyguards and you have just 1 bullet left what would you do?
- How you would jump in the water from 10,000 ft?
- Where to shoot a built on a person?
- How to treat a cannibal?
- How you choke a person with a belt?
The email should come in 15 minutes to Mr. Bond and we will tell the results after 30 minutes.
The agents you have crossed the round 1 are :
- agent no. 003
- agent no. 005
- agent no. 009
- agent no. 012
- agent no. 015
- agent no. 019
- agent no. 024
- agent no. 027
- agent no. 028
- agent no. 030
- agent no. 033
- agent no. 037
- agent no. 047
- agent no. 048
- agent no. 049
- agent no. 050
- agent no. 054
- agent no. 056
- agent no. 058
- agent no. 062
- agent no. 064
- agent no. 066
- agent no. 071
- agent no. 072
- agent no. 073
- agent no. 088
- agent no. 084
- agent no. 085
- agent no. 086
- agent no. 087
- agent no. 081
- agent no. 082
- agent no. 083
- agent no. 089
- agent no. 090
- agent no. 091
- agent no. 092
- agent no. 093
- agent no. 094
- agent no. 095
- agent no. 096
- agent no. 097
- agent no. 098
- agent no. 099
- agent no. 100
- agent no. 001
- agent no. 002
- agent no. 004
- agent no. 006
- agent no. 048
- agent no. 008
- agent no. 010
- agent no. 011
- agent no. 013
- agent no. 014
- agent no. 016
- agent no. 017
- agent no. 018
- agent no. 020
- agent no. 021
- agent no. 022
- agent no. 023
- agent no. 025
- agent no. 026
- agent no. 075
- agent no. 074
- agent no. 078
- agent no. 079
- agent no. 070
- agent no. 069
It's the day for the round 2
"In the second round, you need to shoot 6 bullets on the dummy were the sign % this is there. There would be a gap of 2 meters between the dummy and the agent."
All the agents come one by one and perform the task. from this round, only 40 agents would be qualified for the next round.
Mr.Bond comes up and says the agents who have qualified for the next round are :
- agent no. 081
- agent no. 082
- agent no. 083
- agent no. 089
- agent no. 090
- agent no. 091
- agent no. 092
- agent no. 093
- agent no. 094
- agent no. 095
- agent no. 096
- agent no. 097
- agent no. 098
- agent no. 099
- agent no. 100
- agent no. 001
- agent no. 002
- agent no. 004
- agent no. 006
- agent no. 048
- agent no. 008
- agent no. 010
- agent no. 011
- agent no. 013
- agent no. 014
- agent no. 016
- agent no. 017
- agent no. 018
- agent no. 020
- agent no. 021
- agent no. 022
- agent no. 023
- agent no. 025
- agent no. 026
- agent no. 075
- agent no. 074
- agent no. 078
- agent no. 079
- agent no. 070
- agent no. 069
The days past by the final round of the audition came only 10 agents were able to get in the final round.
The agents who qualified for the final round are :
- agent no. 022
- agent no. 023
- agent no. 025
- agent no. 026
- agent no. 075
- agent no. 074
- agent no. 078
- agent no. 079
- agent no. 070
- agent no. 069
"In the final round, you need to solve a situation you will get a code when you enter the answer if it's wrong you will get the code but will get a penalty of 30 seconds. Then you will go to a locker and take the gun. The gun will have 7 bullets. All the seven bullets you need to shoot 7 dummy's head. The dummies would be moving. When you have crossed it then you will open the cage from the code which you got at starting. There you will find the flag bring back to us. We will note the time. all the best!"
The round starts.
- agent no. 022 did the task in 4.56 minutes
- agent no. 023 did the task in 3.45 minutes
- agent no. 025 did the task in 5.56 minutes
- agent no. 026 did the task in 6.56 minutes
- agent no. 075 did the task in 2. 45 minutes
- agent no. 074 did the task in 7. 45 minutes
- agent no. 078 did the task in 5.45 minutes
- agent no. 079 did the task in 7.35 minutes
- agent no. 070 did the task in 3.14 minutes
- agent no. 069 did the task in 4.59 minutes
Agent no. 075 yelled, "I am the winner."
"You haven't won yet because I have decided that local people will also take part in the winner. The person whom I have called is Mr. Amogh. He will do the same task. Then if he does faster you would be the companion who will go with me."
Amogh does the task. He completed the task in 1.56 minutes.
"The companion who will go with me is Amogh and from now he is an official member of MI6. He is an agent from now and his number is 101.
The audition gets over and MI6 gets a new agent.
The companion who will go with the agent no. 007 is AMOGH.
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I like this continuation! Well done!
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Sorry for the name-mash, Amogh. I like your story. You got enough feedback on the agent lists, so I will leave that. Your characters were good but would improve if their dialogue were more in character. For instance, Bond never used 'Ms. EM' to address 'M'. He usually used the English 'Ma'am'. 'M' never used 'Mr. Bond'; she called him 'Bond', and rarely 'James'. Also, some of your phrasings are awkward. Your sentence "The days past by the final round of the audition came only 10 agents were able to get in the final round. " shoul...
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An interesting concept. There were a few grammatical errors but the gist of the story is clear. I’d agree with the comments about repetition of the numbers but also accept you do your way. Well done.
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Thanks and I will work on it
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That was wonderful. Great job. Would you mind reading some of mine and upvote me? Thanks. (I would do the same to you)
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Yes
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Done for your stories. Please read my new story. (if you can, please upvote)
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SURE
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Please read my new story.
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I thought this was a very good story. I would suggest checking out grammarly, since there were several typos that distracted from the story. Anyway, continue writing!
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Great story. I like the criteria for the different rounds. Keep up the good work and keep writing!!
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thanks
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Any new karma points?
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yes
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please do more
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I told you because I am in top 100 now
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Super. Great job👍 Would you mind to read my story “The dragon warrior?”
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yes sure
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I'm glad you're still writing, but I'd like to see the continuation of 007's mission, more gadgets, more rendezvous in exotic locales with sharp, fast sports cars fighting against the enemy with Em, Amogh and/or some of those other agents you have listed. Looking forward to the next installment.
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Yup if I get a good prompt on which I can continue I will write it
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I LOVE THIS STORY, it very unique and an exquisite take on the prompt! :)
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I love this! You should definitely make a Part 3!
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I will write if a prompt comes that can suit the story
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This was a really nice and interesting story. Well done!
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Hi Amogh. You asked me to read your story and I think my comments are probably similar to a lot of others - try not to fill in story space with long lists of agents and their numbers; you could perhaps focus on five or six potential agents and flesh them out a little, which would add interest to your story; also, I like the way that you write yourself into the story as a character, but again, it would be good to be given a little more detail here about the other potentials’ attitude towards you (don’t forget the prompt here) and yours towar...
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With all due respect, there were too many numbers for me. I love the idea of playing with the short story genre, but surely you can shorten the lists. They do not add to the narrative tension. Keep working on the grammar and spelling. It's important if you are going to be writing in English. I do admire your effort!
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Hi! Cool story! I liked the plot! Great job!
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Clever, but the number list is exhausting! Give us more description and dialogue :)
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I know about numbers and thanks
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This is really great, but I second Roshna. The list is much too long, so it seems almost like a filling. If you removed that and added more storyline to it, then it would be much better. It might also be better if you showed vs. told. E.g. "Mr. Bond is going towards Ms. Em's cabin." You could try something like "Mr.Bond treks up the winding trail to Em's steady log cabin." See? And when writing something that a character is reading, such as an email, you should italicize the words. I hope I'm not coming across as mean, but if you fix the...
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:)
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Great story. Well done.
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I have submitted my new story Pls read it
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Hey there, I really liked the concept and the overall story. I felt like you added too many agents to the list and ten should really be the max number, especially since none of them are named. Overall though, this was a good read and kept me occupied the entire time. It was very gripping and I'm looking forward to reading the next story in this series! :)
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thanks and I will work on it
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