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Horror Middle School Thriller

Lisa looked like a normal kid, she had pretty, brown,long hair. She wore jeans and sneakers with a pretty crop-top. Her best friend was a popular girl named Ella, Ella was a beautiful blonde girl who always wore dresses and heels.

The only thing wrong with Lisa is that she never had been to a party. It wasn't because she had no friends or she wasn't popular, but simply her mother would not let her. Her mom was not very social and didn't know very many people.

Ella's birthday was coming up and she invited Lisa, " Just ask, she knows my parents, and it's my 11th birthday." she pleated, " Ok I will ask when I get home" Lisa smiled. After school they said their goodbyes an walked home.

" Home" Lisa said running to give her mom a hug, " Hi sweetie, do you want a PB+J?" her mother asked. " Sure, but there is something I want to ask." Lisa said. " What is it?" her mom asked quietly. " It's Ella's 11th birthday, and she invited me and you know her mom." Lisa said persuasively." Hon..." she sighed. " Ok, just this once though." she said " OMG mom really, thank you it's tonight at 6 lets go buy a present!" Lisa said excitedly

*At The Party*

Ding Dong, Lisa rang the doorbell to the huge mansion. " Lisa, your mom really let you come?"Ella asked. " Ya isn't that great!" I said. " Ummm.... Ya sure...." Ella said. We got into her room and did our nails and told scary stories. " Kids" Ella's mom called, her mom and dad were divorced and her dad was a crazy person so we were staying away from the windows afraid he will be there.

Knocking from the door interrupted the silence in the house of all the girls sleeping. As we woke up we heard a scream coming from Ella's mom,who opened the door. " W-what was that?" I whispered. But nobody answered instead we all crawled out of the room,we split up, I was with Ella we hid in her closet. After we heard multiple

screams coming from each room we finally decided everyone was gone. We called the police and hey said they were one there way. Ella left and said she was looking for survivors and would be back, One minute...10 minutes...30 minutes...1 hour..."Ella" I whispered to myself. I heard the door break open and people come up the stairs... POLICE... No it was the room door...as the closet doors in front of me slowly opened and I saw a burned face with black eyes... then I woke up dripping in sweat. I looked around to see my room.

12 years later

Lisa is a mom

" Mommy" my five year old cried " Can I got to a party?". " sure where at?"I asked looking at the paper... I screamed in terror. "Mommy?" my daughter cried. " I'm fine, don' worry. But you can't go." I said " Ok mommy." Letty sighed and walked off to her room. I sighed and sat on the couch watching the news, " We have found a body in the river. The body has been identified as Ella Lockwood" the T.V had said... No way, they couldn't have. As I stared at the T.v in front of me I barley heard the knocking at the door. " Hello" I said staring at the police officer in front of me "... can I help you?" He started to say " Are you Lisa Coodwell?". " Yes I am." , That's funny cause she died 12 years ago.

* NOT PART OF STORY, WOLD NOT SUBMIT SO I DID THIS FOR EXTRA*

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May 14, 2021 18:15

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Is that a Kenma pfp I see there??????? Also, this story isn't bad, instead of telling, you should show what happened. The storyline is amazing though!

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Jaisa Farmer
18:17 May 14, 2021

Don't mind the random lettering at the bottom I could not think of any thing else. Also sorry It's bad I'm only in 6th grade and this is my first story i've wrote in a long time

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