"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!"
Emilia yells, running at me.
I can't see the problem, but
it's thrown her into tizzy.
She screams some more,
slamming into me, and
knocking my glasses onto the ground; I
pick
them up, placing the glass frames over my eyes,
sending the rioting world
into clarity. Or near clarity.
Nothing is clear right now.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"
Emilia grabs my shoulders and shakes me a little.
"What's
wrong?" I ask.
Oh, nothing, nothing, NO-THING except
SAMANTHA-JAE was
just TAKEN AWAY
BY SOME GUY!
CALL THE POLICE! CALL
THE U.S. ARMY! CALL
THE U. K. ARMY! CALL
THE IRISH ARMY!
RUN
FOR THE HILLS! I TRIED
TO RUN AFTER THEM, BUT
HE DROVE TOO FAST!"
She spins around,
falling over.
Emilia
Brushed dust from her jeans, standing up, her hair
falling out of its messy bun, her own glasses,
fogged by her huffing breath.
"Hold up. There's
been an
abduction? An alien abduction?"
"I don't think he was a
martian, but
yes; Samantha-Jae was taken by him. We
HAAAAVE to act now."
"Did you call the sheriff?" I ask, fiddling with
the button
on my jean jacket, a
nervous habit of mine.
I brush my straight,
brown hair out of my eyes, blinking at Emilia. She begins to sob
uncontrollably,
tears streaking down her cheeks, in trails
of pitch-black
mascara.
"I didn't! I didn't! I'm such a
failure! Everyone knows that
You're supposed to call
9-1-1 if you witness
a crime! Choco,
I'm so sorry!
I let our
friend
be
stolen!
If I could
go back in
time and save
her, I would have
thrown myself at the
man! I would have broken
both his legs, if I had to! Oh,
Chocolate, I'm so, so, so sorry!"
I touched Emilia's arm.
"You didn't know what to do. You panicked and
went to the first person you could trust.
That's okay. You tried
to help her.
We'll get her back, I
p
r
o
m
i
s
e
.
I promise."
I start laughing, and
I can't stop.
"What's so funny? Our friend
was just--"
"You said 'Irish Army."
"Why's that so stupid?"
"It isn't, except we're in Oklahoma, a state in America.
They wouldn't be able to come. And, well, this is
an American problem, right?"
"I suppose."
I reach out and touch Emilia's arm gently.
"We'll find her. We'll find her."
But something in me
cannot
ever
believe
this.
We'll find her. We'll find her.
The plan is in motion.
We're leaving tonight. We can't
wait long, or
it might be too late.
We don't know Samantha-Jae's captor's intentions.
She might not be...
No. I can't
think
like
that.
10:30.
We are
leaving in
half an hour.
Emilia will drive
us out of town, in
the direction that she
saw the car driving away
in. There are six roads that
head away from our town, and
the abductor was heading north,
up by a forest that borders half our
town. We're in the middle of nowhere,
so unless A) he's taking Samantha-Jae far
away, B) there's some cabin in the woods or
secret hideout that we've never seen, or C) he
lives out there. I think that there's a manor houseΒ
56 miles from here, but the abductor likely wouldn't
need any ransom money or something, since the manor
owner would be rich. But there could be other motives, too.
Emilia described him to me: young-looking, no older than
twenty-five, but she wasn't really sure. She didn't get a
good look at his face. He could be a young-looking
thirty-five-year-old man, since she didn't get a
clear glimpse. he had short-shaved brownΒ
hair, a muscular build, and white skin.
The odd thing, Emilia told me, was
that even though she only saw
him leading Samantha-Jae
away, it looked like she
had gone willingly...
Samantha-Jae
had shown
up in
our
small
town all
alone, so
maybe she
was running
from him? He
could have told
her something to
make her come, or
threatened her. But
Samantha-Jae was not
the kind of girl you could
threaten. Samantha-Jae was
brave and strong. Unless he said
something to her that really made her
weak, she wouldn't leave. He didn't have
any visible weapons, as far as Emilia could
tell, so force wasn't an option. I have figured
out that he was in a white van, from the year
2016, and Emilia told me that the license
plate number started with A9442, but
that was all that she had memorized
as she ran after them. She didn't
have the brand, but she knew
that only three of the six
windows were tinted.
She knew this because
she saw Samantha-Jae
through one of them.
And that's all the info
we have. However, the
tracks seem follow-able,Β
and whoever it was had an
oil leak, leaving a trail behind
them, one that we would still be
able to see if we had really good
headlights, so maybe, if we--
"Choco. Hey, Choco. Are you
there? Can you hear me?"
Emilia's voice rings
through my phone.
"I hear you. Loud and clear. I was just thinking
about this. What do we do? If we can't--"
My voice drops into the abyss opening inside of me.
"We will." Emilia assures me, the screen of the phone
lighting up. "Besides, once we're past town limits, I'll
alert the sheriff. All the information. Just in case they have
guns or something."
I did not think of that.
Although, now that I do,
I really realize what we're doing.
We're charging into a criminal's lair.
Trying to get a friend back, instead of
trusting the authorities.
What.
Have.
We.
Gotten.
INTO?
"Ems? You there?" I ask.
"Yeah, I'm right here. Come outside. to
my house. Just a few down the block. We miiiiight
have a transportation issue."
I do not like the sound of that.
"Be right there, Emilia. Over and out."
We only have a motorcycle.
"This?"
"It's not that big of an issue, except you're a little too big to ride
on my back for hundreds of miles. Besides, the
headlights are a little dim. We'll need a car."
"Who has a car we could borrow? I mean,
not many people in Bridgebrook, O.K., even own them.
There
isn't enough room,
you can practically walk from one side of the town to the other in twenty minutes."
"Maybe that would be me."
I jump a foot in the air, panic, scream, and fall over,
crouching down like you're supposed to do in an earthquake.
"NOT US, TOO!" I screech.
Emilia,
on the other hand, is waving a stick and
threatening the mysterious figure.
"And me!" says a young female voice, high and sharp.
I almost start sobbing with fear.
Two of them. We don't even outnumber the
mysterious people.
Hold on.
One of them sounds
familiar...
Emilia's constant stream of motion, waving her stick
like it's a lightsaber,
turns on a floodlight-bright, motion-sensitive porch lamp and
garage light.
It's John Kazzer, the young man who Samantha-Jae accused of stealing our bakery's secret spice.
And Sherry Solomon, an annoying teenage girl, about
as tall as me, with messy blond hair, a
snappish attitude, and big, adorable, anime-like eyes.
Her face is an explosion
of freckles.
Really? Them?
Could they be related
to the criminal?
Samantha-Jae's
abductor?
They didn't seem like
criminals themselves, though.
"Really, you two, why are you
doing that?" John asks.
Sherry snickers.
"Okay, we need your car and I'm the adult here, so
I'm driving." Emilia announces. The purple streak woven
into her two black braids
winks
at me in the light.
"Can we come, too?" Sherry asks loudly.
"Shhhhhh..." I hiss.
"Why're you all dressed like robbers?" Sherry continues.
She's right. I'm dressed in a black turtleneck,
black texting gloves,
black jeans,
black sneakers
with the shiny laces pulled out
and the treads on the bottom
etched with little X's so the brand is unidentifiable,Β Β Β Β Β Β Β
and a black, puffy, hooded jacket over it all.
Emilia is wearing a literal mask,
like some kind of supervillain.
"We're catching a kid napper." I say, bluntly
and shortly.
"I think it's one word, Choco."
"Whatever."
"Nah, I think you were talking about a
person who makes baby goats sleep."
"WHATEVER!"Β Β Β
I frown and cross my arms.
"Can WE come, too?"
Sherry asks, a giant smile
opening across her lips.
"No. Too
dangerous."
"The more the safer," John Kazzer says.
I hate to admit he's right.
"You are dressed like a
bunch of incredibly see-able clowns. We are
dressed for this."
Emilia smiles,
black lipstick looking purple under the bright lights.
"We'll change." They both announce.
They come back dressed like
weird robbers in a funny movie.
I admire the bandanas and hats, to cover
their blond and light-brown hair, which
is way more visible than mine and
Emilia's.
"I can not believe I'm saying this, but
You guys look like you know what you're doing. Now we need
to cover up the car license plate," Emila says.
When John Kazzer gives hr a look, she adds: "So your
mom doesn't get in trouble because of us... or do you want her to
get all the blame?"
The do what she says
pretty speedily.
Soon we are flying away into the night.
The road is dark
and we are only small humans
in the vast, empty Earth.
We slow to 2 miles per hour once
we're a good ten miles out there.
Here, the tracks are
hard to find.
Oil shines
in our headlights, but then, that
d i s s a p p e a r s.
We keep going.
We get out of the car,
looking.
Then:
we find a deep skid mark in the road, the mud around it drying
on the edges,
water pooling in it at its depths.
It's old,
but not too old.
We follow the off-roading tracks,
the same pattern as the pattern of the grips on the abductor's van,
I notice,
and they lead to a dirt road.
We follow the dirt road for at least three miles,
before we see it turn to hard pavement,
and then we see lights.
A big manor house--not big, huge-- sits
in a giant manicured lawn.
The lights are bright, but we see a pocket
of darkness beyond them.
We crawl through the shadows until Sherry whispers
Why are we doing this?
I shake my head, trying to signal "no talking".
Emilia "shhhhhh"s at Sherrry, who
becomes silent as stone.
We go around to the side of the house, behind big bushes. The
place looms in front of me
like a giant, white climbing wall--
climbing wall?
I think I can climb this place.
I could climb up
and rescue Samantha-Jae!
I could be a hero!
I step over a spiky, prickly, hedge.
Adrenaline and determination course through my veins.
I reach out
touch the smooth siding
take a breath
then another breath
another
another
another
another
I reach out
And
begin
climbing.
I reach the third floor, balancing
my toes who-knows-where,
holding on
to the siding and breathing gently.
My hands tire and my feet wear out, so I
lean onto the frame of a nearby window. I look in,
gasping.
Samantha-Jae
is sitting is a nearly featureless white room,
with a bed, desk, and chair in it.
She has her back turned to me, but
we have the same sleek, brown hair.
Her! It's her!
The window is pretty high, but
She could climb out if she tried.
The window is on the third floor, though. The fall is
far, if she were to slip.
The door is locked, but there's
another, unlocked door.
It's ajar and leads to
a colorless bathroom,
I think.
Samantha-Jae turns around, and I see
that she is holding a cloth to her right cheek, for
some reason. She removes it,
and I see a cut slashing across her cheek,
blood oozing out as soon as she removes the cloth.
The whole thing is turned red on the inside.
Oh, no. Whoever hurt her
is gonna PAY.
I bang on the window, trying not to topple down, down,
down, down,
down
d
o
w
n
.
.
.
"AhmigashurhereInewudcome!" she shouts. The thick
glass makes her speech almost unrecognizable as English.
"YEAH! I'M HERE TO RESCUE YOU!"
I fiddled with the window,
opening it.
"From my stepbrothers?"
"Your stepbrothers kid napped you?"
"One word, gal.
One word. But anyway, I'm fine. I went
on my own, with no one forcing me to, hoping that
they'd become nicer. But
as you can see, they
aren't.
I ran away from them two years ago. Thanks
for getting me out of here, but--"
She shoves me out the window.
A million butterfies of panic
invade my stomach.
I reach out and grab the windowsill with
two fingers
Two fingers are
all that's keeping me
from falling down
into the pricker bushes
from a hundred feet up above them.
Two.
Fingers.
I swing my other hand up, dangling from the ledge.
Samantha-Jae slams the window shut
before I can climb back up.
Shock. I am shocked.
So shocked that I
F
A
L
L
off the side of the building.
I was never knocked out, I think I was just
shocked from the fall.
I am not that badly hurt!
And there's an unfamiliar boy's face floating above mine.
Brown hair
blue eyes
white skin
concerned look
He's kind of cute...
WHAT ARE YOU THINKING CHOCOLATE!? My brain says
to me.
"Are you okay?" he asks.
"Yeah! Fine! Jammy! All good!" I say,
standing up and dashing away. He's about my age,
really skinny,
nervous.
Did I already say nervous? Well, he is.
"AAAAAAAH! DID I KILL YOU, CHOCO?
IF I KILLED YOU, I'LL NEVER FORGIVE MYSELF!
I WAS TRYING TO MAKE SURE BRYAN DIDN'T SEE YOU!"
"I'M OKAAAAAAY!" I yell.
The boy stares at me.
"Are you trying to--"
"I'm trying to un-kid nap Samatha-Jae!"
"Two words.
And you can't un-kid nap.
That's not a thing, okay?"
"WHATEVER!" I say.
I look up at Samantha-Jae, leaning out the window.
"Are you--" I begin.
The boy takes me to the ground. I slam
my knee into his stomach, but
My kneecap hits something hard instead.
Armor?
I can't escape from his grip.
No matter what I do, he
can match me move for move.
I have one secret weapon...
Time. To.
Use. It.
I lean forward,
and my lips touch his.
Weird boy,
consider yourself
KISSED.
"EEEW!" he shouts. He leaps off of me, runs toward
a prickly topiary,
hits it hard, runs for the wall,
hits that, then
runs away, a big guard dog
(coming for Emilia and Sherry,
who are running towards the car)
slamming into him,
tripping, getting back up, hitting the wall of the house, then stumbling into another topiary
and then the hood of the car.
I stare at the palms of my hands.
Did I just do that?
I
did.
The kid was cute.
I'd kiss him even if I wasn't fighting him.
Eww.
Samantha Jae is climbing out the window on
a rope Emilia threw to her, swinging down to the ground,
running for the car,
which John Kazzer is driving towards us.
I hop non the back with the others,
opening the trunk and climbing inside.
Seven strong-looking, brown-haired boys
are running towards us.
The cute boy
is chasing in a gangly way, falling over his own feet and tripping on stones.
"So long, sucker!" I call to the wind,
flying back home.
After an hour of panicked driving in circles, trying to lose them--
We make it back
home, with no stepbrothers following.
Status: all here,
all okay,
all really, really, really proud.
And hopefully no
real adults saw us....
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YAY!!! I am so happy you posted another one! I am so happy you did, because I loved it Emmie! Great job! :)
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Thanks! This one was kind of hard to do, because I didn't want it to be dark and scary, because I didn't want into be too different from the first two. But I'm glad you like this!
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No problem, also, completely understand! :)
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:) Yeah. The dealing with dark subjects, I like to put in lots of jokes, to lighten it.
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That's a great idea! To balance it out!
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I do that a lot, since most of my novels I'm working on deal with dark subjects. Death, starvation, death, evil magic, death, discrimination, death... did I mention death?
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just loved it!
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Thanks!
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:)
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Hey, what do you think of the characters? Like, each one as a person??
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umm. honestly, they all are a bit ....crazy? yeah but amazing:) i like the most is John kazzer. one thing i wanna clear: do clear me with these two, Emilia and choco. over all, loved it. and yes sorry for late reply.
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Emilia is the only responsible adult, and she isn't every responsible. She's a poet, and angry at everyone, most of the time. She acts like some crazy teen instead of a 30-year-old person. Choco is short for Chocolate, that's the kid of the bakery owners. She's shy and smart, with a good sense of humor. They're friends, even though they're so different. I think Choco's the youngest.
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Hey, guys! I'll be leaving Reedsy for a little while, so I won't get your comments. Don't worry, I'll come back in a week or two, but I won't be able to get your comments. If you want to comment please like this story and go to it later. (in a week or two weeks) Thank you!
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cool
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You like it? Good! I worked for a while on this one. Have you read the others? Everything on my page labeled "a poetry-verse story" is gonna be one of those, and though you don't have to read them in order, it's best to start with "Chocolate kisses" and end with "Storm". This is my favorite, too!
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What do you guys think about this? It's continued from "spices", and you'll be able to follow it if you didn't read the previous one, but it'll all seem funnier if you get Samantha-Jae's point of view for the beginning of the "abduction", which she understands is just her stepbrothers trying to retrieve her, and not a wicked scheme.
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could ya check out "It wasn't him" and leave some feedback on it?
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Sure! Happy to help :)
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thank you
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