Vincent hesitated, his thumb trembling just above the glowing "Send" button.
The excuse was airtight, a runaway greyhound, bleeding paw, tearful child clinging to his leg like he was some street-corner saint. He even tossed in a quote from the kid, "You're my hero, mister." It was pure fiction, obviously completely made up, and he knew it.
He tapped the button, sending the message into the void before he could rethink it.
The email zipped off to his editor, who'd been waiting, no, begging, for his column three days ago. Vincent exhaled, leaned back in his kitchen chair, and grinned at the dusty ceiling fan spinning overhead. A lie, certainly, but one so beautiful, he almost wished it were true.
Rain tapped the window with the rhythm of restless, impatient fingers seeking entry. Outside, the city blurred behind the downpour, lights smudged, colors bleeding together like a watercolor left out in the storm. Inside, the aroma of burnt toast clung to the air like guilt.
He padded barefoot to the sink, rinsing out his half-drunk coffee. The handle was sticky, clinging to his palm with an unpleasant, lingering tackiness. He made a mental note to clean it later, then promptly let that thought drift off a cliff.
A knock echoed through the silence, sharp and sudden against the heavy stillness.
Not the friendly tap of a mailman, three sharp raps, urgent and unmistakably demanding.
Vincent's spine stiffened, a chill crawling up as instinct screamed, something wasn't right.
He opened the door, heart racing, unsure of what he was about to face.
There, drenched from the storm and holding a soggy hardcover copy of his debut short story collection, stood Harper Vale.
Vincent blinked, disbelief flashing across his face. "You've got to be kidding."
"Nice to see you too, " she said, her voice flat. "You left this in the cracks of your masterpiece." She held up the book, its pages swollen with rain. "Thought I'd return it."
"Harper, what are you doing here?" he asked, confusion creeping into his voice.
"Do you have five minutes." she asked, stepping inside without waiting for an invitation. "Or should I come back after your next heroic rescue?"
Vincent shut the door behind her. "You read the story, didn't you?"
"Read it? Vincent, you published it. And you didn't even change the ending." Her voice trembled, not with anger, but with something more fragile. "You think fiction doesn't leave fingerprints? You think readers don't recognize when their own trauma's been plucked like some ripe metaphor and slapped on a page?"
Vincent opened his mouth, then shut it again. She tossed the book onto the table, the spine cracking like a knuckle.
"I didn't use your name, " he started, but his words faltered in the heavy silence.
"You didn't have to, " she replied, her eyes piercing through him like a warning.
They stood in silence, the rain ticking against the windows like an impatient clock.
"You were my student, " Vincent said finally, his voice soft. "That story, it was about me. My guilt. My failure. I was trying to, "
"Rewrite what happened?" she cut in. "Shape it into something noble? Artistic? You didn't write that story for me. You wrote it to absolve yourself."
Her words struck harder than the knock, each one sinking deeper than he'd expected.
But then, as suddenly as it had flared, her rage deflated. She sank into the chair across from him, dripping, tired. "Look, I didn't come here to argue with you,” she muttered. "I came because something's wrong, " she said, her gaze unwavering. "I think you know that."
Vincent frowned, confusion clouding his face. "What are you talking about?"
Harper reached into her coat and pulled out her phone. "Last week, you missed a panel at the university, " she said, her tone sharp. "Claimed you were caught in a twelve-car pileup. Said you dragged a woman from a burning SUV."
"I never said it happened. I just needed out, so I made something up."
Harper angled the phone toward him. A grainy news clip played, emergency lights flickering, smoke curling. "That exact crash happened. Cypress and 4th. Same day. Same time."
He froze.
"And then, " Harper continued, "I hear whispers that the city's changing. A cafe that never existed before shows up on 9th. A man goes missing, matches the description of a thief you once wrote about in your column. What if you aren’t just spinning fiction anymore? What if you’re twisting the truth?”
Vincent took a step back. “That’s crazy.”
“Is it?” she asked. “How many of your lies have become reality lately?”
He fixed his gaze on her.
She saw it in his eyes, silent, horrified confirmation.
“You’re twisting the world, “ she said. “It’s not just the harmless lies, Vincent. The ugly ones are catching up.”
***
The following week, Vincent decided to test it.
Excuses turned into predictions. Predictions morphed into truths. The city bent around his lies like metal to flame.
He told an old classmate he'd landed at a corner office with a skyline view. Days later, a keycard arrived in the mail. The building directory listed his name.
He joked to a bartender that his ex had begged to him to take her back. That evening, she called.
The thrill blossomed quickly and soured just as fast.
He lied about a stolen painting to dodge a police ticket. The museum reported it missing the following day.
He made an excuse for a missed call about a mugging he used as an excuse for a missing a call. Real. Harsh. Painfully close to home.
Then came the worst of all. The whisper at 3 a.m., wine in hand, ego inflated, and shame suppressed, "I'm sorry, but I think I killed someone."
He hadn't intended it.
The next morning's news reported an unidentified body found near his old bus stop, blunt trauma, no witnesses.
Vincent stopped leaving the apartment, drew the curtains, and avoided mirrors.
When he passed the hallway mirror once, he thought he saw Harper behind him. Or maybe it was the woman from the tale. Or maybe they were the same now, his guilt in the flesh.
The next time his phone buzzed, he let it ring.
But then Harper knocked once more.
He swung open the door.
She didn't grin.
"You lied to me, too, " she said. "Back then, when I needed you."
He stayed silent.
"And now? You could reshape the world, Vincent. You could heal, tell the truths that matter. But you just hide."
A pause.
She stepped in and shut the door behind her. Her coat dripped on the hardwood floor like a ticking clock.
"You have a gift, " she said. "Or maybe a curse. But either way, I'm not leaving until you use it for something real."
Another knock came, this one different, there was urgency in it. As if the weight of the city itself was trying to press in.
Vincent pulled the door open.
A tall, suited figure stood there, Samantha Reyes, the investigator he'd heard whispers about. The city had been buzzing with rumors about strange occurrences, and here she was, relentless in her pursuit.
"I'm tracking anomalies, " she said. "Things that shouldn't be here."
"Like me?" Vincent asked, his throat tight.
"Exactly, " Reyes replied, her eyes narrowing. "And I believe you're at the center of it."
Vincent had no time to explain, no way to stop her from getting closer. Her arrival added yet another layer of danger, he couldn't afford her to learn the truth about his power.
Vincent sat at his desk, watching the cursor blink.
Outside, the rain started again, gentle and steady.
Inside, Harper lingered. Samantha Reyes lingered at the door, her presence like a weight on his chest.
He rested his fingers on the keys.
Not an excuse. Not anymore.
He wrote the truth, about Harper, the story he stole, the body, the guilt, the power.
The truth spilled across the screen like a confession.
And then, Harper let out a gasp.
Vincent turned to face her.
She was flickering, like a glitch in the air, a broken signal. Her form blurred at the edges, as if the world couldn't hold her shape.
"No" he whispered, voice barely audible.
She looked down at her hands. "Vincent, what did you write?"
"I, I told the truth, " he said, rising to his feet. "I thought it would fix everything, "
"But I'm part of the lie, " she said softly. "Vincent, what happens to me now? I never came back after what you did."
He staggered back.
"No. You're here. You're real,” he insisted, stepping closer.
"Not anymore, " she said softly. "You wrote the truth about me."
A pause.
"You can finish it, " she said. "Erase the last of the lies. Set me free."
He stared at the blinking cursor, at the story waiting to be finished.
The key that could bring resolution.
But only by letting her go.
Or, rewriting everything.
He could delete the file, leaving the past shattered and incomplete.
Keep Harper. Keep the ghost and live with the consequences.
"Vincent, " she said softly. "Choose."
The rain beat harder against the window.
Vincent sat down, hands trembling, and reached for the mouse.
He hovered with his cursor over "Save."
Then, he moved it over "Delete."
Somewhere in the city, a cafe disappeared.
Elsewhere, a man came home who'd been reported missing for days.
And on Vincent's screen, a single line lingered, "I let her go."
The world seemed to hold its breath.
And then, it began to reshape itself.
Not with a lie. With the truth.
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Reminds me of "Lathe of Heaven" by Ursula Le Guin.
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Beautifully written and a fascinating superpower. This would make for a good short film, too.
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