After a long night of work, I like to go to my favorite coffee shop. Honestly, I donโt know why they are still open. I think that Iโve done enough work today so Iโm going to head over there. There is an alley beside the shop but I think nothing of it. Iโm sitting in the seat closest to the alley but I always sit here. I hear something coming from there and I just think itโs an animal. I look over to see two figures, one looking like itโs strangling the other one. I told the workers and ran outside but I was too late. I called the police but by the time they made it, It looked like nothing happened. There was no evidence! I was consistent but they didnโt believe me. No bodies, No weapons, I didnโt know what to do but then I remembered, I saw that man's face. I told them what he looked like and they figured out that his name is Josh Nicolas. He is actually a really good guy. Sometimes, People can change though. We had to go on trial.
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Finally, The day of the trial came. I donโt know why I am excited, No one believes that I saw a murder. Okay, Iโm here, My palms are sweaty and Iโm so nervous. Iโm going to meet the man that I saw murder someone. As I walk into the courtroom, I see everyone in the jury and Iโm the most nervous that Iโve ever been. I try to be calm but itโs not working, I guess I look calm because no one is looking at me weird. They tell me to say what I saw and heard. So I said, โI was in Cafe Break and I heard something in the alley, So I went to look and I saw someone strangling another person. I ran outside but it was too late. I called the police and when they showed up they looked around for evidence but there was none. I saw the murderer's face and it looked like a real person named Josh Nicolas.โ The prosecutor asked โHow would you have heard the scene if you were inside the cafe?โ I replied with the truth โI was sitting in the closest seat to the alley. I go to Cafe Break every night after work and I always sit in that seat.โ The prosecutor said โWell, Why donโt we ask Josh Nicolas himself?โ He brought out Josh and asked him a few questions but this question really got me. The prosecutor asked โWhere were you that night?โ โI was at a bar and I got too drunk to drive myself home and called a cab and went home,โ He said. The defense replied with โTo help with his statement, I called his cab driver to come.โ The cab driver came out and said โYeah, I remember him, He left a giant tip. Also, I could tell he was drunk, He reeked of beer and his words were slurred so I knew right away he was drunk.โ But then I thought, What if he lives nearby and came to the alley and killed someone while he was drunk so he doesnโt remember?โ I asked the judge โYour Honor, May I ask a question to Josh?โ โGo right ahead,โ He replied. โJosh, Where do you live?โ I asked. He replied โ1795 Sunshine Road.โ I said astonished โThat is a block down from Cafe Break. I think that you may have stumbled out of your house and went in the alley and killed that man. You donโt remember it because you were drunk.โ โI Uh- I- Donโt uh,โ He replied. โI think that she has made a good point, We will check your house for the body,โ A policeman said. The judge commented โI think that Itโs enough for today, we will come back tomorrow.โ Finally, I can relax. I wake up not wanting to go to court today. I walk into the courtroom dreading doing this again. I think to myself โHopefully, This is the last day that I am doing this.โ The policeman says that โWe didnโt find any evidence in his house.โ Just when I was about to lose hope, Josh said โI may have killed that man. When I woke up the next morning, there was blood on my hands.โ Then, The judge yelled โGuiltyโ and I knew I had won! No more courtroom, No more waking up at 7:00, Iโm glad thatโs over and Iโm happy people believe me again. Now, I can just go back to my life. Coffee shop, Work, and no murders or trials. I walk home happy that I won the trial and on the way there I say to myself, โHow about a celebratory trip to Cafe Break?โ I go over there and I sit by the seat that I always sit in, The seat beside the alley. Jeff yells to me โCongrats on the win!โ Jeff is a barista. โHow did you find out so quickly?โโ I ask. He replies โI watched it on T.V.โ โIt was on T.V.!โ I said, astonished. Jeff responded โYeah, I watched on this T.V. right here.โ โI didnโt think it was going to be on T.V.! Lousy people, Never tell me whatโs going on,โ I remarked. โWell, You did great in there. It was so funny when that guy was like โUh- Huh-Whatโ!โ He chuckled. โAnyways, I have a question.โ I said. โWhat is it?โ Jeff asked. โWhy are you guys open so late?โ I wondered โWell, Itโs for people like you, Who need some time away or just someone to talk to,โ
He said. โOh, Well Thatโs nice I never would have thought of that. I always thought it was because you guys needed the extra money,โ I replied. โAnd That too,โ Jeff laughed. โWell, Itโs getting late, I better head home.โ I said. โOkay, You know where to find me!โ Jeff exclaimed. I went home happy that I had won. I got in my bed to go to sleep. โTime to go back to my lifeโ I thought to myself.
(Note: Please tell me if I made any mistakes. Thank You For Reading!)
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HELLO!!!!! The story was a great!!! Just one suggestion, you can maybe section it up a little bit. You wrote it as a long big paragraph, but to make it easier to read, next time maybe you can section it up. And I saw you did my quiz!!!!! AHHHH TYSM!!!! You just got one question wrong, but it AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! You did really good *gives pat on the back* PEACE OUT!!!!!
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Thank you! I will take that in account and do that next time. I just started writing on here and appreciate the feedback!
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Any time! I also just started back in quarantine, because I was really bored, so i am still a newbie... hehehe
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Hey! If you guys find any mistakes. Please tell me. Also, Feedback helps me write better so please give me feedback. Thank you for reading!
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WOW!!! I love it, no problems just in is a little of a run on paragraph!! Keep up the good work!! I really love it!
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That's not called a "Run on paragraph" and trying to work on that. Thank You!
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