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Adventure Speculative Fantasy

“George, it’s simply a submarine tour,” Marge reassured, her voice filled with both excitement and patience.

With a grumble, George’s eyes darted through the crowd gathered at the dock. “Just a casual trip into the abyss. Nothing to worry about.”

Marge rolled her eyes playfully. “You’ve had more excitement at the dentist than you’ll have here.”

“It's not funny, Marge,” George replied, his voice tight. “You know I don't do well in confined spaces.” He took a deep breath, trying to ignore the cold sweat trickling down his back.

Marge had that same gleam in her eyes when they first met. It was the same spark that had gotten them into all kinds of trouble over the years. From zip lining through rainforests in Costa Rica to navigating the crowded bazaars of Marrakech. But this… this was different. The ocean was too vast, too mysterious. There was no exit strategy here.

A booming voice interrupted their laughter. “Ahoy, there, me hearties!” Aloysius “Albatross” Martinelli bellowed. “Today, our destination is the submerged city of Atlantis!” His crew cheered in response. Their spirits are as buoyant as the air bubbles rising from their submerged vessel.

“I created a one-of-a-kind submersible bus that can withstand incredible depths. I modeled the sub-bus after the London double-decker buses I rode in my youth. A tour through Stratford-upon-Avon, home to the world’s most influential writer–William Shakespeare–lit a fire in me for adventure. Today, I give you the opportunity for an adventure like no other.”

Everyone’s attention shifted from Albatross when the sub-bus hatch swung open with a loud, metallic groan. A young woman with sea foam-colored hair and a smile as bright as the sun emerged. She sported a captivating blue uniform featuring a name tag that read ‘Cap’n Marisol’. “Looks like we’ve arrived just in time for the high tide of curiosity!” she called out, her voice as bubbly as the waves lapping the shore. Her sly pun went over their heads. “Welcome to the grandest tour on this side of the continental shelf!” The tourists murmured among themselves, exchanging glances that were a mix of skepticism and excitement.

The sub-bus, painted in a vibrant blue, was a sleek and modern vessel that reflected the ocean above. The portholes were so big and polished that the vessel resembled a spaceship rather than a sub-bus. A line of passengers, all chattering eagerly, filed in. George remained rooted to the spot, his grip on Marge’s arm tightening.

He whispered, pointing towards the young couple who had just come off the gangplank, holding hands. “They’re not worried. They think it’s all fun and games until we’re stuck down there swimming with the fishies.”

Marge leaned in, mischief gleaming in her eyes. “Oh, come on, George,” she coaxed. “You’ve faced down more than a few sharks in your day.”

He grimaced. “Those were the kind you can see at the other end of a pool table.”

Marge gave him a gentle nudge. “You’re not getting out of this one. We’re going on this adventure, and you’re going to love it.”

“If we went to Hawaii like I wanted we’d be getting a sunburn on the beach.” Exploring the deep sea was far from enjoyable for George. Confined spaces were not his thing.

While nearing the hatch, a strong gust of salty wind swept by them, carrying the haunting melody of a distant whale. George experienced a spine-chilling shiver and briefly thought about fleeing. However, when he noticed the same excitement in Marge’s eyes, the excitement that had been present on their wedding day, he realized he couldn’t let her down.

Giving a resigned sigh, he followed obediently as he went down the steep steps into the depths of the sub-bus. The interior was surprisingly spacious. There were rows of comfortable seats facing a wall of windows that looked out into the vast, unexplored world beneath the waves. A colorful mural of sea life appeared as the lights flickered on, its curious eyes seeming to observe them.

Cap’n Marisol made her way down the aisle, ensuring everyone’s seatbelts were fastened. She reached for George and gave his shoulder a firm pat. “No need to worry, sir,” she said, flashing a comforting smile. “She’s a sturdy little thing. Made to endure the toughest seas and even the most curious Kraken.”

George’s eyes widened. “Kraken? I heard you mention Kraken.”

Cap’n Marisol chuckled. “You know about the stories? We had a little incident with one a few weeks ago. Some cables were torn apart. Now that she’s all patched up, she’s good as new.”

Curiosity piqued, Marge leaned in. “How did it look?”

“It was a sight to behold, ma’am. With tentacles longer than a school bus, it’s twice the size of this sub-bus. Our crew and advanced technology ensure our safety, despite any fears.”

The mention of the Kraken hardly calmed George’s nerves, yet he was captivated by the stories of their near encounter. He leaned closer to the porthole, peering into the deep.

Surprisingly, as the sub-bus descended, George found himself leaning back into the plush seat, feeling the tension in his body slowly easing. The vessel’s walls were lined with screens displaying real-time sonar readings and oceanographic data, a testament to the marvel of modern engineering. 

The hatch closed with a final, ominous clang, making George gulp nervously. It’s too late to back out now. He sat beside Marge, who was happily buckling her seatbelt. A hint of salty air wafted through the cabin.

“Are you ready for this, old man?” she teased, her eyes gleaming with excitement.

George made a conscious effort to smile. “I’m as prepared as I’ll ever be,” he stated, praying that his voice wouldn’t reveal his fear.

As it lurched, the sub bus sank into the water with a deep, powerful rumble. The surface grew distant. George’s stomach dropped as the world outside the windows grew darker and more mysterious. The interior resembled a luxury hotel rather than a means of transportation, with its shiny hull and expansive viewing windows. Looking around the cabin, he tried to ignore the creeping claustrophobic sensation. 

“The Atlantis Adventures welcomes you aboard!” Archie’s voice boomed through the intercom, as cheerful as the cartoon fish painted on the walls. The passengers, consisting of tourists and excited children, leaned eagerly in their seats, their eyes filled with anticipation. The young girl in the second row seemed extremely anxious, holding her teddy bear tightly as the tension mounted.

Archie continued by saying that today we’re diving into the deep blue to explore the legendary city of Atlantis. “Just a friendly reminder, folks, to always keep your hands and feet inside the vehicle. The fish are friendly, but they might get a little jealous of your snazzy sneakers.” His humor received laughter from the passengers.

The sub-bus gracefully descended and glided through the clear waters. Leaning in, Marge whispered, “I promise you’ll adore it.”

Taking her hand, they watched together as the ocean engulfed them completely. “Marge, I peed a little.”

Maris McFin, the merman, had a smile that could brighten the darkest ocean trenches. He hovered outside the porthole and playfully waved to the young girl, who giggled and waved back. The cabin was illuminated by the gentle fluttering of his emerald tail, casting shimmering lights.

The outside world grew murky until the city of Atlantis emerged from the gloom like a diamond. Atlantis consists of expansive, domed structures crafted from a combination of luminous, pearlescent materials and iridescent corals. 

The architecture combines ancient grandeur and advanced technology to evoke a feeling of majestic splendor with tall spires and sweeping arches. The city is illuminated by a serene, multicolored glow from the vibrant marine flora that appears to have grown instead of being built, intertwining with the buildings.

The city’s streets, like winding canals, ferry Atlanteans as they go about their daily routines. The canals are filled with vibrant underwater gardens and exotic aquatic plants that dance to the rhythm of the ocean. 

Archie’s voice reverberates through the sound system. He enthralls the passengers with captivating stories of Atlantis’s mysterious inhabitants and its fascinating past. The structure shimmered with an ethereal glow, its tall spires reaching toward the ocean's surface like the fingers of ancient gods. 

As they passed through the submerged city, George felt a subtle shift in the atmosphere. The usual hum of the submarine seemed to fade, replaced by an almost imperceptible resonance that filled the water. It was as if the very essence of Atlantis was speaking in whispers he couldn't hear but could deeply feel.

George’s mind was awash with a telepathic wave—clear and vivid. A gentle, calming presence conveyed wordless emotions and thoughts. 

Welcome to our realm, it seemed to say. You are not alone here.

With their faces pressed against the windows, the passengers were filled with wonder as they watched schools of vibrant fish swimming alongside. Archie spoke in a hushed tone, “While we’re all eager to see the merfolk, let’s not forget they’re beyond beautiful beings with shiny tails. We must respect their customs and rules of this ancient civilization.”

Maris’s mischievous eyes twinkled as he leaned closer to the glass. He blew a bubble that grew and grew until it popped right next to a young merboy’s nose. The merchild let out a joyful squeal and swiftly swam away, leaving a trail of bubbles behind.

The merfolk of Atlantis continued their activities unaffected by the floating metal contraption filled with people. In a silent ballet colorful-haired mermaids swam gracefully, their laughter resonating in the water.

As they continued, Archie pointed out landmarks: including the magnificent amphitheater where the merfolk held their annual symphony of the seas, the marketplace where pearls were exchanged for seaweed, and the majestic palace of the Atlantean ruler.

Maris’ telepathic whispers effortlessly led them through the city. The passengers were captivated by the beauty and wonder of it all. Even the most skeptical adult couldn’t help but feel a sense of magic in the water.

While in the midst of the enchantment, a shadow appeared in the distance. As the dark shape grew closer, the merfolk’s calm expressions turned to fear. The absence of children’s games created an unnerving silence in the city. For the first time since the tour started, Archie’s smile weakened, uncovering a hint of uncertainty.

With a touch of urgency in his tone, he informed the audience that they were about to experience something exceptionally uncommon and awe-inspiring. “Get ready for a glimpse of the creature we’ve all been waiting for: the legendary Kraken!”

A malevolent cloud loomed over the city as the shadow transformed into a massive collection of tentacles and a beak-like mouth. The Kraken, a mythical and terrifying creature, emerged from the depths. The dark body stood out against the vibrant backdrop of Atlantis. The merfolk scattered, their graceful movements replaced by a frenzied dance of evasion.

Maris’ smile vanished, and a serious expression filled his eyes. Archie, we must evacuate them from this place, he communicated using telepathy. Our city hasn’t seen the Kraken in years. Its return does not bode well.

Maris took the lead, swiftly and decisively, using his tail to guide. The sub-bus followed closely, weaving through the now chaotic streets of Atlantis. The Kraken’s tentacles struck, causing waves of water to crash against the windows. 

The passengers let out a collective gasp. The sight of the creature left awe and terror etched on everyone's face. 

The pressure grew, and George could feel it in his ears, a painful reminder of the weight of the water above. Come on, it's 2023, not 1943. This isn't a war zone, it's a holiday. George had never talked much about his time in the navy, especially not about that one mission that had left him with a fear that seemed to have followed him into his golden years.

Each jostle of the sub-bus brought screams and yelps from the passengers. But George wasn't listening. His mind was already back in the cramped, damp compartments of the sub he had once called home, navigating through the deadly dance of metal and explosives that had been a minefield during the war. The fear was real, palpable, and it was all he could do to keep it from showing on his face. 

They were all buckled in and ready for adventure, blissfully unaware of the silent battle George was fighting with his own claustrophobic demons. He gripped the armrests, his knuckles white, and hoped that he could keep it together for just a little longer.

The sub-bus lurched forward, and George felt the weight of the ocean pressing down on him. You can do this. The memories grew louder. He could almost hear the clank of the metal hull, the tense whispers of his crewmates, and the ever-present tick of the depth gauge.

George's eyes remained fixed on the depth display. With each passing moment, he felt more and more trapped. He could feel the weight of the ocean above, crushing down. The walls grew closer, the air thicker.

Cap’n Marisol glanced at the control panel and swiftly moved her fingers over the buttons to keep up their speed. “Brace yourselves, everyone!” she called out, her voice crackling with the strain of the situation. “We’re going to get you out of here safe and sound!” The passengers gripped their seats. 

The Kraken grew closer with tentacles wrapping around the sub-busin a vice-like grip. The lights flickered, and the engine groaned. With mounting pressure, the children’s laughter turned into screams. Maris stayed alongside Marisol, never taking his eyes off her. Trust me. We’ll go to the trench.

Marisol took a deep breath, nodded, and steered the sub-bus toward the city’s outskirts. The ocean floor descended into an abyssal trench. Despite the Kraken’s tightening grip, the sub-bus continued its descent into the deep, dark sea. The passengers were so preoccupied with staring that they didn’t notice George’s change in behavior. Marge knew that look; it meant trouble. This Kraken was not just curious; it was hunting. 

Cap’n Marisol noticed that this Kraken was unlike the one she had encountered a few weeks before. This Kraken was more aggressive, more intelligent. The creature’s beady eyes bored into the cabin, searching, calculating. 

The creature’s tentacles extended, but the depths of the trench were too overwhelming for it. With one final thrust of the joystick, Cap’n Marisol dove deeper. With a roar that seemed to rattle the ocean itself, the Kraken finally let go and vanished into the dark abyss.

The passengers let out a collective sigh. Merfolk of Atlantis resumed their activities, casting wary glances at the retreating shadow. Maris’s weariness didn’t dampen his smile as he approached the submarine. He expressed gratitude to Cap’n Marisol.

You’ve saved us all from grave danger.

With a nod, Cap’n Marisol wiped a bead of sweat from her brow. Just another day on the job, she quipped, trying to lighten the mood. However, her heart raced as she realized the tourists on board had just lived a story they would never forget.

The tension in George’s chest began to ease, and he felt a newfound appreciation for the bravery of his younger self. The twenty-year old George had faced far greater dangers than a simple tour. The submarine's descent grew steady, and George felt a strange sense of peace wash over him. I survived the war, and I will survive this.

“We’ve got a problem with the air compressor!” Cap'n Marisol shouted, her voice tense. “Despite our best attempts, we can’t remove the water from the ballast tanks. If we don’t fix this, we’re not surfacing.”

“I’m on it!” George yelled back, dashing to the engine bay where the air compressors were housed. He scanned over the gauges. The pressure levels reached dangerously low levels. 

He crouched down and carefully ran his hands along the air hoses, searching for any signs of a leak. From the back, he heard a gentle hissing noise coming from a pipe. Damn, it’s losing air. He used tape to patch the pipe. The hissing ceased, yet the pressure gauge hardly moved.

Still not enough pressure. His gaze landed on the compressor. It hummed, but not with its usual power. Flipping open the control panel, he inspected the fuses. One of them was blown. There you are. He swapped out the fuse for a backup.

Flipping the switch to restart the compressor caused the engine to sputter before roaring back to life. As the hum grew deeper and louder, George watched with relief as the pressure gauge began to climb. The tanks were now being filled with air, which pushed the water out.

He sprinted back to the control room. “Compressor’s back online! Pressure’s normalizing!” With one last groan, the sub-bus started to stabilize and slowly ascend towards the surface. George exhaled deeply. “We’re good.” 

He received a friendly slap on the back from Cap’n Marisol. “Nice work, George. Let’s get moving.”

The ascension began and George got lost in the beauty of the underwater world as he watched a school of jellyfish glide by, their delicate tendrils trailing behind them. He saw a shark, sleek and powerful, swimming in the distance. He enjoyed the sights of coral reefs teeming with life, and even a majestic manta ray that seemed to wave as it passed.

As they move upward, the sun’s rays penetrate the water, enveloping the shaken group in a warm glow. A plume of water shot into the air as the sub-bus broke the water’s surface. The passengers cheered. Their relief flooded the cabin. 

The tension in the cabin eased, and the passengers looked out the windows, reflecting on the incredible sights they had witnessed. The tour didn’t go as planned, but it was definitely unforgettable. Emerging from the depths, a sense of melancholy washed over them as they bid farewell to the magnificent city of Atlantis. One thing was certain: their adventure would be a topic of conversation for years. 

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August 25, 2024 23:23

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Martin Ross
15:31 Oct 06, 2024

Fun and invigorating!!

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Tina Harden
20:51 Oct 07, 2024

Thank you. 😊

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