EUTW: Friends and Foul Enemies(Part 3!)

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Adventure Friendship

โ€œYou are the worst jumper I have ever seen.โ€

โ€œYOU JUST LEAPED OFF A CLIFF AND YOU ASK ME THAT?โ€

โ€œWell you did almost kill yourself by landing in a pile of thorns.โ€

โ€œI didnโ€™t know they were poisonous!โ€

โ€œUh huh. Anyway, you would have died withoutโ€ Nela flicked her long golden hair โ€œme. So I suggest we get going now.โ€

Gale nodded and picked himself off the ground, following her. The dragons still were guarding the entrance, looking even scarier up close. One was bright green and the other was dark red.

Nela whispered to Gale.

โ€œIโ€™m going to try and hold the green one. You stay and help me if it goes wrong, okay?โ€

Gale coughed a little.

โ€œHow are you going to hold the green one?โ€

Nela shook her head.

โ€œItโ€™s all in the elements. Pray to Soulle that I donโ€™t get my insides obliterated.โ€

Gale watched as she ran to the dragons, holding a specter as bright as a highlighter.

He began drawing a Wind Spell until he realized-

The dragons are gone?!

Nela looked over at him with wide open eyes.

Because the dragons had turned into a girl and a boy.

***

โ€œWHAT?โ€

Hunter quickly lifted up his hand, looking at the old black ring on his middle left finger.

โ€œThis old thing is a Ring? No way.โ€

Yvette grinned.

โ€œWell Hunter, how about we test it?โ€

She motioned at Galen, and he lightly stomped the ground, making a blackboard out of nowhere.

Yvette took out a quill and drew a graph, then some stats.

โ€œSo Iโ€™m gonna ask about your powers, and you have to answer honestly, okay?โ€

Hunter rolled his eyes.

โ€œAndddd what if I donโ€™t?โ€

โ€œThen youโ€™ll meet my fists.โ€ Snarled Galen.

Yvette tapped the board.

โ€œFirst question. How long can you use your powers?โ€

โ€œAbout...hmm. I guess a day or two.โ€

โ€œOkay, next question. Can you talk and use ghosts?โ€

โ€œOf course!โ€

โ€œNext question, can you turn invisible, and still use everything just fine?โ€

โ€œIt took forever to master it, but yeah.โ€

โ€œLast question, are you tired after using your powers?โ€

โ€œNo-I mean, if I use like, a really advanced move, yes, but if itโ€™s just darkness, then Iโ€™m fine.โ€

Yvette laughed a little.

โ€œOkay Hunter, the average time for a non-Ring user to use their powers is about fifteen minutes, they canโ€™t talk to ghosts, turning invisible tires then out and they canโ€™t use any powers with it, and usually they will faint OR die from exhaustion if they used darkness for over an hour. Soooโ€ Yvette quipped โ€œThat โ€˜old ringโ€™ is a Ring!โ€

Hunter stared in shock. He had been wearing his fatherโ€™s black ring for years, ever since he passed away. But he never knew that this plain ring was in fact a gift from the Gods.

As if on cue, Soul popped into the sky.

โ€œWell well well, look who didnโ€™t listen and ended up like this- OH! Where in Chikyu are we?โ€

Soul flew around Galen, who swatted them away impatiently.

โ€œSoul, uh, this is Galen, um, the guy who saved me, and this is Yvette, the princess of the Swan Shrine..?โ€

โ€œDove Shrine, Hunter. And the owner of the Healing Ring.โ€

A strange metallic ringing started. Galen opened his sack and took out a Holophone.

โ€œHello, Princess Dove and Metal Guard. We are here to inform you that the Water Ring and Earth Ring have been take by R.O.O.T. , and that two members of the elemental team have died. Cascade Aria Flutter-Pixie and Phoenix Soarkai. Bread, out.โ€

The hologram disappeared.

A deathly silence filled the room as Hunterโ€™ brain caught up to his ears.

R.O.O.T. has killed Cas and Nix. And the rings are missing. What else could go wrong?

At that moment a cloaked figure burst through the door.ย 

***

โ€œWho the hell are you two?โ€

The girl gave an airy laugh as the boy stared at the both of them.

โ€œWell, Iโ€™m-โ€

The boy slapped his hand over the girl.

โ€œYou canโ€™t just tell them our names! Like, what if, like, they killed you?โ€

The girl giggled.

โ€œYouโ€™re always soooo protective, Flint! Iโ€™m fine!โ€

โ€œFAWN!โ€

Nela snorted.

โ€œAndddd yโ€™all just told us your names.โ€

Fawn grinned at Flint.

โ€œThis is my older brother Flint, he has the power of fire! And Iโ€™m Fawn, I have the power of Earth!โ€

Flint groaned.

โ€œWhy. Did. You. Tell. Them. Fawn!โ€

Gale held up his hands.

โ€œLook, we arenโ€™t here to kill you two or anything, we just wanted to go through the forest. Iโ€™m Gale, this is uh- Nela.โ€

Nela huffed and crossed her arms.

โ€œI just wanna know why you guys were dragons? Like, you could have just been, yโ€™know, human?โ€

Fawn gave a fake cough, and Flint blushed and looked away.

โ€œWell, um...because mayyyybe I accidentally used the wrong spell and transformed us into giant dragons?โ€

Fawn burst into laughter, with Gale following. Nela looked away, but slow enough to see the smile on her face.

After they stopped laughing, Nela asked the question that Gale was thinking of.

โ€œSo are you guys going to come with us?โ€

***

A high-pitched laugh filled the Dark Greenland as a green-hair girl, not older than twenty, sat on a throne decorated with skulls and thorns.

She was happy; of course she was.

Killing the two girls on the elemental team had brought her great joy.

Finally, she was starting to collect more Rings!

After all the sorrow and misery that the so-called โ€œPrincess Doveโ€ had brought her, it delighted her to see them perish.

Fingering the once-bright Ring on her hand, she tested it by growing a rose. The small seed immediately grew to a bulging flower bud, then grew spikes and spat out poison.

She laughed again.

A messenger came through the door.

โ€œY-y-your Highness, we g-got a message from s-someone.โ€

She ripped open the letter.

โ€œHello, Queen Diqiu. This is a message-no, a warning from the Elementals. Hand over the Rings peacefully. This is your only warning.โ€

The girl read out loud. The messenger, quivering, sensed the danger emitting from her and turned to run.

A loud roar silenced the footsteps from the messenger permanently. A huge lizard crawled out of the shadows, dragging the body with it.

โ€œDinner, Namgi. Weโ€™ll see how tough these elementals are soon enough.โ€

The piercing laugh echoed through the halls as Namgi ate the body.



Well well well, look who wrote another story :D

So um

Thank you to Starry M. for Nela, Ivy for Yvette, Jagger for Galen, Sky for Flint and Fawn and someone for Queen Diqiu(you know urself lol).

ONE MORE SPOT LEFT UNTIL I KILL SOMEONE.

Peace mates <3


September 11, 2021 23:57

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Jasey Lovegood
08:28 Sep 16, 2021

Is it bad the first time I read, "You are the worst jumper I have ever seen." I thought of a jumper,,, like a sweater-

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12:14 Sep 15, 2021

โ€œYou are the worst jumper I have ever seen.โ€ โ€œYOU JUST LEAPED OFF A CLIFF AND YOU ASK ME THAT?โ€ โ€œWell you did almost kill yourself by landing in a pile of thorns.โ€ โ€œI didnโ€™t know they were poisonous!โ€ That, my friend, is GOOD HUMOR. Keep on writng! Also: can I be in this? If there's one more spot.

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TJ Squared
01:42 Sep 13, 2021

wowza lol just read all three parts, and the plot was made more clearer in the last two. it's very interesting, I'll give you that much. Lots of original content and I love the bits and pieces of humor lol. noice job :D

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Lilliane Wei
18:44 Apr 06, 2022

Nela has the priorities down, fs fs ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ

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Dia โœจ
18:47 Dec 21, 2021

"where in Chikyu" lmao, love the Japenglish

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Lilliane Wei
05:00 Nov 06, 2021

BAHAHAHAHAHA I love humor and action and you killed it with both, fantastic writing and great storytelling!!

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WHOOOOOP AMAZINGGG โ€œAndddd yโ€™all just told us your names.โ€ Lmao this part may have been my favorite x3 Great job on this part! Cant wait to see what happens next >:DD

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