Submitted to: Contest #294

Future Tense

Written in response to: "Write a story in which the first and last sentence are the same."

Contemporary Fiction Funny

“Your future is our success.”


Pendleton was standing on the small stage, picked out by a spotlight. He was outlined in a silver-grey halo reflected off the screen behind him. He was on the stage of the Rivoli Cinema. Benucci Radio Components Ltd. often hired this venue for their all-hands meetings. It was cheap, big enough, and just around the corner from the office.


Usually, the all-hands were planned well in advance: announcements of minor strategy changes or summaries of quarterly reports. But this was different. The invite to this emergency all-hands meeting had arrived in Kevin’s inbox that morning. His colleagues agreed with him: this was most unusual, something big was happening.


“We’ve been through a lot together. Good times and bad.” Pendleton looked around the dimly-lit auditorium. Shielding his eyes from the glare of the spotlight. “Some of you here may even remember those good times.”


Kevin looked around the auditorium too. Despite the short-notice there must have been nearly three hundred people in the auditorium. That was near enough the entire headcount these days. He saw a lot of worried faces. The faces of his colleagues from the circuit-design department, the faces of programmers, the faces of assemblers from the production line who had come in by bus from the factory at Craigmillar.


It seemed to Kevin that, no matter how important the message, upper management like Pendleton could never resist beating about the bush. He waffled on about stormy waters ahead. Competitive pressures. Shareholder expectations. As he looked around, it occurred to Kevin that the cinema itself was showing signs of decline. The velvet curtains either side of the stage were moth-eaten. The silver screen was scratched. Even in the dim light, Kevin could see cracks in the ceiling.


The Rivoli Cinema had been built in the mid-1930s. Around the same time Alfredo and Pietro Benucci—forced out of Italy by Mussolini’s boot boys—started their radio repair business from a rented flat near Leith Walk. Before long the two brothers branched out into building their own radios. The radios sold well locally, and the brothers' reputations as engineers began to spread. And then the war came and the Benucci’s enterprise exploded. Government contracts. Building components for R.A.D.A.R, for military-grade radios, for land-mine detection units. By the end of the conflict, Benucci Radio Components Ltd. had nearly three thousand workers on the payroll.


Since then, Benucci had ridden the booms and recessions. But the overall trend had been downwards. Their heyday seemingly long gone. In recent years, under the leadership of Pendleton, they had shrunk down. Downsized. Concentrated on what they did best: creating high-end sensors for civilian, scientific, and military customers. Pendleton’s strategy—to emphasise quality whilst keeping costs in check—was beginning to pay dividends. He was turning the company around.


Or so it seemed before Pendleton had called this emergency meeting. Rumours had spread there would be further job cuts. What’s left to cut? Kevin had thought to himself.


“And now we come to a piece of bad news,” said Pendleton.


Here we go, thought Kevin.


“In order to free up funds, last week, with heavy hearts, my leadership team and I proposed to the board that we end the Benucci Pension Scheme.”


A groan went round the auditorium.


“Late last evening, we heard back from the board. They have accepted the proposal. The pension scheme will cease forthwith.”


No way! thought Kevin. Like his colleagues around him, he had considered the pension scheme sacrosanct.


Bang goes the retirement cottage. Kevin had long dreamt of retiring to a cottage in Findhorn, or Nairn, or some other seaside town in the North of Scotland. He had pictured walks on the beach. Maybe with a dog? One of those smiling yellow ones that wag their tails a lot and don’t bark much. A Labrador? Or Golden Retriever? He didn’t know much about dogs. He pictured himself strolling along the golden sands. Throwing a driftwood stick for Bella, his imaginary Labrador/Golden Retriever, who would skitter along the wet sand, retrieve the stick and run back. Tail wagging. Offering Kevin the stick, covered in salty dog-drool and sand.


Goodbye Bella, thought Kevin sadly.


“You are not alone,” continued Pendleton, making a sweeping gesture towards a huddle of men and women in tailored business suits standing at the side of the stage. “My leadership team and I will be tightening our belts too. We will all be returning five percent of our share options.”


A bitter laugh rolled round the auditorium. Pendleton looked annoyed.


“That’s more than any of your pensions!” shouted Dodds, the red-faced Chief Financial Officer. Jumping to the defence of his CEO.


The audience mutterings got louder.


“In light of this cost-cutting measure, a measure that will make us stronger as a company,” continued Pendleton, soldiering on, “we ask you to electronically sign your amended contract that is being emailed to you”—he checked his Patak Philippe wrist watch— “at this very moment.”


“Of course, you don’t have to sign. In theory, you can opt to stay in the pension scheme. But”—Pendleton shuffled his notes and read—“the company cannot guarantee that your position will remain after the next headcount-rationalization meeting.”


He looked up from his notes and glared threateningly around the room. “That meeting, for those of you who are not aware, is tomorrow morning. First thing.”


“And now it’s time for the Q&A,” said Pendleton. Forcing his face into an icy smile. “I’m sure you have a lot of questions?”


At first there were no questions. None whatsoever. Then a young fellow Kevin had seen in the accounts department stood up. He was nervous as he stammered out his question. His voice was so quiet that even the people sat next to him strained to hear what he was saying.


“Speak up, man!” said Pendleton. Shielding his eyes from the spotlight once more as he tried to put a face to the quiet voice.


“Gray-Grimm!” shouted the young man, finding his voice.


Pendleton said nothing.


“Gray-Grimm. The venture capitalists?” continued the man.


“I know who Gray-Grimm Incorporated are!” said Pendleton. He looked irritated.


“So, Mr. Pendleton, is there any truth to the rumours?”


“Rumours?” said Pendleton. He looked confused and shot a glance to his leadership team. Red-faced Dodds shrugged his shoulders. A woman next to him shuffled her feet.


“Aye! Rumours that they’re planning a hostile bid,” continued the man.


Pendleton laughed. But his laughter sounded forced. “Rumours! Don’t always believe what you read in the tabloids, son. If there was any truth to that particular story, I can assure you that the board would have told me about it.”


“I read it in The Glasgow Herald,” persevered the young man. “Not exactly a tabloid newsp—"


“Next question!” thundered Pendleton.


With a resigned shake of the head, the young man sat down.


But no next question arrived. Miss Tweedie, Pendleton’s personal assistant, had ran on to stage. She looked like a TV presenter with her smart business clothes and recently cut hair. But there was an anxious look on her subtly made-up face as she tugged Pendleton’s sleeve. She whispered something to him, then offered him her phone. Pendleton snatched it from her, read from the screen and appeared to snarl something back to her.


Then the pair of them held a brief, anxious-looking discussion with the leadership team at the side of the stage. Pendleton, visibly flustered, walked back to the podium. Trying to regain his composure.


Pendleton leaned forward and spoke into the podium microphone. “These rumours.” He was too close to the mic and his voice sounded unnaturally boomy. Like the voice of doom. “These rumours about Gray-Grimm Incorporated. You could say that they are no longer rumours.”


The blood had drained from his face. He suddenly looked older. “My personal assistant, Miss Tweedie, has just informed me that Gray-Grimm Incorporated are indeed planning a hostile bid. In fact, they have lodged a bid that is being considered by the shareholders at this very moment.”


The audience gasped.


“Friends and colleagues. We all know what this means. The vultures are circling.” Pendleton took a deep breath. Then spoke, in the passionate voice of a man who’d worked at Benucci’s his whole life and is seeing it crumble before his eyes. “I have a phone call with the board of directors in exactly one hour’s time. Sixty minutes to save the company. Our only hope is to show the board, and show the shareholders that we can make the big cuts necessary to complete our turnaround. That Benucci can turn the corner. That there’s life in the old dog yet!”


“I’m suggesting to you as your CEO. I’m asking you as colleague. I’m imploring you as a friend. Go back to your desks. Log in to your computers. Opt out of the pension fund. It’s not too late. We have a chance. A last chance. A chance to make a difference. The difference between a future for the company”—he looked grimly out into the auditorium, which was already emptying as everyone rushed for the exits—"and no future at all.”


Kevin joined in the rush. Joined in the crowd of colleagues. Each with their own mortgage to pay, kids to clothe and feed, credit card debts to clear. Each desperate to get back to their desk, to log in to their computer, to sign away their pension. To keep their job.


Kevin was out in the street and running now. He overtook the red-faced Dodds. And a few yards on a jogging Pendleton. The two leaders had clearly beat the crowd by leaving the cinema by a side entrance. But when he arrived at the 70s brutalist concrete office building that was Benucci’s headquarters, there was already a scrum waiting for the two lifts. So instead, Kevin ran up the stairs. He dashed up three flights, and sprinted into the open-plan office where his desk was located.


The office was cold and the office lights were off. Out of breath, Kevin sat down at his computer and rattled in his username and password. He watched the wheel spin on the screen as the computer checked his credentials. And then success.


I can log in! thought Kevin. Thank the stars! I can still log in!


He clicked on the mail icon. His only thought now was to sign the amended contract. The amended contract that would sacrifice his pension but save his job.


Nothing happened so Kevin clicked again. Still nothing. Again, he clicked. Nothing. In a panic he started pressing random keys on his keyboard. What a time for my PC to hang! thought Kevin.


He went back to the mouse. His hands trembling. He double-clicked. Triple-clicked. Quadruple-clicked. Come on!


Nothing.


Suddenly a message flashed onto the screen:


This device belongs to Gray-Grimm Inc.
Your account has been deactivated.
Your future is our success.



Posted Mar 22, 2025
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Dennis C
16:58 Mar 25, 2025

I really felt Kevin’s sinking hope as the story unfolded, and the way you wove in the company’s past made the present stakes hit deep. Great job capturing that raw, chaotic energy of a workplace on the edge.

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Frankie Shattock
21:59 Mar 25, 2025

Thanks Dennis for your encouraging words! I'm really glad that you enjoyed the story.

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Rebecca Lewis
13:56 Mar 25, 2025

This was fantastic. It deserves to be expanded into a full novella or novel. The slow-burn tension, the brutal emotional gut-punch at the end — it hits hard in the right way. The tone is spot-on. It nails that corporate dread — how management talks in vague, cheery platitudes. Pendleton’s speech feels like the kind of thing you’d hear in a real emergency all-hands meeting. Kevin’s inner monologue, that low-level panic just under the surface, is so believable. And the bit where he says “Goodbye Bella”? That crushed me. That one line says everything about how much he’s losing. The ending is cold as hell — and perfect. That final line? “Your future is our success.” That’s just evil. It loops back to the opening in the creepiest way possible. You did this prompt perfectly. I love that the whole mad dash to save his job was already too late. He was doomed before the meeting even started. That’s the most corporate dystopia thing I’ve ever read — and it works. Pendleton is a great character because he believes his own BS. He’s not twirling a mustache — he thinks he’s being noble. The speech, the "returning 5% of our share options" like it's some grand sacrifice, even him running to beat employees back to the office... it’s so hollow. You can feel that he’s just trying to save his own skin too. The Benucci history adds a ton of weight. That backstory about the Italian brothers, the war, the boom years — it gives everything a sense of tragedy. This isn’t just a company going under, it’s a legacy being swallowed by a faceless beast. It makes the Gray-Grimm twist hit even harder. If you are planning to do more with this, I’d love to see more about Gray-Grimm. Are they just ruthless venture capitalists, or are they something weirder? A shell company? An AI? Some corporate void that devours everything in its path? And I’d want to stick with Kevin too. Like — if the login had worked, would he have signed away his pension? Would he have regretted it? Would he have tried to resist? That moment is already powerful, but pushing deeper into his emotional fallout could be even more devastating. Bottom line for me is that this is smart, sharp, and brutal in the best way. It’s got Office Space cynicism, Black Mirror eeriness, and that slow collapse feeling you get from real corporate horror stories. It sticks with you — and I want more.

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Frankie Shattock
21:55 Mar 25, 2025

Wow! Thanks so much Rebecca for your analysis and such kind words! You've covered so much in your comments! So many things for me to go away and think about.

Firstly, I'm glad you liked that final line. (I need to thank the ReedsyPrompt for triggering that line for the opening and closing line :-) )

Yes, I've come across people like Pendleton (fortunately they've been a bit more on top of things than him!). I'd like to think that such people mean well and just struggle when things go terribly wrong? (I can't imagine myself in that position. What it must really feel like being at the podium trying to talk things up when you know things are not looking good?)

I made Benucci's up of course, but there are so many companies like that in the real world. Household names when I was growing up that no longer exist. I guess it's the way of things (markets, technologies and fashions change), but it always saddens me.

And thanks for your suggestions on how to develop Gray-Grimm. I hadn't thought of expanding the story (novella, or novel even?). That would be a real challenge of course. But you've made some very good suggestions there, so thank you! I particularly like your AI idea for Gray-Grimm (but maybe that is too scary!). And yes, I need to think through Kevin's reactions too (what if he'd managed to log in? what does he do the day after?). You've really inspired me with your comments Rebecca. Thank you so much!

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13:49 Mar 25, 2025

Brilliant story! In my former life I was responsible for arranging the 'all hands' meetings of about 400 colleagues so this all felt very real! Even down to signing away the pension! Fortunately I never did and life turned out so much better as a result. Really enjoyed this engaging and tension filled piece.

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Frankie Shattock
21:33 Mar 25, 2025

Thank you so much Penelope! I'm so glad it had a bit of realism for you (and things turned out better for you than for character in the story!

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08:27 Mar 26, 2025

Definitely turned out better! That's why I've now got time to write! 😀

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Frankie Shattock
19:11 Mar 26, 2025

Glad to hear that Penelope! :-)

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Maisie Sutton
13:32 Mar 25, 2025

This was a chilling story with a great buildup to the stone cold ending. Poor Kevin and his fantasy dog Bella, I really felt for them. Excellent story, looking forward to reading more.

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Frankie Shattock
22:00 Mar 25, 2025

Thank you so much Maisie. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! (I'll watch the prompts and see if I can bring back Bella in a future story? :-) )

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Rebecca Detti
17:04 Mar 24, 2025

you don't go to the grave, wishing you'd spent more time in the office. I can't remember where I heard that but thought it rang true for your story. great stuff

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Frankie Shattock
22:20 Mar 24, 2025

Thanks Rebecca! I really appreciate your kind words. I've heard that expression too, but I'm not sure where from. It's a very powerful expression. Very true!

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Audrey Elizabeth
12:17 Mar 24, 2025

I really enjoyed the theme of the illusion of choice in the workplace. You captured the tension very well.

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Frankie Shattock
20:35 Mar 24, 2025

Thank you Audrey for your kind and encouraging words! I appreciate it.

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14:21 Mar 23, 2025

Woah. This is scarily too realistic! Gun to the head and you have to give something up to hold on to the bare minimum...a job with an uncaring faceless corporation. Hints of Severance here. Loved it

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Frankie Shattock
20:05 Mar 23, 2025

Thank you so much Derrick for your kind words! I'm very glad that you enjoyed it! :-)

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Mary Bendickson
03:06 Mar 23, 2025

Sense of reality.

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Frankie Shattock
09:40 Mar 23, 2025

Thank you Mary!

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Mary Butler
20:46 Mar 22, 2025

Frankie, this story was an absolute powerhouse—sharp, layered, and unsettling in the best way. You really nailed the atmosphere of quiet corporate dread, slowly escalating into full-blown panic, with pacing that mirrors a slow burn thriller. I especially loved the line: “Goodbye Bella, thought Kevin sadly.” It’s such a quietly heartbreaking moment, and it perfectly captures how the real tragedy in these sweeping corporate decisions is always personal and painfully human.

The satire was pitch-perfect too—the absurdity of Pendleton’s “sacrifice” versus the employees' loss felt so real it almost stung.

A brilliant, darkly funny, and hauntingly realistic piece—thank you for this razor-sharp gem.

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Frankie Shattock
22:31 Mar 22, 2025

Thank you so much Mary for you very encouraging words! :-) I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story and took the time to provide such nice feedback.
I think corporations and their leaders (whether good or not quite so good) can be very interesting. But you are right. I think corporate decisions can have big impacts on people's lives.

I really appreciate your feedback!

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