Submitted to: Contest #317

The Watch That Time Knew

Written in response to: "Center your story around someone who has (or is given) the ability to time travel."

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Adventure Mystery People of Color

Tagline: One watch. Endless moments. A girl who holds the threads of history in her hands.

Synopsis:

Nia is an ordinary girl until she inherits her grandmother’s mysterious watch — a timepiece that can transport her through the threads of history. Suddenly, the past is open to her: she witnesses forgotten family moments, explores eras long gone, and uncovers secrets that have shaped her lineage. When she is caught by her grandmother’s sister while sneaking fruit from a tree, Nia discovers that the women around her do not recognize her, yet they offer guidance, believing her to be orphaned. As she learns to navigate the rules and consequences of time travel, Nia realizes that every journey has its ripple, every choice its weight. To master her gift, she must embrace both curiosity and responsibility, and in doing so, uncover the extraordinary connections that bind her family across time.

Short Story:

I never thought a watch could change my life. My grandmother’s old gold timepiece sat in a velvet box, quiet and unassuming, yet the moment I held it, I felt a pulse — like the heartbeat of centuries hidden beneath its hands.

Curiosity, that constant spark in me, wouldn’t let it rest. That night, alone in my room, I wound the crown. The air shimmered. The walls blurred. I blinked, and suddenly, I was somewhere else. The street outside my window looked the same, yet different. A horse-drawn carriage clattered past, women in long skirts walked purposefully, and the smell of fresh bread floated from a bakery that no longer existed.

I laughed, a mix of fear and thrill. Time wasn’t just moving; it was bending around me, and I was the axis. Every sound, every smell, every flutter of cloth against skin felt alive. I was invisible yet fully present, a ghost exploring my family’s forgotten history.

The next morning, hunger led me to a sunlit backyard. A peach tree’s branches drooped under the weight of ripe fruit. I reached for one, savoring its golden glow, when a shadow fell across me. “Hey!” a firm, gentle voice called. I froze. A woman’s eyes, dark and assessing, stared at me. “You shouldn’t be here.”

She and another lady — taller, with a presence that seemed to anchor the past itself — approached. Neither looked familiar, yet something in me shivered with recognition. My grandmother’s face flickered in my mind. I gasped. “Grandmother?” I whispered, but they didn’t hear, or maybe they didn’t understand.

“You’re safe,” the taller one said. “We’ll help you. Are you… alone?” They spoke with care, as if I were a lost child. I nodded, uncertain if revealing the truth would make sense.

Days passed. I wandered, experimenting with the watch, learning the limits and rules. Time was pliable, yes, but it remembered. Every choice rippled outward. I nearly caused disaster once, watching a man topple into a market stall when I tried to rearrange his path. My heart thudded in guilt.

Still, the pull of discovery was irresistible. I witnessed moments my family had never spoken of, found hidden joys, and saw struggles that had shaped the lives of those I loved before they were even born. Each adventure carried a lesson: small interference could cascade into chaos, while careful observation could reveal hidden truths.

One afternoon, curiosity led me to a bustling town square. I slipped through narrow streets, marveling at the fashions, the music of street performers, the conversations in a language slightly older than the one I knew. A young girl cried by a fountain, a necklace tangled in her fingers. I could see the sorrow etched into her face. I wanted to step in, to offer comfort, to make her life easier — but I hesitated. One small gesture could reverberate through the years. I let her be, whispered encouragement only she could hear, and moved on.

The turning point came when I caught sight of my grandmother, young and unknowing, singing softly as she hung laundry in the backyard of the house she would someday call home. My heart tightened. I wanted to run to her, to explain, to embrace her. But I could not. Time’s tapestry is delicate; even a whisper of recognition could unravel more than it would heal.

I returned to the peach tree. This time, the shadow was my grandmother’s younger sister. She looked at me with suspicion, then concern. “Child, are you lost?” she asked. I nodded. She and the others guided me back inside, fed me, and allowed me to rest. I understood then that they would protect me, guide me, even without knowing who I truly was.

Weeks passed, each day a lesson. I learned patience. I learned restraint. I learned that the magic of the watch was not in bending time to my will, but in observing, in understanding, in connecting. I traced my family’s lineage through the centuries, saw triumphs and heartaches, and discovered the resilience of those who came before me.

The final test came unexpectedly. A young woman crouched by a creek, trembling. Her decision would ripple through her descendants. I could intervene, prevent a misstep, maybe change the future for the better — but doing so risked unweaving the threads I had spent weeks tracing. My hand hovered over the watch. I breathed deeply, choosing guidance, not control. A small gesture, a whispered word, nudged her without altering the course of her life. Time held steady.

By the end of that week, I returned to my own moment. My grandmother sat in her rocking chair, oblivious to the small miracles I had witnessed in her past, but I understood her, her life, and the lineage she had preserved. I tucked the watch back into its velvet box. Time was mine to explore, but respect and care must guide every tick.

The future, the past, the present — they were threads I could trace, tie, and untie. But I had learned that the magic wasn’t just in the watch. It was in understanding that every moment, every choice, every heartbeat matters.

I smiled. Adventure awaited. And I would meet it — wisely.

Posted Aug 27, 2025
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