The temperature surged beyond 2,000 degrees, but he didn’t feel it. Screams of agony rippled through the air like wind through dead trees, but he wasn’t moved. Cries for mercy rang out like broken prayers, but he didn’t flinch. This was his eternity, unchanging, unchallenged. For the one once called the Light Bringer, this was his dominion.
It was just routine in the pit, and he walked the scorched rows like a foreman checking his stock, passing demons armed with whips, fleshhooks, and iron brands. They delivered punishment with joyful precision, reveling in the suffering around them.
The tormentors took many shapes, Orcs, Ogres, and Imps, grotesque reflections of ancient fears. Their glee wasn’t personal. It was professional. Hell ran like a machine. And he was its engine.
Hell was not chaos. It was order, and it had balance. It may have been brutal, but it had balance.
Bone towers spiraled up for eternity, lost in the darkness. Vents of molten core burst from the Earth in violent pulses. The tortured were chained to stakes dug deep into the ground. Above, disembodied souls howled through the void like rats in a maze, directionless and endless. The cracks of whips, the grind of chains, and the hiss of flame all formed a terrible rhythm—a chorus of punishment.
And Lucifer was its conductor.
The Devil felt it before he saw it. A wrongness, not defiance or resistance. Something worse… Peace.
Among the tortured, one man sat upright. His skin was scorched, cut, bruised, and battered. His muscles were twitching, but he remained still. He made no sound, his eyes gave no look of pleading. His body trembled from pain, but his mind was untouched.
The Devil stepped closer, curious. Wondering.
“Do you not feel this?” he asked.
The man, weak from exhaustion, slowly looked up with blood-crusted eyes and said, “I feel it. I just don’t fear it.”
Around him, the rhythmic cadence of torture stuttered. Whips paused mid-air. An imp in the corner dropped his hook.
In that moment, brief, almost missed, Hell skipped a beat. A shockwave reverberated through the demons and torturers alike. Lucifer, feeling it too, stood in quiet bewilderment.
Lucifer stared at the defiant man. He studied the man’s face, searching for anything he could use to assure himself that he was in control. But what he saw unsettled him more than hatred ever could: acceptance.
“This can’t be,” the Devil whispered, almost to himself. “We will break you.”
The soul met his gaze, calm as stone. “You can break my body, but you will never break my mind.”
Lucifer began to speak, but the air around him cracked. A thunderclap jolted the air, opening a blinding rift that split the ground, and Lucifer was torn from hell.
The man looked at the space where the Devil once stood. His eyes stayed even, and his lips didn’t move. Slowly, a smile crept across his face. It was quiet and victorious.
CRACK!
A demon’s whip tore across his back, breaking skin and silence in one stroke. The smile flickered, but didn’t vanish.
If Hell were fire and damnation, Heaven was pure and without blemish. Lucifer landed hard on the flawless marble, his scorched wings splayed across the ground. The heat of his fall sizzled against the cold perfection beneath him, but left no mark.
What he saw was not warmth, nor love. It was authority, power, the unyielding weight of creation itself.
“You will unfuck this situation,” God commanded, each word felt like a hammer striking iron, becoming a permanent decree. “You are not there to feel or to pause. You are to maintain the one obligation of balance I have given you.”
He stepped forward. Trails of creation swirled around him, galaxies forming and collapsing in the folds of his robes.
“And if you break the balance again, I’ll raise Hell to new depths that you could never imagine, and I will find someone fit to replace you who will not flinch. Break this soul and be done.”
Before Lucifer could speak, the rift tore open again, and he was ripped from Heaven, flung like a comet, dropping into the heart of his chamber with a bone-cracking impact.
Lucifer lay in the scorched dust, his wings quivering, their edges cracked and smoldering. His breath came in ragged gasps, the air around him choking, sulfurous, thick with the screams of the damned. The fires of Hell pulsed, feeding on his fear, growing brighter, hotter, as if mocking his weakness.
Without Hell, I am nothing, he thought. I was cast out of Heaven, and now, if I don’t fix this, I will be cast out of Hell.
The fear in his chest coiled tighter. The flames roared, the screams reached a fever pitch, and he felt the weight of the pit closing in, its walls bending like the jaws of a beast.
He rose, his wings shedding blackened feathers, and tore through the rows of prisoners, his rage a tempest building in his chest. His claws gouged the charred ground as he reached the defiant soul, his eyes burning with fury.
“You will be broken,” he said, his voice a low, guttural growl, each word a nail driven into his pride.
He devoured the soul in a single, furious breath, with it the defiant man’s body disintegrating into dust. The fires of Hell surged around him, the bone spirals that stretched into the void trembled, their roots cracking in the molten earth. His charred wings ignited, their edges glowing like forged steel.
Then the visions came.
The Devil staggered back, his talons scraping against the iron-laced dirt. Images tore through his mind like shrapnel, each a jagged reminder of the angel he once was. He saw himself towering over shining legions, his radiance blinding, his wings a brilliant halo of light. He felt the weight of his sword, the heat of divine fire, the roar of his voice as he led the first rebellion.
He remembered the blades clashing in the celestial vaults, the angels falling at his feet, the thunderous crack as the heavens themselves trembled at his defiance.
Then, the fall.
He saw himself plummeting through the cosmos, his wings torn, his halo shattered, his scream stretching across the void. A rift opened, a howling abyss that swallowed him whole, and he crashed into the pit, his bones shattering against the molten rock. The fires of Hell wrapped around him, burning his flesh, branding his soul, remaking him as the outcast, the fallen.
Lucifer dropped to his knees, his claws digging into his temples as the memories poured in, each a red-hot blade. He tried to bury them, to cast them into the dark corners of his mind, but the defiant soul had ripped them free, forcing him to remember.
He saw himself rising through the ash, dragging himself through the sulfurous mire, fashioning his throne from the bones of the damned, crowning himself the lord of the pit. He had forged his dominion in the fires of his own rage, clawing his way from prisoner to king.
And yet… each time he rose and claimed his throne, the same defiant soul had always been there, staring back at him with unbroken eyes.
“You are nothing,” the soul whispered, its voice like iron on his bones, crushing him from the inside. “You are a prisoner, trapped in your own lie.”
The realization struck him like a hammer to the chest. The defiant soul wasn’t a rebellious mortal, nor some forgotten hero. It was him. It had always been him. The shattered, broken, fallen angel, the Light Bringer.
Lucifer collapsed, his knees hitting the scorched ground, the visions cascading back into his mind, each one a flame licking at his consciousness. The chains snaked up his arms, their links white-hot, searing into his flesh, binding him in place.
Kneeling there, handcuffed to chains, he looked up, and for a brief, agonizing moment, he saw the throne before him, empty, silent, waiting.
“The throne will be mine,” he said in defiance.
Then he felt it, a crack across his back, the sting of a whip cutting his flesh. The shadows around him bent, whispering in familiar tones, and he felt the hot breath of a demon against his ear.
“Welcome back, my lord.”
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Interesting take on Lucifer's story. Condemned for all eternity himself. Thanks for sharing. You certainly did leave much to think about.
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Thank you!
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