Horrible Party

Submitted into Contest #93 in response to: Set your story at a party that has gone horribly wrong.... view prompt

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Bedtime Funny Horror

Some time ago there were indistinguishable twin young ladies, their names were Brooke and Emily. They were 13 years of age and had a caring family and great confiding in companions. At that point one the very first moment of their companions, Tayler had a birthday coming up that end of the week yet Emily was the one in particular that got welcome to it. 

Two days before the gathering Emily revealed to Brooke that she wasn't welcomed after they just brought Tayler's presents. At the point when Brooke discovered that she wasn't welcomed she was irate and blew up at Emily for not revealing to her the evening that she got the welcome. After they returned home from getting the presents Brooke chose to place the presents into the storeroom yet Brooke had a bait present and placed that one into the storage room into the wardrobe rather than the genuine present. 

At the point when the day of the gathering came around Emily went to get her present out of the wardrobe and when she did Brooke pushed her privilege back in which made Emily hit her head and took her out, Brooke at that point bolted the entryway and kept the key covered up in her room. At the point when the opportunity arrived to leave for the gathering their mum asked Brooke where Emily was and Brooke told their mum that Emily had effectively went however advised Brooke to tell their mum yet it slipped she's mind. 

At the point when Brooke showed up at the gathering she went directly to the washroom to get changed into the dress that Emily planned to wear and did her make-up and her hair actually like Emily was going to. After Brooke completed the process of getting transformed she looked precisely like Emily. At the point when she left the restroom she went to proceed to discover Tayler to give her birthday present to her. After she gave her the current she proceeded to grab a bite yet before she could somebody was requiring her to go over yet she didn't understand in light of the fact that they were saying Emily not Brooke so she just disregarded it and afterward she recalled that she should be Emily and headed toward them. 

After she conversed with them the time had come to cut the cake and afterward after that everybody returned home. At the point when Brooke was going to leave Tayler inquired as to whether she approved of not getting welcomed and Brooke said that she was somewhat irate however fine yet as opposed to saying Brooke she said that she, at the end of the day, was somewhat furious yet fine and Tayler had a bizarre look all over and inquired as to why she said the she was furious yet fine rather than Brooke and yet Brooke said that her and Emily were blending their names and she failed to remember that her name was Emily and not Brooke. 

At the point when Brooke returned home she let Emily out and said that she was grieved, at that point informed her regarding the gathering and everything was pardoned. They discussed what they planned to do the following day.

"Groom got so drunk and fell off a deck three floors up."

"I was a groomsman in a wedding where the bachelor party was a week [before] the wedding. Groom got so drunk and fell off a deck three floors up. He broke both of his wrists and had to have his head shaved so he could get stitches above his right ear. The bride and her family were thrilled. My buddy hasn’t really gotten drunk since. This was four years ago." "I woke up like four hours before the wedding in a pile of vomit and blood."

"I nearly missed my wedding [because of] alcohol poisoning and a concussion. I drank a fifth of rum, shared a fifth of liquor with my best man, and my groomsmen and I split a 30-rack and a handle of whiskey. I blacked out pretty badly and had a head injury. I passed out not too long after that and in my sleep I was gyrating on the floor. I was cold and my breathing was irregular. They all passed out too.

"I woke up like four hours before the wedding in a pile of vomit and blood … It took two hours to shower and get dressed. I had to stop at the gas station to buy some energy drinks. I showed up to the wedding an hour before the ceremony. Luckily, my father-in-law thought it was hilarious and my wife never knew how bad it was. A groomsman’s girlfriend did such a good makeup job on my still bloody forehead that nobody knew. I wasn’t sober until I was on the stage watching the bridesmaids come in. Never ever, ever have your bachelor party the night before." "My best man was going through a divorce while things were ramping up toward my wedding."

"My bachelor party was a complete s--- show. By poetic coincidence, my best man was going through a divorce while things were ramping up toward my wedding. When I arrived at his place for the party, I found him sitting on the living room floor. On the floor because you see, there wasn’t any furniture.

"His wife had come while he was at work and cleaned out the house. Like, thoroughly cleaned it out. No furniture. No glasses in the kitchen. No curtains. She left his clothes, still folded, in the place where the dresser used to be. In the closet, his clothes were on the floor — she'd taken the hangers. The booze he'd stocked up for the party? All gone. except for one empty bottle, left in the otherwise barren fridge. She took the mustard, even. Barren.

"He sat on the floor shell-shocked and stunned. Occasionally he’d answer a question in monotone grunts. The other guys arrived, and some of them brought a couple of six-packs of beer. We all sat on the floor in the living room occasionally tossing bottle caps at an empty bottle in the center of the room."

"At one point, one of us found a deck of cards in a pile of random stuff she’d decided she didn’t want and had thrown into a corner of the dining room. We threw cards at the target bottle for a while, until another friend made a discovery — she’d taken all the hearts, leaving only the spades, clubs, and diamonds. Best man started weeping.

"I’d managed to drink two beers, we’d told a few half-hearted stories and largely spent the night trying to convince the best man he was better off this way. Most of the guys left, and I stayed until the wee hours of the morning with a best man wailing, ‘Don’t do it, man, it isn’t worth it.’ Good times." "She called off the marriage over the phone with him while we were all getting drunk at a bar."

"I was on a bachelor party that ended horribly when his fiancé learned that he had been cheating on her for the entire first half of their relationship. She called off the marriage over the phone with him while we were all getting drunk at a bar. The mood went from lighthearted to catastrophic in an instant, and none of his friends knew about it, so consoling him was really hard, since he was so clearly in the wrong." "Turns out she caught the mother of the bride and the groom shagging."

"While working the night before a wedding at a hotel, the staff and I heard a loud scream from upstairs. Cue the bride screaming and sobbing, shouting, 'The wedding’s off!’ while storming out the place followed by the groom, stark naked and covering his nether regions with his hands [while] apologizing profusely. Turns out she caught the mother of the bride and the groom shagging. Safe to say we had an easy shift the next day as we didn’t have a wedding to cater for."

"The night of the party after huge amounts of alcohol the groom breaks down crying, leaves, and walks home."

"Best friend’s bachelor party a few years ago. He had dated his fiancé for six or seven years at that point. She made a male friend at work that became a groomsman. I hated him, didn’t trust him, and told my buddy that. The night of the party after huge amounts of alcohol the groom breaks down crying, leaves, and walks home. Didn’t say anything to anyone, just left. Found out the next day that the bride-to-be had been banging the piece of s--- groomsman for months and they were trying to work through it. He couldn’t get past it and canceled the wedding

May 13, 2021 07:57

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