Submitted to: Contest #313

Second verse of the river

Written in response to: "Write a story with an open ending that leaves room for your reader’s own interpretations."

Indigenous Inspirational Speculative

The sun, a slow-burning ember, crested the jagged peaks of the Guardian Mountains, casting long, purple shadows across the valley. Below, the village of Oakhaven stirred, not with the hurried clatter of industry, but with a quiet, purposeful reverence. Today was the Day of the Vespera, a tradition as old as the village itself, a moment to honor the great river that was their lifeblood.

Just as the villagers began to gather, a small group watched as Elara and Joric stood before a freshly tilled field. Joric held a hand-carved plow, a tool passed down between their homes for generations. "It is mended, Elara," Joric said, "but you must take it. My ground can wait. Yours needs the work now."

Elara shook her head gently, a kind smile on her face. "The soil on my land has rested for a season, Joric. It is ready, but not desperate. You, who have worked so tirelessly to mend it, should be the first to taste its bounty."

The two looked at each other, a peaceful stalemate born of generosity. As was their custom, they turned to Dara Rhys. His presence was a peaceful anchor, his eyes holding the memories of a hundred seasons and the wisdom of generations.

He walked over to them, not with a stern lecture, but with a quiet hand placed on each of their shoulders. "The plow is a tool of the earth," he said softly. "The earth gives to us all. Is there a tool that belongs to just one of us?" Elara and Joric, shamed by their quarrel, shook their heads. "Then we will mend it together, as a gift back to the earth." The conflict dissolved instantly, and a collective sigh of relief passed through the crowd.

Lyron sat with his grandfather, his small hands carefully painting an ochre symbol on a smooth stone. "Grandfather," he whispered, "why does everyone listen to Rhys so much? Why do they follow his words like an order?"

Orin paused, placing a gentle hand on Lyron's shoulder. "We do not say 'Rhys,' little one," he corrected softly. "We say, 'Dara Rhys.' But that is a good question, Lyron. You are no longer a babe at my side, are you? Soon you will be five and ready for the Tale-Hall, and you will learn the full story of our people. His words are not orders," he explained, "they are threads of a deep and ancient weaving. His family has been the keepers of our stories for generations, walking the sacred paths and giving up their own desires for the good of all. Their wisdom comes from a love for all things, from the river to the smallest stone, and from a discipline that guides their spirit. They see not just what is, but what has been, and what will be. So we listen, not out of duty, but out of respect for their sacrifice."

Dara Rhys, now at the center of the gathering, raised a gnarled staff, its wood polished smooth by age and ceremony. "The River is a song," he began, his voice as soft and steady as the water itself. "It sings of what was and what is, and it holds the memory of what will be. We do not command it, nor do we tame it. We listen."

From the crowd, a hand moved. It was Elias, his fingers unconsciously tracing a series of imaginary gears on his palm. His gaze was fixed on the river's surface, not for its spiritual song, but for its predictable flow. He saw the eddies and currents as a complex, solvable equation, and he believed that by listening to its rules, they could master it. His respect for Dara Rhys was absolute, but his mind sought the mechanics behind the mystery.

Beside him, Lena stood with her bare feet in the cool mud. She did not look at the water; she felt it. She closed her eyes, sensing the subtle shifts in temperature and pressure, the impulsive whispers of the current that Elias couldn't see. For her, the river was not a song but a conversation, full of new phrases and unexpected turns. She respected Dara Rhys's history, but she believed the river’s true nature was found in its constant, unburdened freedom.

Dara Rhys finished his words, and a deep, collective sigh of contentment passed through the crowd. A young girl, her face full of earnest curiosity, tugged on his sleeve. "Dara Rhys, why do we call it The Vespera?" she whispered.

Rhys smiled, his eyes crinkling at the corners. "Because the river's path is a timeless journey, little one," he said, his gaze fixed on the setting sun. "And this moment, as the light fades and the river carries our offerings, is our great Vespera. We are offering not just seeds, but our trust in its unfolding story."

With a quiet nod, the villagers began to place their small, seed-filled lanterns upon the water. The Vespera had begun, a peaceful ritual in a world that felt perfect and whole. No one imagined the song was about to change its melody forever.

The last of the lanterns, a tiny boat of woven reeds holding a single marigold seed, was placed on the water by Lena. As she pushed it gently from the bank, a tremor, barely perceptible, ran through the ground beneath their feet. It was not the violent shudder of an earthquake, but a deep, resonant hum, as if the river itself had sighed. The water, for a moment, stilled. The lanterns, which should have been swept downstream in a graceful, consistent line, hesitated. They seemed to pause, suspended in the water's glassy surface.

Then, the current split.

Not with a violent roar, but with a silent, graceful parting. A new channel, a gentle curve of water, began to form, flowing directly toward the old, overgrown forest on the village's east side. The lanterns followed, not in a uniform line, but fanning out like a constellation of tiny stars, each one drifting on its own new path. The last one—Lena's—was the first to enter the uncharted waters.

Elias’s hands, which had been still, now moved rapidly. His mind, trained to observe and calculate, was instantly searching for a cause. He saw no rockfall, no fallen tree, no logical explanation for the division of the current. The pattern had been broken without an external force. His face, usually a mask of calm certainty, was etched with a fracture in his certainty.

Lena felt a jolt of exhilaration. She had sensed the change before it happened, a whisper in the river's cold touch on her feet. She watched as her lantern led the others, a symbol of the river’s unpredictable freedom. For her, this was not a disaster, but a beautiful, new stanza in its song.

Dara Rhys, however, remained motionless. He did not look for a cause or a consequence. He simply watched the lanterns, a gentle smile on his face. He saw not a break in the pattern, but the next turn of the great Vespera. "The story unfolds," he murmured, his voice barely audible above the quiet lapping of the new current.

A hushed silence fell over the villagers. It was not a silence of fear, but of profound astonishment. The children, who had been painting ochre symbols of the old river path, now stood pointing with wide, uncomprehending eyes at the new channel. The adults, who had been preparing for the long, familiar journey of the lanterns downstream, were now faced with two separate paths.

The first whispers began, low and uncertain. A woman pointed to her husband's lantern, now traveling toward the unknown forest. "Is that a sign?" she asked, her voice trembling slightly. Another man, a farmer, looked at his own lantern still following the familiar course, and nodded with a stern, relieved finality. "The river still flows where it should. We must stay with the song we know."

The village, so recently united in silent reverence, was now a mirror of the river itself—split into two currents of thought. Some followed the old path with a certainty born of tradition and fear of the unknown. Others, drawn by a sense of wonder and possibility, gazed with a hopeful curiosity at the new channel.

Elias, seeing the growing division, stepped forward. "There is a reason," he declared, his voice strong and clear. "The laws of nature are not broken. There is a physical cause for this. I will find it. If we understand the cause, we can predict what happens next, and we can guide the river back to its true path."

Lena, seeing the fear in some of the villagers' eyes, stepped into the cool water, gesturing to the new channel. "But the path is already here," she said, her voice gentle but firm. "The river has offered us a choice. Why must we always choose the old way? The Vespera is a trust in its unfolding story, and this... this is a new chapter. Let's see where it leads."

Dara Rhys, standing between them, raised his staff. He did not agree or disagree with either of them. "The river has many songs," he said quietly, his gaze sweeping over the two divided groups. "It sings of both the old and the new. Listen to them both, and you will hear its full voice."

The villagespeople fell silent once more, but this time, the silence was different. It was filled with the weight of a decision, the quiet tension of two competing truths.

The moon rose over Oakhaven, painting the new and old channels with a silver light. Elias, lantern in hand, began walking along the riverbank, not following its new path but looking for a sign of an external force. Lena, also with a lantern, began her journey on the new path, not looking for a cause, but for a new home.

The story unfolds, indeed.

Later that night, as the moon climbed high and the rest of the village was lost in a restless sleep, Elias and Lena found their way to Dara Rhys's fire. The elder sat before the embers, his staff resting across his knees, the twin sounds of the divided river a low hum in the distance. They sat on either side of him, the firelight illuminating the quiet tension between them.

"I have walked two leagues upriver," Elias began, his voice tight with fatigue. "I have studied the banks, the soil, the rocks... There is no fault, no crack, no logical beginning for this new path. The water simply chose to go a different way. But that cannot be." He ran a hand through his hair, his frustration palpable. "The river must follow a law. A mechanism. If the clock of our world has broken, we must find the broken gear and fix it."

Lena, her eyes still holding the wonder of the new current, shook her head gently. "But what if there is no broken gear, Elias? What if the river simply... decided? What if its purpose is not to be a machine, but to be free? The feeling in the water was not of a forced change, but of an unburdening. It chose a new path, and in doing so, it has offered us one, too. To seek a cause is to deny the gift of a new choice."

Dara Rhys listened, his gaze moving from one to the other. He reached into a small leather pouch and took out two small, smooth stones. He placed one in Elias's hand and one in Lena's. "The river is indeed a story," he said, his voice a calm counterpoint to their passion. "But it is not a story of one song or one path. It is a story of countless journeys, of water that has flowed this way for a hundred seasons, and of water that now flows this way for the first time."

He took a slow, deep breath, his eyes closing for a moment as if listening to a memory. "The Dara before me, my own grandfather, once told me a story he had learned from his grandfather... of a time long ago when the great waterfall at the mountain's edge, which had roared in the same place for as long as anyone could remember, fell silent. The water, instead of plunging down, began to seep into the rock, creating countless small springs that appeared throughout the valley, but none powerful enough to feed the river as it was. The village was lost. The children were afraid, and the fields began to turn to dust."

"Like you, Elias, many sought a cause. They searched for a dam of ice, or a great rock that had fallen. Like you, Lena, many saw a new path and began to follow the springs, looking for a new home. But the water was too little, and the division was too great."

"So my grandfather gathered the people. He did not give them a cause or a choice. He led them to the oldest stones by the riverbank, and they sat. They closed their eyes, and they listened. They did not listen to the water, but to the silence within themselves. For seven days and seven nights, they offered their quiet minds to the Aethel, to the great and timeless spirit that binds all things. They asked not for an answer, but for a new song to sing."

"On the eighth morning, the water returned. Not through the waterfall, but from the riverbed itself. A great spring, a new heart for the river, burst forth where none had ever been. The water now flowed a different way, but the village was whole. They had found their path not by a choice or a cause, but by listening to the great story they were already a part of."

He looked at Elias and Lena. "Elias, your belief in the song of the past is a great strength. We are a people of patterns, of cycles, and of seasons. To forget the causes that have brought us here is to lose a part of our own soul. But Lena, your belief in the song of the new is also a great strength. We are a people of life, of growth, and of change. To deny the possibility of a new path is to close your ears to the full voice of the river."

He looked at the embers, his eyes reflecting the dying light. "The river, my children, does not choose. And it is not forced. It is. And our lives, like the river's, are a part of a great, endless weaving. Your questions are not separate. Elias seeks the beginning of the thread, and Lena seeks the next stitch. But the cloth is one."

He looked at them, his eyes full of peace. "You must both follow your truths, for they are both parts of the river's story. But remember this: you walk on the same riverbank."

The three sat in silence, contemplating everything, the two divided currents a constant reminder of the profound question that now flowed through the heart of their village. Elias and Lena looked at the stones in their hands—one a piece of ancient certainty, the other an ember from the fire of her own conviction. They rose without a word. They knew they could not walk together, but as they went their separate ways, their feet were on the same ground.

The river, now split into two, sang a new melody in the moonlight. One channel was a deep hum of memory, the unyielding story of a journey well-known. The other was a bright, untethered whisper, a promise of what was yet to be discovered. The villagers of Oakhaven now slept, each in their homes, part of two new stories, but still held within the same great weaving. The final tapestry, whether its threads were guided or simply found their way, would be for them to live, and for the river to tell.

Posted Jul 31, 2025
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David Sweet
00:00 Aug 04, 2025

I like to think that water follows the paths of least resistance, Sadhakar. Wonderful story filled with hope and promise in this mythology. The title serves it well. Thanks for sharing.

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Sudhakar Majety
20:23 Aug 07, 2025

Thanks David. Appreciate your appreciation.

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