Liora; An Ugly Duckling Tale

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In a quiet glade where the willows weep and the river whispers secrets, there once lived a duckling named Liora. Liora, with her patchy feathers and awkward waddle, endured the jeers of the pond creatures every day.

"Ugly," the sleek mallards quacked, their voices dripping with scorn. "Freak," echoed the frogs from their lily pads, their croaks harsh and mocking.

Liora bore these taunts in silence, her heart heavy yet hopeful. She often sought solace under a grand willow tree by the riverbank, its drooping branches creating a hidden sanctuary. Here, she confided in her only friend, a wise and kindly old turtle named Thaddeus.

"Thaddeus," she whispered one day, her voice trembling with the weight of her sadness, "why am I so different? Why must they hate me so?"

Thaddeus, his ancient eyes full of compassion, slowly lifted his head. "Liora, my dear, beauty is not just skin and feathers deep. They may not see it now, but there is something special within you. Patience, my child. Your time will come."

One particularly harsh afternoon, as Liora returned to the pond, a group of ducklings led by the vain and beautiful Mallory blocked her path.

"Look who it is," Mallory sneered, her feathers gleaming in the sunlight. "The ugly duckling returns. Why don't you stay hidden under that tree where you belong?"

Liora lowered her head, willing herself not to cry. "I... I just want to swim," she murmured, trying to push past them.

Mallory flapped her wings aggressively. "Swim? With us? As if we'd allow that. Go back to your hiding place, freak."

Liora turned and fled, tears blurring her vision. She found Thaddeus waiting by the willow tree, his presence a small comfort amidst her pain.

"They'll never accept me," she sobbed, nestling close to the old turtle.

Thaddeus sighed deeply. "The world can be cruel, my dear Liora, but remember, even the most beautiful swan was once a plain, ungainly duckling. Have faith in yourself and in the kindness that still exists."

Seasons turned, and as the frost gave way to spring, Liora's form began to transform. Feathers of purest white unfurled, sleek and radiant, replacing the patchy down of her youth. The once ungainly duckling became a swan of unparalleled beauty, her reflection a marvel in the water's glassy surface.

One morning, as Liora glided across the pond, the creatures who once mocked her now stared in awe. Mallory, the once proud leader of the ducklings, gasped as she caught sight of Liora. "Is that... could it be?" she stammered, her voice a mix of disbelief and envy.

Liora paused, her elegant neck arching gracefully as she regarded Mallory and the others. The mallards and frogs, who had jeered at her so cruelly, now approached her with wide eyes and hushed whispers.

"Majestic," croaked a bullfrog, his previous mockery replaced with genuine admiration.

"Exquisite," quacked a mallard, unable to take his eyes off Liora's shimmering feathers.

Mallory, struggling with her pride, forced a smile. "Liora, you look... beautiful," she said, though the words tasted bitter in her mouth.

Liora nodded gracefully, a serene smile playing on her beak. "Thank you, Mallory," she replied, her voice calm and steady. "It's kind of you to say."

As the days passed, the pond dwellers lavished praise upon the swan. They admired her every move, her every gesture. "She's like a queen," whispered a young duckling to his sister. "A true queen of the pond."

Even Thaddeus, the wise old turtle, couldn't help but smile proudly whenever he saw Liora. One evening, as the sun set and painted the sky in hues of orange and pink, Thaddeus approached her.

"You've grown into a remarkable swan, Liora," he said, his voice filled with warmth. "But remember, true beauty lies not just in our feathers, but in our hearts."

Liora bowed her head, her heart swelling with gratitude. "I won't forget, Thaddeus. You've always seen the real me, even when I couldn't see it myself."

The pond now buzzed with admiration and awe for Liora, the once ugly duckling turned breathtaking swan. 

But beneath Liora's alabaster plumage, a bitterness took root. She remembered every slight, every snicker from her days as the ugly duckling. Instead of letting go, she chose retribution over grace. 

One sunny afternoon, as the pond dwellers gathered to admire her beauty, Liora preened and paraded along the water's edge. Her wings stretched wide, catching the sunlight, she basked in the adoration of those around her. Mallory approached cautiously, her tone conciliatory. 

"Liora," she began, "I wanted to apologize for how we treated you."

Liora's eyes, cold and unforgiving, fixed on Mallory. "Apologize?" she echoed, her voice dripping with disdain. "Your words mean nothing now."

Turning away, Liora ignored Mallory's crestfallen expression and continued her display. She sought adoration relentlessly, reveling in the fawning attention but offering none in return. When a young duckling named Pip timidly approached her, hoping to befriend the magnificent swan, Liora snapped.

"Don't bother me, little one," she hissed. "You and your kind are beneath me."

Pip retreated, eyes wide with hurt, as Liora swam away, her heart growing colder with each passing day. The pond dwellers began to notice the change in her demeanour. Though they still admired her beauty, a shadow of fear and resentment began to creep into their gazes.

The once kind-hearted swan had become a tyrant. She demanded constant praise, and when it wasn't given freely, she mocked and belittled those around her. Her beauty, once a symbol of hope, became a weapon to wound others, and the pond's peaceful harmony shattered.

One evening, Thaddeus watched from his spot under the willow tree as Liora scolded a pair of frogs for croaking too loudly. He sighed deeply, his wise old eyes filled with sorrow.

"Liora," he called softly, hoping to reach her. "May I speak with you?"

Liora turned sharply, her eyes narrowing. "What is it, Thaddeus?"

"Your beauty is unparalleled," he began gently, "but true beauty lies in how we treat others. Your heart, once so kind, has grown cold. Remember the wisdom I shared with you."

Liora scoffed, her bitterness evident. "Wisdom? What good did it do me when I was mocked and ridiculed?"

Thaddeus shook his head sadly. "Bitterness will only poison you, Liora. It turns your gift of beauty into a curse."

Liora turned away, unwilling to heed his words. Her heart, hardened by resentment, continued to grow colder. She bathed in vanity, spurning the humble souls who once shared her watery home. The swan's beauty, now a mere facade, concealed a heart filled with darkness, and the pond dwellers, once enamoured, began to fear the very creature they had once adored.

One twilight, as the first stars pierced the indigo sky, Liora glided across the pond, her alabaster feathers gleaming in the fading light. She relished the silence, seeing it as a stage for her beauty rather than a chance for reflection. As she approached the willow tree, she spotted an old toad perched on a mossy stone, his skin gnarled and his eyes wise with age.

"Good evening, Liora," the toad croaked, his voice carrying a gentle, yet grave tone.

Liora glanced at him dismissively. "What do you want, old toad?"

The toad fixed his gaze on her, his eyes glinting in the twilight. "Beauty, my child, is a fleeting gift. Waste it, and it shall waste you."

Liora let out a derisive hiss, her arrogance palpable. "You, of all creatures, dare to lecture me about beauty? Look at yourself."

The toad remained unperturbed by her scorn. "True beauty is more than feathers and form, Liora. It is found in the heart, in kindness and grace."

Liora scoffed, turning away. "Spare me your wisdom, old toad. My beauty speaks for itself."

The toad sighed deeply, a sound like the rustling of autumn leaves. "Beware, Liora. The path you tread leads to a dark end."

Ignoring him, Liora continued her nightly glide, her reflection shimmering on the pond's surface. The toad watched her retreat, sadness etching deeper lines into his already ancient face.

A few seasons passed, and Liora's grandeur began to fade. The once radiant feathers dulled, losing their lustrous sheen. Her once graceful movements grew laboured and slow. The adoring gazes that had followed her every move turned pitying, then indifferent. Conversations about her beauty became whispers of her decline.

One crisp autumn morning, as Liora attempted to preen her now lackluster feathers, she noticed Mallory and Pip watching her from a distance. Their eyes, once filled with awe, now held only sympathy. Liora turned away, a knot of anger and sorrow tightening in her chest.

She swam to the center of the pond, seeking solitude. The river, ever a mirror, reflected back a creature more twisted and forlorn than the duckling had ever been. Liora stared at her reflection, unable to recognize the swan she had become.

Mallory, noticing Liora's distress, approached Thaddeus, who still spent his days beneath the willow tree. "Thaddeus," she whispered, "Liora is suffering. Is there nothing we can do?"

Thaddeus looked at Mallory with wise, weary eyes. "Her heart has been poisoned by bitterness. Only she can find the cure within herself."

The swan, now old and weary, returned to the toad, seeking solace. Her once brilliant feathers were now dull and brittle, her once graceful neck bent with the weight of years and regret. She found the toad resting on his mossy stone under the willow tree, his eyes closed in contemplation.

"Tell me," Liora pleaded, her voice breaking, "how can I reclaim my beauty?"

The toad opened his eyes, which glinted with ancient wisdom and deep understanding. He looked at Liora with compassion, seeing beyond her faded exterior to the turmoil within.

"Beauty, true beauty, blooms from within," he replied softly. "You wore your beauty like a mask, but your soul revealed the truth. Heal your heart, and perhaps, you might find a different kind of beauty."

Liora's eyes filled with tears. "I don't know how," she whispered. "I've been so cruel, so bitter. Can I ever be forgiven?"

The toad nodded slowly. "Forgiveness begins with yourself. Embrace kindness, show compassion, and let go of the bitterness that has poisoned your heart. Beauty is not just in appearance, but in the way you touch the lives of others."

Overwhelmed by his words, Liora bowed her head. "Thank you, wise toad. I will try."

With newfound determination, Liora began to change. She sought out Mallory and Pip, who had remained her steadfast friends despite her cruelty. "I am truly sorry for the pain I've caused you," she said, her voice trembling. "Can you ever forgive me?"

Mallory stepped forward, her eyes filled with tears. "Of course, Liora. We've always hoped you'd find your way back to us."

Pip nodded eagerly. "We've missed you, Liora."

From that day on, Liora dedicated herself to mending the bonds she had broken. She spent her days helping the younger creatures, offering guidance and kindness. She shared her wisdom and experience, becoming a mentor to many. Her heart, once hardened by bitterness, began to soften.

Liora's legacy of compassion and forgiveness spread throughout the pond. She found a new kind of beauty, one that came from the love and respect of those around her. 

The swan, understanding at last, bowed its head in sorrow. "I see now," Liora murmured to the old toad, "that true beauty comes from within. I wasted so much time on vanity and bitterness."

The toad nodded gently. "It's never too late to change, Liora. Your heart can still shine brighter than any feather."

With a renewed sense of purpose, Liora spent her remaining days in quiet service. She mended broken wings, like those of a young sparrow who had fallen from its nest. "There you go, little one," she said softly, her touch gentle and caring. "You'll be flying again soon."

She soothed troubled waters, guiding ducklings lost in the reeds back to their mothers. "Stay close," she instructed, her voice calm and reassuring. "You'll be safe now."

Liora offered kindness where once she had sown disdain. When Mallory fell ill one harsh winter, it was Liora who stayed by her side, bringing food and warmth. "Rest, Mallory," she whispered, her presence a comfort. "I'll take care of you."

Though her feathers never gleamed again, a quiet glow suffused Liora. This glow was not of physical beauty but of a heart redeemed. She became a beacon of hope and compassion for the pond's inhabitants.

One serene evening, as the sun dipped below the horizon and the sky turned a soft purple, Liora gathered the younger creatures of the pond around her. Mallory and Pip sat close by, their eyes reflecting the twilight's gentle glow.

"Listen closely," Liora began, her voice warm and soothing. "True beauty does not come from how we look, but from how we treat others and the love we carry in our hearts."

The young ones watched her with wide eyes, soaking in the wisdom she had to offer. "The soul's light," she continued, "is what truly illuminates the world. It casts shadows away and reveals the essence of true beauty. Remember this, always."

Thaddeus, resting nearby under the willow tree, nodded in agreement. "Liora speaks the truth. We are all connected, and our actions ripple through the pond, affecting everyone."

In the quiet moments that followed, the pond dwellers reflected on Liora's words. They saw how her transformation had brought peace and harmony to their home, and they understood the importance of nurturing the light within their own hearts.

As the stars began to twinkle in the night sky, Liora felt a deep sense of fulfillment. She had found redemption and had shared her hard-earned wisdom with those she loved. Her heart glowed with a beauty that far surpassed her once radiant feathers.

As she passed, the creatures of the pond gathered around Liora, their hearts full of gratitude for the swan who had once been lost but found her way back to them. Pip, now grown, looked at her with admiration and whispered. "You taught us what true beauty is, Liora. We are all better for knowing you."

As seasons turned and the years had flown, Liora's legacy lived on. The pond flourished with kindness and cooperation, a reflection of the swan's own journey of transformation. 

And so, the tale of the swan ended not in despair, but in a humble realization. In the great balance of life, it is the soul's light that truly illuminates, casting shadows away and revealing the essence of true beauty. The river, ever a mirror, reflected this truth in its shimmering depths, a reminder to all who gazed upon it of the power of a redeemed heart and a life well-lived.

June 18, 2024 00:32

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8 comments

09:00 Jun 27, 2024

An allegory. A new twist on a well-known story. This one intrigued me, so I had to read it. Well done. Your premise is one we all need to take to heart. I've noticed that you follow some of my favorite Reedsy writers too.

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Rob Taylor
10:56 Jun 27, 2024

Thank you so much 🙏🙏🙏

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16:51 Jun 25, 2024

Great development/ retelling/ twist on the fairy tale with a lovely message. Wonderfully done!

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Rob Taylor
18:22 Jun 25, 2024

I really appreciate this thank you 🙏

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Madeline Stevens
21:02 Jun 24, 2024

Such a beautiful story and lesson, thank you for sharing!

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Rob Taylor
22:04 Jun 24, 2024

Awww thank you so much 🙏

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Emilie Ocean
14:37 Jun 24, 2024

Loving this so much!

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Rob Taylor
15:00 Jun 24, 2024

Thank you so much 🙏🙏

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